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Mystic_Elixir
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"Demonstrate Your Alliteration"


          

I don't know about you, but I love alliteration, I love writing it, reading it, hearing it... this post is for anyone who wants to display a short piece of alliteration. Post as many as you like, I'll enjoy reading them! Here's mine...

metaphors master men
making macramé of mentality
mediocre muses, mingled with
melancholy moments
mean
masochistic measures.
make memories mute
mutate monster into mosaic
make me your mantle piece
massage music into my muscles with your mouth
move me




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_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Assimilatin an Alliteration
Jun 01st 2003
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Assimilatin
Jun 02nd 2003
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      RE: Assimilatin
Jun 02nd 2003
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~Nice Thread~
Jun 01st 2003
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Glad I'm not...
Jun 02nd 2003
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RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration
Jun 01st 2003
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haha
Jun 02nd 2003
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LOL!
Jun 02nd 2003
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beautiful
Jun 03rd 2003
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      now you know.....
Jun 03rd 2003
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S
Jun 02nd 2003
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thanks for the I to spell out inspiration!
Jun 02nd 2003
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RE: thanks for the I to spell out inspiration!
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RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration
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RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration
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Damn love...
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L
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RE: Demonstrate
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      RE: Demonstrate
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           RE: Demonstrate
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gullibly so i have never seen or done this...so
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RE: gullibly so i have never seen or done this...so
Jun 02nd 2003
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mixing it up
Jun 04th 2003
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fuck that
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mara
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RE: mara
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RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration
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mystical mysteries motivate me nm
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RE: mystical mysteries motivate me nm
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      ahh, that was clever...nm
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deposit this in your dome
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Reconnaissance
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I and I, I I sir
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found
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RE: found
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      frightening
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           lol *n/m*
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Alliteration generalizations
Jun 04th 2003
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oh my God!!! *lol*
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      RE: oh my God!!! *lol*
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RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration
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damn....
Jun 06th 2003
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my girl to the T
Jun 04th 2003
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lol
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Co-sign
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Love
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MayoKing
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1. "Assimilatin an Alliteration"
In response to Reply # 0


          

don't think i've written alliteration since high school.. dayum hehe

alliteration allegra
allots a lowlife
a limelight
altho admittedly
adults abhor
abominational
abstract
alienation
amusement amassing
a man admits
a passion
...
alliteration

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Mystic_Elixir
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12. "Assimilatin"
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Nice piece, thanks for participating, but who do these lines refer to?????

"alliteration allegra
allots a lowlife
a limelight"

at any rate, good work, I really liked it!



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http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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MayoKing
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17. "RE: Assimilatin"
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respect. i was free flowin, if i had to say 'lowlife' referred to any person in particular i'd say me..
the last part brings it back together, and IS talkin about you and your fondness for alliteration

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2. "~Nice Thread~"
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Sun Jun-01-03 04:50 PM

          

I love alliteration also -- ;^) -- So here I go:

Soothing sounds
Surround serenity
Seeping thru
Sinew
&
Spirit
Saturated with solemn thoughts
Sitting on top of saxophone serenades
Spinning softly under surrendered sunsets
Smoking the sky like synergistic sensimilla

:::Surreal:::

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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Mystic_Elixir
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6. "Glad I'm not..."
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the only lover of alliteration *smile*, and your piece was beautiful! I loved these lines

"Sitting on top of saxophone serenades
Spinning softly under surrendered sunsets
Smoking the sky like synergistic sensimilla"

absolutly beautiful, captured a feeling of true beauty.



http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Saltine Cracker
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3. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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Love lightens liquid loads
leaving lovers lying and laughing
let loose with license
lighting lights lightly lead
lovers longingly looking
leaping like lepoards or lions
lines of legs line the linen
the lion leaves his lair
the lioness lets lion leave
lion lied about lying with lepoards

There can be no perfect
democracy curtailed by color,
race or poverty.
W.E.B. DuBois

  

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4. "haha"
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I liked this one.

-Tp

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bamf.

  

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5. "LOL!"
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really nice, I liked that alot!

"the lion leaves his lair
the lioness lets lion leave
lion lied about lying with lepoards"

Classic Shit!



http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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28. "beautiful"
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ness

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31. "now you know....."
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with all that damn talent you have, you shoulda put up a piece.... I'm so disappointed. I saw your name and got all excited about seeing some genius *sick* but genius post *frowns* maybe if i kiss you, you'll post something????? *lol* I"m playin, but it really would have been nice to see what you would have done with alliteration.



http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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7. "S"
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Sooner or later
silence stirs sound into solo silhouettes.
Science satisfies sac-religious souls seemingly sequestered from sight of self
and sanctuary.
Solemn Saturday afternoons become
summer solstice,
sublime.
Subtle sensations seep through
sexual soliloquy
stimulating sections of self severed from survival.
Sooner or later
silence suckles sound
into
sweet submission….

  

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8. "thanks for the I to spell out inspiration!"
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ms. moody moonchild
meets mind-mending men
who's meandering messages
mostly mean meet me
at the cavernous cliffhanging consanants and vowels
that vicar volumous vows in victory
playing in preposterous presidences to pass tests
presenting flapping flutterous figaments
of might

~

i like it when y'ins put up shit that makes ya think
exercise for the mind....

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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15. "RE: thanks for the I to spell out inspiration!"
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your piece *like the other one I was reading* uses different letters throughout, I like that. I need to do one like that, I always use the same letter, but yall are inspiring me to change that *smile*. I loved this piece





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http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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9. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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one i wrote a while ago, i think i posted it

Milky marauding moonlight making
sloppy smoking slurred shadows, stretching,
dancing delicatley over the dimpled dock
endlessly evoking uneding existence

lovers locked in a lustful embrace
under slow shining smiling stars
taking time to take it in like toms
peepings politley, providing memories

lone lonley thinker
thinking thunderingly thoughtful thoughts
watching wild wailing waves
forever focused on proving human fallability

until

slight small sullen breeze with swolen clouds in tow
brings jealous rain ruining
scaring soggy smiling shadows away
leaving wailing waves and dimpled dock to talk

not as much pure alliteration but it counts i guess.

Beats to go:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/heatrisingproductionsmusic.htm

This flesh
If not because of this flesh
we could fly in the air
swim through the river
walk under the sea
and soon we would be home
soon we would be home.

"Still

  

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Mystic_Elixir
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13. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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I loved this. I like that you didn't just use one letter, you wrote alliteration using several letters, that made it more interesting, and of course it counts! I liked these lines

"slight small sullen breeze with swolen clouds in tow
brings jealous rain ruining
scaring soggy smiling shadows away
leaving wailing waves and dimpled dock to talk"

Really nice!





http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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10. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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It’s all too common
That in order to conform
We categorically contradict
And create a conscience
Controlled by a connection
Conceived from the copulation
Between contention and contortion
Causing a conjuring up of the scent of carrion
Seducing the condor with the thus cadaverous state
Of our comprehension all in an attempt to concoct
A convalesced casing for our souls….
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Mystic_Elixir
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55. "Damn love..."
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I tell you, you make me want to stop writing!



http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Mystic_Elixir
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11. "L"
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Lecherous lovers leap longingly
into life’s lap
laughing loudly as they lounge,
loving every last lucid drop of lethal liquid,
they lick until they laps
and leave love
for loathe…
loosers!




http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Mag30
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14. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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satin stained with sinoptic soul trains
soiled sap sinking soaked in sin so sane
steep sides stamp out stemming success
sincerely stopping all startling progress
since sevetenty seven so sincerely streaked
with stop thumb pounding beats, sincerely.

man all the stuff you guys have posted has been good shit.

  

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Mystic_Elixir
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20. "RE: Demonstrate"
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this was hot! I like using the letter S, it seems one of the easiest to use. You did a good job with it. Much love.



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http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Mag30
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22. "RE: Demonstrate"
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thanks alot man,

peace out
Cam.
-Mag30

  

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Mystic_Elixir
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23. "RE: Demonstrate"
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you're very welcome, but it;s WOman *smile*


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http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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16. "gullibly so i have never seen or done this...so"
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anticipating art with an allegience to act
i innocently interrupted inspiration
seeking a sillioquy sequestered shamelessly
begging to be broadened by a base
made methodically amist a maze of metaphors
while whistling and wandering thru a wild
cacophany calibrated by a clear conscious

maybe i need some work ha
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
checkout these sites
http://4luvofpoetry.com
www.poetology.com

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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Mag30
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18. "RE: gullibly so i have never seen or done this...so"
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man Blackalicious had this shit down where he just went through the alphabet with alliteration for every letter.

good flow.

  

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36. "mixing it up"
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is the thang to do... good ups everyone!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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19. "fuck that"
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you dont need any work, this was really good! I was gonna quote the lines I liked, but I liked them all. Nice piece, let's see if you got another one in you???? *smile*

  

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Mag30
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50. "RE: fuck that"
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Wed Jun-04-03 05:02 PM

          

takin tracks through cracks in train tunnels to camps
to treat em to three towering terrific treats
treble clefts and beats, three things trained to defeat
take the time to think up trigonomic treturous (sp?) tweaks
theres the thing that those that teach fear most
the toast to temperature tampering heat times three
taken to transform the tremendously trendy in to something unique

there we go. thought id throw my own in there too.

Peace.
Cam
-Mag30


  

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21. "mara"
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mellow at this minute and momentarily moody, missing my magnificent male mirror image (metality wise that is), might make a mental note to mention to my man that the much needed magic massage mistakenly interrupted (milli seconds into it) most definatly MUST be mastered later (Mr Real McCoy himself)

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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Otto
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24. "RE: mara"
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noose
nags
neck

stings
stains
strains
suffocates

killed
dead
dread
died
death

grave
in the grove
down below
i glow
green grass...
my flesh a fountain for flowers to grow...


considering that that was completely random...and off the top, i like it.....

  

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26. "RE: mara"
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nice! Loved these lines

"grave
in the grove
down below
i glow
green grass...
my flesh a fountain for flowers to grow..."




http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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Decstar
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25. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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u inspired me, ma. this is my first alli joint. i'ma post it. i think it's longer than what tha others put up. check it out peoples

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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27. "mystical mysteries motivate me nm"
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life is a moment
in the preparing us
for the future.

------------------------------
my work
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32. "RE: mystical mysteries motivate me nm"
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motivation means mastering mechanisms meaningful
making sure
for the most part
that you remain
mindful....

Thanks for participating! Short, but never the less *smile*




http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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53. "ahh, that was clever...nm"
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life is a moment
in the preparing us
for the future.

------------------------------
my work
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http://www.lulu.com/content/7598631
http://evan-roth.com/grey.php

  

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29. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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I lay the needle on the vinyl
And
Let her revolve her revolutions
Causing a revelation of resurfacing
Rememberance of Ra’s keys, Roy’s trumpet,
Roach rattlin the rim repeat the rhythm shot
Rolling up a remedy inspired motive for
A calm rivaling piano keys nestled in the memory
Of a Buddhist monk at rest releasing reanimated
Visions of resonance taken in by auditory receptors
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

______________________________
{Diffident: Lacking or marked by a lack of self-confidence; shy and timid. Reserved in manner}

{Alchemy:A medieval chemical philosophy having as its asserted aims the transmutation of base metals into gold, the discovery

  

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30. "deposit this in your dome"
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only desert dunes can hide my dumbfounded demeanor,
directly disturbed by distinct, distorted visions,
that are a disservice definitely (to me and yourself),
when danger lingers in the distance daily (that little devil).
for dozens can not distinguish between dainty damsels and dishonest dogs,
daylight and dark,
dependable truths and damnable lies,
but does that deliver us into destruction? (negative),
does it drive us to our doom? (double negative),
does it denote our decadence (days of decline)?
no dear.
it provides an opportunity to gain knowledge.
depending on whether you dare to do or dare to dally with distractions,
is for you to discern for your damn self,
but I hightly doubt drowning in the sea of ignorance is our destiny.
think on that.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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33. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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here u go, mystic. hope u like


aphrodisiacense butters crevices,
densely entering frugal grounds
harvesting indigo jazz,
kinky love making
navigates obsession,
pulsing,
quenching relentless satisfaction,
tearing up vividly
what Xculsively yearns zestiness

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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34. "Reconnaissance"
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Renounce rhetorical rhetoric
Remain righteous
Regain rightful reign
Reciprocating wrong ruins relevance
Retarding resolution
Restitution depends upon your resolve
Retract rotten retorts
Retire old regime
Rewind
Reconstruct and
Reenter reality





http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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35. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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to think they thought
to try tempting thee to
taste their tonic, though
thy thought this trivial
the temptress teased thee
through temptation, thy twas
twising then tussling to tote
this thirst then thrill

-----sig starts here-----
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37. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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ok, i was attempting to assimilate
an alliteration all with the same letter

but it was better busted up by you than by me!

nice

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
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cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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38. "I and I, I I sir"
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I instantly instigate illness into intensity
intentionally irrigating innovation in the industry
importing innervisions' interventions
intuition is inventing itself internally, inch by inch
and in incubation I invite the imitation
incineration is iminent and innoculation inevitable
I introduce my immortal innoguration, it's incredible
indelible, invincible, inconcievable,
irretrievable, immensely unbelieveable
indention of intention is illegal in my illest illustrations
illicit installations of important information
insanity's interrogation illudes to incarceration
inclining irritation inserts itself in my impatience
ink is invigorating ideas idleing inside
inshallah

yep

  

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39. "found"
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flagging fossilized figmants to fancinate
figgered foes for friends
flipped forcing focus
FUCK!!!

The offspring :-D

PSN & XBL: LOQuent

  

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44. "RE: found"
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Pardon my French
And
Forgive my frankness
But
Fuck foes!
And
Fuck friends for that matter…
Funny-style frivolous faggots
Faking free-will
Finding frostbite in frowns
Fascinated with foolish flattery
Falling fast from formidable fantasies of
Fame……

Fuck em!
Find French fries
Or fruit
Finger females
Ooooh, frappuccinos!
Rent footloose
Play footsy with frogs
Friction feels good
Far back fella’s said
Funky fresh!
Fish fry’s are far out!
Fat people are filled with food
French people are frightening
Feathers are funny when you feel them
Fucking is fun!
















http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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51. "frightening"
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for real

The offspring :-D

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54. "lol *n/m*"
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http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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40. "Alliteration generalizations"
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All alligators are assholes.
Beware of bitches because backbones break.
Curious cats can correct cancerous clogs of 'cool'ism.
Dude's dicks don't dare defy delicious dolls' demands.
Every entertainer eats enough evil eventually.
Fuck. (the first and finest 'f'word)
Girls get gonnorhea too.
Home has heavenly habits.
Idiots irritate irresponsibly.
Jesus was Jewish, jealousy jumped Judas. Jokes are jewels. Jewels are jive.
Ku Klux Klans keep killing.
Lemons love limes, Lemurs loathe lima beans.
Machines are mirages for man's mistaken identity.
Nukes never needed nobody.
Oil opposes oxygen's oracles.
Penises penetrate pussies, positioning paths of pantomime presidents pooping on poor people.
Quiet quits questioning.
Rhymes require rhythm.
Sluts sell sex short.
Teeth try to truth, though torture tells them toxic tales.
Underground umpires uglify a unified universe.
Violins violate violent virtues.
Weapons want war, why we welcome them is weird.
X marks the spot.
Youths yell yet yearn for your years.
Zoos zoot zesty zebras.

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Mystic_Elixir
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42. "oh my God!!! *lol*"
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this is classic shit!!! you had me laughing *lol* I loved this, this is one of, if not my favorite so far. nice post *lol* real nice post. How bout another?



http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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46. "RE: oh my God!!! *lol*"
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>this is classic shit!!! you had me laughing *lol* I loved
>this, this is one of, if not my favorite so far. nice post
>*lol* real nice post. How bout another?
>
okay, i'll try. I gotta give props to anyone with Rumi in their sig. This is called LIFE IS SOUND

Literal lines loot life loudly, listen.
It isn't imitation it is intergalactic illustration of innate intuition
Facts fear freedom for floods fight flames, not fire.
Eternity eats everything.

Instruments incite divine intervention
Sound sees and smells, sensations simply sense, sound showers sexy soul, never standing still

Seismic shores shake, sending songs sea to sea
Over our osteoperosis
Under ugly uniforms
Never needing needles nor noise, as now is never, noticed?
Divine diction demonstration disguised as a drum

okay, whatever. I tried something.
>"I am ashamed
> to call this love human
> and afraid of God
> to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed
>Balkhi)
>

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41. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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Wed Jun-04-03 09:28 AM

  

          

Recently romanticising about your ruminations regarding our relation has become...relaxed.
Of course, over time, only one course of operation occurs.
Like languishing in a lazy lake,
Anticipating any action adversly affects all amourous attitudes.
Nevermind your nonsense never nagged me to narcotics.
Drinking down the dwindling dose of kool aid delivers my disposition into despair...damn you!

__
Because I should not have to...

  

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56. "damn...."
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it's just cool aid Ro! Plus your true love is Hawaiian punch *lol*



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http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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43. "my girl to the T"
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Teresa
tantilizing, taiwanese temptress wit two tits
teacher, telepathic tuner and tasty treasure
tongue teases tips and takes to tantric trips
two lips like tulips
tasty treat
touches me
...there

ha ha ha, damn

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45. "lol"
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nice! i like that *lol* "two tits" LMAO








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http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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PhotoSynthesis
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47. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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I may add on again, later, but I definitely feel this deserves a place in the ARCHIVES when it's all over! -- ;^)


*YeP~Yep*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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mara
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I had fun with this. I may add another one later on.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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Mystic_Elixir
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49. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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I'm glad you all had fun with the allitertaion. I really didnt think anyone would like it, you dont see it that often and I thought I was the only one who cared about it *lol* thought it was just one of my quirky pleasures *lol* but thanks for participating and I'm glad you had fun with it.




http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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PantheraLeo
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52. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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Long Live Language,
Laughter, Love and Leaving
Lost things Lay.
See, sight still sings
Silent songs, specifically
When there's nothing to say.
Blame blasphemous banter,
brainless blahblahblah's on
Boredom, Bics and bongloads
Relying on restless reasoning,
Righteous retort and a
Countless Choosing of wrong roads.
Wanton Wandering.... WOW!
When away we wish wayward woes from
Wondering why's while
whispering wise words wistfully,
Fools flex a flounder face front
Fully freaking a fool's flow for
not Finally flexing fist fully.

blah.

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Gotta Hotter Ink Blotter
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pbun
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57. "RE: Demonstrate Your Alliteration"
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Fri Jun-06-03 08:57 PM

  

          

fears are sedated
thoughts are exploded
balloons of potential abloom
cacooning cacophanies
complete with coincident compositions
of silence...
melodious measures
more masterful than any time
symmetric semi-fluid gelling
of scribbled syllables till solid
and speech faucets leak secreting word arousal
spitting limitless in space-fashion
brushing off saturn's sand
from sepinated skin tones

definite in deciding to defy
the dwindling of depths distance
diminishing doubt in diction
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{Diffident: Lacking or marked by a lack of self-confidence; shy and timid. Reserved in manner}

{Alchemy:A medieval chemical philosophy having as its asserted aims the transmutation of base metals into gold, the discovery

  

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Mystic_Elixir
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58. "Love"
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The language of love
Tends to leave
Leftover languish

But, laughter
Loosens the ligaments
Letting light abound







http://www.fillifoundation.com

http://www.carolsdaughter.com

http://www.saulwilliams.com


_____closing remarks_____

"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---

"Love is anterior to life
posterior to death
Initial of creation, and
the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson

"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran(...and *Z* seems to have learned this the hard way, which it seems is the only way to learn...)

"I am ashamed
to call this love human
and afraid of God
to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)

"May I be, forward? Before word, is, intent"--Saul Williams

Mystic: One who experiences mystical union, or direct communion with God or Ulitmate reality.

Elixir: A substance held capable of prolonging life indefinitely (also panacea) a sweetened, alcoholic, medicinal solution... I am


  

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