5. "RE: Bullet-Poof Unbrellas..." In response to Reply # 1
>nice comeback man, > >im feeling this a lot, it has a distinguised feel to it > >i was especially feeling this: >~Contrasting views and jazz conversations >Funerals and presidential elections >What is this?~ > >way to rep the fam, peace what the hell is this, the poets caffe... this was so simple and dense... it's ok to be original.. but if I could put this into a visual I would say that he's takin a ballet lesson.
*sings Welcome Back Kotter theme* *lol* Good to see ya back. Nice drop. And your right, the board looks different when you take a break from posting. I spent a month lurkin' & noticed all kinds of things I never saw before. Good & bad. Keep Flowin'......
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6. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 4
yo man this was nice def hot keep flowing
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13. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 0
what is this......priceless, ya art is growin and movin along nicely PP, keep smashin duke, peace.
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why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both
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16. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 0
This was tight man. Welcomne back. I can't really quote a favourite part. I liked it all for real. Dope drop. Interesting concept.
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18. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 0
"Acid rain and bullet-proof unbrellas Unillateral thinking and war resolutions What is this?"
this is why i love ya kid.... you we gots to do a tag team quick... i dont think anyone could deal wit that heat. check these boards more tho homes, we miss ya...
25. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 0
I really don't know which line to quote but this was good. I felt it all the way. These are some of the things I ask myself on a regular sometimes. Sorry I slept on it fam.
28. "u see thats the thing about posting on the internet..." In response to Reply # 27 Fri Mar-28-03 10:35 AM
no one can see what race u are unless you proclaim it in your name smarty...lol...so obviously you want those "blind" people to know your white lol...u coo fam...I'll halla at your piece, I just didnt have enough time...keep flowin...
>Carabien seas and black power fists >An adjacent soul with perpandicular lips >What is this? Nice lead in, (pls...watch the sp...though for pub purposes) > >Hot winters and cold summers >Frosbitten on the beach (be a little stronger on your adjective choices... hot and cold? you can do better, I know you can) >Days that aren't numbered >What is this? > >Contrasting views and jazz conversations (go a little deeper into the irony of said conversations. I like the contrast though!) >Funerals and presidential elections >What is this? > >Love songs that don't end in sex >Babies being born, not aborted >What is this? > >Acid rain and bullet-proof unbrellas >Unillateral thinking and war resolutions (nice wordisms!) >What is this? > >Televised revolutions and poetic propoganda >Church choir rehersals and the Black Panther Party >What is this? > >My only other thing is- wrap it up now. Tell us what it is or elude to the possibility of what it could be and you have a flawless piece. Very Nice Drop! > >Its been about 2 months since I last dropped...damn...u >learn a lot by observing...thanx yall...f a spell check >lol...
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"Claimin' omnipotent positions, makes me question individual meridians.. what lingers inside simplified minds? Why does confidence lose sight and take flight to designate towards heavenly heights, my fingertips liquify the surface... ripplin' through my personal deviated splurges, ways of certian wordin'.. befriending amongst the cushion that supports the curves, bending.. I am ashamed on the ways i glance towards the skies to shape my imaginary only to escape, in search for sheer enamels that coat me, invisible.. yet protectin' the openings.. envisionin' fate.. i faint... in a twisted...spiraled... casted slow motion dreams of pastures green penetrate my flesh sensating burning coals, within the folds,,, unexpressed.. im froze in corrosion... flowing amoungst the rest.. lightlessness resting in the mesh.. breaths are gasps from past carry along.. remained was the same position.. i am posing for catalogs" -Stephani Linguistical, physical individual.. ahha j/p.. peace to linguistics BASH WIF MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!
the last piece I read when I left this board was your sucession piece and this is the first one I've read since comming back...u r the shit brotha hallaback
yeah u comin' in2 yr own dunnie...nice 2 c u spittin sumn softer than is yr nature on here; very nice & very thought provoking. deep in how simplistic it was. indeed...
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37. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 0
...just want you to know I read this several times and like it..but it seemed to be getting more than enough attention...talent sets a high bar for itself....peace
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41. "I thought it would have been" In response to Reply # 0
more effective with the refrain being used only 2ce.. once at the ending of the first stanza.. and again at the ending of the last stanza.. but that's just me... Peacers..~
43. "RE: *Bullet-Proof Unbrellas*" In response to Reply # 42
I liked it man, I dont know if there's a message there to get, but I feel somethin about it, and I just like read it over and over, and it keep seemin better.
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this reminded me of last poets...like on some Gil-Scot Heron ish. and I love the title. bullet proof umbrellas. protect me from the hail of hell on Earth. :-D
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