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>Or at least it felt too long, since the opening 30 minutes or >so was a slog, which hurt the overall pacing of it > >I also felt like the voice-overs were a huge cheat, especially >since the ideas that are introduced through them (mainly that >the deluded Lugo thought he could mimic crime movies in order >to cheat his way to his definition of reaching the American >Dream) aren't fully developed... either just have Wahlberg say >the line he said in the trailer that summed everything up ("I >watched a lot of movies, Paul, I know what I'm doing"), or >don't even introduce the idea, which is a great one and >deserves further exploration...
Yeah, Bay's chaotic, jumbled attempt at character development could have been simplified. Trim 10 minutes easily from the first third. Do I need to see The Rock beat up dudes in prison or Mackie's doctor visit stretched that thin? Probably not.
Did any of the voiceovers outside of Wahlberg's work? Not really. Keep his intro and outro to serve as bookends and then cut the rest.
Shove Rob Corddry and Rebel Wilson to the back a bit.
The trio were fuck-ups. The first two failed kidnapping attempts demonstrated that and weren't bad in their own context, but they aren't necessary.
The whole courtroom stuff was another unnecessary five minutes. Wahlberg is greeted by Florida's finest. Dissolve to him spotting for dude's in prison and play closing narration.
I'd pay twenty bucks to see a Soderbergh edit of this.
>The positives are that Wahlberg (off the top of my head, I >can't think of a cat who does the Goofy-Dim American Guy >better than he does), The Rock, Mackie, and Shalhoub all gave >very good performances.
Wahlberg was surprising. Not the level of his performance but how, at times, "decent" his character was. For instance, when he greets the two overweight gym members early on, I was expecting him to wince at their size or make some crude narration joke at their expense; instead, he gave them sincere acknowledgement, as though to appreciate their effort / hard work (same thing later when he was talking with Mackie about Mackie's love for "plumpness"). Yes, he was horrendous otherwise, but it was actually Bay, through his camera, that seemed even more cruel to people in general than his characters: fixating on every abnormal size, the pointless poop joke, etc. (I haven't seen much of Bay's work, but if I had I had to guess what character he was most like, I would say Shalhoub: misogynistic, juvenile, condescending. Shalhoub was the least likable character to me.) Those choices are all within Bay's rights as a director, but a stronger producer / editor could have reined in some of these nonessential moments, especially with how out of sync they appeared with the rest of the story (the false Fargo ending didn't feel like it belonged either).
>Bay should have played TLC's Waterfalls over the end >credits...
I could buy that. In fact, with one exception, the music throughout was pretty clumsily placed. You'd think a director like Bay would be better versed in montage, but I guess not.
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