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Boon_Quadroon
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"Battle Haikus (Calling All challengers!!)"


  

          

Yeah, I'm feeling a little aggressive today. I'm probably ego tripping and the delirium will pass soon, but today, I feel that, I AM THE TRUE BATTLE HAIKU MASTER!!!! I'm throwing down the gauntlet!!

Come test!!
You can't beat me!!
I run this!!

Let's begin!

My Haiku Style:

Beaheads a million
left weaving in cold wind a
headless dan-delion.


Simplicity of character is the natural result of profound thought.


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Subject Author Message Date ID
debatably, you went over
May 08th 2002
1
RE: debatably, you went over
May 08th 2002
2
      undebatably, you are over
May 08th 2002
3
           RE: You lose, roll over. Next?
May 08th 2002
4
           steps in to even the odds
May 08th 2002
5
           RE: steps in to even the odds
May 08th 2002
6
           Send your ass back to the boonies
May 08th 2002
7
                Boon, which do you want? Jam or Chike?
May 08th 2002
8
           RE: undebatably, you are over
May 08th 2002
9
                RE: undebatably, you are over
May 08th 2002
10
                ok, my go..gotta add some feminine energy
May 08th 2002
11
                RE: ok, my go..gotta add some feminine energy
May 08th 2002
12
                     LOVED THAT ONE!
May 08th 2002
14
                Poetiquette
May 08th 2002
15
                     RE: Poetiquette
May 08th 2002
17
                that was 5 - 5, in all fairness
May 08th 2002
13
                     RE: that was 5 - 5, in all fairness
May 08th 2002
16
upping, this is hot!
May 09th 2002
18
1 syllable style
May 09th 2002
20
Gio and tags Boon and jumps in the ring..
May 09th 2002
19
Tags Fah
May 09th 2002
21
Tags Boon
May 09th 2002
22
      Tags The Aquarian.....TOP ROPE!
May 09th 2002
24
           Sun Seven Cheering Section
May 09th 2002
27
RE: Battle Haikus (Calling All challengers!!)
May 09th 2002
23
ahem
May 09th 2002
25
*snicker*
May 09th 2002
26
RE: *snicker*
May 09th 2002
28
      RE: *snicker*
May 09th 2002
29
      boo
May 09th 2002
30
           ooh...i likes dat!!!
May 09th 2002
31
           hootie hoo!!!!
May 10th 2002
37
           whoa!!! bonamie smoked this jount..
May 14th 2002
51
      RE: *snicker*
May 09th 2002
33
RE: ahem
May 09th 2002
32
      RE: ahem
May 10th 2002
34
           RE: ahem
May 10th 2002
35
           ****reaches for second blade****
May 10th 2002
36
                and this is why
May 10th 2002
38
                s'more...
May 10th 2002
39
                just defending
May 10th 2002
40
                     Just retaliating
May 10th 2002
41
                          OH!
May 10th 2002
43
                          oh, really? (smiles)
May 10th 2002
44
                          and if rhyme is required....
May 10th 2002
46
                RE: ****reaches for machine gun****
May 10th 2002
42
                     two at a time! hell yeah!
May 10th 2002
45
                     rhyme part II
May 10th 2002
47
                          Let's go
May 10th 2002
48
                               I love this
May 10th 2002
49
...
May 14th 2002
50
final haiku
May 14th 2002
52
domino!
May 15th 2002
53

Chike
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1. "debatably, you went over"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I say dandelion has 4 syllables. So your last line is wrong. Anyway...

Flowery rhymes get
Stomped, I stamp my foot, you quit
I take out the comp

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May the Lord give you wisdom...



  

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Boon_Quadroon
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Wed May-08-02 06:39 AM

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2. "RE: debatably, you went over"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

The foolish critique
their third eyes glaucoma filled
and still see defeat


Simplicity of character is the natural result of profound thought.


Interested in buying my new chapbook
"The Unscene"
Then checkout my myspace page: http://myspace.com/d_weston
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Peace

  

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ToeJam
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3. "undebatably, you are over"
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You only ramble
finished by the preamble
style soupier than...

  

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Boon_Quadroon
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4. "RE: You lose, roll over. Next?"
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You'll pay a pennance
your style violates like an
unfinished sentence....



Simplicity of character is the natural result of profound thought.


Interested in buying my new chapbook
"The Unscene"
Then checkout my myspace page: http://myspace.com/d_weston
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Peace

  

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BarefootAquarian
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5. "steps in to even the odds"
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Sun Cypher seven
guarantees each other as
last to reach heaven.


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
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6. "RE: steps in to even the odds"
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pugalistic keys
tapping jaws with letters leaves
face marked by pinky rings




Band (YEAH) any body hot (NO) you know why (why) cause we're Cool (cool) ~~Morris Day

1Man AMAZIN


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a tank full of gas ..$20
a new fit to wear at Dream....$200
culb hoping in the Gardens..Bar None ..Culb U ..and Dream...$250
to hear all the Young's and Joe's at

  

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ToeJam
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7. " Send your ass back to the boonies"
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Boon's barren inside
Menace your pennance in stride
the ending implied...

  

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BarefootAquarian
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8. "Boon, which do you want? Jam or Chike?"
In response to Reply # 7


  

          


Doesn't matter doh
I'm about to stomp a chike
make him stub his TOE

"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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Poetiquette
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9. "RE: undebatably, you are over"
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Now YOU went over...damn, 5-7-5

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Poetiquette
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10. "RE: undebatably, you are over"
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That was directed to # 3...Toe jam

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11. "ok, my go..gotta add some feminine energy"
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This Earth has appeal/
Third eye mentality that
Stays keepin' it real/

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Poetiquette
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12. "RE: ok, my go..gotta add some feminine energy"
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He knows I'm The Shit/
Butterfly wings pun' mi clit/
Our love... exquisite/

(CHALLENGE!!!- From a Cosby Show episode) lol

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BarefootAquarian
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14. "LOVED THAT ONE!"
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talking about the cosby episode....lol....shalllansssshhhh!

just playing. The haiku was tight, too. Lets see if a chic steps in to take u....


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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ToeJam
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15. "Poetiquette"
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Learn to count.

  

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17. "RE: Poetiquette"
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Damn..I'm sorry..my error was corrected for me..I was pronouncing "Style" w/ 2 syllablles. It's all good...your haiku's aint seein' mine...lol.

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BarefootAquarian
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13. "that was 5 - 5, in all fairness"
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You 1 on 2 ly 3 ram 4 ble 5
fin 1 ished 2 by 3 the 4 pre 5 am 6 ble 7
style 1 sou 2 pi 3 er 4 than... 5


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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16. "RE: that was 5 - 5, in all fairness"
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You right, you right..had to go back and read it...I was pronouncing 'Style' as Sty-le (2 syllables) rather than, Style (1 syllable)...
...And yeah, I'm waiting for some competition..it's all in fun and skillz.

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18. "upping, this is hot!"
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**********Mad Love to The Sigs**********

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20. "1 syllable style"
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my style defeats those
who meet at the corner of
wack and punk-ass street

------
"I can't promise I'll try. But I'll try to try."

  

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19. "Gio and tags Boon and jumps in the ring.."
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haiku 1 continues into haiku 2 and so on and so on..
--------------------------------------------------------
Haiku 1

yall battlin' Boon?
ain't think G was comin' through?
we will defeat you

Haiku 2

pull yall tadpoles out
the pool/ spittin' haikus that
hang you like a noose

Haiku 3

then we watch you swing
how dare yall/ try & test we?!
niggas, exit please
______________________________________________
"Like the moon, we on the earth
takin' a ride around the sun
my son, we only just begun
& the journey's far from done
we on a mission,
watch yuh brain' 'gone fishin'
like Walter Mosley" -Talib Kweli

"my life is authored by the moon
foot prints written in soil:
the fountain pen of martian men
novelling human toil..." -saul williams








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21. "Tags Fah"
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Sun Cipher Seven
Band of warrior poets
stagnating all comp

Washed up metaphors
silly braggadicio
your smile becomes fear
**********Mad Love to The Sigs**********

DomePomePoets- We live the word and love the word...as it should be.

"i have caught fire from
your mouthnow you want me to
swallow the ocean." Sonja Sanchez


"when we say goodbye
i want your toungue insidemy
mouth dancing hello" -Sanchez

http://members.blackplanet.com/ThaAnthology/#
www.divinecipher.com
www.4luvofpoetry.com
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The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
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The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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22. "Tags Boon"
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Cease all the talkin
our style be so lethal it
have you crip walkin



>Band of warrior poets
>stagnating all comp
>
>Washed up metaphors
>silly braggadicio
>your smile becomes fear
>**********Mad Love to The Sigs**********
>
>DomePomePoets- We live the word and
>love the word...as it should
>be.
>
>"i have caught fire from
>your mouthnow you want me to
>
>swallow the ocean." Sonja Sanchez
>
>
>"when we say goodbye
>i want your toungue insidemy
>mouth dancing hello" -Sanchez
>
>http://members.blackplanet.com/ThaAnthology/#
>www.divinecipher.com
>www.4luvofpoetry.com
>www.illpoets.com
>www.rhythmandpraise.com


Simplicity of character is the natural result of profound thought.


Interested in buying my new chapbook
"The Unscene"
Then checkout my myspace page: http://myspace.com/d_weston
for purchase info and praise.

Peace

  

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24. "Tags The Aquarian.....TOP ROPE!"
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Here we go again
thow your shit into the fan
splatter wack haikus



"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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27. "Sun Seven Cheering Section"
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*GO TEAM!*

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23. "RE: Battle Haikus (Calling All challengers!!)"
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Yo, I'll give it a go

Let me drop science
On your feeble domes and put
You all back in school

When I'm done none stand
Leave you all extinct waiting
for resurection

It's time for bed kids
the rhymes you kick are tired
practice for a bit





"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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25. "ahem"
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joe, u dc live
but not community give
unhappy kids rob


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26. "*snicker*"
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28. "RE: *snicker*"
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Why snicker at them
Put up or shut up, why play
Do a rhyme on them

WE SOME ICY HOT STUNNAS
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"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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29. "RE: *snicker*"
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missing the damn point
she snickered in private joke
nosey folks need cures

lol, just haiku'ing star!

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30. "boo"
In response to Reply # 29


  

          

keystyle thugs need hugs
just like latchkeys lacking home
want milk and cookies?



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delrica
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31. "ooh...i likes dat!!!"
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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http://www.saulwilliams.com

----------------------
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bonamie
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37. "hootie hoo!!!!"
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all 'bout the kids, but
skills slept on like winter bear
my life is my words



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51. "whoa!!! bonamie smoked this jount.."
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______________________________________________
"staring at the edge of his unlit cigarette
I search for answers
I wait for clarity
and or flames
hidden among the lessons
in the stories
he pulls from his pockets
like peppermint candy
covered with lint" -Frank X. Walker

"his stories
floating in the air
like vapor photographs" -Frank X. Walker

"we stood
at the edge of the road
in Clifton
looking out at the
wide wet mirror
that divided
one county from the next
absence from forgiveness
then spoke and laughed
in unison
like twins
like a small choir
singing psalms." -Frank X. Walker

"Like the moon, we on the earth
takin' a ride around the sun
my son, we only just begun
& the journey's far from done
we on a mission,
watch yuh brain' 'gone fishin'
like Walter Mosley" -Talib Kweli

"my life is authored by the moon
foot prints written in soil:
the fountain pen of martian men
novelling human toil..." -saul williams








email: nyckencole@aol.com

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33. "RE: *snicker*"
In response to Reply # 28


  

          

you should let it go
cuz you be like a child up
in grown folks bid'ness

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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----------------------
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My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

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32. "RE: ahem"
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as long as you know what the snicker was for, no explanations or participation is needed

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----------------------
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34. "RE: ahem"
In response to Reply # 32


  

          

Don't care what ya'll do
Just defeating ya'll like a
Man with his feet cut

Just sheading light here
So Ignant people learn me
so bow, bow to the master

Lets do some battle
Drop you like a bad habit
You silly rabbit






"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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35. "RE: ahem"
In response to Reply # 34


  

          

Grown folks must learn too
You step to this kid you get
Cut up, sorry boo



"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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36. "****reaches for second blade****"
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If you gonna use
regimented weaponry
count your syllables


>>>so bow, bow to the master<<<<
that's 7 on an end line. You slipped...now you're vulnerable


Smoke you like a blunt
rolled with paper tainted with
your bullshit haiku


Jheri curl flows like
'atric or activator
both old and useless

Stomp your pigeon fire
Phoenix would have asked u this--
What u try'nna do?

Fellatio this
Holes get plugged and jaws get slugged
Theories tooth/proof-less



...And to think I did it all with no shoes on.


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
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38. "and this is why"
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i nub you!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~o~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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http://www.saulwilliams.com

----------------------
Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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39. "s'more..."
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You crave my mental/
Wash your face between my legs/
For my words you beg/

Denying the fact/
That with out me your world lacks/
Aint takin'no slack/

You talk out your ass/
Wanna-be-righteous, you crass/
But let past be past/

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40. "just defending"
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...the Mocha Hut honor, m'lady. **bows**


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
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41. "Just retaliating"
In response to Reply # 40


  

          

Even my mistakes
Still do damage to your mind
Hold on the earth shakes



"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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bonamie
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43. "OH!"
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44. "oh, really? (smiles)"
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Earthquakes don't do shit
Gravity is on my leash
Look up and see me


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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BarefootAquarian
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46. "and if rhyme is required...."
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Dodge the versatile
I don't think you've paid your dues
stop at the turnstyle


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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42. "RE: ****reaches for machine gun****"
In response to Reply # 36


  

          

Bow to the master
Or be eliminated
You blotted Bastard

***Don't take it seriously*** just rhyming



"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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45. "two at a time! hell yeah!"
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Ching Ching Ching Ching Ching
Blocking every bullet fired
Riccochet's a bitch


"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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47. "rhyme part II"
In response to Reply # 42


  

          


You can't handle this
Disappointment with your loss?
Give the lake a kiss

"The matress was a tabletop, the bedsheet was a page; we be written out like a couple question marks, my convex to your concave....."--Ani DiFranco

Plus I got niggas in DC
That'll hit you for 3G's and a box of Yum's carry out!
Little Brother


Protest!
http://www.hal-pc.org/~edi/lih.jpg

  

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48. "Let's go"
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Aight cool let's go
I will decimate you
Man you just to slow

My wallet is full
I've paid my dues, what about you
You pay attention

Bullets richo back
So come back stronger than that
Cause man you straight wack



"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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49. "I love this"
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I can go all day
Disenboweling young MC's
Told ya'll I don't play



"And tell your momma quit paging a brotha at work and leave this rappin' shit to the experts" Mc Ren

"Heed, I flip rhyme to the beat and flip mode to explode when it's time to compete
blow up, throw up your hands to this it's easy to be ruthless gangstas never die" RBX

Vision this like Vivitar, whose repituar is as vast as Madagascar pull you out the car, murder so bizarre, ARE YOU READY!! RBX

"Let freedom ring with a buck shot but not just yet, first we need to truly understand the nature of the threat, the pale man walks in the threshold of darkness...." Ras Kass

"My mental is the bullet and my tounge is the finger to pull it..." Ras Kass

"*because I had a pretty large dome when I was a shorty. I had to wear a helmet because my head was so heavy that I would lean into shit.*" ... "*"I don't know what's more cruel...The fact that my parents bought a helmet to keep me from falling over, or the fact that they also bought a football T-Shirt so I can pretend that I'm Walter Payton?*" SpookyElectric reply

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50. "..."
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this was fun

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52. "final haiku"
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call me shinobi
swing my words like swords on cats
thinkin' they know me
______________________________________________
"staring at the edge of his unlit cigarette
I search for answers
I wait for clarity
and or flames
hidden among the lessons
in the stories
he pulls from his pockets
like peppermint candy
covered with lint" -Frank X. Walker

"his stories
floating in the air
like vapor photographs" -Frank X. Walker

"we stood
at the edge of the road
in Clifton
looking out at the
wide wet mirror
that divided
one county from the next
absence from forgiveness
then spoke and laughed
in unison
like twins
like a small choir
singing psalms." -Frank X. Walker

"Like the moon, we on the earth
takin' a ride around the sun
my son, we only just begun
& the journey's far from done
we on a mission,
watch yuh brain' 'gone fishin'
like Walter Mosley" -Talib Kweli

"my life is authored by the moon
foot prints written in soil:
the fountain pen of martian men
novelling human toil..." -saul williams








email: nyckencole@aol.com

-----sig starts here-----
interested in buying my chapbook,
"Transfer"? Just visit http://myspace.com/alanking81

or

http://myspace.com/bustransfer
(see what people are saying
about "Transfer")

"I used to walk through the valley
like Psalms 27"
--

  

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ThaAnthology
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53. "domino!"
In response to Reply # 52


  

          

**********Mad Love to The Sigs**********

DomePomePoets- We live the word and love the word...as it should be.

"i have caught fire from
your mouthnow you want me to
swallow the ocean." Sonja Sanchez


"when we say goodbye
i want your toungue insidemy
mouth dancing hello" -Sanchez

http://members.blackplanet.com/ThaAnthology/#
www.divinecipher.com
www.4luvofpoetry.com
www.illpoets.com
www.rhythmandpraise.com

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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