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>apologies in advance, but i'm trying to be constructive. >after listening to about 15 of the beats on your soundcloud, i >think some of the complaints from listeners stem from a desire >to hear more energy in your production. First, thank you for actually taking the time out to listen to that many tracks.
Secondly, know I didn't create this post as a means of promoting my music. I don't even have a link to my page in my sig. And I only provided a link after I was asked.
I moreso wanted to provide a venue for other folks to vent on their frustration from similar situations.
Now, to your point: Something like Make Me Stop is pretty frenetic as is Eclipsed and Gangster's Wish.
And, Inharmonixed, Tellalised, and Right On Time are pretty upbeat to me.
I could be wrong though.
>i don't mean everything has to be all crunk and shit, but a >lot of the ones i heard don't really move anywhere: there's >usually a rudimentary (but understated) melody that continues >throughout. there weren't places where a hook unspools, there >weren't interesting bridges, there weren't changes every four >or eight bars to open things up. i kept wanting things to >happen and they didn't.
If you'd like, I can pick a few of my tracks and breakdown when and where I remove and add elements.
Honestly, I truly don't do many bridges because I don't get too much R&B work, but, on a tracks like Pan's Flutes, The Life and the pretty ancient Up In Heaven I do employ bridges.
Also, Pan's Flutes has a pretty interesting coda at the end as does Hands On.
I think also that the chorus areas are pretty defined, even without any vocals present.
I do kind of understand what you're trying to say, but, unfortunately, most urban music tends to be pretty repetitive in nature. I can name quite a few hits where not much happens other than a few silences here or there, drum roll to complete the verse portion, etc...
For example, go and listen to something like Breezy's look at me now and tell me how many different elements you can hear in that.
One thing I'd like to say in retort to your comment about stuff not going anywhere, I think that, sometimes, as a casual listener, when someone doesn't have a name, we tend to be way more critical than we would be of the work of someone with some notoriety.
Also, in tracks like Breezyer, Pan's Flutes and Hands On, I have about 30 tracks going and an average of like 10 individual synthesizers. I would love to have the opportunity to solo some of the tracks so you could see how layered those songs are. Getting a "full" sound is not as easy as it sounds.
I will admit that I can do much more in the way of track mutes, etc., as, most times once I've finished tracking out, I want to just move on to the next beat rather than spending more time perfecting what is basically a completed work.
And, maybe I'll throw together something with quite a few changes and see what you think.
>you have nice sounds and obvious command of technique, but i >can understand why some people might want to hear your work >filtered through the more energetic template of "trap." that >said: it's not about mimicking those sonics, it's about making >your own shit undeniably good. i would say there's work to be >done on that end. don't get caught up in any "why won't they >let me be me?" defensiveness, because it's not the real >issue.
Thanks for the compliment on my sound choices. I've spent quite sometime learning patch programming in order to fill the void when I can't find presets to my liking.
And, thanks for noticing the amount of effort I've put into trying to master my technique.
As said before, I respect your opinion, but, in my eyes, there is no such thing as undeniably good. No matter how great you may view something, there's someone else out there that sees it as garbage.
For example, while you have lauded my sound choices, I've had other cats tell me otherwise. At the end of the day, once I'm comfortable with my sound, that's all I can do. Come to grips with the fact that most OKP's are of the Nut Hugger lineage, so, if you' re not part of the little cliques that exist 'round here, your posts will probably tank like Souljaboy's album sales.
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