Crescent moons split the sky with laughter
As thunder rumbles over rain with turbulent tears of joy
The humor of God is a wonderful thing though
He brings all creatures into HIS recomposed reach
While irony sits at my back door
Rocking to the rhythm of raw reality
I taste crisp contradictions
Breaking my baby teeth on truth
Leaving snaggle~toothed conculsions
Aching from the absence of minor contusions
As the fatal finger of fascism points fools in the wrong direction
Acid rain falls on narrow minds lacking pentacle perception
Correction!
Acid rain falls on bloated brains filling their erections
With non-existent protection
Cunning -- Conniving -- Conspirators
Contradictory in making the sun shine through eclipses of ego
But we go -- Where crimson sunsets spill into the moonlight
Above azure blue waters of whirling imagery
Swirling chemistry into a clear view of your rear view
That's why I'm constantly moving on -- Moving forward
Never looking back!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Don't Duck

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Snow_Flow

"Who say f*ck the major
labels...Who unsigned and
dead broke can still make
name before they even make a
demo"- Slug from Atmosphere

"Still say f*ck the major
label till it limps, put your
deal up on the table and
we'll show you who the pimp"-
MC Slug

"Songs are nameless, guns are
aimless, how long you been
famous..."- MC SLUG

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"I live in the city, like any other/We all live alone/ The only difference is we don't seem to know it/Frozen and lonesome,When it's cold/ In the summer gotta wait for the loathing" - P.O.S.

That first line did it for me. I was feelin the whole poem. But the first line in particular. You been bringin some heat lately girl. What kind of wheaties you been eating?

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AXE about me!!!!!

"As the fatal finger of fascism points fools in the wrong direction
Acid rain falls on narrow minds lacking pentacle perception
Correction!
Acid rain falls on bloated brains filling their erections"

those lines did it for me
i felt that for sure! the first lines also those were real nice

^^^^i agree real powerful words right there
keep do'n ur thang

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

Real...I second the thought here. Keep expressing!

Know Thyself and surroundings to better understand things non-existing and existing, unseen and the seen in order to be able to deal Equality(Equally with all things in life)...Be True to U!

RIGHTEOUS SOULS
Soul Cleansing MuSiCk...LiSing
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those lines were crazy! Hot stuff...

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always on point.... i mean there was so much going for this piece, i dont even know wat to say...

peace.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"only believers of death will die"saul willams

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"only believers of death will die"saul willams

lovely, as always. The 1st line grabbed me immediately.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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ah yes, i agree: the first line was a great attention grabber.

this one was a mellow peace with exceptional imagery.

bravo

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...ain't nuttin back there anyways....:

>>
irony sits at my back door
Rocking to the rhythm of raw reality <<...yes indeed sis...





"i see the moon
the moon sees me
god bless the moon
and god bless me""-- via nikki g








We keep adding new songs from the forthcoming Geometry album, please check 'em-- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm

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"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

Indeed Indeed!!,nice working from you,I will not be able to compliment so much.I am so busy but it's good to see something well worth commenting.
Alot of precise points are heavily made through out the piece and I can tell you concentrated while writing this freestyle because you do what I often,I mean ofetn do in exposing a since of dyslexia.Lol... nice piece.When you goingot share that talent on my site man!!!

Peace Unknown www.miniyarecords.com listen to some tunes at www.ampcast.com

me neither this was ill and ive got urs anyway

peace

As the fatal finger of fascism points fools in the wrong direction
Acid rain falls on narrow minds lacking pentacle perception
Correction!
Acid rain falls on bloated brains filling their erections
With non-existent protection
Cunning -- Conniving -- Conspirators
Contradictory in making the sun shine through eclipses of ego
But we go -- Where crimson sunsets spill into the moonlight
Above azure blue waters of whirling imagery
Swirling chemistry into a clear view of your rear view
That's why I'm constantly moving on -- Moving forward
Never looking back!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You amaze me PhotoSynthesis...how do you always come with such touchable, tasteable, huggable, kissable, yet TRUTHFUL...imagery...I like this a bunch my friend...a bunch!!!!!


-Otto

But we go -- Where crimson sunsets spill into the moonlight
Above azure blue waters of whirling imagery
Swirling chemistry into a clear view of your rear view..

wow...


"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

dope...dope


let them niggas know,ma...ha!

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me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

dude, getting a response from the folks at freestyle is like watching water boil...© Tek

damn great peice, lovin the facist line.

Beats to go:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/heatrisingproductionsmusic.htm

This flesh
If not because of this flesh
we could fly in the air
swim through the river
walk under the sea
and soon we would be home
soon we would be home.

"Still

so this is a gimme. of course, i'm feelin it.

and i find myself meditating on this line:

As the fatal finger of fascism points fools in the wrong direction

very intriguing. not sure what it says about your world view. need to let that one marinate.

---i'm here---

"...do what scares you..." -- l. varela

No words , just feelin' it . (sigh) I feel cool now .

keep doin what it is you do

4real
DEZRU AKA LITESOUL
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BETTA BELIEVE IT :~)
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.
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dis one is dunn /I have reached the end/ but not you until' you meet the Alpha at:
www.dezrulitesoul@hotmail.com

Don't start to hate me when I tell you the truth .
Start to hate me when I don't and it's all love mann $)

keep doin what it is you do

4real
DEZRU AKA LITESOUL
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BETTA BELIEVE IT :~)
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dis one is dunn /but another is soon to come

"Acid rain falls on bloated brains filling their erections
With non-existent protection
Cunning -- Conniving -- Conspirators
Contradictory in making the sun shine through eclipses of ego
But we go -- Where crimson sunsets spill into the moonlight
Above azure blue waters of whirling imagery"


You painted a picture worth its weight in in words there.
Well laid out.Keep on keepin' on...

Minoa

...that was nice.

alliteration is easily & frequently overused, misused, and abused, but you my friend made a pleasurable experience of it.

____

limitation is a creation of the mind

"and motherfuckers think these are metaphors/ i speak what i see/ all words and worlds are metaphors of me" -- saul williams
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i am...breathless. This poem rolled off my tongue like Jolly Ranchers of illeteration. There is not one thing I would change. All the lines were powerful. good shit...really

I shot the bebe gun.

Damn mizzab -- I'mma haveta use that one sometimes! -- ;^)

I LOVE Jolly Ranchers -- And that line just made me smile "skittles"

Thanx gyrlfriend!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

"Acid rain falls on bloated brains filling their erections
With non-existent protection"
dang had a quick site of my placing a double layer of protection round my head after reading this...nice drop makin things happen
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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what can i say to this, but...

you are a living, breathing jazz song love. lotus flower, photosynthesis.

always with the etherial imagry juxtaposed on real life to speak codes, you...

another work of art.

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Gotta Hotter Ink Blotter
~~~~~~~~~~~~

you write so figuratively.

and everyone bites the dust...thats how we grow.-- U know that of course. wonderful work.

candy-coated freshness © jawwaad

Sorry it took so long

"To create a thought is devine especially done with spectacular company" - Seyi Awolesi S@ge080219710500(Wordsmith)

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I guess I betta hurry up & write summthin' new -- Cuz I'm tired of this -- And I'm sure you are too! -- *LoL*


Thanks for all the love & attention you guys! -- *muah*


(((Much Appreciated)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

"Contradictory in making the sun shine through eclipses of ego"

and its like why do i just know what you mean there, shiiiit, i do tho and its meant with a powerful statement, i got you Photo, word, i got you pimpin, peace.

fuck a sig!!!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/invmusic.htm

i get more head than jason
kids son!!!-my boy DJ

im what ya bitch wanted for
christmas!!!!-my boy DJ

and you can lick my balls
drenched in alcohol!!!


"you know I'm playi

While irony sits at my back door
Rocking to the rhythm of raw reality
I taste crisp contradictions
Breaking my baby teeth on truth
Leaving snaggle~toothed conculsions
Aching from the absence of minor contusions
As the fatal finger of fascism points fools in the wrong direction
Acid rain falls on narrow minds lacking pentacle perception

it's great flow too... specialy like the phrase above.... "Breakin the baby teeth on truth" is a sweet signature to growing up and fading out childhood.

i like the way you think!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

No need for words. You know the deal.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

.I.was.breathing.with.you.

*hmmmmmmm* -- I read everywhere -- and I read everyone -- (((Just About))) -- ;^)


But I've only read ONE of your flows so far -- so when ya gonna drop another one? -- *smiles*


Thanks for the peep!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

Damn how did I miss this?! The first line had me hooked and I was feelin' the whole thing. Another damn good read from you.

"You can't change the past, but you CAN make the future and anyone who tells you different is a fucking lethargic devil"
-Immortal Technique

"We're the lost Children of Israel in this western world region"
-Nasir Jones

War is not the answer... except to all of America's problems.
-The Simpsons

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משה גידון בן יעקב עיסר

i am sooooo late

but now i fully believe better late then never

im going to have to print this out

it made me not want to ever write a poem again

beautiful, not just that "i like it for what it is" beautiful

that beautiful that encompasses all beauty about this art

i love it, i read like 10 times in a row, thanx for blessin the boards with this

peace

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

....^.....(i wanna see something you wrote finally in the archives--is this the one?)....





We keep adding new songs from the forthcoming Geometry album, please check 'em-- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm

http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

yes!!!!!!!foshizzle!!!this is mos def archive-worthy!!!

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

quickly become a star, my dear friend.

...

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"Pimping ain't art...but grabbing guns is?!"
(c) Menphyel

"I've come to realise that I never loved Hip-Hop as a whole,
just a particular era that happened at the same time as
I was actively checking actively for new music."