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paperdollpoet
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"ahkir don't be no hero"


  

          

** for blksilence and other blk men who thought that enlisting their souls wld make them men.**
(p.s. this ain't "the usual" ...but what is?)(and forgive and forget all errors)

you went in search
of stars on petty coats
to form reasons
for the rhyme you call dick
and i told you
you were born with it
but you thought i was lying
and
now
you a nigga with a sand nigga name
fighting a battle
within yourself
with stripes 'cross your eyes
don't be no hero
cause heroes always lose
their lives
and i told you once before
a blk man don't have no business in an army
that he ain't fighting with
but fighting for
purple hearts that dangle from dead niggas
ain't revolutionary
cause you died as an enemy
and i told you this
only heroes die
cause they ain't got enough courage to see
life beyond a moment
but you and time are twin brothers
the sun dials of myth
running
not from
but with
you been a man
before uniforms camoflogued you as one
before sumone called you by a master's name
and not the one your mother gave
you been a man
you are a man
don't be no hero.


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I wish they would listen
childless
Oct 30th 2001
1
RE: ahkir don't be no hero
vitamink
Oct 30th 2001
2
Good piece, but...
Oct 30th 2001
3
RE: ahkir don't be no hero
Oct 30th 2001
4
aww Aulelei..
Oct 30th 2001
5
Lei....
Oct 30th 2001
6
...
Oct 30th 2001
7
RE: ahkir don't be no hero
Oct 31st 2001
8
its
Nov 01st 2001
9
I felt
Nov 01st 2001
10
can't be a hero...
Nov 01st 2001
11
nice
Nov 01st 2001
14
M-a-n...
Nov 01st 2001
12
maaaaaaaaaayne...
Nov 01st 2001
13
held my breath
Nov 02nd 2001
15
up for memories n/m
childless
Nov 03rd 2001
16
its not really fair
Nov 03rd 2001
17
black steel in the hour of chaos
Nov 03rd 2001
18
RE: its not really fair
Nov 03rd 2001
20
don't be
Nov 03rd 2001
19

childless

Tue Oct-30-01 07:32 AM

  
1. "I wish they would listen"
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not only black men, but black women as well....

you been a man
before uniforms camoflogued you as one
before sumone called you by a master's name
and not the one your mother gave
you been a man
you are a man
don't be no hero.

I found solace in the above lines... You were always capable of writing exactly what needs to be said. Peace.

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vitamink

Tue Oct-30-01 07:53 AM

  
2. "RE: ahkir don't be no hero"
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you a nigga with a sand nigga name
fighting a battle
within yourself

we fight this with invisible and visible stripes...keep surfacing........k



i'm
gonna make it a
crime

to be anything BUT black
pass the coppertone

...calvin forbes

  

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ThaAnthology
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Tue Oct-30-01 09:19 AM

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3. "Good piece, but..."
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not everyone thinks a sand name makes them more...

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Tue Oct-30-01 09:23 AM

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4. "RE: ahkir don't be no hero"
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wow, alot of anger here....missed reading your posts

There's no love like revolutionary
love!!! I'm waiting for the Black MAN to
stand up and be the soldier he was
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5. "aww Aulelei.."
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sista' it brings me so much joy to see your name back on the boards.. glad you post'd this.. "heroes die, 'cause they too blind to see life beyond a moment" that's deep..
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'nigga hand it over---those boots, that watch,
those rings, and I want fries to go with that'---
is what their hollerin' every 3mins. in AMERICA, &/
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6. "Lei...."
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glad to see u posting....march 11 is right round tha corner love.....inbox me with ur number cuz my pager's broke so i lost all my numbers.




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"Roaches on the flo"
I went to see my chickenhead
She opens up the do
I was like "Whut's dat gul?"
She said "Roaches on the flo"
Roaches, roaches, roaches
Dirty stinkin' roaches
Roaches, roaches, roaches
Nasty little roaches

At first ah was hungry
But, not anymo
I said I not eatin' shit
Gul, you got roaches on the flo

Roaches, roaches, roaches
Dirty stinkin' roaches
Roaches, roaches, roaches
Nasty little roaches

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morpheme
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Tue Oct-30-01 07:57 PM

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7. "..."
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the man two houses off the corner of my grandmother's street
has both the united states flag
& a libertion flag adhere'd to his mailbox
i guess w/out the red white & blue
he'd be called
"that radical nigger"
& w/them beside the red blk & green it's
"nigger...u're allright w/me"

peace lei...

~kiera





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a wise man once told me
never argue w/a fool
because frum a distance
no one can tell who is who
~jigga


"i've got myself/to remind me of love"

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symphonygoddess
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Wed Oct-31-01 05:35 AM

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8. "RE: ahkir don't be no hero"
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>a blk man don't have no
>business in an army
>that he ain't fighting with
>but fighting for
>purple hearts that dangle from dead
>niggas
>ain't revolutionary
>cause you died as an enemy

sad but true. good to see you posting again, hit us with some "hot s#%t"

  

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rgv
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Thu Nov-01-01 12:25 AM

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9. "its"
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akhir

*siGh*
his name hurts to look @
i swear it dew




i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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DanjaRuss
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10. "I felt"
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this..all inna me bone marro'...fe real.

Quality piece.

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11. "can't be a hero..."
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If being a hero means to die

If
being a hero
means to die to self
die to self bleeding blood aligned
to self and existence of ancestors linked to
ancestors linked to breaths of Yahweh creating a genesis beyond
death...

If being a hero
means to wave flags
wear rags
to declare riches
for cats with stitches
woven
to create poverty
quilts for the kamakasi chokin the breaths of youths
of the majority...

If
being a hero
means to kill me

without

my choosing it,

I might as well die human.

*one love, paperdollpoet...i miss you*

MUSE
(Nov. 1st, My Birthday... )

...
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Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
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"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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14. "nice"
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"don’t have to bump this, but please respect it"-tupac

"i am a woman with a mission & a past to outdo"-nikka costa

"...if i stop today, it was still worth it-even the terrible mistakes that i have made & would have unmade if I could, it was still worth it"-GIA


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12. "M-a-n..."
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is a three letter word...?

and
W-o-m-a-n is a five letter word?

and D-e-a-t-h has grown to pronounce them both


ak-


"Silence is often mistaken for stupidity"- blaksilence

"i didn't go to war...i just paid for this world
with my ancestor's blood

and
politely

asked for my change back"- akhir

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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13. "maaaaaaaaaayne..."
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"fighting a battle
within yourself
with stripes 'cross your eyes
don't be no hero
cause heroes always lose
their lives
and i told you once before
a blk man don't have no business in an army
that he ain't fighting with
but fighting for"

Goodness....

*speechless*

Good ph*ccing lord...that was amazing..in one word -- amazing...u took me in2 yr world in an incredible way...and i'm better for it...i know i am...

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15. "held my breath"
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but i see the dude is around... yeah, i remember you. and you, miss paper, need to come around here some more..

sundae

!ya basta!

"the 'centre' asks us, demands of us, that we should sign a peace agreement quickly and convert ourselves into an 'institutional' political force, that is to say, convert ourselves into yet another part of the machinery of power. to them we answer 'NO' and they do not understand it. they do not understand that we are not in agreement with those ideas. they do not understand that we do not want offices or posts in the gov't. they do not understand that we are stuggling not for the stairs to be swept clean from the top to the bottom, but for there to be no stairs, for there to be no kingdom at all."

-Zapatista statement-

  

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childless

Sat Nov-03-01 08:05 AM

  
16. "up for memories n/m"
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What ever happened to our Leaders?..--Erykah Badu

Have you ever loved somebody, secretly loved somebody who didn't know? Have you fell in love with somebody, deeply love somebody who didn't know?--Zhane'

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Aeon
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Sat Nov-03-01 09:11 AM

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17. "its not really fair"
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to assume that these men who have/are enlisted are doing so because they want to be men or heroes. in my experience, alot of times, these do so because they feel trapped by societal stasis that exists... no money in the house/no house to go to/no satisfactory employment- these things make the armed forces a viable option.

that being said-

the piece itself was quite a display of writing skill-

>you went in search
>of stars on petty coats
>to form reasons
>for the rhyme you call dick
>and i told you
>you were born with it
>but you thought i was lying

intricately simple intro here. a very visual portrayal of a simple concept-well done.

>and
>now
>you a nigga with a sand nigga name
>fighting a battle
>within yourself

"nigga" can be effective to convey within one word an existence, a way of life- the import was received here.

>with stripes 'cross your eyes
>don't be no hero
>cause heroes always lose
>their lives
>and i told you once before
>a blk man don't have no business in an army
>that he ain't fighting with
>but fighting for
>purple hearts that dangle from dead niggas
>ain't revolutionary
>cause you died as an enemy
>and i told you this
>only heroes die
>cause they ain't got enough courage to see
>life beyond a moment
>but you and time are twin brothers
>the sun dials of myth
>running
>not from
>but with
>you been a man
>before uniforms camoflogued you as one
>before sumone called you by a master's name
>and not the one your mother gave
>you been a man
>you are a man
>don't be no hero.

very powerful/controversial message here, funneled thru some
very poignant and powerful words.

keep writing.



§æon§

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18. "black steel in the hour of chaos"
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is all i have to say.

drop me a line, love--we need to catch up.


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paperdollpoet
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20. "RE: its not really fair"
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thanks for the complete thoughts...

when i said "and other blk men who thought that enlisting their souls wld make them men."

i was speaking towards men that thought that way ("blk who thought")..rather than every man who has/had elisted.

but i appreciate it all the same.

keep the motion
paperdollpoet
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ToeJam
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Sat Nov-03-01 10:53 AM

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19. "don't be"
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Very direct. The flow was on, it was exactly as long as it needed to be, and it was strong. The voice was STRONG. Good work.

  

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