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WABBIT
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Sat Jan-27-07 03:09 AM

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"off the top shit"


  

          

it's been a long time since i had a good year
and happy, it's like every time i turn around
set backs, death, and ended friendships happens
stress has my mind in a headlock
work has my mind shellshocked
sometimes i wish i could flyaway like a bird
to relocate and start a new beginning
i open my eyes and find myself in the same place
where i was thinking, those thoughts
my friends are blowing in the wind
they only come around when they want something
i have my own problems to solve
i wish all my problems would desolve
the rap game has changed
nothing but bull shit albums
is always released
i wish i could bring back all the rap artist
that is deseased
this new generation sucks
kids want to act like their grown
and do what they want
bad as hell

  

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RE: off the top shit
Jan 29th 2007
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RE: off the top shit
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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jan-29-07 12:03 AM

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1. "RE: off the top shit"
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Surely it ain't THAT bad! --


*Off The Top/Ready to Drop*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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WABBIT
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Wed Jan-31-07 01:33 AM

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man i took toooo many years off, i think i lost my craft. i wanted to get back into posting, my life isn't bad. i just wanted to write about my suroundings, next time i'll post someting happy

  

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BastardBASTARDHarbourMastah
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Tue Jan-30-07 12:32 AM

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this is cool for what it is... as you said 'off the top' and it seems like you've been going through a little bit of emotional dips that really evoked these words. there's definitely a lot of room for improvement but hey, sometimes a quick release is just as impressive as a year long project.
respect.

Turn off the lights, light a candle...

  

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