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Grah_fik
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Wed Jul-26-06 12:58 AM

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"Take a Second look"


  

          

Take a Second look
Them "people" becon "Crooks"
To confess and put
you in a bad situation, unless you jook
Jab with the left and hook
use yo head str8 up like it's chess and rook...
is the piece you play
Me Gotten the best of, Huh..
That'll be the day
Take time out when me and my Reefa pray
that i continue in this game
in which we all compete and play
where even the big fish can be fillet
Believe it...hey.
one shot,
and you're going down like young jock
Then the pistols tossed cause the gun hot
all for one spot
or cause they was quick to jump in the crowd
like punk rock.
That went over yo head so lets take it from top

Take A second look
but dont you rubber neck
I say its police that corrupt the set
put youngins in fear so they duck and jet
or tuck a teck
Live for their luck and bet
or get smart from some stuff he read
so now his hustles a threat
of that, Im a suspect
But I answer to Jah
roll my dutch and stuff it fat
you can put yo trust in that
and tomarrow aint promised
proof from ones who sent shots
at those who couldnt bust it back
they died clutchin gats
Still in their hands
Cut short of fulfillin their plans
So take advantage of every grain
in the hour glass spillin the sand
thats the realest shit and
Im out...


They talk alot of shit, but thats after I'm gone, cause they the fear me in the physical form. Let it be known Im troublesome.
~~Tupac Shakur~~


Get yours by any means. Otherwise you just might not know what any means.
~~Me~~

  

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RE: Take a Second look
Jan 03rd 2007
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RE: Take a Second look
Jan 04th 2007
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RE: Take a Second look
Mar 14th 2007
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Bishop
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Wed Jan-03-07 03:39 PM

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1. "RE: Take a Second look"
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I'll up this. I like the line:

they was quick to jump in the crowd
like punk rock.

I like the title too - because I read it twice before replying.
Def worth a second read.

"I've got hundreds just like you, and I'll have a thousand 'fore I'm through." -- Johnny Cash

  

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ak_reborn
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Thu Jan-04-07 06:12 PM

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2. "RE: Take a Second look"
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>Take A second look
>but dont you rubber neck
>I say its police that corrupt the set
>put youngins in fear so they duck and jet
>or tuck a teck
>Live for their luck and bet
>or get smart from some stuff he read
>so now his hustles a threat
>of that, Im a suspect
>But I answer to Jah
>roll my dutch and stuff it fat
>you can put yo trust in that
>and tomarrow aint promised
>proof from ones who sent shots
>at those who couldnt bust it back
>they died clutchin gats
>Still in their hands
>Cut short of fulfillin their plans
>So take advantage of every grain
>in the hour glass spillin the sand
>thats the realest shit and
>Im out...


The take a second look idea just sparked my attention,and the second verse,was mad.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Mar-14-07 11:03 PM

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3. "RE: Take a Second look"
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This is my "first" look -- Sorry 4 sleepin' --

Nice Flow -- S'specially here:

>Take A second look
>but dont you rubber neck
>I say its police that corrupt the set
>put youngins in fear so they duck and jet
>or tuck a teck
>Live for their luck and bet
>or get smart from some stuff he read
>so now his hustles a threat
>of that, Im a suspect
>But I answer to Jah
>roll my dutch and stuff it fat
>you can put yo trust in that


^UP^ 4 Second Looks ...

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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