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mindful
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Thu Apr-27-06 05:51 PM

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"chasing dreams|catching butterflies (part I: lucy and the baby)"


  

          

i been 11 for 6 years now
scared of being older. my
momma done up and left me
with this baby, it's sick all
the time, throwin up white stuff,
coughin. i let it suck my finger
so it can shut up. i say, "hush now,
we all we got." it look up at
me like it know what i say.
it smile, blow bubbles, talk
gibberish. blue marbles for eyes,
copper skin. it's my momma's alright.
i hug it close and watch it dream.

©Tremaine L. Loadholt



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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're a daredveil, baby ©van hunt

no shit in 06.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
enjoyed "it"
Apr 27th 2006
1
beautiful imagery here:
Apr 28th 2006
2
those lines are actually the ones i'm
Apr 29th 2006
3
      RE: those lines are actually the ones i'm
Apr 30th 2006
4
As Alwayz ...
Apr 30th 2006
5
RE: chasing dreams|catching butterflies (part I: lucy and the baby)
Aug 20th 2006
6
Beautiful.
Aug 21st 2006
7

blak_yukon
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Thu Apr-27-06 06:59 PM

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1. "enjoyed "it""
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<--get grown,bus!--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
http://yukonmag.com

  

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invisible ink
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Fri Apr-28-06 09:16 AM

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2. "beautiful imagery here:"
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it smile, blow bubbles, talk
gibberish. blue marbles for eyes...




hmmm...yep...i likes that there...kima

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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mindful
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3. "those lines are actually the ones i'm"
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most taken with. thanks for reading guys. *nods*

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

you're a daredevil, baby ©van hunt

no shit in 06.

  

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ms mimi diva
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Sun Apr-30-06 12:46 PM

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4. "RE: those lines are actually the ones i'm"
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there is a rough tenderness in this that is heartbreakingly palpable in the voice. thank you.

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Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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5. "As Alwayz ..."
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I await part II -- part III -- (And however many more you intend to share with us) -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Aug-20-06 03:57 PM

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6. "RE: chasing dreams|catching butterflies (part I: lucy and the baby)"
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feel like Tony Morrison was sittin by watchin your ink flow
nice clip
visually provocing

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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SepiaSylph
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Mon Aug-21-06 11:55 AM

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7. "Beautiful."
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I actually heard the voice in my head as I read it.

  

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