I want some ice cream she said sheepishly long legs bare feet and delicate toes kissing the dashboard
pretty baby, look at you spoiling that baby already he whispers seductively his hands rubbing her thigh
You know what that means, right my son gonna be black as that chocolate
Or black as you she teased and rolled her eyes
go get us some rocky road he'd told her I'll wait right here
he was laughing dressed in a clean crisp white cabana shirt and pants which his mother sent from the islands sweat from indian summer colored shook as the subwolfers blared
"trying ta catch me riding dirty...."
as she walks into the supermarket she is enveloped in cool she stands before the chill breath of the freezer forcing her to decide wondering if she should get georgia peach instead yet she lets that thought go and pays
Dressed in a short white peasant skirt and sweat full swollen brown belly peaking from under her white t-shirt reddish tinged hair fried dorm the 105 degree heat she exits in front of the Safeway standing on the sun her right foot pointed south
upon existing her skirt sticks to her skin liquid white she sees nothing no suburban no kealen nothing except the flat ugly parking lot full of people swarming like flies around her
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
he was laughing dressed in a clean crisp white cabana shirt and pants which his mother sent from the islands sweat from indian summer colored shook as the subwolfers blared
you know...u need to quit it and write a novel (smiling)....i'm ready...miss k
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if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.
You know I'm the typical procrastinating writer that been working on the novel and that screenplay for umpteen years.... LOL
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
4. "she is enveloped in cool" In response to Reply # 0
is the best line i've read in a long time, followed by these lines:
You know what that means, right my son gonna be black as that chocolate
Or black as you she teased and rolled her eyes
go get us some rocky road he'd told her I'll wait right here
he was laughing dressed in a clean crisp white cabana shirt and pants which his mother sent from the islands sweat from indian summer colored shook as the subwolfers blared
i loved this poem, especially for the imagery and references to summer heat, ice cream, and love. Peace~
how did i miss this. wow on the coldest day this year i found warmth peace and imagination you most definitely are a wonderfilled writer
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
He bounced -- And left her there in the supermarket parking lot -- swollen/pregnant in the sweltering heat of Summer? -- *WoW*
You painted such a vivid picture, I not only "saw" but "felt" -- And that's a GOOD thing! --
My bad for the delay in reading this -- (guess I missed it, like ASIEM) -- *duhhh*
*Good Work*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
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