Sparkling empire of poor tyrants Already bankrupt but poised to strike Still poverty never left them, though they sing praises Of your richness dear sirs, and miss Amidst this you find no balance None to grasp in cruel illusion Yet you make do where due is brushed aside like dew from prior nights On workers feet Sour cheeks will heed this warning You taste change, watch the dollar Canada and US exchange rate is on par But if you paid your debts, so much farther For below the gun strap on your belt lies the beast within your pockets Who has far before now chewed the whole that eats your planet Too bad that these games are the keys you seek to find Too bad that these days might show their true color paler than the make up Civilizations built on falsehoods taken up by lives with their life Perhaps freedom is deserved by even them to find Modern Beggars
Several things sets this flow apart from many of your others -- but I can't get into it right now!
Never~the~less -- This ain't no vegetable soup!
There's meat and potatoes in this stew based dish -- and it's hearty & spicy enuff to give a body ~HeartBurn~ --
I'm just gonna pick out the lines that made me burp:
>Sparkling empire of poor tyrants >Already bankrupt but poised to strike
>Yet you make do where due is brushed aside like dew from prior nights >On workers feet
>You taste change, watch the dollar
>Canada and US exchange rate is on par >But if you paid your debts, so much farther >For below the gun strap on your belt lies the beast within your pockets
>Civilizations built on falsehoods taken up by lives with their life >Perhaps freedom is deserved by even them to find >Modern Beggars
I'd ask for another helping, but I'm quite full now! --
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
Good looking out I hadn't read this one in a long time so it was nice to check it out too I'm in the process of making a new album so maybe i'll throw this in there something
and i mean album-------------------(ofcourse there's always the one I was supposed to be doing earlier through okp, but my main movement right now is in full on creativity)
not that mixtape shit i've been on fully self produced and everything mostly dnb style / trip hop style beats its going to be fun
3. "RE: Militant" In response to Reply # 0 Sat Jun-05-10 07:29 AM by Otto
Amidst this you find no balance None to grasp in cruel illusion Yet you make do where due is brushed aside like dew from prior nights On workers feet Sour cheeks will heed this warning You taste change, watch the dollar Canada and US exchange rate is on par But if you paid your debts, so much farther For below the gun strap on your belt lies the beast within your pockets Who has far before now chewed the whole that eats your planet Too bad that these games are the keys you seek to find _______________________________
Wildout,
Sorry for sleeping on this badass, bellicose and poignant piece....I really love the imagery of the dew-due (pun indeed). I love the allusion to "illusion" and I'm diggin that line about the gun belt and the keys one seeks being the keys one is playing with (paraphrased)....Great piece man...
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