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Decstar
Member since Jan 22nd 2003
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Thu Aug-07-08 02:42 PM

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"Letters to Mother"


  

          

what's poppin, peoples. okay, a couple years ago, my mother died. i thank ya'll soo much for archivin that. i meant what i said about all of ya'll bein my fam. i wrote this a little while ago. it was during a time where i wouldnt sleep for days. i was cryin and gaspin for air when ever i would lay down in bed. things are still hard for me. i still dont sleep as much as i need to, but i'm a little better, ya know. i'll never get over it, but i'm maintainin. so....enjoy


good evening, good love
sorry about last night,
my tears burned too bright,
sorching your sweet voice that was sent here
to repair
my heart as i write "I miss you"'s in the air,
for a moment, i said a lifetime of "i'm sorry"'s,
worsen my deficit of things out of my reach
in hopes to be forgiven,
but all along, i'm missing
that it's not about mistakes, we all make those,
but like you said, it's about ya mindstate and intent
by opening doors that are closed,
i guess bridging the gap
is apart of that,
and the bridges we burn
are similar to visions and disconcern
about thoughts that were abruptly adjourned,
without evidence being clear and firm,
even spirits can rise from the urn,
with the lost of you, your seed was set to fire,
but a phoenix is about to rule the empire,
i see now that you and god had a plan,
i'm a multi-millionaire of words
and you were always my nomber one fan,
so though these letters may not find ink,
they're etched in my soul for you
to read whenever you please

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Beautiful :)
Aug 07th 2008
1
Wow this was peace.
Aug 08th 2008
2
This IS great.
Aug 20th 2008
3
RE: Letters to Mother
Aug 20th 2008
4
RE: Letters to Mother
Aug 20th 2008
5
RE: Letters to Mother
Aug 20th 2008
6
i appriciate the love on this one....
Aug 21st 2008
7

Universadevine
Member since Mar 14th 2003
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Thu Aug-07-08 04:37 PM

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1. "Beautiful :)"
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I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Thread softly because you may tread on my dreams

  

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KnowOne
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Fri Aug-08-08 07:53 AM

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2. "Wow this was peace."
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Hang in there fam.

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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Ms Pele
Member since Aug 29th 2003
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Wed Aug-20-08 10:57 AM

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3. "This IS great."
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Wed Aug-20-08 10:57 AM by Ms Pele

          

*hugs*

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Wed Aug-20-08 05:03 PM

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4. "RE: Letters to Mother"
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yeah, nice one . . stay up . .

hello morning it's me listenin' to casanova brown & madame buttafly
-xxx

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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J Wyze from Crown A Thornz
Member since Oct 11th 2007
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Wed Aug-20-08 09:34 PM

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5. "RE: Letters to Mother"
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Wed Aug-20-08 09:35 PM by J Wyze from Crown A

          

yeah man, you got it right. sorry, meant to reply to the author...anyways, you got it right. wicked poem.

Languages are laws, ammendments are just lies/And labels change history right before your eyes

-J Wyze from Crown A Thornz

  

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ASIEM
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Wed Aug-20-08 09:45 PM

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6. "RE: Letters to Mother"
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Wed Aug-20-08 09:47 PM by ASIEM

  

          

my mother pased this February never saw death come and go before still my mother allowed us (her children) to be there with her as she left I cannot think of anything in life more perfect than being there
thanks Decstar for the memory touch and I am so glad our bridges were crossed and repaired

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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Decstar
Member since Jan 22nd 2003
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Thu Aug-21-08 09:53 AM

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7. "i appriciate the love on this one...."
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thank ya'll for readin

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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