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rubbersoulonice
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Mon Jul-24-06 05:30 PM

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"Sun Slanting Down"


  

          

Sun slanting down from the Bronx he
Eased the man's body into the boy's desk
Opened the book to the first impossible letters
Ancient as stones or the impossibility of
Forgetting (more difficult only than the possibility of
remebering) and tracing down the first line with his index
Fingering crisp alien characters he began
Sun slanting down from the Bronx
to read Well met Ion. Are you coming from home
From Ephesus?
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Sun Slanting Down
Jul 25th 2006
1
i like this
Jul 26th 2006
2
RE: i like this
Jul 30th 2011
7
RE: Sun Slanting Down
Aug 17th 2006
3
alien characters
Aug 17th 2006
4
intriguing
Aug 18th 2006
5
HuH?
Dec 01st 2006
6
RE: Sun Slanting Down
Aug 06th 2011
8

invisible ink
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Tue Jul-25-06 03:42 PM

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1. "RE: Sun Slanting Down"
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indeed...

Sun slanting down from the Bronx he
Eased the man's body into the boy's desk


beautiful...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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UncleClimax
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Wed Jul-26-06 01:44 PM

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2. "i like this"
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but its too intellectual for me right now
get back to me when i feel like thinking

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Babynoon
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Sat Jul-30-11 11:02 PM

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7. "RE: i like this"
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lol

I hear you

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hunuh
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Thu Aug-17-06 06:56 AM

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3. "RE: Sun Slanting Down"
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up.

its a crime more people haven't checked this.

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when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

  

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mindful
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Thu Aug-17-06 05:56 PM

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4. "alien characters"
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my old professor would have loved to have you in his class (es)...

your language in every post keeps the reader coming back for more... at least, that's how it is for me..

and tracing down the first line with his index
Fingering crisp alien characters he began
Sun slanting down from the Bronx

*nods*

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i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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ThaAnthology
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Fri Aug-18-06 02:09 PM

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5. "intriguing"
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I think it's about...
then I just read again and enjoy for enjoyment
I love your use of language and metaphor.

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PhotoSynthesis
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Fri Dec-01-06 01:36 AM

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6. "HuH?"
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Are we talkin' Plato's Ion?

Damn U rubbersoul, why you make me haveta consult history books and shyt, just to understand this joint? --

I mean, as short as it is -- It shouldn't be THAT difficult, right?

*Complex Ass Muhfukka*


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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Sherry Von
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Sat Aug-06-11 09:11 PM

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8. "RE: Sun Slanting Down"
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the sun slanting down
in the boogie down

sizzling
ideal

  

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