I'm a charter member of the these boards, though I haven't posted here in some time. My group, Regenerated Headpiece, released three full-length albums between 2001-2009 and our third album, The New Animal, was favorably reviewed by OKP's Ginger Lynn. The individual members of Regenerated Headpiece (or RHP) have spent the past grip of years pursuing different interests on their own, yet it took a crisis of the magnitude of a Trump presidency to compel us towards a reunion (and back to these boards). "Alternative Facts" is our response to all the bullshit being perpetrated by Trump and his minions, and we created it as an activist anthem with the dual intentions of spreading a positive message during a time of great unrest and, we hope, to inspire a call to action.
The verses get exponentially better as the song moves along. I would write another verse that's doper than the last verse then make that the first verse and you would have a hit.