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ASIEM
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"people hide behind"


  

          

images and
painted faces... they
walk on struts
seek small places
to rest their
dreams fantasies
made up
realities
yeh
people hide behind
illusions delusions
cars and houses
find rest in
big bills that
steal their sleep
make ends meet
somewhere at the
end of rainbows
no pot of gold just
made up chases
that keep racin
till emotions
kill themselves
and suicide, homocide
and dreams collide
cause ...
people hide behind

what they can't share...themselves

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: people hide behind
Jun 29th 2006
1
RE: people hide behind
Aug 23rd 2006
11
RE: people hide behind
Aug 23rd 2006
12
Read it 3 times
Jun 29th 2006
2
RE: Read it 3 times
Aug 21st 2006
7
you ended it very well
Jul 01st 2006
3
got that right...
Jul 01st 2006
4
a question for the ages...
Jul 06th 2006
5
RE: people hide behind
Aug 21st 2006
6
nice work
Aug 22nd 2006
8
just the right amount of words..
Aug 22nd 2006
9
who knows about the collision before it happen's?
Aug 29th 2006
15
RE: people hide behind
Aug 23rd 2006
10
RE: people hide behind
Aug 24th 2006
13
RE: people hide behind
Aug 24th 2006
14
^UP^
Jan 12th 2007
16
RE: people hide behind
Aug 04th 2010
17
Masked Her Steps
Aug 05th 2010
18

cousin
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Thu Jun-29-06 11:42 PM

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1. "RE: people hide behind"
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>find rest in
>big bills that
>steal their sleep

I can relate to this comment...
sometimes I feel cheated tho'..
cause even the small bills steal my sleap (sigh..)

  

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maddhghts422
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11. "RE: people hide behind"
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Outstanding piece! Fo' real talk

The trick is to love somebody.... if you love one person , you see everybody else differently
James Baldwin

Harmonies sashays over melodies effortlessly riding rhythms methodically, while the cadence of the drum beats like an orgasmic heartbeat

  

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muted
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Wed Aug-23-06 11:11 PM

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12. "RE: people hide behind"
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that really caught my attention too... good pen

muted.muxtape.com
(what i like)

  

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empro
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Thu Jun-29-06 11:56 PM

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2. "Read it 3 times"
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>images and
>painted faces... they
>walk on struts
>seek small places
>to rest their
>dreams fantasies
>made up
>realities

<<<WoW>>>

>yeh
>people hide behind
>illusions delusions
>cars and houses
>find rest in
>big bills that
>steal their sleep
>make ends meet
>somewhere at the
>end of rainbows
>no pot of gold just
>made up chases
>that keep racin
>till emotions
>kill themselves
>and suicide, homocide
>and dreams collide
>cause ...
>people hide behind
>
>what they can't share...themselves
>
>"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then
>nurture it wit more ink..."
>ASIEM
>"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
>(Be and it is)
>" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in
>love is fair" Stevie Wonder


This was well put together, Thanks for sharing

  

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ms mimi diva
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Mon Aug-21-06 07:42 PM

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7. "RE: Read it 3 times"
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We are all hiding behind something...thank you for reminding us from who it is we really are hiding from!

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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mindful
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3. "you ended it very well"
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that keep racin
till emotions
kill themselves
and suicide, homocide
and dreams collide
cause ...
people hide behind

what they can't share...themselves

very well indeed. Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

no shit in 06.

  

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blak_yukon
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4. "got that right..."
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<--get grown,bus!--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
http://yukonmag.com

my uncles:
http://img279.imageshack.us/img279/9130/010vd.jpg

  

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invisible ink
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Thu Jul-06-06 11:04 AM

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5. "a question for the ages..."
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who know that in the 21st century we still would be dealing with all these "isms"...nice wordplay...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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ASIEM
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6. "RE: people hide behind"
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thanks
i aint comin out no mo it's cold in here sometimes

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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STIMULI
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Tue Aug-22-06 09:49 AM

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8. "nice work"
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love the wordplay and ending.


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When we lessen our women our condition seems to worsen © Common

  

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paperdollpoet
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Tue Aug-22-06 11:16 AM

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9. "just the right amount of words.."
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...to carry the thought across strongly.

  

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ASIEM
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15. "who knows about the collision before it happen's?"
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Tue Aug-29-06 09:39 AM by ASIEM

  

          

just read General Discussion concerning 3rd i she is part of the inspiration for us to write and bring out of each other the reality we live in...PLEASE OPEN UP
May her Life and Death be forever alive in us ALL.

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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1der
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10. "RE: people hide behind"
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hey, i made a song out of your poem.
hope you dont mind.

http://manuchaoie.googlepages.com/dreamscollide.mp3

please take it as flattery that i'd bite your words.

  

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ASIEM
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13. "RE: people hide behind"
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lmao that was mos definitley a first for me wow...yes that is and was ok you made your version and that made the song work lol thank you for the honor

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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triganome
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14. "RE: people hide behind"
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felt the sentiment and the drop.

the fact that i knew the drop was coming was a bit dissappointing tho.
i wanted more to unravel

......................................................................


Half of what I say is meaningless; but I say it so that the other half may reach you. Kahlil Gibran


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16. "^UP^"
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Cuz ^this^ was hiding from me -- *U can run/But U can't hide* --


An' yeah -- What aaiirrybody ^UP^ there said! -- *Me Too*







A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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17. "RE: people hide behind"
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come out come out wherever u r

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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Babynoon
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18. "Masked Her Steps"
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To those hidden behind them there walls

I was abused too
I get you

They then took tide and tried to brainwash you
Into beleiving you're nothing better
Could see nothing ever
And the lies they've told

The images of beautification
Butt behind the masks was stunk
Stick to truth
Seek it and when
You know who you are
That mask better
Come down
Hell to those that pulled you further
Into your own fire
Crabs in the pot
Featured jail sentenced
Homebound
Set yourself
Free and know hate improves love
By showing them how to.

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