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nativesun07
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Sat Jul-15-06 10:09 PM

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"Dark Skin"


  

          

No light skin infatuatuon - I prefer the darker type
Got me thinking bout black berries, sweeter juice, peaches too
Your features do
Got me thinking through a thing or 2...or 3 or 5
You and be could do til 3 or 5
I've realized that you look like heaven, you taste like candy, you feel like Henny - smooth, pure character, dark brown, and go down just right.
And this lust might lead to another 4-letter word...it just might

**********
I should put that in a song

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www.nategoodness.com

The avatar is old. And, no, that hat was not a groovy style back then, either.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
nice tribute
Jul 16th 2006
1
RE: Dark Skin
Jul 17th 2006
2
RE: Dark Skin
Jul 20th 2006
3
RE: Dark Skin
Jul 21st 2006
4
yea.
Jul 23rd 2006
5
RE: Dark Skin
Jan 23rd 2007
6
up nm
Feb 04th 2007
7
Oh my
Feb 06th 2007
8

mindful
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Sun Jul-16-06 01:25 PM

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1. "nice tribute"
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to the darker tones in life...

i found potency in the very last line:

And this lust might lead to another 4-letter word...it just might

good to see you around again. Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

no shit in 06.

you should know that
when you smile sincerely
it has a beautiful effect--sunshine

  

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k_rockah
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Mon Jul-17-06 05:33 PM

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2. "RE: Dark Skin"
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Feelin it!

"I said hey blackberry, how you taste so sweet... look at my bumble bee... and the only one for me....

"I need some L O V E N, to make me happy
"I said you got to be L U C K Y to get wit the girrl like blackberry!

"Hey my cherry, pay some attention to me!"
(Chris Robinson, Black Crowes)

Oh snap!
PEACE
KC

  

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Frank Parlous
Member since Jul 15th 2006
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Thu Jul-20-06 01:24 AM

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3. "RE: Dark Skin"
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And this lust might lead to another 4-letter word...it just might

...i like the honesty in this line...
the idea of lust as a prelude to love
and nothing being wrong with that...

amaZing
isn't it?

  

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Xperience_Ink
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Fri Jul-21-06 06:33 PM

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4. "RE: Dark Skin"
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Cool word play! Comparing dark shin to Hen though? Very Interesting! Maybe the allure of the dark flesh is an intoxicant? Yeah, I'm wit that.

Wit 2 fingers to the sun
We on the run to the railroad
Next stop only destiny knows

e.l. R. bka Xperince ink

"WORK, BUILD & PROSPER" - e.l. Russell

  

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blaksilence
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Sun Jul-23-06 07:56 PM

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5. "yea."
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>No light skin infatuatuon - I prefer the darker type
>Got me thinking bout black berries, sweeter juice, peaches
>too
>Your features do
>Got me thinking through a thing or 2...or 3 or 5
>You and be could do til 3 or 5
>I've realized that you look like heaven, you taste like candy,
>you feel like Henny - smooth, pure character, dark brown, and
>go down just right.
>And this lust might lead to another 4-letter word...it just
>might


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tah-haa-haa.... - k

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Jan-23-07 12:12 AM

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6. "RE: Dark Skin"
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ur verbage is splendiferous

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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mindful
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7. "up nm"
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book1|http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com|this life
http://ladybugstheworld.wordpress.com|my words

"He that falls in love with
himself will have no rivals." -Benjamin Franklin

  

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marijane
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Tue Feb-06-07 10:57 AM

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8. "Oh my"
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Or me...or whatever I wanted to say I cannot remember. This was written well. NAd the candance danced with the form. Keep shining! Welcom *hands tray of dark chocolate truffles* welcome.

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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