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the_best_part
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Sat Dec-27-08 07:10 PM

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"you can have my gem"


  

          

here i am
minus the dance
with just a gemstone...
i burried the peridot
and swallowed the two citrines
lost the amethyst
and now i give you
the garnet

i promise
to return later
when i grow more
rubies, diamonds and pearls
they grow in my hair, you know
but only when i drink milk
and the milking cow is dry
so just give me time
if not in this life,
in the next
i will come
with plenty

until then
you can have this one

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: you can have my gem
Dec 27th 2008
1
until then, you can have this one
Dec 27th 2008
2
Time's ^UP^ ...
Apr 21st 2009
3
RE: you can have my gem
Apr 21st 2009
4
RE: you can have my gem
Apr 21st 2009
5

Otto
Member since Dec 19th 2002
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Sat Dec-27-08 08:49 PM

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1. "RE: you can have my gem"
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i like the flow here. i'm gonna keep reading it for meaning to see if i can figure it out a little better...then i'll come back

  

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mindful
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Sat Dec-27-08 11:45 PM

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2. "until then, you can have this one"
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I adore this, for its simplicity and the images.

i promise
to return later
when i grow more
rubies, diamonds and pearls

nice. Very nice, indeed.

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I am learning all the time.
The tombstone will be
my diploma ©Eartha Kitt

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Apr-21-09 12:46 AM

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3. "Time's ^UP^ ..."
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>i promise
>to return later
>when i grow more
>rubies, diamonds and pearls
>they grow in my hair, you know
>but only when i drink milk
>and the milking cow is dry
>so just give me time


... and promises "must" be kept! -- *smiles* --


And I know about the dry titty cow too ... mine been spurtin' powdered milk for quite awhile now -- *LoL*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-21-09 06:39 AM

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4. "RE: you can have my gem"
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Tue Apr-21-09 06:46 AM by ASIEM

  

          

there are themes that remind me how interrelated we really are there are so many movies that show this i am seeing how in here we so often write the same way just connect the dots and follow each letter in "you can have my gem". thanks for giving this one and here you can have a sip of "mothers milk" to keep the treasure full.

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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HueyNewton
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Tue Apr-21-09 02:21 PM

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5. "RE: you can have my gem"
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visual images remind me of visionquest past I see gems like topaz &
turquoise, ok I'm good now . .[]

a decade of struggle
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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