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Zin
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Wed Dec-20-06 09:40 AM

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"The North Star"


  

          

Back at the top …spit at ‘em calm versed
Kill ‘em with the flow ..crypt walking in converse
Huh…The King cometh … I’m back …poets disperse
Like roaches when the lights come on …
The Don
of Excitement back in the writing
my black and whites
contrast vivid’s in colorful picture
so these… Bruce lee’s
leave ‘em livid when I kick it
from the dark side visits
Vader the creator
Of haters and naysayers when I scribble
Even the paper refuses to fuse with my musings
My pen is abusive …
My notebooks all bruised …and
Blank cd’s have yet to release …
The intimacies and prophecies ..of MC brand Z
On ya family
Author of the year …novel
12 tracks of gore
then enlighten … when I …build and destroy …
in the 8th month 8th day ….God bless ‘em a boy
the King is back…ya’ll can look for the doors

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
The King is back ...
Dec 20th 2006
1
What up
Dec 20th 2006
2
RE: North star
Dec 20th 2006
3
RE: The North Star
Dec 23rd 2006
4
up nm
Dec 28th 2006
5
RE: The North Star
Dec 31st 2006
6
RE: The North Star
Jan 02nd 2007
7
with the bang oh yes...he nice w/it...
Jan 03rd 2007
8
oh yes
Jan 26th 2007
9

PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Dec-20-06 12:19 PM

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1. "The King is back ..."
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*No Doubt*


And Merry Christmas to U 2 --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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empro
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Wed Dec-20-06 03:00 PM

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2. "What up"
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Nice to see ya back in action

Whenever you wanna try and take the "crown" back, come holla at me kid


ha, dope post by the way

  

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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Wed Dec-20-06 04:43 PM

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3. "RE: North star"
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Yea,look to the north,
the chain they rock back n fourth,
blacked out,
sparkles of a conflict diamond,
feds shout,
but they roll in 6's,
sex and bloodshed is their mix,
and their pick is big behinds,
grey skies,
and dirty minds,
The North star,of course they are,
realise when you see them,
they roll in the north,
of L.D...



Mad verse zin,welcum bak.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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Solomonchild
Member since Oct 03rd 2006
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Sat Dec-23-06 01:48 PM

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4. "RE: The North Star"
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Salute my niG!!
LOvin the pauses and punches! real rap,all skill, no murder, tru content and talent, heavy drop mydude, line for line..

I beloved I remain yours. GraceMusik.

  

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mindful
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Thu Dec-28-06 12:01 PM

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5. "up nm"
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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
book1
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com|this life http://ladybugstheworld.wordpress.com|my words

habiter avec passion

  

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James Shahan
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Sun Dec-31-06 12:39 PM

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6. "RE: The North Star"
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Nicely done. Your rhyme scheme varies while still carrying the message of the song. Great job!

  

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WILDOUT
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Tue Jan-02-07 03:06 PM

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7. "RE: The North Star"
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The grid of positioned proportioned possibility
is spread out across the infinity
living with me
miles away
the north star
the distant guide through wild lands
spanned traveller's landscapes miles apart
never seens and never scenes of never beens with weatherred teens who cross to sought to find the truth and stop asking
the life of limosines with tuxedo goons and broken bottles of homicidal tunes faded in tombstone grey's with no silver spoons and our own shine to work for if we want in
still.

good to see you here

((wo))

  

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blak_yukon
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Wed Jan-03-07 12:49 PM

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8. "with the bang oh yes...he nice w/it..."
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Zin
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Fri Jan-26-07 10:43 AM

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9. "oh yes"
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i'm nice with the bang ....

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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