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thesignpostdrafter
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Tue May-23-06 01:46 AM

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"Yay or Nay?"


          

Title: ALCOHOLIA FANTASTICO

Mumbling, numbing lips drooling, brain dulling
with every sip, sip, guzzle
Self medication or escapism?
Who cares?
*Hiccup*

I watched that biddy drink all night long,
I watched her waterlog her cranium.
Soon she’ll be
Mumbling, numbing lips drooling, brain dulling
thoughts pooling into depressants
with every sip, sip, guzzle.

That old biddy drank the whole damn bottle,
and then kept asking me,
"Are we there yet? Are we there yet?"
"No I don’t think so my dear.
I don’t know who told you alcoholism was alcoholia,
because romanticism and alcohol don’t mix."

  

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RE: Yay or Nay?
Aug 04th 2006
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RE: Yay or Nay?
Aug 05th 2006
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the phrase, that biddy
Aug 06th 2006
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rubbersoulonice
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Fri Aug-04-06 06:22 PM

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1. "RE: Yay or Nay?"
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upping for the benefit of a board asleep.

People are talking about a second renaiassance, but the rebirth is here.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Lex_Roofa
Member since Jul 24th 2006
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Sat Aug-05-06 11:02 AM

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Yeeahhh. I'm feelin mostly the last 4 lines, but it's all pretty good. And "Alcoholia"... lol

  

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mindful
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Sun Aug-06-06 11:58 AM

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didnt' work for me... or alcoholia... other than that, i'd say "yay"...

Peace~

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can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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