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triganome
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Thu Jul-06-06 10:36 AM

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"family affair"


  

          


I'm afraid.
of the nights when you sleepwalk

afraid
of your days spent eyes wide shut

my peace
swats your rage as it flies the room

my peace
is the only thing that can penetrate

through to your guilt

to the commotion you started

downstairs; the blame game
plays out survival of the fittest

to the sound track of slaps

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Half of what I say is meaningless; but I say it so that the other half may reach you. Kahlil Gibran


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RE: family affair
Aug 04th 2006
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RE: family affair
Apr 10th 2011
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I just penned a poem this morning entitled a family affair;
Apr 10th 2011
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RE: family affair
Apr 12th 2011
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RE: family affair
May 08th 2011
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ms mimi diva
Member since Feb 05th 2006
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Fri Aug-04-06 03:21 PM

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1. "RE: family affair"
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This is dazzling. It reads clean, but with such rhythm...and the last line echos.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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soulsugar
Member since Dec 03rd 2007
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Sun Apr-10-11 02:51 AM

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subtle delite read

  

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mindful
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Sun Apr-10-11 02:20 PM

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3. "I just penned a poem this morning entitled a family affair;"
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Sun Apr-10-11 02:21 PM by mindful

  

          

very different regarding subject matter or content, but this... this was poignant w/o saying much. and, the ending couplet + one liner is what truly makes the poem...

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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-12-11 06:18 PM

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there are three pieces in here that should travel this parallel uni verse
we have...Family affair, anger mgmt, and the last blow
together

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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soulsugar
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Sun May-08-11 10:45 PM

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The Blame Game
no winners or
losers

  

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