if thy wilt but touch crevices of the reddest blush...coarsing through vaginal arteries ...where thy mouth fumbles verses against the gods...and thine fingers suck juices perserved in the venus...shall we then be burned forever in confections known only to please my virtues?...
my black moor...of deepest inks...of a thousand tongues...lashing sonnets of cock intertwined in my mounts...come hither and make folly of my ass...mountainous and covered in your dew...oh black moor...forgive me not as i suckle u into my language and pass cuntinents swelling like Red Sea ...let me stay between the warmth of your veins...
for i am no fool...the fields have spoken of your kindness...tormented with the sheets of Rah and Isis...of legs u shall unfold , contorted in earths increase and shout do i...to the heavens...as my symbols etch their markings upon the back of your slave name....yet u are my king....and i claim u and doth take our spirits to be purified in our solitude.
now i am confined to this space...this generation of blackened skin...uninterrupted thy name shall fall a thousand years and still...my pussy cry will be the sheath of lovers way past our time ...my black moor....u have sinned me in your way...and yet..i am ready to come into your fold again....
tonight we bid farewell...and shall the moon catch us to greet the sun...we shalt be spent in the cum of our befores and afters...forever shaking the history of our births...
kimabe04/02
"I was that ball of yarn, your pussy want'd to get caught up in."
Giovanni
"dont leave your thoughts behind take them with you"....
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satisfaction comes to those who satisfy themselves...
2. "while readin' this.." In response to Reply # 0
i thought of "Ode To A Shakespearean Dick".. are u still workin' on that piece or was this it, but u changed the title? well, either way i'm feelin' this.. the language is different, but i still enjoy'd it.. ______________________________________________
seems like thats all i know how to respond to your work with..... I know im rather simple in my abilities to draw meaning but i draw my meaning from everything i read often at the expense of the author. I say that to say..... DAMN you tapped in interesting blend of the shakespearean and contemporary for me and this line...".come hither and make folly of my ass..." was what i kept finding going back and forth throughout the piece. your write very passionately. Its a learning experience every time i read your work. this might be the one of the most linguisticly rich pieces ive ever read on these here boards.... very impressive.
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"I bet you never heard of a playa with no game.... Told the truth to get what I want but shot it with no shame." -andre (Outkast)
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my black moor...of deepest inks...of a thousand tongues...lashing sonnets of cock intertwined in my mounts..
it didn't rage out at me like most of your work often does.. Maybe it was the language, or maybe.. it's the tone... so subtle/yet assertive for something that seems so beautiful.... *shrug*.......But the above lines.. are what I dug the most... __________________________
tormented >with the sheets of Rah >and Isis...of legs u shall >unfold , contorted in earths >increase and shout do i...to >the heavens...as my symbols etch >their markings upon the back >of your slave name....yet u >are my king....and i claim >u
the above really spoke to me... really good stuff here, i'll have to read it a few more times.
DPP (Domepome Poets) for life... --------------------------------- "For evil to bend its knees, admitting its guilt, to implore the forgiveness of God, is the hardest thing in the world." - Malcolm X
"Politics and Hypocrits is makin us Lunatics" - Marvin Gaye
your words demonstrate the aggrevation and the emotions immersed into this particular feeling/person/thing, etc. very creative at first i thought it was meant to be sarcastic?? just as i thought that u peiced together some unforgettable thoughts... and imagery. got me envisionin..
peace -Stephani
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12. "THIS sht phccing floored me....." In response to Reply # 0
u brought tiptop quality 2 the table, K...wasn't as longwinded as yr other works typically r, and that was a major plus 4 me. the subtleties used w/in this gave it a touch of the subliminal, which really had me spazzin'...i just can't get over how passionate yr words r. dope dope dope work...keep blessin' us.
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