This is dazzling. It reads clean, but with such rhythm...and the last line echos.
http://worthwatering.blogspot.com Can it be I stayed away too long?/ Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/ It's not my thing trying to get back/ But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five
3. "I just penned a poem this morning entitled a family affair;" In response to Reply # 0 Sun Apr-10-11 02:21 PM by mindful
very different regarding subject matter or content, but this... this was poignant w/o saying much. and, the ending couplet + one liner is what truly makes the poem...
there are three pieces in here that should travel this parallel uni verse we have...Family affair, anger mgmt, and the last blow together
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder