lifetimes of night times/the fight and the flight times/the lack of light hides/the plight of mankind
adore the night time/deplore the night time/it's more you can find/explore the confines
before i write lines/i wait for the star shine/that's when my mind flies/beyond my design
i become resigned to being re-defined, and i can be sure of thoughts pure, un-refined
so eyes to the sky, when will it be my time/the light from the stars ain't from a heaven that's behind
peace i cannot find/in the arms of the divine/enough for me, would be the arms of womankind
someone to call mine/and love for a long time/but such simple solace is so hard to come by 'n
i've/seen the extremes of a love become lie
we all ask why, we can't untie -
through bittersweet love/blood cold like ice times/when lies and spite will turn cries to knife lines
her eyes decide you'll never leave her side
touchin' her spine and splicin' life lines..





http://www.myspace.com/mphenix

how do you hear this? with a melody? I almost (and don't take this the wring way) could hear it sung over Jingle Bell Rock.
------------------------------
Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

u know the jingle bell rock thing seems to work very festive! lol

But seriously though i like it's got flow, works well on a 2 step beat, reminds me of early ms dynamite back when uk garage had substance.

This is a heartfelt piece seems like you're missing something, i hope you find it.

Stay up

"When J-Red cuts you better hope he don't bust a fader/
Hands need bandaging like heads on a Tusken Raider!"
Lyrical Commission
(Australian Hip-Hop Veterans)

haha. wow, i can see the jingle bell rock thing too.. interesting

but no, the beat i'm working on for it seems to go pretty well with the cadence. i can't describe it well but it's got a deep pocket to it, it's not a straight-ahead thing, with chopped atmospheric guitar in the background. i'll have it up on myspace soon, maybe i'll re-post with a link.

i wrote that a year ago when i was going through shit, but now it's just academic to finish it up and make a decent song out of it. thanks for reading


http://www.myspace.com/mphenix