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rubbersoulonice
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"Watcher"


  

          

Tromp and splash, tired day
Drums of war beat and stay
How can those skins sound
Without blood
How long will we wait
How long will the children quake
I don't know
Pour me a fresh margarita
I'm only a watcher
And glad for it.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
Drinker
Mar 08th 2003
1
RE: Drinker
Mar 09th 2003
11
Communion
Mar 08th 2003
2
Oh My! -- Oh My! -- Oh My Goodness!
Mar 08th 2003
7
Boiling
Mar 08th 2003
3
Ahhhhhh Haaaaa --
Mar 09th 2003
9
Poet
Mar 08th 2003
4
Dust
Mar 08th 2003
5
Sleepers
Mar 08th 2003
6
*Damn*
Mar 09th 2003
10
RE: Watcher
Mar 09th 2003
8
Vorpal Sword
Mar 10th 2003
12
RE: Vorpal Sword
Mar 13th 2003
17
sometimes
Mar 10th 2003
13
RE: Watcher
Mar 10th 2003
14
you're on fire
Mar 10th 2003
15
hand-over-mouth expression
Mar 11th 2003
16
Strangelover
Mar 13th 2003
18
Fuck an "Artist Of The Month"
Mar 15th 2003
33
By Some Miracle
Mar 13th 2003
19
Failure
Mar 14th 2003
20
DAAAAAMN
Mar 14th 2003
21
RE: DAAAAAMN
Mar 15th 2003
27
Coffee
Mar 15th 2003
22
Tragedy
Mar 15th 2003
23
Waking
Mar 15th 2003
24
      RE: Waking
Mar 24th 2003
48
When
Mar 15th 2003
25
Nothing
Mar 15th 2003
26
Feathers
Mar 15th 2003
28
So True --
Mar 20th 2003
44
Immolation
Mar 15th 2003
29
c what i mean
Mar 15th 2003
30
RE: Watcher
Mar 15th 2003
31
i want you
Mar 15th 2003
32
Thanks
Mar 17th 2003
34
Seems to be
Mar 19th 2003
35
these 2 lines:
Mar 19th 2003
36
Pray
Mar 19th 2003
37
Prey
Mar 19th 2003
38
RE: Watcher
Mar 19th 2003
39
"King Of The World"
Mar 19th 2003
40
Fools
Mar 19th 2003
41
RE: Fools
Mar 19th 2003
42
Rebirth
Mar 19th 2003
43
RE: these pieces....
Mar 20th 2003
46
      RE: these pieces....
Mar 21st 2003
47
oh my
Mar 20th 2003
45
Swallow
Mar 25th 2003
49
RE: that would be...
Mar 28th 2003
51
One soldier
Mar 28th 2003
50
RE: Watcher
Mar 29th 2003
52
My number one killer
Mar 31st 2003
53

rubbersoulonice
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1. "Drinker"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Would it be possible
To draw a deep breath
(As underwater, filling lungs with brine)
And inhale the whole wind of war
Then breathe it into a bag, and seal it up
A foul vapor for posterity on display
In some museum
Or some annex
Like smallpox, like yesterday?

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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11. "RE: Drinker"
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I wish -- I wish! -- (I wish it were possible)

*Airlock*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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2. "Communion"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

In my beatific vision
I first take all the dark things
That lie in wait
That rape and maim and beat children
That cry alone
That wear boots
Bludgeoners
Biggots
Beasts
I take every monster from underneath the bed
And hug them to my chest, and make them warm nothing,
Then put them beneath my tongue in communion

In the second part of my beatific vision,
A stinging wind dissolves my body
And all the good people of the world
Feel love, and know love

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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7. "Oh My! -- Oh My! -- Oh My Goodness!"
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I didn't mean to stay -- I only planned to peep -- But once I saw your ish -- I really COULDN'T *sleep* -- I have somewhere to go right now -- But I'll return, no doubt -- I've got to get back 2 this thread and thoroughly check it out! -- ;^)

I'm LOVIN' this one right here because of these words:

>I take every monster from underneath the bed
>And hug them to my chest, and make them warm nothing,
>Then put them beneath my tongue in communion
>In the second part of my beatific vision,
>A stinging wind dissolves my body
>And all the good people of the world
>Feel love, and know love

Warm nothing? -- From monsterous & morbid something? -- Yessssss, taste the macabre & ugliness of this world -- Let it melt/dissolve under your tongue and filter through your frame to immunize you. YOU HAVE NOW BEEN INNOCULATED! --smile--

And as the wind dissolves your body -- May it blow in my direction -- That I may inhale wisdom & love -- For future immunication protection! -- *InHaLe -- Breathe -- InHaLe -- Breathe*

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Gotta go! -- But I'll be back! -- *wink*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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3. "Boiling"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

They say witches of old
Boiled cats and sat with the bones before a mirror
Holding each bone between their teeth
Until they found the right one
Which rendered them invisible

Having seen the bones of a cat,
I believe the atlas bones would do-
That big flat vertebra at the base of the skull

When the world is done boiling me
Perhaps it will hold my atlas bone in it teeth
And simply disappear

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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9. "Ahhhhhh Haaaaa --"
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This is toooo clever for words!

>When the world is done boiling me
>Perhaps it will hold my atlas bone in it teeth
>And simply disappear


By that time, *WE* should be on another galaxy, huh? --smiles--

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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4. "Poet"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I have remarked to myself
That a poem has never pricked the conscience of a king;
I hold out more hope for nations.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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5. "Dust"
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Long have we known
The body is dust and water compounded
Extrapolated, molded, modeled
Disguised from the inanimate to the corporeal
Fooled into life, the briefest simulacrum
A blink of dirt, rising and falling

Only now do I suspect
The spirit is dust also.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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6. "Sleepers"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I tire of war talk
Either kill, or let me breathe
But that is the thing of it;
If we aren't killing, and aren't breathing
Someone in a very expensive suit is writing the play
Scene by scene
If we aren't feeling, and we aren't thinking
Someone in a very expensive car is driving to our destiny
And we don't know where that is
Or even that we are going along for the ride.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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10. "*Damn*"
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The truth hurts! --sigh--

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I too tire of "war talk"
We spit this *PEACE* shit -- But don't walk the walk
And as someone else controls the world's buttons & levers
We listen -- So intently -- To these vile deceivers
(((With ulterior motives)))
Sendin' us out to fetch -- like "Golden Retrievers"

The cost for those expensive suits & cars is our humanity
And it hurts to know -- There's not much we can do
But feed into their venomous vanity! --sigh--

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.
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At least -- Let's ride in the limo! -- ;^)

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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8. "RE: Watcher"
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Can I have some? -- (of your margarita)

I wanna watch too! -- ;^)

*pulls up a chair next 2 rubbersoul*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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12. "Vorpal Sword"
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I used to write with my vorpal sword
And warp the words,twist my cords
Bend from major to minor to strange
The meaning range of space and time
Surreal ranger of the verbal mines

And I give up now
Sheath a vorpal blade
Sing like a folksinger
Beatnik drop your jazzy flash
I'm not a poet now;
I'll just talk to myself
Feel free to listen.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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17. "RE: Vorpal Sword"
In response to Reply # 12


  

          

This particular poemette is shit. I feel shame.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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limbic_system
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13. "sometimes"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I wonder if there are universal words 4 how baddass you are

"Her knees were bruised from holding the world.
My knees were bruised from tasting her Eden.
My alter - ego is heathen." I Am My Own Svengali (hyena)

"The sound of muffled screams runs in the seam of your thighs.
Crying for molestation with desperation in your mouth.
Stab me with stiletto's.
Soft hello's high on humility.
You make my teeth turn to loose shingles, when you cover me in your fertility." - F R A G R A N C E (hyena)

"nature ain't gangsta" - chuck

"And I imagine...with great pleasure...all the horrible stirrings of the nonmanifested to bring forth the scream which creates the universe. Maybe one day I'll see you trembling, and you'll go into convulsions and grow larger and smaller until your mouth

  

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soul_unseen
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14. "RE: Watcher"
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Outstanding! You're doing your job exceptionally well with this one. Mind blowing. I felt the inspiration behind this. Continue.

onelove.

  

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Sunday
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15. "you're on fire"
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beautiful.

would articulate but i have a cold


  

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16. "hand-over-mouth expression"
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pCe,
Finkster
_____________

The wages of dying is love
- Galway Kinnell

I fear to forget your name
as a poet fears to forget some word
sprung in the torment of the night,
mighty as God himself.
- Volodya

There are no beautiful writers.
their faces are shaped
by the fingers of their words
and the words are never

Beautiful.
- Limbic_System

  

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rubbersoulonice
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18. "Strangelover"
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Before the first bomb falls,
I will crawl into the womb of the steel butterfly
And nuzzle its cool eggs
Whisper tongues to its explosive brains
Then when she opens wide
To the midnight sky of an Arabian night
I will hold tight to the dull green skin
Like a lost child come home in the rain
Will fall a hundred feet for each year of Methuselah
I will remind the death egg of its human mother
And maybe, maybe it will turn off its brain
At least I will love it, fleshy father to a metal cub
And we will detonate together

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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33. "Fuck an "Artist Of The Month""
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You're doing the damn thang right here -- Right Now -- RIGHT ON!!!


( ( ( ARTIST OF THE YEAR ) ) )


And your brain spills are *TOXIC* -- But I'd bathe in them any day!!! --sigh--

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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19. "By Some Miracle"
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If
By some miracle
The brief candle of this life
Burns through the night
Weathers the winds
Of war

If
By some twist of fate
This inconstant jewel, this sapphire, this earth
Should pass through the blast furnace of
Fission dawn and chemical dusk

If
Through simple luck
The inspiration of my biology
Should escape the machinations
Of biologies primitive and lethal
The multiplicative forces of cellular hunger

If
I should drink the wind one day
With no taint of death in it
And hear no herald of defeat
Or victory
Or blood
Or tears
If there comes no runner from Marathon
But only silence

Then I pray
To plant my seed in the belly of mercy
That some small human fruit
May teach emptiness
What it is to be innocent

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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20. "Failure"
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I fail like the grain of sand
That without eyes is washed to sea
And settles there on the ocean bed
And sinks into the muck, is lithified
Made one with its mates, its neighbors, its lovers and enemies
Then melts in the mantle and begins anew in inanimate futility.
I fail in the state
The state is predicated on my failure
Grain of sand citizen

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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scroofays
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21. "DAAAAAMN"
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What the hell did I just read? This was some for real shit. Dope as hell. Oh my!

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27. "RE: DAAAAAMN"
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true test of a writer...short and yet still hits you in the chest.


dope

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rubbersoulonice
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22. "Coffee"
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This morning
I woke on the floor
Threw off the blanket, stood
Rubbed my stubbly face
Looked out at a bluer sky
A whipped sea
Packed cold Chinese takeout
Boarded the ferry
Gassed my car
And had one long cup of coffee

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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23. "Tragedy"
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There are no tragedies anymore
And you know this in your heart
There are news events and telecasts
Oh, we still have calamities
Catastrophes
And certainly
Wars
But tragedy, no, no tragedies
Tragedy
Is an experience of people
Individual self-destruction

None of us has the privilege of self-destruction anymore;
Great hands have taken that from us
And now our dooms are in the rubber room
Of congress, progress, the dollar, the bomber
Tragedy is a twist of fate
But our fates run straight
Guided by the state.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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24. "Waking"
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If today
No one woke when the sun tickled them
The bodies all stayed warm, dormant
With dreams dripping through
To singe and pleasure
To scar and treasure
If today no one arose
But remained as fleshy mountains prone
Or sitting where they slept, enthroned as living stone
There might still be hope

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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48. "RE: Waking"
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*Hope Eternal*



Felt this today -- (For some reason) -- Moreso than yesterday!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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25. "When"
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Sat Mar-15-03 03:43 AM

  

          

When or if this poem ends
I cannot tell
It says little, but it asks less
And should great feet deign to spare it
The grinding crush that blesses most flowers
Then it might go on forever in silence

This poem asks only to spin itself out in the corner
Sip its tea, cry as the widow, laugh as the virgin
To make lecherous love, to emit a fecund blast
But to no one, to itself

She takes so little
Her wants are simple
She is a citizen, too

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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26. "Nothing"
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It seems there is nothing to say;
Perhaps the best thing to say now is

Nothing.

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rubbersoulonice
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28. "Feathers"
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Like cancer, like feathers
War is coming
Soft and silent in the night,
Breeding in the body
Political breezes
Political animals
Like feathers, like cancer
Quills are scratching and espionage is hatching
Sleight of hand and shell games
It was ever thus
In Athens, in Rome
Paris
London
Washington
At the Summer Palace
Even amid blossoms
Heads rolled in the scuppers
And so I harbor
No more surprise than
One who drowns in feathers

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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44. "So True --"
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And so appropriate -- Under The Circumstances! --*sigh*--

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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rubbersoulonice
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29. "Immolation"
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Sat Mar-15-03 10:35 AM

  

          

The world is busy
It wakes in the day, sharpens its sword
Drinks a cup of sake
Walks to the nearest public park
And commits beautiful sepuku with its soulmate
Each night its bloody head regrows a body
And each morning the blade sings on the stone

Ironic, that men should practice self-immolation
To dissuade the world from ritual suicide

Perhaps it would be possible to immolate the world
And thus forgo it ourselves

Or better still
To breathe in the great fires of the world
Quench them with our cool blood
And start anew

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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30. "c what i mean"
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.

it is
I am
you are
he
lives
within us
in the name of love
live


I allowed John to be free, accepting him for who he was not how the world viewed him - Yoko Ono

You're alive. Do something. The directive in life, the moral imperative was so uncomplicated. It could be expressed in single words, not complete sentences. It sounded like this: Look. Listen. Choose. Act. Barbara Hall

The meeting of two personalities

  

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onelove
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31. "RE: Watcher"
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all i can say is DAMN!! that was amazing man. So inspiring.

Beats to go:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/heatrisingproductionsmusic.htm

This flesh
If not because of this flesh
we could fly in the air
swim through the river
walk under the sea
and soon we would be home
soon we would be home.

"Still

  

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32. "i want you"
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your poetry is very sexy to me.

*********

Not everything is as difficult as you want to make it.

I have changed my AIM if you want to say Hi click on my orange man

  

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rubbersoulonice
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34. "Thanks"
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That's a new one. Whoa. Maidstone here I come.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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35. "Seems to be"
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Wed Mar-19-03 04:47 AM

  

          

Bubble gum
Uranium
Styrofoam
Sky
These things only
Once born, will never die

These my children, and the roach
Will inherit the lonely earth
For the lesson of our time seems to be
If you build it
It will be destroyed

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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MUSE
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36. "these 2 lines:"
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"How can those skins sound
Without blood"

caught me.

nice drop.


...
..
.

Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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rubbersoulonice
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37. "Pray"
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Pray
Pray to all the gods you can name
Pan
Astoreth
Baal
Yahweh
Abraxus
Woden
Zeus
Call all the idols and sidurs and sutras
Dharmas and vedas
The Confucian classics
Take to heart your apocryphal notions
Then crawl into the earth and sleep a long time
A thousand lives of men
The great bear-sleep of man's winter

When you rise
There will be room for these things

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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rubbersoulonice
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38. "Prey"
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Prey
Prey is all that man can name
Eros
Agape
Germanitas
Fraternitas
Jus
Misericordia
Clementia
Corporeus
Spiritus
Animus
Veritas
Prey to all that slinks and creeps or burns and eats
The devourers and the predators
Cannibals
Carnophages
The eaters are the eaten

If you run now
You will live long enough
Only to furnish the victors
Dessert

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Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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Focus23
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39. "RE: Watcher"
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And when THEY drop the bomb on US,
I will be sitting in the front yard with a tall glass of lemonade, watching...

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Be on the look out for theBoxCarBoys...

"Divine is the way we design to be fine" Talib Kweli

Peace and Love are still in my lungs, never stale.
I still wait for the Poet to return so that I may Exhale.
---Boxcarboys

Steam-Powered Spit-Sessions Re-write the Bright-Lessons of Life each day with Nice-Blessin's...Word/Life/Write

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ToBeContinued;
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Check out theBoxCarBoys...

  

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BlacPearl
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40. ""King Of The World""
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i look into the serpents eyes
as he speaks wit venomous tongue
an see no fear

for he will crawl under the earth
with mate and dog
and intoxicated offspring’s

playing 5 stud poker
sip’n warm brandy
lying in wait, to be king
of the world


"I'm not a poet or a prose, but a woman that lived life 9 times and knows"

"I'm not a poet or a prose, but a woman that lived life 9 times and knows"-BlacPearl

"I saw in the distance, a place where I didn’t hurt; but I couldn’t tell whether I was looking ahead or behind"-Unknown

  

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rubbersoulonice
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41. "Fools"
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Fools are most adamant
When wisdom speaks clearest

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Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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mara
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42. "RE: Fools"
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Damn right...also check your inbox.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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rubbersoulonice
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43. "Rebirth"
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Each day
My features soften
They grow indistinct
I can feel the plates of my head soften
My limbs shrink
My eyes grow
My halves, woman and man
Have stopped talking
He's moving out
Swimming back out of the warm, welcoming female darkness
Leaving this component
Ovoid in perfection
To contemplate the streaming blood and nutriment
Orbitting to the pert swing of girlish hips
Nestling with so many other stars
Sleeping
Waiting
The lunar principle
Tides
Blood
Darkness
The good, fecund earth
The body, its symphony expressed
On skin sheet music
The staff of hair
The bass clef smiling, hidden
Soft, pulsing
In deconstruction, rebirth

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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STIMULI
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46. "RE: these pieces...."
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really set the standard for individuality.

peace

  

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assata
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47. "RE: these pieces...."
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I agree, I enjoy this ride of your mind. please continue...



If it ain't real it won't flow-justus

If hell's your domain I pray you won't stay there, extending my hand in the name of love, escape to freedom - Heaven's Girl

As my portal so filled with your hydrating words allowing me to breathe, expands this heart wide open hearing I love you as its sweetest melody. on You

  

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freakwhensee
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45. "oh my"
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peeps need to stop sleeping on this collection of work....

never stop writing...this is impressive, and i want more

  

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rubbersoulonice
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49. "Swallow"
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Observe
How it sleeps
Great expanse of sand and rock
Oft trespassed against
And detonated upon
The desert
Slumbers

Imagine when it wakes
And seizes all in its great teeth
Which is unclean.

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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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STIMULI
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51. "RE: that would be..."
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a sight to see. impeccable imagery with so few words.

peace

  

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rubbersoulonice
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50. "One soldier"
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One soldier
Dusty powdered over his black skin
Picked up another soldier
Shot down with fast slugs
There were no sides

Some say
This is the greatness of our nation
Mercy

Nations are not possessed of greatness
But the humanity of one soldier
Carrying his bleeding enemy
That is a thing to behold.

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Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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forcefyr
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52. "RE: Watcher"
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SUP buddy. nice poem , i haven't posted anything up on here yet. but i think i may start soon, i just wanna get a better feel for how everything goes down on here. i liked this poem man. The drums without blood thing. good.

  

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rubbersoulonice
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53. "My number one killer"
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absolutley, figure stuff out and then get your poet on.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

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