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Brick - hm. props at...going for it. this is like...arbitrary el-p. it's angry, moody, but no real logic holding the mess together. the bits are rattling against one another with no real conversation going on. sounds like an argument in JFK's customs areas, lots of languages, lots of vitriol, no collaborative energy. work on making things speak more clearly, and it might work out.
Wish - the sounds are a bit candyland, and the chops are pretty superflous, i think. but, it makes a bit more sense as a piece than brick. but, after thinking about it, i think brick is actually better. the different elements are communicating better here, but they're not really saying much. i'd retune the sub bass stabs, that adds a bunch of jankiness that doesn't need to be there.
deja - oof. not really into this. it's all neon lights and muttering pigeons, no real weight to the buzz. i admire your...moxie though, i mean, you obviously have a sound in mind and go for it. but, i dunno, it just doesn't make sense to me, i guess.
keep working. deuces.
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