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ASIEM
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"i wanna fit"


  

          

i just wanna fit---in
i wanna write some scrip that make
mutha fukka's flip
i wanna fit----in
ink some lasting lines that pose
questions way after i'm gone
post a dream that feels so good
peeps just scream
yeh i wanna fit i wanna
fit --- in till
mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch
i wanna cry till
birds sing
like tuesday evenings
sleep...rest in stages
sometimes there just aint no reason
just fall back keep it real
n feel comfort creep
i wanna fit
so i guess i'll sit here and feel this SHIT!!!


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
baby...
Jul 31st 2006
1
very nice.
Jul 31st 2006
2
mmmmm....
Aug 01st 2006
3
RE: i wanna fit
Aug 20th 2006
4
RE: i wanna fit
Aug 20th 2006
5
RE: i wanna fit
Aug 20th 2006
6
RE: i wanna fit
Aug 20th 2006
7
RE: i wanna fit
Aug 21st 2006
8
I Feel U ...
Dec 09th 2006
9
i felt your best lines were here
Dec 09th 2006
10
i still agree w/ my 1st reaction to this poem. nm
Dec 13th 2008
14
Nov 06th 2007
11
RE: Y.Bad €:)
Dec 12th 2008
12
      RE: Y.Bad €:)
Dec 12th 2008
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RE: i wanna fit
Dec 15th 2008
15
RE: i wanna fit
Dec 17th 2008
16
:)
Dec 21st 2008
17
RE: i wanna fit
Jan 04th 2009
18

invisible ink
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Mon Jul-31-06 06:58 PM

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1. "baby..."
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with writing like this:

yeh i wanna fit i wanna
fit --- in till
mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch


u definitely fit in ...miss k


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if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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tonywashington
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Mon Jul-31-06 09:22 PM

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2. "very nice."
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"fit --- in till
mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch"

HOT!

-T
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"rick ross got old african woman swag" (c)nayaa

  

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bonitaapplebaum71481
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Tue Aug-01-06 01:58 PM

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3. "mmmmm...."
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this piece was sweet.... do it up man...



DROkayplayer: Giving you good puff since May '05

<---- Peep the avy: It's little me!

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You just know that your name is safe in their mouth."

Billy - age 4

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ASIEM
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4. "RE: i wanna fit"
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i love this place sistahs be feelin fa real thanks fam
"hot" yeh TonyWashington that's it

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ak_reborn
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Sun Aug-20-06 03:24 PM

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5. "RE: i wanna fit"
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The way you say ya wanna fit in,but at the same time write like ya do just captures my thoughts.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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the_best_part
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6. "RE: i wanna fit"
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i dig how you are so versatile. your posts are almost never what i expected, but always what i like.

@asiaradiant

  

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gsquared
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7. "RE: i wanna fit"
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I can feel a beat for this...it's dope, but there's nowhere to fit in to in a way, except your own skin...but i can understand completely...

  

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ASIEM
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8. "RE: i wanna fit"
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now this is reading between the lines
exactly.

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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9. "I Feel U ..."
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Right here:

>i wanna fit----in
>ink some lasting lines that pose
>questions way after i'm gone

>i wanna cry till
>birds sing
>like tuesday evenings
>sleep...rest in stages
>sometimes there just aint no reason
>just fall back keep it real


*Simplistically Nice*







A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mindful
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Sat Dec-09-06 12:57 PM

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10. "i felt your best lines were here"
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yeh i wanna fit i wanna
fit --- in till
mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch
i wanna cry till
birds sing
like tuesday evenings

*nods* Peace~

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the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com|this boring life

juste habiter.

  

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mindful
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14. "i still agree w/ my 1st reaction to this poem. nm"
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http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

Love each other
or die ©Mitch Albom

  

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Babynoon
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Tue Nov-06-07 03:37 PM

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11. ""
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Hahaa ok you bad you are bad as in good mind work.

"post a dream that feels so good
>peeps just scream
>yeh i wanna fit i wanna
>fit --- in till
>mornin gives back last nights nut
>noon wraps me in arms
>waiting another touch
>i wanna cry till
>birds sing
>like tuesday evenings
>sleep...rest in stages
>sometimes there just aint no reason
>just fall back keep it real
>n feel comfort creep
>i wanna fit
>so i guess i'll sit here and feel this SHIT!!!"


Its best late than never and I dug this back from the vaults.****

(This account is inactive or no longer exists by user or moderators)




:hacked or spammed entry, do not responsed or send messages to this
account:: suspicious account or virus

  

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ASIEM
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12. "RE: Y.Bad &#8364;:)"
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from the vault rize and find a place beside newby's that can relate

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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ak_reborn
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13. "RE: Y.Bad &#8364;:)"
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great idea, its always good to show the new cats what the experienced poets are dropping.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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Time
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Mon Dec-15-08 08:08 AM

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15. "RE: i wanna fit"
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"mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch
i wanna cry till
birds sing
like tuesday evenings
sleep...rest in stages
sometimes there just aint no reason
just fall back keep it real"

my fav right here..

  

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16. "RE: i wanna fit"
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i miss this kind of simplicity writing that hits you.

very good read, fam

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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17. ":)"
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18. "RE: i wanna fit"
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fit --- in till
mornin gives back last nights nut
noon wraps me in arms
waiting another touch

Say what you say?! hahaha, indeed I'm mad cuz I wished I would have thought to write this before you!! lol j/k you know this fit so well.
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

  

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