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ASIEM
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"looking through windows"


  

          

woke up wit the thought of
pussy on my mind
fell asleep last night
thinkin bout the smell left
as she walked away
and i watched not knowing her name

an obsession rises
and falls at dawn

i reached down and pulled
my dick...fantasy slipped back n forth
till the pillow whispered "she's gone"

now compulsion won't let me stop
i spent time n bartered peace
for this moment
can't i just get mine?

funny how memories linger way past
the expiration date and seem to
to creep in when least expected...

thinking
feeling
slipping
digging

deeper till
there is nothing left
to uncover i take a shower
groomed n dressed i leave
looking through windows
i see clearly


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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RE: looking through windows
Jul 19th 2006
1
RE: looking through windows
Aug 20th 2006
8
RE: looking through windows
Jul 20th 2006
2
i found it picked up here for me...
Aug 06th 2006
3
The role reversal
Aug 06th 2006
4
RE: looking through windows
Aug 08th 2006
5
RE: looking through windows
Aug 10th 2006
6
RE: looking through windows
Aug 13th 2006
7
RE: looking through windows
Jan 04th 2007
9
RE: looking through windows
Jan 07th 2007
10
Ditto ... What ^He^ Said ...
Apr 22nd 2008
11
      when i saw this had been upped I knew it was you who did it
Apr 22nd 2008
12
           How Interesting!
Apr 23rd 2008
14
lololol
Apr 23rd 2008
13

the_best_part
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Wed Jul-19-06 10:27 PM

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1. "RE: looking through windows"
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wow. wasnt expecting this but..wow. you are a great writer.
i especially liked this part..

"funny how memories linger way past
the expiration date and seem to
to creep in when least expected...

thinking
feeling
slipping
digging"

@asiaradiant

  

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ASIEM
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8. "RE: looking through windows"
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thank you much tbp. mimi and invisible yall keep me honest

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Frank Parlous
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Thu Jul-20-06 01:53 AM

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2. "RE: looking through windows"
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funny how memories linger way past
the expiration date and seem to
to creep in when least expected...

...well put...

amaZing
isn't it?

  

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mindful
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Sun Aug-06-06 12:24 PM

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3. "i found it picked up here for me..."
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"she's gone"

now compulsion won't let me stop
i spent time n bartered peace
for this moment
can't i just get mine?

funny how memories linger way past
the expiration date and seem to
to creep in when least expected...

thinking
feeling
slipping
digging

deeper till
there is nothing left
to uncover i take a shower
groomed n dressed i leave
looking through windows
i see clearly

solid ending... Peace~

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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.

i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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ms mimi diva
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Sun Aug-06-06 11:22 PM

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4. "The role reversal"
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of the year..loved how it started out as just a physical craving to a craving for intimacy, so that it isn't just the woman being left, but the man.

That was good stuff.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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bonitaapplebaum71481
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Tue Aug-08-06 12:08 PM

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5. "RE: looking through windows"
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nice.... I dug this part the most...

now compulsion won't let me stop
i spent time n bartered peace
for this moment
can't i just get mine?



DROkayplayer: Giving you good puff since May '05

<---- Peep the avy: It's little me!

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You just know that your name is safe in their mouth."

Billy - age 4

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ak_reborn
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Thu Aug-10-06 08:08 PM

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6. "RE: looking through windows"
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Yo asiem, dis reminded me somuch of when i was writing about the window and looking though, i can relate.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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invisible ink
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Sun Aug-13-06 11:35 AM

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7. "RE: looking through windows"
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funny how memories linger way past
the expiration date and seem to
to creep in when least expected...

eh hem...so ASIEM...i knew u were sexy under that strong male shell u always carry(smile)...what made u come out and play?...hmmm

anyway...this was dug darlin'...miss k

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if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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ASIEM
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9. "RE: looking through windows"
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thank you

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Focus23
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10. "RE: looking through windows"
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This was a trip, madd props, Im uppin' it.

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Apr-22-08 11:15 PM

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11. "Ditto ... What ^He^ Said ..."
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>This was a trip, madd props, Im uppin' it.


You have such a versatile spectrum of topics & sentiments -- and you express them with such raw real~ness & downright sincerity and honesty ... it's just ... just ... "NEAT~O" mosquito! --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-22-08 11:50 PM

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12. "when i saw this had been upped I knew it was you who did it"
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Word History: The source of our word window is a vivid metaphor. Window comes to us from the Scandinavian invaders and settlers of England in the early Middle Ages. Although we have no record of the exact word they gave us, it was related to Old Norse vindauga, "window," a compound made up of vindr, "wind," and auga, "eye," reflecting the fact that at one time windows contained no glass. The metaphor "wind eye" is of a type beloved by Norse and Old English poets and is called a kenning; other examples include oar-steed for "ship" and whale-road for "sea." Recently we have restored to the 800-year-old word window a touch of its poetic heritage, using it figuratively in such phrases as launch window, weather window, and window of opportunity or vulnerability.

NOW RIGHT NOW IS THAT MOMENT SO WRITE WRITE WRITE TILL THEN WRITE SOME MORE

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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14. "How Interesting!"
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The Word History ...


You never cease to amaze me -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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13. "lololol"
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lololol... woah asiem.. comin out the cut but still made it beautiful as usual

  

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