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rubbersoulonice
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Fri Jul-14-06 07:49 PM

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"Manhattan sunset"


  

          

A man come down the road a piece and he look up and find himself
In the city of lights and damn

But the Bronx is a tragic and lost kingdom as the sun drops outside my 13th floor window and I come to rest here

What runic tiltings have you been at today, young man,
that the red about thine eyes receeds enough to see the clear whites
the dark middles sparkle a little again

You are not in some I-40 porno shop in Missouri tonight,
You are not fucking on a futon in LA
You will not speak to the woman you loved
And you are blessed

If the world reels tonight from the body blows of your drunkenness, spin.

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Manhattan sunset
Jul 14th 2006
1
RE: Manhattan sunset
Jul 15th 2006
2
Like a bad penny...
Jul 15th 2006
3
      all of a sudden?
Jul 23rd 2006
4
almost lost
Jan 23rd 2007
5
for some reason, i read your words and wanna hurry
Jan 23rd 2007
6

gsquared
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Fri Jul-14-06 08:29 PM

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1. "RE: Manhattan sunset"
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"if the world reels..."

it just may, and if it does I'll take heed, this is great...

  

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Naanaa
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Sat Jul-15-06 02:21 PM

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2. "RE: Manhattan sunset"
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:) welcome back

http://www.myspace.com/n_a_a

  

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rubbersoulonice
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Sat Jul-15-06 08:18 PM

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3. "Like a bad penny..."
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I ain't written a damn word in a year. All of a sudden - bam.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Foneticcus
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Sun Jul-23-06 01:14 PM

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4. "all of a sudden?"
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shoot, i need to get hit from the affliction you're suffering from, then.

wow...

the import.

like, you just know how to wake a reader up y'know?

bottled madness splashed upon a page.

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"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Jan-23-07 12:09 AM

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5. "almost lost"
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a treasure read
uup cause it's like dat

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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mindful
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Tue Jan-23-07 08:25 PM

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6. "for some reason, i read your words and wanna hurry"
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back to new york as fast as i can (to visit my family and friends there) and never return home...

You are not fucking on a futon in LA
You will not speak to the woman you loved
And you are blessed

it's good when you come around... especially when you leave words like these. Peace~

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book1|http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com|this life
http://ladybugstheworld.wordpress.com|my words

no half-steppin in '07.

  

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