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Nathaniel
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Mon Jul-17-06 10:49 AM

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"freakofnature(not tank)"


  

          

i am
that word that causes white folk to shudder
and old black men to grab their dollars
and their crotch at the same time
and old black women to pout their lips, and hope no one
puts two and two together

a freak
of nature
in my own time
got my own mind

don't be mad at me
for who I am
be mad at what I say
or do
but not for what it is
inherently
a brother is into himself
and how that dude ticks
and how the ticking affects others

..i wanna know more...
about this side of myself..
i love the way I feel when I turn on
when I see wide eyes
or a tongue slightly at hang
from the side of a mouth
or sweat drippings where no heat was before me..

a freak of nature




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RE: freakofnature(not tank)
Jul 18th 2006
1
thanks my dude...
Aug 05th 2006
2
serious swagger...
Aug 05th 2006
3
thank you doc
Aug 16th 2006
4

Frank Parlous
Member since Jul 15th 2006
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Tue Jul-18-06 03:26 AM

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1. "RE: freakofnature(not tank)"
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and old black men to grab their dollars
and their crotch at the same time
and old black women to pout their lips, and hope no one
puts two and two together

....i liked that... you slid in a punchline on the low...

..i guess atleast one of the benefits of being a dope poet is
in the winter you get to be your own space heater... *lol*

**Nice on the spoken ebb and flow**

amaZing
isn't it?

  

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Nathaniel
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Sat Aug-05-06 01:33 PM

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2. "thanks my dude..."
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i had forgot about this one...


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Jason Voorhies
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Sat Aug-05-06 05:31 PM

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3. "serious swagger..."
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enjoyed...

  

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Nathaniel
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Wed Aug-16-06 02:50 PM

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4. "thank you doc"
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Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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