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ak_reborn
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Sat Apr-21-07 05:59 PM

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"Midnight run"


  

          



Yo,My brain pains from the sirens,
blood stains mark the violence,
the darkness is full of tyrants,
street lights are dim,oxygen is thin,
fiends awake-red-eyed,
dealers bake cake,
smokers getting high,
plus the occasional drunk,
from the grotesque scene-it seems my thoughts have sunk,
into the bottle of dirty crystal,
coz my outer shell is grimey,
if you dont believe me,then try me,
the crystal is my dome,
coz i got jewels that sparkle,
this is just one of many tomes,
running endlessly through the midnight on my own.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Midnight run
Apr 22nd 2007
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RE: Midnight run
Apr 23rd 2007
2
RE: Midnight run
Apr 24th 2007
3
RE: Midnight run
Apr 24th 2007
4
RE: Midnight run
Apr 24th 2007
5
street lights are dim, oxygen thin
Apr 25th 2007
6
RE: street lights are dim, oxygen thin
Apr 25th 2007
8
i dig it
Apr 25th 2007
7
RE: Midnight run
Apr 26th 2007
9
RE: Midnight run
Apr 26th 2007
10
RE: Midnight run
Apr 27th 2007
11
Whoah ...
Apr 28th 2007
12

empro
Member since May 24th 2005
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Sun Apr-22-07 02:52 AM

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1. "RE: Midnight run"
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>Yo,My brain pains from the sirens,
>blood stains mark the violence,

Slickkkk

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>street lights are dim,oxygen is thin,
>fiends awake-red-eyed,
>dealers bake cake,
>smokers getting high,
>plus the occasional drunk,
>from the grotesque scene-it seems my thoughts have sunk,
>into the bottle of dirty crystal,
>coz my outer shell is grimey,
>if you dont believe me,then try me,
>the crystal is my dome,
>coz i got jewels that sparkle,
>this is just one of many tomes,
>running endlessly through the midnight on my own.


Overall a nice flow kid. Nice to see u steppin it up

  

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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Mon Apr-23-07 04:44 PM

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2. "RE: Midnight run"
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thanks for the read E, peace.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Tue Apr-24-07 02:38 PM

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3. "RE: Midnight run"
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yeah I live the 7th dimension, damn I'm feelin' you . .!!!!!!!

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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freedomfighter
Member since Apr 03rd 2003
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Tue Apr-24-07 04:45 PM

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4. "RE: Midnight run"
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sounds aight listen to raggae
doing the marley

face on high times
crimes against prisoner calvery

is me dna leve c
thinking i've been smoking eed


Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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ak_reborn
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Tue Apr-24-07 04:53 PM

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5. "RE: Midnight run"
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Yo thanks for peepin Huey and freedom.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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UncleClimax
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Wed Apr-25-07 10:37 AM

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6. "street lights are dim, oxygen thin"
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rockin them timbs like moccasins in
the cool of the night,
i run, see my breath,
the darkness of eyes turns blue in the light
should do some right
but not in the night
hit the ATM, nothing good is in sight
money for coke, money for whores
jack niggas for they stacks, hide it under the floor

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tonka truck
Member since Feb 10th 2005
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Wed Apr-25-07 06:47 PM

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8. "RE: street lights are dim, oxygen thin"
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i'll die fo you gool g rap
another brother neck snap
i'll take pipe 4 crack
kicking over source where's the remorse
sick but nigga ninja still on course
rented out ranger idian chiefing danger
no it's not right to bring out anger
in fight i just might fold you up into a paper kit
better treat the ladies polite or
auto matic frizs b's dawg bit
r.i.p 2 shrew it you can forget it
you bet aginst me said i'll never be on tv
go ahead and leave me pawning mya's body
fiddy what to test my karate
ain't got nothing against the nigga
but just taking up for my shorty
fuck you nigga you corney
fuck you to rolling in the money
ha ha holler inyou ear like you my honey
you just another busy body
who never came fuck lam
i boast yo career i'm more then a see'r
seeker of cotton mouths sour apple
sweet

  

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thoughtremedy
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Wed Apr-25-07 11:40 AM

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7. "i dig it"
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---
the pursuit of fame and fortune
leads to shame and misfortune
-tao

  

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ASIEM
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Thu Apr-26-07 08:29 PM

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9. "RE: Midnight run"
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familiar never get's boring it even seduces...but i just can't do it anymore so watching from here is entertainingly dangerously too close for comfort so i can appreciate this for sure.

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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BooneBerth
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Thu Apr-26-07 11:14 PM

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I enjoyed the rhyme man right on, keep on! PEACE!

Like an innocent lie, I'm white.

  

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ak_reborn
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Fri Apr-27-07 05:03 PM

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Thanks for the reads and replies yall.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sat Apr-28-07 02:02 PM

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12. "Whoah ..."
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*Nice~Ness*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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