when the truck pass bye catholics christians and jews starts to cry tail pipes leaking a best tis what's this modern day hitler twisting you like twistlers for years of calling me a nigger and for the 50 stars and stripes my back my shoulder but a soldier must carry on when we can't get along death threats via satellight you late reading e-mails all night i tired to be polite i keep telling them i'm not white i keep telling them i'm happily married but they still bury me in join us be like us kicking dust over the poor if you become a christian then we'll open the door i'll never be like paul and change the colors of the wall and fall with my head cut off because just get lost that's why we don't even talk no more because i became a man wit no religion no politics family and every bodies my eenmy walking along the see sure my faith has super seeded your hope of recruitment the spirit told me to tell you you blew it when you took my nursing license when you refused me of a job for the last 2 year no it's time to turn the tears into flames of sulfur suffer you shall ha ha ha mad man on the move
1. "RE: 4 the bitches of enternet schemes" In response to Reply # 0
this piece lost me in the begining...
"when the truck pass bye catholics christians and jews starts to cry tail pipes leaking a best tis what's this modern day hitler twisting you like twistlers for years of calling me a nigger"
what did you mean by these lines?
...what i got from them was a lot of anger.. like when you said.. no religion, no politics, no family, it didnt seem like you wanted things that way.. because the rest of the piece was very charged... i liked the line about paul... i think its a turning point in the piece... it was a clever way to say you didnt want to be a martyr.. or...you didnt quite believe in the bible... or you dont quite trust the establisment.. after that line.. you start to open up about what i think made you angry... lost job, lost hope, lost sanity... i think when you look at the piece as a whole.. its an attempt to weave all this together.. to make the connection between poverty and economic oppression, with the social isolation that comes along with living outside of westernized institutions... all of them.. even the ones percieved as inherent and given.. like family...
overall though.. i think you end this piece prematurely.. you dont talk about why you hate... or why others hated you you dont talk about why you dont have a religion/politic/family etc. i could go on but i think you feel me...
if you could express why these things have happened or why you feel this way you wouldnt need to use the word bitch in the title.. you would be able to give a clear direction to what was on your mind
2. "RE: 4 the bitches of enternet schemes" In response to Reply # 1
first of all if you need to ask a question i did my job because it got you thinking.
Next if this is a free country why is thier only christian presidents and no other religion.
what is ment when i said i don't have a political family or a religion is i don't join nosense cults.
no matter what i say it will always be construed like ancient laws trying to implie justice.
and hell yeah i'm fucking mad because i keep getting bull shit e-mails for dating these type of people that i'm not even interested in dating and i politely told them to stop but they don't get the just. constantly am herass by johova witness and catholic org knocking on the door and so on why can't i just be left the fuck alone i'm not interested in that type of shit so why can you answer that question for me this is not a fucking crusade to get people to believe if i'm going to hell let me
peace.
man this shit keeps getting deeper and deeper but you wouldn't understand
5. "RE: 4 the bitches of enternet schemes" In response to Reply # 4
i'm really a hypocrit dissing religon terms like weeds snuff video on firms belly full of worms i self propel fathers tongue double edge while the devil in me make me feel on her bare legs
it's the turnning sign for none believers little side bar bids will he follow public attorney and lose his kids or find chumps that talk comdey like scared bitches
yeah it's been fun but it ain't done upon the old is roasted and the new is inducted into hall of fame don't hold back mom let it rain it only make the page easier to surf on
kindly you're foolish enough to go that route with me Dark Vader? im mixed half dark but not quite my kaboost tracks eye prints sending electro waves blinding your sight more it is best to be ignored
but never wasting Holy water ready to splash on face's the next insult.
psssssss you fell from glory? so you like to lose
don't worry my work 2 is closer 2 welldone & you're the water on my electricity
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11. "RE: doesn't make since" In response to Reply # 10
only sugar foot gets amputated buttering up road signs you follow threw liquid realms of motor automobiles screwed into rush moore is the worlds choice more of my spit saturating your canchor soar voice north bound and spewing star dusted mops to dirty to nasty for anything to stick continue and find your self left on a cross with out a headletter to your final notice
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