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Nathaniel
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"The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover"
Tue May-16-06 02:08 PM by Nathaniel

  

          

He knows not no
unfurled by punches,
and prostrate pushes backwards,
he continues to get comfortable
and take his usual slot, as the doormat
forever in love
rarely ever loved in the same percentile,
he suffers albeit quietly...
At times spazzing, and unleashing this quiet fire,
into a windstorm of urgent rage, pre-empted by a plea for understanding..

harder to come by, now than then
he finds solace in the arms of lesser
the harlot, the spurned, the doubtful...all gravitate to him
prolly for obvious reasons
maybe they smell the years of unrequited like and love,
maybe they hear over the tuff talk and see the kid who was always picked last for dodgeball, mainly cause he ain't wanna have to get dirty, and always got penalized for throwing too hard...go figure..
the end result with this, is virtually the same sh*t as well,
never satisfied with those that overuse re-dial, where my digits are concerned...I am left breaking even the hearts that overwant me..

I'm picky huh?


that dude is me yo,
I get celebrated for surface water (i.e.-looks, vocals, etc..)..but never by the very ones I long to hand my heart over to, lock, stock and barrell...

Yes, it is I my friends, the incredibly consistent, unloved, lover





Nathaniel's music is here : http://angelfire.com/droid/n_thomas

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*
May 19th 2006
1
RE: Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*
May 31st 2006
3
wonder if mos brothas feel like this when...
Sep 08th 2006
7
these particular lines
May 20th 2006
2
i hope this
Jun 01st 2006
4
RE: i hope this
Jan 19th 2007
10
damn...a bit too close to home...
Jun 01st 2006
5
never did get this one.
Sep 08th 2006
6
RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover
Sep 15th 2006
8
RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover
Sep 28th 2006
9

PhotoSynthesis
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Fri May-19-06 02:02 AM

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1. "Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*"
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Well ...

Hopefully you give love OUTSIDE the computer screen "better" than you do here on OKP --

There's a possibility that you get what you give, nahmean?


And no, I'm not being facetious -- Cuz, since I've been here -- And read your pCe's, I notice your flows are pretty damn nice! -- *No Doubt*

But I see so many off them fall off with little or no responses -- And that ain't fair to you.

Then again, I don't see your commenting or responding to other folks joints very often either -- *shruggs*


Jus' summthin' to think about, yaknow?


Hopefully, this unloved lover pCe is fictional -- And not really about you ...




*Felt The Flow*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Nathaniel
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Wed May-31-06 12:09 PM

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3. "RE: Unloved Lover? -- *Awwwwwww*"
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photo:
you made my week man...I been coming on this site since forever..and have always been given half of a back when it comes to kudos and well wishes. I am a singer and writer by trade, and a full time school aide at a middle school in the bronx...

i wanna be accepted, and I love the roots (and family)...
but i don't lick boots too well...and i am very quick with the wit...some people can't take it.



Nathaniel's music is here : http://angelfire.com/droid/n_thomas

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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ASIEM
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Fri Sep-08-06 02:13 PM

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7. "wonder if mos brothas feel like this when..."
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love don't love them back?
nice drop

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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mindful
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Sat May-20-06 06:35 PM

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2. "these particular lines"
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tapped me on my shoulder:

and take his usual slot, as the doormat
forever in love
rarely ever loved in the same percentile,
he suffers albeit quietly...
At times spazzing, and unleashing this quiet fire,
into a windstorm of urgent rage, pre-empted by a plea for understanding..

and woke me up... Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

To stimulate wildly weak
and untrained minds is to
play with mighty fires. ©w.e.b. dubois

no shit in 06.

  

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rgv
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4. "i hope this"
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I'm picky huh?


that dude is me yo,
I get celebrated for surface water (i.e.-looks, vocals, etc..)..but never by the very ones I long to hand my heart over to, lock, stock and barrell...

Yes, it is I my friends, the incredibly consistent, unloved, lover

isnt part of the pce
but, besides that
it is a job well done

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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Nathaniel
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Fri Jan-19-07 11:07 AM

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10. "RE: i hope this"
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Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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blak_yukon
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Thu Jun-01-06 05:19 PM

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5. "damn...a bit too close to home..."
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<--get grown,bus!--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
http://yukonmag.com

  

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Nathaniel
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Fri Sep-08-06 12:22 AM

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6. "never did get this one."
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Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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sam_shyne
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Fri Sep-15-06 11:41 AM

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8. "RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover"
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the guy ur describing is me....it is....lol

  

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Nathaniel
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Thu Sep-28-06 02:00 PM

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9. "RE: The incredibly consistent, unloved, lover"
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no sir...


Nathaniel's music is now here :
www.myspace.com/nisanluv

Nathaniel's Inspirations (include): Jesus, kim burrell, bilal, d. hathaway, h. walker, s. combs, langston hughes, shawn mclemore, anaysha and timiney figeuroa...

  

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