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tylermadison
Member since Feb 02nd 2005
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Wed Aug-09-06 03:35 PM

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"untitled"


  

          

laced
threaded
needled
fabrications
blending corners
creating
hybrid
storms
of systematic
dis-illusions
situations rise like
(a clouds mystery)
(a sunrise in puple skies)
(a golden moon past midnight)
always soft
petal-like
dew
untouchable
speech patterns
cause uneasiness
the sub---
dillemmas
effect
masked
blanketed
like cold feet
of newborns

becoming comfortable
in still waters
don't jump
hit
don't move
relax
we
crotchet in time
those effects of
rictor scales
making notes, now
we must wait for the
melody.

some shit i was feeling at the tmie as they say.

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...no, but yeah...
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some shit you were feeling at the time that
Aug 12th 2006
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RE: untitled
Aug 14th 2011
2

mindful
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Sat Aug-12-06 12:39 PM

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1. "some shit you were feeling at the time that"
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i'm glad was felt...


especially for your ending:

becoming comfortable
in still waters
don't jump
hit
don't move
relax
we
crotchet in time
those effects of
rictor scales
making notes, now
we must wait for the
melody.

definitely... Peace~

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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.

i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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Babynoon
Member since Dec 27th 2004
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Sun Aug-14-11 09:38 AM

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2. "RE: untitled"
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