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AZ/Kkon El
Fort Bragg Jump School

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The once and future Master

http://www.myspace.com/exel

All feedback is appreciated

my flow is cool. like the horns and the swirling strings? dope shit.

the progression is great in the 2nd track. i fucks with that.

i like the enuff iz enuff vocal and slight singing.
cool vibe.

and mirror dream i think i heard last week.

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http://aquil.bandcamp.com

you made the swayze sample work...sick

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

aight, but i thought that the sample was almost too high. besides that u flipped it pretty good. the only one i wasn't feelin as much was the heaven tonight and that's cuz i've heard the heatmakerz flip that sample better

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I think the drums need to sound more real and natural and then it would be a REALLY good beat!

http://www.myspace.com/des93

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more aggresive snare but that could just be from personal taste. u get an A+ for sample choice tho, it's always nice to see someone not only sample something that not many people would think of but then to actually freak it too. I can't tell u how many beats that sampled the dragonball Z theme song for example, almost all of them was so sure they were the only ones who thought of it and they got lazy and just looped it. needless to say that all of the beats sounded the same

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Famousfarrah.com <--- a webseries I worked on

Not a good job

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thanks in advance for any feedback, good or bad!!

or of i u can't maybe just having it as the chorus or something just it dosn't get repetitive

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www.myspace.com/zzzzzj

DO IT!

n/m

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

I might use the beat for a remix, or will definitely be changing up that vocal sample I see now that its quite boring.
Thanks again.
Peace

>thanks in advance for any feedback, good or bad!!

Am I missing something? I didn't see nor hear any music on your page.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/492sxy

<--- When y'all need heat, just check the credits.

sounded pretty professional. the beat was aight but it was missin something to me. maybe some cool bells ringin at the begginin of the loop or strings or something

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<--- That Dude.

Yeah, not bad.

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this is the best beat i've heard so far in this post.

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shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

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www.davidevanmcdowell.com

<--- That Dude.

any tips for uploading beats? I'd really like to contribute

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

check out 'heat' and 'selective' on my soundclick. heat was made on my new mpc, while selective was made sans samples on my old mp7. will add more if people like

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=507038

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

i like the synthy sound at the
begining of selective. i think it
could make a good House track, if
it was looped w/ a 4/4 kick. has
a bit of an early 90s sound.
dum-d-dum dum, dum-dum ding, ding...

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or is that a sample...? sounds familiar

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its actually one of the presets from the emu mp7 i tweaked slightly, but hasnt been sampled to my knowledge. thanks for listening

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

beat. just slow it down some, turn the horns down alittle so u can hear the bass more and it'd be pretty cool.



selective was str8 but i think it'd be better with some harder snares. I was feelin the guitars soundin things that come in, especially the higher pitched one that comes in second.

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Were you going for that 'grainy' sound? I t made the tracks sound poorly recorded to me.

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i used cakewalk to record..and have to do it through a box from the mpc to the laptop..maybe thats why..any suggestions to clean it up?

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

Just sounds like your levels are too hot coming in or on mixdown. You might just turn them down a bit. Sounds like distortion.

Check Get Ready...

www.myspace.com/mic_el

something to the verse sections then it could add that extra kick to it

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myspace.com/ncsoul

hot track tho... maybe lower the sound and add lo-fi so that you still have effectiveness without so much high end would do the trick...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

DoWhatYouDo

we just recorded this sunday but im digging it

peace

http://www.soundclick.com/haj

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tommorow and america's most blunted

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It'll be super dope once it's all mixed

www.myspace.com/zzzzzj

DO IT!

this is nice...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

This track was boring. The flow was too mellow and that loop was...

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please check out the fuvi ft. Median joint too while you're there!

www.myspace.com/zzzzzj

DO IT!

is soulful as shit.

Famousfarrah.com <--- a webseries I worked on

however, the drums don't sit well to me... moreso the sounds than the pattern...

together be is cool though...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

The track was nothing catchy. It sounds like you can rhyme, but these lyrics weren't very entertaining. Keep at it.

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new beat mix up check it out, lookn for feedback
http://www.myspace.com/bevilmusic

str8 too, some were alittle out there for me but for the most part i was feelin them. u kinda remind me of madlib

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myspace.com/ncsoul

you have some good sounds... amplify them so we can hear them better... better yet, so we can "feel" them...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

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was the tightest... exercise using some effects... echoes do magic when you need to fill spaces...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

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myspace.com/ncsoul

I liked everything on dont look back 'cept the ratta tat hit.

Famousfarrah.com <--- a webseries I worked on

i might switch it to every other bar

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Just finished up my 2nd and 3rd beats ever. Im still very new at this, would love any criticsm yall could give me to help me sharpen up. The beats are the first two on my myspace page in my sig. Thanks.

Famousfarrah.com <--- a webseries I worked on

do it for me. maybe if u played the vocal sample more or those strings or something that would help

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myspace.com/ncsoul

on "dunno" i was tryna work on drum patterns more than freakin a sample.

Famousfarrah.com <--- a webseries I worked on

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www.myspace.com/hecticentertainment

swing wont play for some reason... *shrugs*

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

"who" is new... im gonna do more to it but there it is for now... (haven't showcased anything new inna while)...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

lets make a song together man

peace

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lets do it...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=8320B22F170974D3

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like TI, or Juvenile circa 400 degreez over this. i wouldn't have thought that 808s and soul could mesh like that.

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myspace.com/ncsoul

Thanks for the feedback.

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This is a nice little loop. The 808 could bang a little more. I think with some work, and the right artist, this could be a hit song. Nice work.

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"oh i feel" ( http://tinyurl.com/g3lbm )

sounds like to stole it off 9th wonder's computer...good shit man.

it dosn't work that often lol. this is some good shit mayne

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thanks for peeping my ish.

i was listening to it and didn't like it that much, so i revisited and did this instead "oh i feel (dub 2)" ( http://tinyurl.com/zdjh6 ).

its a lil' cleaner.

to anyone near the herndon, va area- i'm opening up for a group called "king jakob" at carpool on saturday, july 15th... i'll have some nice cd's with me.


peace

you can smoke a blunt to this.

www.myspace.com/prdan
my partner
http://www.myspace.com/anmsbeats

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

three banged hard man. i think smile and woah were my favorites but pop and drop was dope. i could see that shit bein a hit.

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gettin cars wet was a remix i did for a kid.
he did the original and played everything...if you heard the original mine kills his..
i changed up the arangement and drums the instruments also...
umm the song cry remix is crazy. we dont knock underground so i dunno...
buttttt i agree with yall dont know
i havent touched it yet and we will change it still a demo
all samples my partner uses are from records...
stuntin on hoes needs work but i dunno if i wanna touch it..

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

from the song cry remix so i wasn't feelin that one as much. yall don't know had good potential,that was a nice synth but it didn't go where i thought it was gonna. stuntin on hoes had a sick intro, it was pretty good, although there are a couple of things i would've done differently. it reminded me of go out clothes off of rhymefest's album

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we makin moves so thats why i dont showcase much to other producers..
i rather showcase to managers and artists..
but the input was good to hear..
i think myspace player compresses songs even more than the mp3 format..
maybe its just me..
the song we got up are usually demos i squander from the studio..
we usually just play the beats straight from the roland fantom(s)...

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

The preceding beats posted were not cool at all. But I am here to save your ears from the horror that has come before me. I know you will be amazed!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4111477&q=hi

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don't kno why. it's grimy but has a kinda spaced out feel that i like

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and what moves you makin son to call anybody elses craft garbage?
i wouldnt even dog people that are making their 3rd or 4th beats..
its all about constructive criticism .
and im not even speaking for myself. i know my shit bangs...HARD.

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

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do the heizman on dat hoe
myspace.com/ncsoul

the everlaster joint is the only keeper outta the bunch.
u seem to lack focus..like your songs dont know where they are goin.. once you figure out what you wanna do with your music you should be fine
are u programing your drums in double time?
try to stay away from sampling modern hip hop songs
i dont think it was needed to chop up "light ya ass on fire"'s snare hits..umm but yea once you refine your skills and direction and soundscape (you have to think out how your gonna use your sounds and patches are going to mesh together to make one cohessive unit)
just re-tool your old songs and what not..

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

I'm just versatile. I can't stick to making beats the same way. I suppose it's somewhat of a curse not having a signature sound. I'm working on some funk tunes now. I always change because I NEVER feel comfortable with one sound, even if ti's good. Thanks for checking me out though.

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