<<<<first girl on a crooklyn series, thank 9th.

Ok.. so:
http://danieldrumz.com/download.php?id=3

Erykah Badu - On & On / Daniel Drumz remix

the chord progression is a little predictable/kool aid for dinner, but, it definitely compliments the vocal line solidly. the drums are slummed some'm lovely, and bounce off the back of the standup quite well. wish a big set of sub stabs would roll in at some point, would really fatten the jawn up some'm marvelous.

good job. deuces.

thank you for your comment. I'm just starting with beats (it's maybe my 10th beat or something like that) so I know that I need to work on arrangement stuff.

waiting for more comments.

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Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

but i can respect the movement.

cleveland - the drum roll that opens the track up is pretty fly, but beyond that this sort of annoys me. the sounds are so...i dunno, brittle. the hihats are so upfront in the mix, it's difficult to wrap my ears around it properly. needs an mc to really make sense, to me at least. it's definitely good and clean though, props due.

pop and drop - this i like a bit better. the melody line is interesting, and the progression of the additional elements really makes it move. the sounds involved still sound wild latex, but, they're working with each other properly.

smile - ergh. again with the hihats. some'm about the skittering makes me think of crickets fucking inside of a glass eye. can't really get with this, the guitar stab isn't in tune with the rest of the business. props on the moxie it took to do so little to so much, i guess.

gettin cars wet - hm. this is probably the best of this batch. it's a bit more electric than the rest, sounds like it has some real...nerves in it, not a reasonable facsimile of feeling, y'know? very easy to rhyme to as well, had me freestyling a bit nearly immediately. props due, this is solid money.

the only 2 that are done are pop and drop and gettin cars wet.
the rest need more time and energy. i.rarely.post.finished.beats.
for one its a pain in the ass to record them from the fantom's then to mp3. for 2 when you have clients that wanna hear your music i rather showcase from the lab on the studio monitors. thats how i feel about myspace,myspace is a joke.
ill be back next week and hope fully they will be finished.

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

>smile - ergh. again with the hihats. some'm about the
>skittering makes me think of crickets fucking inside of a
>glass eye. can't really get with this, the guitar stab isn't
>in tune with the rest of the business. props on the moxie it
>took to do so little to so much, i guess.
i still havent got to play what i wanted to over it,
itll be all nice and full sounding,i hate beats that sound tiny. this is probably the earlyest of stages but i got the main pattern down and the chops..man the chops were time consuming.
>
>gettin cars wet - hm. this is probably the best of this batch.
>it's a bit more electric than the rest, sounds like it has
>some real...nerves in it, not a reasonable facsimile of
>feeling, y'know? very easy to rhyme to as well, had me
>freestyling a bit nearly immediately. props due, this is solid
>money.
this one was a real bitch
sequencing and patch selection..man a real mufucker

Fiver:like locked in a cage, two men enter, one man leaves thunderdome sex.
you know the scene.
just imagine me with a huge iron mask on,
replace mel gibson with fiona apple.
instead of weapons
there's just lube and dongs.

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where is it???

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"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

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it's just a very rough copy cuz i'm not sure what direction i wanna take it

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i thnk you got some coo elements goin on with this beat, i wasn't really feelin the intro tho...sorry. wut i would do to the beat tho, is add more percussion (hi hats or congas), and a bass line. over all, good job tho.

as a kinda place holder

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Get Live - me singing and rapping. if i was a better singer this would sound better, but i think as a song it works pretty well. if cee-lo or the kid from people in planes got a hold of this, it might be something special.

Sugar Honey Iced Me - easy listening knockburst.

Anybody, Anywhere - boombrap, crudely chopped.

Improvement - see above.

lemme know whatchall think. thanks in advance. have a great weekend.

i don't agree with some of the drums you chose, particularly in anybody anywhere... i think if you switched the pattern and the set, you will come up with something better...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

these tracks are dope man...some of the best i heard in a long time. Get live is jus a good song, vocals work in a maroon 5 kinda way (thats intended as a compliment). the vocals could stand to be thickened up a lil and its a little pitchy here and there...an auto-tune could prolly fix that up without altering your vocals too much. great job.

Get live – Chapeau bas man. Props.

Sugar Honey – for me it got boring and I think that had to do with the bass line. Be that as it may (since that’s just personal taste)…professionally done like all your work.

Anybody Anywhere – Super. Period.

Improvement - Beautiful. Beautiful details, mix.....good ‘ish.

It strikes me that in general your tracks are bass heavy....and yet the kicks are kind of low with not really much punch (maybe because you keep the frequencies of them on the low side as well) . But it sounds like this is a choice rather than something you’d like to change.

All respect,

Merlin.

Fresh in 2011:
http://www.aerialnoise.com/2011/04/13/classic-brothers-–-munchies-rimer-london-remix-magnetron-music/

>www.myspace.com/tayoisnt
>
>Get Live - me singing and rapping. if i was a better singer
>this would sound better, but i think as a song it works pretty
>well. if cee-lo or the kid from people in planes got a hold of
>this, it might be something special.
>
>Sugar Honey Iced Me - easy listening knockburst.
>
>Anybody, Anywhere - boombrap, crudely chopped.
>
>Improvement - see above.
>
>lemme know whatchall think. thanks in advance. have a great
>weekend.


I like your stuff, good shit

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triumphant return on myspace in the sig... lemme know whats good...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

settle down is back on my page...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

on that one was crazy

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Rant - Nice.

Who – Real nice. Snare could do with a little polishing, even if you’re out for the dramatic 9th wonder-results…..it’s a bit off in the mix (the frequencies). All in all: dope.

Triumphant – Dope bass line, synth is too cheap, overall a bit crowded (crowded sample), why is the bass line sometimes panned to the right only? Interesting break.

Settle down – I would love this track with an other snare (one more in line with the ‘soft snares’ of Dilla’s 'Donuts' for example). The whole track breaths that ‘soft but hard-style’ and the snare doesn’t fit somehow. Be that as it may….beautiful track.

Fresh in 2011:
http://www.aerialnoise.com/2011/04/13/classic-brothers-–-munchies-rimer-london-remix-magnetron-music/

>Rant - Nice.

'preciate it...

>Who – Real nice. Snare could do with a little polishing, even
>if you’re out for the dramatic 9th wonder-results…..it’s a bit
>off in the mix (the frequencies). All in all: dope.

still tryin'a get the hang of this mixing bizz... i think im movin along tho...

>Triumphant – Dope bass line, synth is too cheap, overall a bit
>crowded (crowded sample), why is the bass line sometimes
>panned to the right only? Interesting break.

if you mean the organ sound then you'd be correct... its from my cheap lil casio that im usin at the current... the strings are too but i think i did a better job at filtering them than i did with the organ...

>Settle down – I would love this track with an other snare (one
>more in line with the ‘soft snares’ of Dilla’s 'Donuts' for
>example). The whole track breaths that ‘soft but hard-style’
>and the snare doesn’t fit somehow. Be that as it
>may….beautiful track.

thanks... like i said its an oldie but goodie... i did a retake of the whole jammy, didn't really touch the beat tho... maybe i'll take that into consideration...

edit: to answer the panning question... i guess to make room for the main bass riff i made... as for the crowded thing, yeah i can see that... but hey, its done in my eyes... imma tinker with the organ sound tho...

over and out
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"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

That snare needs to hit harder though.

That synth is killer!

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the beat is called powder

http://www.myspace.com/soemusikproductions

can i please get some feedback on this beat?

The cure is here.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4095087&q=hi

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GET ON MY LEVEL!

this beat is actually pretty damn good...

over and out
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

sounds like presets

it does sound like presets, but the composition is nice... he could use some filtering and eq'ing... but in terms of composition its pretty solid...

*really just giving benefit of the doubt,tho*

over and out
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"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

....you funny.

Everytime the chorus comes in I have visions of medieval knights showing off for no reason (other than dramatic results) in cheap movie-sets.

Peace,
Merlin.

Fresh in 2011:
http://www.aerialnoise.com/2011/04/13/classic-brothers-–-munchies-rimer-london-remix-magnetron-music/

latest ish

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4155878&q=hi





check out these beats if you got the time

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=153737

could be used for an album intro or a skit. I couldn't imagine this used for a full track.

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and stuff out to the front more. cuz they sound nice, but like they're playin in the background

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And change those drums, the sounds are fine, but it sounds stuttery, I think they need to be more rythmic, maybe have your current main pattern every couple of bars or on the chorus or something.

I'd also add something else to it, seems a little thin. Maybe some strings and/or horns.

this was me just messing around with Pearl Jam's, "Man of the Hour." It's just drums and the sample, no bassline.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=A5DAA0BD5430D4A5

this is a Red Hot Chili Peppers sample from their new album. I loved the bassline. Not too happy with the drums that I did but it came out pretty nice. Just experimenting and practicing with different techniques.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=E1263C1131B42D7A

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Straight up silkysmoov R&B flav for all a y'all!!!

"Til You Come Home" featuring Prince Habib on vocals. Check the Salim Sivaad MySpizzle laink below:

Peace,
Salim

https://soundcloud.com/salimsivaad/lets-get-free <-- my best work

http://www.soundcloud.com/salimsivaad <-- some other joints

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Peace,
Salim

https://soundcloud.com/salimsivaad/lets-get-free <-- my best work

http://www.soundcloud.com/salimsivaad <-- some other joints

I really like the music there. Something about the rimshot bugs me though. Did you put a delay on it? Or is it a (unintentional) double hit? Could be a Midi problem... Except for that I think the music is dope.

...but I couldn't hear any flams on the rimshot. No delay was used. I do use double and triple hits, but they are totally intentional and obvious. The hits are a little off, because I wanted them sound slightly behind the beat and I didn't quantize, so that might be what is tugging at your ear.

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it!

Peace,
Salim

https://soundcloud.com/salimsivaad/lets-get-free <-- my best work

http://www.soundcloud.com/salimsivaad <-- some other joints

see what that guy was talkin about, there's like one rimshot to many in the loop. the second roll in the loop i think. it goes da da da, then da da, then da,pause da da. idk that prolly made kno sense lol

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boom...boom KAK......boom-boom KAK..KAH-KAK / boom...boomKAH-KAK...boom-boom...KAHKAHKAK

yeah, I probably got too happy with the rimshots LOL! Maybe I should take one or two out....

Feedback is good...thanks.

Peace,
Salim

https://soundcloud.com/salimsivaad/lets-get-free <-- my best work

http://www.soundcloud.com/salimsivaad <-- some other joints

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I don't want to harp on this, but that's not what I meant. The drum programming is fine with me (yeah maybe one or two rimshots less, but that's a matter of taste).

What I meant was that to me the rimshot sounds a little distorted. It sounds like you got two audio tracks (or one audio and one midi track) with the same material running at the same time and they somehow distort or are slightly delayed. You can hear it best on the triple rimshot hits (klack klack klack). It's not a clear "klack", it's a tad bit distorted.

Have you listened to the track on myspace? Maybe that's where this slight distortion is coming from...

If noone else hears this, it might as well be my ears fucking up LOL.

Here's a beat CD I completed yesterday.

Teaser: http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=ECEA7DE925538F3F

The whole sha-bang: http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=7841FB095A90E75D

YO CHECK OUT: myspace.com/mostlyhigh
soundclick.com/mdav

to check out ma beats,u will b flipped wat u shall find

REAL NIGGAZ DIE WITH THEY EYS OPEN

that i love big meat real or w/e it's called had potential but it seemed like the claps where off or something

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My favorite was Lost. Maybe I'm just a sucker for strings and piano. And, the guitar rifts fit in perfectly. Very soulful and emotional.

"Jesus died at age 33. But what he didn't do is forget his niggas." (c) Sir Bumpy of Knuckles

Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it.

You know, after you've spent spent so much time on your music, there comes a point when it gets difficult to judge objectively. Either you become too critical or you fall in love with wack shit. So it's nice to hear positive feedback, cause I almost couldn't tell anymore...

Double post...

www.myspace.com/killingtimebeats

Drop me a line on myspace, tell me what you think.

www.myspace.com/dancedancerevolutionaries
www.myspace.com/kevarnoldmagnificent

www.soul2020.com
www.myspace.com/chopsteak

avy: the man, the miff

i thought when i heard this is what jayz would sound like spittin somethin over this. good shit

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Sorry, haven’t been around lately to give feedback…personal shit.
It’s been so long this whole “make the music”- forum is still kind of new to me.

Be that as it may, my site http://www.soulretriever.com
has been updated recently.

Added to the play list:

"Between Worlds" - Remix for Fatima Yamaha (release date t.b.a.)
"Perpetual"
"Tense"
"Changes" (on the second page of the audio fruits, yes I know ya’ll know the sample).

Also, I've added "Roller Coaster" played by Michiel Borstlap (winner of the Thelonious Monk Award 1996) in the downloads-section as well as the quite old original demo-version of the track.

Peace, Merlin.

Fresh in 2011:
http://www.aerialnoise.com/2011/04/13/classic-brothers-–-munchies-rimer-london-remix-magnetron-music/

www.soul2020.com
www.myspace.com/chopsteak

avy: fresh beats chopped daily

Peace,

Merlin.

Fresh in 2011:
http://www.aerialnoise.com/2011/04/13/classic-brothers-–-munchies-rimer-london-remix-magnetron-music/

"This Time"
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~dswain20/thistimearound.mp3

"Leavin' Me"
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~dswain20/leavinme.mp3

"Not Ready"
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~dswain20/notready.mp3

"Listen"
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~dswain20/listen.mp3

http://www.startower.co.uk
http://www.dannyswain.com

leavin me was ok, but i liked the other 3 better, those were really good

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...I really appreciate the feedback.

http://www.startower.co.uk
http://www.dannyswain.com

>...I really appreciate the feedback.

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city as the school ( http://url123.com/vq6kw )

you can smoke a blunt to this.

just on certain hits, i think where u might've placed the bass at the same time and the bass is too loud

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"Wheel of Fortune"

www.myspace.com/exel

i like this fam... good work...

over and out
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"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

www.soul2020.com
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www.myspace.com/manjayproductions

"Meditate on that" is a track I made wit three emcees over it.

"Blackjazz" features my artist Reilla

"Bassrock" is just an insturmental.

any feedback would be greatly appreciated. I jus wanna learn!

I write music (but who doesn't these days)
www.myspace.com/manjayproductions

www.myspace.com/jlchilds

Got that 80's feel I like. You kinda overchopped in places tho, where keeping it simple woulda been better.

The Reilla one would be cool with a little more low end.

The other one...not feelin' so much.

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i thought the Reilla track was the best, i like it a lot

maybe it could use more bass, also the beat was so good that it hurt a little to stop it so much

new for the week: smirk and watch me (feedback please)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=570553

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

www.soul2020.com
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thanks..and the constructive part? haha

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"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

Watch me, which I believe uses a Snoop Dogg sample, doesn't have anything glaringly wrong with it. It just seems to lack a sense of direction or melody to me, hence the vague comment.

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thanks..much more helpful than your initial comment..and the sample is mayfield, but maybe snoop used it? if so i wasnt aware.

my music: www.myspace.com/dresproduces

"im simply the cat that lay back, i chill and watch you, the silent ninja, intent to injure now i got you, sanity lost so now im found insane, thinkin streets to jeeps, hours days to weeks, i even speak to geeks..."

http://www.myspace.com/mphenix

3 instrumentals, 1 techno track. I've never really gotten any feedback from other beat makers, so i'd appreciate it

i am diggin 29 and changes

id like to hear voices on them

couple guys in my crew are from new hampshire originally

imma forward your myspace link to them

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cool thanks

yeah i've got all the vocals written but haven't had the patience or equipment to record them well

www.soul2020.com
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duly noted
i recently discovered the subwoofer preset AND the EQ, so that will help

daamn

http://www.soundclick.com/haj

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unless all the others ones sucked..lol

thanks for checking it out guys

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