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"ROOKIE VS. VETERAN TOURNEY BATTLE/VOTE THREAD!"
Thu Jul-10-03 06:43 AM by ThaAnthology

  

          

1. 3 rounds, AB-BA-AB format! If you spit 1st in one round, you go 2nd in the next. If you went last in the 1st round...just drop your 2nd verse right afterwards. Don't wait for votes and shit...all that does is slow things down.

2. 16-24 bars max. Don't try to overkill your opponent. The 1st person to go in a round sets the tone for the rest of the round...so if your opponent goes 16....try your best to go 16 with him/her.

3. VOTE ON OTHER PEOPLES ROUNDS! This will get easier as time goes on. I'm setting the MINIMUM (meaning PLEASE do more) at 5 battles for the 1st round (Translation: vote on 5 other people's shits if you are a participant)

4. ALL ARE ENCOURAGED TO VOTE! If you didn't make this tourney...please vote anyway, 'cause we will need your opinion.

5. ALTERNATE BATTLES! There are like 6 alternates...so I just put them in a battle to get them some shine as well. You may or may not make it to the next round, depending on no shows.

6. NO BYES! If your opponent doesn't show...you will be matched with a victorious alternate in a ONE ROUND SUDDEN DEATH MATCH! SUDDEN DEATH MATCHES go 24-30 BARS! That way..you can get all of that shit out of your system. You can drop less and not get disqualified...but your opponent may just slay you with more bars...so keep that in mind.

7. ONE WEEK PER ROUND! I'll try hard to stick to this. Now, I know not everybody has a DSL at the crib like I do...but please do your best and get in here timely.


8. IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS/CONCERNS...POST THEM IN THIS THREAD OR HIT THE INBOX! I'll do my best to answer whatever I can.

9. THERE ARE NO ABSOLUTES! I'm not a dictator...so I'll accept all suggestions and put them to the participants.

ONE MORE THING. VOTE IN A BOXING SYSTEM! THAT MEANS

10-9 for a win
10-8 for a knockdown in a round
9-9 for a draw in a round.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
Round 1: Alias vs. MiracleRic
Jul 01st 2003
1
cool.....this should be fun
Jul 02nd 2003
23
      *chuckles*
Jul 03rd 2003
49
      HO HUM
Jul 03rd 2003
50
           *yawn*
Jul 03rd 2003
71
                Round 3.....
Jul 03rd 2003
72
                     KO
Jul 03rd 2003
91
Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 01st 2003
2
RE: Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 02nd 2003
30
RE: Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 02nd 2003
32
RE: Round 2: MayoKing vs. BarTek
Jul 02nd 2003
33
RE: Round 2: MayoKing vs. BarTek
Jul 02nd 2003
34
RE: Round 3:BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 02nd 2003
39
      RE: Round 3:BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 02nd 2003
43
Round 1: InstantAxis vs. JKJ
Jul 01st 2003
3
fuck it,im runnin the public (round1)
Jul 01st 2003
18
you runnin ya mouth no doubt...
Jul 01st 2003
20
short and sweet (like you)
Jul 01st 2003
21
      hmmmmmmmm.........
Jul 02nd 2003
44
           round 3, its that easy
Jul 02nd 2003
45
                maybe you're that easy
Jul 02nd 2003
48
Round 1: jayare214 vs. Lucky187
Jul 01st 2003
4
rd 1......
Jul 01st 2003
17
whered he g0?
Jul 06th 2003
124
RE: rd 1......
Jul 06th 2003
126
      ROUND 2!!!
Jul 06th 2003
127
           rd2. fetus emcees
Jul 07th 2003
131
rd3
Jul 07th 2003
133
      RE: rd3
Jul 07th 2003
144
           just athought
Jul 08th 2003
155
                RE: just athought
Jul 08th 2003
156
Round 1: Spread vs. syllabicdivinity
Jul 01st 2003
5
syllabicspanking
Jul 02nd 2003
29
spread out, it's your only chance
Jul 02nd 2003
41
let me switch it up, finessed and to the point
Jul 02nd 2003
42
blasphemy
Jul 03rd 2003
51
necrophelia
Jul 03rd 2003
74
      i promise i won't fuck you once you're dead
Jul 03rd 2003
79
Round 1: Ezzsential vs. Ranjeniro757
Jul 01st 2003
6
where he at? (quick kill)
Jul 04th 2003
112
pulls out wwpd bracelet
Jul 05th 2003
120
RE: where he at? (quick kill)...Dayum
Jul 08th 2003
157
(awakes from sleep) ohh round 2
Jul 06th 2003
125
      RE: (awakes from sleep) ohh round 2
Jul 08th 2003
159
Round 1: Untitled vs. NewsiC_NoyC
Jul 01st 2003
7
Round 1 (max 24 bars)
Jul 08th 2003
160
      RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)
Jul 08th 2003
162
           RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)
Jul 08th 2003
164
                RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)
Jul 08th 2003
169
Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 01st 2003
8
RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 03rd 2003
77
      RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 06th 2003
128
      RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 07th 2003
132
      RE: Round 2: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 07th 2003
135
           RE: Round 2: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 07th 2003
148
      Round 3: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 07th 2003
149
           RE: Round 3: Spontaneous vs. Mag30
Jul 08th 2003
152
Alternate Battle: Demon vs. alexathens
Jul 01st 2003
9
Enter the DEMON
Jul 01st 2003
19
The Cold War
Jul 01st 2003
22
      Round 2
Jul 02nd 2003
25
           Round 2: The History Lesson
Jul 02nd 2003
27
Round 3: The Jump Off
Jul 02nd 2003
28
      Round 3: It's OVER
Jul 03rd 2003
101
Alternate Battle: LilNephya vs. LaXyDaZiCaL
Jul 01st 2003
10
RE: Alternate Battle: LilNephya vs. LaXyDaZiCaL
Jul 07th 2003
134
Alternate Battle: dave vs. Chaste_Souls
Jul 01st 2003
11
RE: Alternate Battle: dave vs. Chaste_Souls
Jul 02nd 2003
40
      RE: Alternate Battle:Chaste_Souls vs. Dave: Round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
82
           word.
Jul 03rd 2003
84
                RE: word. Chaste vs. Dave Round: 2
Jul 03rd 2003
89
                     hmm.
Jul 05th 2003
122
                          RE: Not Enough
Jul 05th 2003
123
                          RE: Chaste_Souls VS. dave: Round 3
Jul 08th 2003
151
                               lets wrap this up.
Jul 09th 2003
184
VOTE FOLDER!!
Jul 01st 2003
12
A comment...
Jul 01st 2003
13
If I see too many 10-7 rounds...
Jul 01st 2003
14
      i dont get that shit
Jul 08th 2003
150
           RE: Ezzsential vs. Rajeniro757: Round 1 Vote
Jul 08th 2003
158
yo DVS I'm hard-headed
Jul 02nd 2003
31
as the rounds are finished...vote on them...
Jul 02nd 2003
37
RE: as the rounds are finished...vote on them...
Jul 02nd 2003
46
demon's verses were dope!
Jul 03rd 2003
73
      mayoking
Jul 04th 2003
114
1st round so far
Jul 02nd 2003
35
also
Jul 02nd 2003
36
      I did that shit all wrong
Jul 03rd 2003
54
damn....
Jul 02nd 2003
38
InstantAxis vs. JKJ
Jul 03rd 2003
52
jkj/ax -ax wins 3rds-0
Jul 03rd 2003
67
BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 03rd 2003
53
RE: BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 03rd 2003
75
      RE: BarTek vs. MayoKing
Jul 03rd 2003
76
MiracleRic over Alias 10-9 1st round
Jul 03rd 2003
55
MayoKing over BarTek 10-9 Round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
56
MayoKing over BarTek 10-9, Round 2
Jul 03rd 2003
57
MayoKing over BarTek 10-9 in round 3
Jul 03rd 2003
58
InstantAxis over JKJ 10-9 in round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
59
InstantAxis over JKJ 10-9 Round 2
Jul 03rd 2003
60
      Instant Axis over JKJ Round 3, 10-9
Jul 03rd 2003
61
syllabicdivinity over Spread 10-9 round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
62
Spread takes syllabic 10-9 round 2
Jul 03rd 2003
63
Time over Anthology 10-9 round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
64
Instant Axis vs. JKJ
Jul 03rd 2003
65
Demon vs Alexathens
Jul 03rd 2003
66
RE: Demon vs Alexathens
Jul 03rd 2003
103
DEMON over alexathens 10-9 in Round 1
Jul 03rd 2003
68
Demon over alexathens 10-9 in Round 2
Jul 03rd 2003
69
      RE: alexathens over Demon 10-9 in Round 3
Jul 04th 2003
104
RE: VOTE FOLDER!!
Jul 03rd 2003
70
syll vs spread.
Jul 03rd 2003
80
RE: VOTE FOLDER!!
Jul 04th 2003
111
ric's verses kinda turn me on =X
Jul 04th 2003
113
Spread vs. syllabicdivinity
Jul 03rd 2003
81
Miracle ric vs. Alias round 1 9-9
Jul 03rd 2003
83
RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias round 2 8-10
Jul 03rd 2003
85
RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias round3 10-7
Jul 04th 2003
117
      27-26 ric
Jul 04th 2003
118
RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias: Round 3
Jul 08th 2003
163
Bartek V. MayoKing 9-10
Jul 03rd 2003
86
RE: Bartek V. MayoKing rnd2 9-9
Jul 03rd 2003
87
      RE: Bartek V. MayoKing Rnd3 10-9
Jul 03rd 2003
88
           Draw
Jul 03rd 2003
90
Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd1 10-8
Jul 03rd 2003
92
RE: Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd2 10-8
Jul 03rd 2003
93
      RE: Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd2 10-8
Jul 03rd 2003
94
           30-24
Jul 03rd 2003
95
Spread v. Syllabic Rnd1 9-9
Jul 03rd 2003
96
RE: Spread v. Syllabic Rnd2 9-10
Jul 03rd 2003
97
      RE: Spread v. Syllabic Rnd3 7-10
Jul 03rd 2003
98
           29-25 syllabicdivinity
Jul 03rd 2003
99
syllabic vs spread
Jul 03rd 2003
100
RE: VOTE FOLDER!!
Jul 03rd 2003
102
MiracleRic over Alias 10-8 in Round 1
Jul 04th 2003
105
RE: MiracleRic and Alias draw 9-9 in Round 2
Jul 04th 2003
106
      RE: MiracleRic over Alias 10-9 in Round 3
Jul 04th 2003
107
Instant Axis over JKJ 10-9 Round 1
Jul 04th 2003
108
RE: Instant Axis over JKJ 10-8 Round 2
Jul 04th 2003
109
      RE: Instant Axis over JKJ 10-8 Round 3
Jul 04th 2003
110
RE: VOTE FOLDER!!
Jul 04th 2003
115
miracleric vs. alias
Jul 04th 2003
116
Time vs. Anth round 1
Jul 05th 2003
119
Tek vs Mayo
Jul 05th 2003
121
demon vs. alexathens
Jul 07th 2003
136
jayare vs. lucky
Jul 07th 2003
137
spontaneous vs mag30
Jul 07th 2003
138
RE: Aight...You can vote on our battle now
Jul 08th 2003
161
RE: spontaneous vs mag30
Jul 09th 2003
176
dave vs chastesoul
Jul 07th 2003
139
RE: dave vs chastesoul
Jul 09th 2003
177
ezzsential vs ranjeniro
Jul 07th 2003
140
dave vs. Chaste_Souls
Jul 07th 2003
141
yeah. i know.
Jul 09th 2003
185
RE: yeah. i know.
Jul 09th 2003
186
      oh, no doubt!
Jul 09th 2003
187
RE: dave vs. Chaste_Souls
Jul 09th 2003
188
jayare vs lucky
Jul 07th 2003
142
RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3
Jul 07th 2003
145
      RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3
Jul 07th 2003
146
           RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3
Jul 07th 2003
147
m-ric and alias
Jul 07th 2003
143
Time vs ThaAnthology
Jul 08th 2003
154
Spontaneous v. Mag30 30-27
Jul 08th 2003
167
jayare214 v. lucky187 28-26
Jul 08th 2003
168
Alias vs. Miracleric
Jul 09th 2003
171
jayare vs. lucky
Jul 09th 2003
172
Mag30 vs. Spontaneous
Jul 09th 2003
173
alexathens vs. demon
Jul 09th 2003
174
dave vs. chaste souls
Jul 09th 2003
175
Bartek VS MayoKing
Jul 09th 2003
178
Instant Axis VS JKJ
Jul 09th 2003
179
Jayare VS Lucky 187
Jul 09th 2003
180
Spread VS Syllabicdivinity
Jul 09th 2003
181
RE: dave vs. chaste souls
Jul 09th 2003
183
Miracle Ric vs Alias
Jul 09th 2003
182
Moderator's Whim Battle: Time vs. ThaAnthology
Jul 01st 2003
15
I'll spark....
Jul 01st 2003
16
      RE: I'll spark....
Jul 02nd 2003
24
           Matta fact
Jul 02nd 2003
26
                RE: Matta fact
Jul 02nd 2003
47
                RE: Matta fact
Jul 06th 2003
129
                     Round 3
Jul 07th 2003
130
                          Sun
Jul 08th 2003
153
                          RE: Sun
Jul 08th 2003
165
                          RE: Round 3
Jul 08th 2003
166
Axis Vs. JKJ
Jul 03rd 2003
78
Alias Versus M. Ric
Jul 08th 2003
170
TABULATING VOTES! ROUND ENDED! NEW BATTLES UP SOON!
Jul 10th 2003
189

DivineVersatile
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1. "Round 1: Alias vs. MiracleRic"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

*************************
MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

*************************
MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Alias
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Wed Jul-02-03 01:59 AM

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23. "cool.....this should be fun"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

I feel rusty as hell....but any way....off the top.....

I manifest from the inner most depths
leave this cat vexed
blowin eardrums cuz ish' I spit produces un-bar-able clefs
and untraceable steps
I'm like ya shadow coz I'm always there
two steps behind, ten ahead,
sometimes invisible, but always clear!
Packin madd heat in the form of hot verbs
my brain swerves through depths & height throwing ya curves
shocking ya nerves and blind ya sight
make ya hesitate as my words go left n right
my KILLer crossover will make ya soul exit the light
Dog youz a herb, you beatin me?
It is gonna take a Miracle ric
coughin' up sugar and turds, spittin that sweet ish'
you may believe it, but my mind cant conceive it
lacking in skillz, u could dream it, but never achieve it
so just leave it, alone before u get a feverish dome
your temperature is raisin just from posting next to me alone
You talk so much ish' its like u got reverse digestion
dawg take a lesson or switch professions
and battle me at your own discretion
cuz I spit bars by the ton, this battles already won
so like jill & free on BET said......rap it up or your done


BATTLE RECORD Wins:2 Losses:1

  

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MiracleRic
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Thu Jul-03-03 01:26 AM

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49. "*chuckles*"
In response to Reply # 23
Thu Jul-03-03 01:42 AM

  

          

It would take a Miracle? Really?...
the most cliche punchline is lyrically silly
i split nimwits quick like weedheads do phillys
low-spirits, i spear it with a nefarious flow son
look how quick i change an ALIAS to kNOwONE
my hay-wired trapeze steez shows Im a showman
ur poetic pussy punches perhaps need a slogan
here goes: "Ric rips foes lips like the shirt of Hogan"
the Ultimate Warrior rocks the ropes with warcalls
spruce Bruce Banner unmanning
this hoars flaws
he soft as Dannon...
falls, as if the floor calls,
im an animal, i attack with 4 paws
the gore's cause?
he's shook, peep the opening unsure clause,
"I'm rusty.."
pause...translation: "Ric, dont bust me"
this goes against Ric's laws
go get the gauze, i infect an open WOMB
closed-casket but best believe its an open tomb
ur smokin doom,
my guns unwielded...BLAST IT
Daddy Grace style reveal to u ur gully gilded casket

*i aint even know this started so soon*


Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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MiracleRic
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50. "HO HUM"
In response to Reply # 23


  

          

He's surfin, Ric battle in third person
even leavin bomb threats burstin
dispersin MiracleRic's packets of Mayo(KING)
i lay bro (Alias now a box spring)
Ayo,
u do know this here is a battle
not some prose about the traits of ur shadow
i suppose ur pose is to keep clean ur nose
i must impose, intrude
its funny how ur adams apple dont protrude
Ric crude with the craft,
Ric's whip lashed dude in the nude on his ass
left lane maintain for high-speed passes
u rottin man, Ric rob Nottingham of taxes
im better off matched with Instant Axis
Men in Tights no good in the melee
ur shit lacked hits like Dwele
HEY HEY, bicycle kick by Pele
Ric sportin the King Tut hat
sick contortions as I swing my nut sack
along ur gums, its over mang
REDRUM,
spit out the novicaine
SHINE em, shit make the dick numb,
HO HUM



Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Alias
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Thu Jul-03-03 07:23 AM

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71. "*yawn*"
In response to Reply # 50


  

          

Its only Round 2
& I got this kid on blast
Musta learn 2 rap from JLO cuz his rhymes-so-ASS
Youre green with envy like a christmas tree
but its this verse i decorate
calculate every move i take,every line i evaluate
specific requirements to leave you with heartache
volatile mind that no psychiatrist can penetrate
i dont hesitate im sharp when i communicate
illiterate idiot,your ignorance is illegitimate
consequences fatal,
cuz my tongue swings like an axe,its deliberate
with intentions to make ya blood spill
givin' cold sweats & hot chills
never knew raps could kill
but thats cuz ya rap skill
is minimal....matter of fact in general
ya ish's empty-headed, ya steez all synthetic, pathetic...
you couldn't be DUMBER (mute) if your tongue wuz PROSTHETIC!
witness MY rhyme-addict phonetic n' its all kinetic...
sporadic thoughts will fill your mind n' turn you into my fanatic
my dramatic metaphorical images appear cinematic...
asall the critics scream FOUR STARS!!!!
you could puke Snickers n' Mars but still can't spit BARS!



BATTLE RECORD Wins:2 Losses:1

  

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Alias
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72. "Round 3....."
In response to Reply # 71


  

          


I got this fake assassin attackin
but it passion he lackin
packin' a effed up flow & can't make a sentence
So I'ma non-sense ya senses
spit lyrical Alzheimer's, and make you think in past tenses
Circumcise your big head & extract ya data
hmmm...minute grey matters...
while I'm the ALPHA Male ya still projecting beta
All ya awkward words ive ate
and sooner rather than later
I'm returning em directly to ya face
Its demoralizing having to waste this verse to denigrate this degenerate
at a rapid rate,typing your demise no need to concentrate
need me to elaborate, I aint youre teacher, though I certainly educate
history lesson, ponder when they used to castrate
youre lucky it aint the 40's or youd be in their place
I dont require a promoter or voters my words facilitate
I emancipate,advocate lyrics that captivate even the great!
My rhymes are potent, enough to smash yo adams apple
then I apply pressure, when im attackin
so this VET will call ya the predecessor
but only cuz your has been


BATTLE RECORD Wins:2 Losses:1

  

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MiracleRic
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91. "KO"
In response to Reply # 72
Thu Jul-03-03 07:37 PM

  

          

ya verses weather pattern that of el nino
three lil boy verses, rename em teamo supremo
I'm hard as BedRock, kid stop feedin Dino
u jungle book shook, Ric rumble grizzly like Ballou
the penis envy got u small and green like Gazzo
my cloak and dagger, smoke and swagger outmatch ya dull ax
ur attack amounts to the force of pulled slaps
My pulled punches, leave gray matter peeking through ya skull cap
ayo, said punches pulled tend to bend ya halo
lay low,this over(head) right delivers the KO
referrin back to JLO
thats ENOUGH, B!!!
in a wifebeater I leave ya eyes PUFF-Y
snuff me??!! tin man, u still rusty
u must be a dreamer
miracle magic leave ya tragic death, SELENA
flip ALIAS's from Anna Mae to Tina
I'm the Ike Turner mic burner


Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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2. "Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

*************************
MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

*************************
MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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30. "RE: Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing"
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ayo "MayoKing",
you're a uteris accepting an overload of utourists,
i'm fuckin ya right,
don't bother replyin, just stand up and shout,
wit emcees like you i do like lightning you kite,
you da adult at burger king fillin the mayo containers,
you can't spit right cause you were a retainer,
im psychologically disturbed, you psychologically a nerd,
my word is like tyson on ya hearin canals,
i realize i'm typing, but it's your inner voice that's doin the bitin,
i'm manipulatin ya psyche,
leavin you like a veggie on welfare,
there was a shortage of mayo that was found in ya ass crack,
the only place you shine is sperm centers,
any rebutal you provide will be met wit a slap,
listen, you already lost, jus act yaself and play dead.






let's play ping pong ■

  

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MayoKing
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32. "RE: Round 1:BarTek vs. MayoKing"
In response to Reply # 30


          

man you disgrace the name of EVERY veteran
i sauna-thing to get me even close ta sweatin
they musta lobotomized and cauterized
you're ass to your mouth
cuz you're the ONLY one eatin
the shit that you shout.
i'm psychogically major
can understand your psychosis
ur outta touch wit reality
mayo's givin ya a case of flow necrosis
it's gross kid,
u can't even spell 'uterus' right!
i'll use it in a sentence
'i was in your mother's last night'
it was tight, cuz my pen-is flow as thick as my dick
u half-way lyricist, your rhymes get PUNNED UP AND CLAPPED QUICK

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MayoKing
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33. "RE: Round 2: MayoKing vs. BarTek"
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you call yourself BarTek
your aged flow lookin suspect
like curdled milk
silky mayoflow'll leave a dent in your tape deck
8 track elder, best hide behind the 8 ball
when it come ta da 'nology it's the king that they call
like, 'i need the royal touch to run over my beat'
leave em with lyrical Heat u get dusted in the street
like the getaway driver, the one black dood in the movie
you leave behind a girlfriend? that shit STILL don't move me
or groove me, your groupie entourage wearin thin
like a gallon of coke mixed with a teaspoon of gin
rummy, you rub me wrong way with your runny
nose and it's funny the way your weak flow keep on comin'
'ayo' BarTek! take a stool, you need to stop!
cuz nobody's buyin the shit that you drop

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BarTek
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34. "RE: Round 2: MayoKing vs. BarTek"
In response to Reply # 33


  

          

as your challenger i expect you to respond with some heat/
but the flow i deliver already dimmed your candle/
you're unsteadily caught in the wind/
your only perception of the streets is a movie, and you wanan move me?/
your life has been scripted, your mind is white fisted/
the only black dood you'll ever meet is the bouncer at my show sendin fags back into pride week/
i am the future, you are the last week/
i heard you rap on the radio, or at least i heard some similar shit/
i walk through the streets wit vigor in my step/
bow your head as i approach and cross out your path/
the creator made a minor mistake playin tic tac toe, nothing i couldn't correct/
your days in the light have been shadowed by the monumental size of my dick/
welcome to the purgatory of rap/
your mind needs purification because all you manage to spit has already been said/
i spit so many words at one time you are confusing me wit gunshots in the streets/
readjust your mind to face me, use any kind of reference, word play, a punch or a hit/
still, you will never be closer to the key that i hold/
i already found "sold" on your lobes when i unlocked your feeble mind in battle mode/
you are a frivolous emcee/
your best attempt is unclear and in the vicinity of me when i was a baby unable to speak/

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BarTek
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39. "RE: Round 3:BarTek vs. MayoKing"
In response to Reply # 2


  

          

the final engagment leaves my competitors brainless/
your aimless attempts are steadily missing my cranium/
unable to render a verse worth my curse/
you're so soft, you should be rapping in church/
my verse is bonic, i am the rap experiment/
you are the fleshy residue of a man after life-long enslavement/
your words lack luster, you would do fine as a court jester/
as a rapper, you need the clapper to receive applause and acceptance/
forget a girl, or a crowd, you can only turn on a light bulb/
but you still have a good chance at being my TEK guy/
you're biodegradeable like soil, if i was a daisy i'd give you more trouble than you're able to handle/
you are equal to expired food stamps, even crack heads ignore you/
your flow is so boring you would make a good bed time story/
you're expandable, the rap world has plenty of assholes/
you're only royal, cause yours is, the only one full of mayo/
you are the only human being i know, who is able to lube his dick in his ass and fuck himself till he's blue in the face/
spend some time perfecting your rap, as a matter of fact/
spend some time keeping your ass crack from spittin your crap/





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MayoKing
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43. "RE: Round 3:BarTek vs. MayoKing"
In response to Reply # 39


          

a verse that's 'bonic' u must be smokin some chronic
verses watered down like tonic, mine the mold for the mental like Sonic
Foundry, no bound'ries in this Bar fight
your vocal jabs leave audience cringin' like albinos in sunlight
cuz they ugly as hell, not a one touched my chest
i'm here to keep you in check mate, this King puts yours to rest
in round 1, i shined on your shit like supernova
round 2 was Ether to your name (namely 'Super Ugly' by HOVA)
G I know why Joe mamma's gettin thick (cuz she slipped, fell and landed on my Cobra)
and round 3 only confirmed suspicion that ya ova-
rated, u insert the word 'ass' just to make it PG
you're your you are wasting six straight lines and my time, believe me
reprieve me, i'm guilty of killin this stut-stu-stutterin fool
when i bust a rhyme i'm recognized as the leader of the new skool
so spend some time and realize that a 'rook'
took you one-on-one and left ya ass shook

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DivineVersatile
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3. "Round 1: InstantAxis vs. JKJ"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Instant Axis
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18. "fuck it,im runnin the public (round1)"
In response to Reply # 3


  

          

open arms assasination, palm slap ya credentials rookie baste the occasion/feather racin uplift ya knowledge, talkitive pricks get buried before the carnage/heartless Jackin Kids Jerseys, throwin back assaults laying youngstas on hospital gurneys/kid babblin, "why'd i enter the tourny!!!!", dont concern me, i run thru cats ask DVS the attourny/mercy mercy me, marvin gaye drop an ash tray, its trash day, ima have this cat on permnant fast play cause you were never famished thinkin Ax wouldnt master-bait you into runnin the gaunlet, this aint kindergarden son and im guardin the hard wood/ask any rook, i maneuv thru parachutes, repell down walls play stealth when i nail these dudes/off rail when i cruise, just take this beatin, cause in a 4 wall cell only Ax is breathing/kids jabbin im cleaving skin and bone defending the throne, at the end of the day you aint pullin the Ax out the stone/

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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JKJ
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20. "you runnin ya mouth no doubt..."
In response to Reply # 18


  

          

yo
I'll drop an axis
for an instant ass kick
so here's x brother
y's the sista, z the motha
a mathematical verse
equation'a common sense
as J approaches K approaches J
you're less and less
but you still seem to think ya'll big
Big November '02
That's like a half year ago
Oh wow son how you grew
You went straight from the curb
To a driver with a learners
But I'm a class 8 rig
an' if ya good with any numbers
You know that even on it's side
eight's more infinite than two
and I'm the one who eight you up
you'd eat up three except that you
got straight up beat
all black and blue
one match of three
to see you're through
an you're a point source
I'm so vast
fastly vastly kickin ass
instaneously react
x axin axis right in half

Back from nothing

  

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JKJ
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21. "short and sweet (like you)"
In response to Reply # 3


  

          

y-axis,
for tha sista in you
An I know ya think ya pretty
I'm jus goin slow outta pity
I'd trauma you, how bout we spoon?
I'm getting drunk and you sound cute
My girl don't got to know it's you
Cause if she did she'd kill you too
But you could try and bitch slap back
It wouldn't matter cause in fact
you the bitch under attack
you'd slap yaself and call ya fat
then break down crying an' collapse
You'd take it hard and take it fast
So take it like a man at last
Admit ya failed, go run and pack

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Instant Axis
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44. "hmmmmmmmm........."
In response to Reply # 21


  

          

suspect looks second round shook, you better speed up the process, this is only 3 rounds and 2 got Ax winnin regardless/im heartless pick apart ya carcass, spark the spliff cause J is just a smokescreen for my target/nothin to hit not equipped Ax would be better off battlin miracleric/

ahhhhhh, that shit was garbage now lets really show and prove

colatteral damage heavy package verse for verse you goin in the wastebasket, cut and paste fagot, ya laggin jet left back 4th grade flow cant reciporcate Fracktions/head tappin neck grabbin ya committin suicide dabblin in this undertoe of a wave crashin/face collapsin, eyes bulgin Frakmonsta Hulkin word choke'em, might even bring out the beast and curtain call fold'em/big hurtin ball base head explodin, this aint recess, serious back hand jesus!!!!, corner stone background drop masterpieces/you still the palm pilot beneath the fetus, back up its freezing, head cold dissect toads, cats cant cross the intersection when big rig roles/classic example of how Ax can take the wind out ya flow/bitch!!!!




fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Instant Axis
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45. "round 3, its that easy"
In response to Reply # 44


  

          

first 2 rounds in the pocket, cats would need a telescope to see how far back is ya optics/diagnostic just not up to par, ya droppin bogies in sand traps while im eagle smokin cigars/vulcan spock arms metal stamina grabbin ya, how you expect to think when i basically trampled ya cabbage bra/i got ya allowance for hours stumped, couldnt complete what ya started, probably tried to come back to edit that 2nd verse horrible yardage/from scrimmage the vintage antique spinnach equipment easily clinches victory over ya dim wit division/now divide that, extract Ax from the equation and visualize an empty page in ya grasp/ya words mean nothin, head huntin, shed my knuckles across ya frame and leave my message there cuzzin/knees bucklin from the pressure, old vet fresher, carry young legs in a brawl back in the day boris becker/torture rack press ya, corpse in back slept ya, type of cat to get on my nerves new name miss fran drescher/


fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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JKJ
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48. "maybe you're that easy"
In response to Reply # 45


  

          

Cardnial crime there Mr "Look at me I'm Big Time"
Ya round two was two times mine, can't big up in just 16 lines?
Ya blind? Ya find it hard to count past nine? Ya bed time?
I'm bringin juice you bringin sour worthless lemon rind
Took Ax at a rave once shit was like featherweight angel dust
Ya little angel innocent four year old mama tit suckin tantrum throwin
plastic underpants bubble blowin crybaby only child,
parents knowin the disservice to the world they owin used a jimmy hat next time
Yo my allowance was givin ya that easy round two ya blew
Ya blew like y'a pro got some tracks you workin too? Biatch
Street trash is for the dump oh sorry that's ya home ya chump
Well grab an ice pack from ya feezer ya aim is lousy and ya bleedin
Titanium frame broke ya knuckles and shed ya misconception
When you was made they misconceived ya doctors happy just ta leave ya
Parents had to drown their sorrows cause they couldn't just drown ya
Now I have to bring you up, set you up, then go and down ya
ya Star Trek referencin cross dressing Uhara look-a-like golf pro yuppy clown ya
So reference round one of my map of mastered axis
x claimed my mastery of you, y ya bother tryin to get next
ya deaf as well as blind so listen up son when ya told
Pop-a J knows ya just a kid and z axis was tha motha-load

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DivineVersatile
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4. "Round 1: jayare214 vs. Lucky187"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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jayare214
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17. "rd 1......"
In response to Reply # 4


          

this cats unlucky like ceasar in 187
suicidal my lyrics divide ya body and leavens
his spirit near miss whenever he swingin
i got neo speed fists of fury flingin
bringin blows with punches that blur in multiple
sentinel emcees see me comin only if im froze
in slow motion still more potent than most
floatin a boast before luckys carcass rendered toast
at most youd be my roadie rook shook like prodigy
face to face with ballerina pictures for the corwd to see
i author lobotomy you specialize in sodomy
loud barkin odditity mockin me by the very act of hockin these
sub par spits im the shit you diareah
runny emmbarassing efforts reminiscent of colon cleaners
im meaner and colder experienced and older
rip off ya eyelids so just ya pupils rest on shoulders
when ya sobbin Im robbin ruthless in the battle scheme
mortal combat screams after my fatality scene
bring ya best inflate ya chest pound like you proud
like ya knees and typing fingesrs aint jittering loud
like you puffed false courage from a cali chonic cloud
and tucked ya man-breasts in ya blouse
hide ya doubt, hide that puddle thats leakin about
and hide that notepad of wack shit that you thinkin about....


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jayare214
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124. "whered he g0?"
In response to Reply # 17
Sun Jul-06-03 10:09 AM

          

damn i dont think this guy is showing up...
oh well...

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Lucky187
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126. "RE: rd 1......"
In response to Reply # 17


          

Chitter chatter old man's dentures pitter patter/
Speak words like three years old Dr. Pepper but flatter/
Talk like you think what you say matters/
but I leave you shattered.. Broken, token/
for medicinal purposes- you tryin' to forget your worhtlessness/
You make Matrix referrences like it ain't be done/
You kickin' it with a lotta MC's but YOU ain't one/
And now diarhea, Mama Mia! What you be a/
three year old? Thought you were a vet?/
Or is this a problem of your old age- do you need a diaper?/
You askin' for charity? I'll give ya a quarter if you replace my windshield wipa'/
Sodomy is my speciality? Your right, my name's Bubba/
and here in Music State, I'ma be your lubba/
You can be my bitch- til I sell you to anotha'/
I'm younger and built tougher take it rougher and deal it truer/
Cause I'm just hittin' my peak- you old, I'm newer/
And my shit don't smell like its from a storage tank, sewer/
I use rotting pussy as a luer..
See kiddies- watch as I take my hook to a lip and put it through HER.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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Lucky187
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127. "ROUND 2!!!"
In response to Reply # 126


          

To start I cut your vocal chord/
like a SoCal Lord, oh lord, The Kid got bored!/
Geezer got gored like Wheezer fuckin' whores/
Chokin' off weed ain't novel no more/
I'm a mansion, your a hovel.. no lower/
Grovel now and I might be merciful/
If not shits gonna get worse 'n fool (full)/
Take off the god damned wool/
Its stuck on your face- I think that shit you smokin's laced/
You must be on crack if you look at me and think attack/
I make people say "OH SHIT!"/
they hear you, say, "Ahh.. shit../
Boy gone loco! Yo ho! Don't even try no mo! QUIT!"/
And for you that might be good advice/
Cause I'll pour gasoline on ya, handy with a light/
To burn off the headlice thats bored into your brain../
Thats what you get when what you say everyone else already been sayin'!/
And everything original is gerigible/
Gargable.. not even repeatable, not speakable/
Not even thinkable.. sinkable with one syllable/
Refillable, common as gas/
Easy to find as in LA when ya lookin' for ass/
Ok, your done, your time has passed../
Its just sad when ya a Geriatric and still gettin' trashed..

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Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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jayare214
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131. "rd2. fetus emcees"
In response to Reply # 127


          

Ill be geriactric but your rhyme scheme is ancient
you shit was cutting edge when griots stepped off the slaveship
fake quips slung by ametuer hands
results in boy slingger losing thumbs to the man
right here ya mystikal rants will get you a dance
with the devil under the moon- in rap your a stan
half fan half stalker gettin lyrically slammed
by my bam bam bigelo flows my nikes leave you a brand
across ya forehead you cornbread ima perform instead
you get encores when rappers want more head
couldnt score heat in the battle format with torches
stupid porpoise beached suicide my writing flawless
aww shit after a week of practice
this cat spit the wackest jiz since kim stepped off the matress
fact is you couldnt hold my pencil dont reach for my mic
ima motobike little tike you need tyo stick to trikes
your like a dick to dykes your unwanted
growth stonted like pharrell callin himself a singer you fronted
the music state???? look elvis your ouutta ya league
I got a foot in ass toe wigglin pedigree
instead of me you should have looked for lyricist Z
or hit del taco lookin for young emcee
stupid mutt you brakin up the wrong tree
this private school next time im chargin rd2 is for free.


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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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jayare214
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133. "rd3"
In response to Reply # 4


          

lucky 187's ya name? that penal code shit is lame
shits been used by garbage hood rappers since big daddy kane
"he not original!" the only claim to come from ya brain
as you studied p diddy "victory" hoping to spit it the same
you strain like hemoroid patients to create spits
while the fibre in pencils i mangle like a pitt
bull you'sa pooodle use ya noodle or use google
search for ghost writers to improve you dude you spit booboo
wool??worse n' full? you should curse this stool!
your flows in my presense reduced to infantile drool
like ja your rule is over before it began
you beatin me is like ving raines joining the klan
keep up rook the pace pounds at this level
my lines leave you dismembered disowned and disheveled
shoveling shit in ya notbook of written
your friends wait for the joke when you spittin like you kiddin
"quit playin- say your real verse!" in rhyme your inadequate
like a mini man with tweezers tryin to grab at the dick
i stab at you pricks leave ink imbedded in necks
your shit sucks like it was co writtin by kayslay clue and flex
you bounce mic checks I trounce you rejects
then limp away from the scene of you slayed usual suspects
NEXT!!!!!



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http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
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Lucky187
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144. "RE: rd3"
In response to Reply # 133


          

Yo the penal code is personal, and you ignorant in callin' it/
Play dead marsupial, your shit is fallin' quick/
Hits don't stick lick balls flick tricks like you on my dick/
Strip like your name's Amber flip over bitch I'ma leavin' you amblin'/
You gamblin', read your shit I'm like 'naw'/
You fallin' apart, shamblin' cause your fuckin' ass is raw/
Break your jaw so gotta drink cum through a straw/
You flawed- you might as well have stepped to God/
Half my insults you can't even understand-
Bring a book and study next time you get ass rammed/
The wool is over your eyes- covering the truth/
These words are the sentence- the votes are the noose/
Booboo? Naw, more like voodoo, and thats true dude/
But either way, better than 'goo goo, ga ga, I fucked my da da'/
You leave limp but thats cause you can't get it up/
Thats why your girl wants to replace you with Luck/
You may be older, but one of us is a man/
You call me a biter, but only one of us is a sham/
How can I bite bitches I don't listen to?/
Don't act like you smart when yo ass never knew/
And feel lucky this is only so many lines-
Cause your flows exhausted.. I'm just beginnin' mine.


(Yo that week long shit was twacked, I had said I was out I had other obligations and didn't even know this shit was goin' on.. both those verses were written' within 15 minutes. I don't go back and rewrite my shit- I don't even revise it -so don't try and put that up.)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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jayare214
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155. "just athought"
In response to Reply # 144


          

nobody here spits for a living let alone battles for a living. we all do it for fun. we all are just doing this shit cuz theirs time to do it and its fun. dont feel preasured about the winning or the losing of it all....this is all subject to somone elses opinion of what constyiturtes a good battle verse, and that differs greatly. if im in one of these things it is basically just a spur in my side to keep writing. I dont revise or spend too much time writing mine either....check the time stamps....if i sit down and something comes out it does....if not it doesnt. as for the week thing, in a battle you supposed to attack everything about the other emcee that you can....i got a 70 hour a week job 2 kids and a wife....if my life gets in the way and i cant write thats fair game....thats just the way it is....i think you got the right attitude luck....this shit is just for fun famz!
peacem and big up for the exchange!
-j

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http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
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Lucky187
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156. "RE: just athought"
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Its lookin' like you gonna take this one, but it was still fun man. If you take it I wish you Luck, =)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

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DivineVersatile
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5. "Round 1: Spread vs. syllabicdivinity"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Spread
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29. "syllabicspanking"
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Spread vs. syllabic, automatic bye for I and I
Try and try, but why, cuz I can fly with my style supply
Your waste of words tastes of terds, replace your verbs with action
I chase the herds, disgrace you herbs, you on thin ice with no traction
Hoe slappin', closed captioned for the rappin' impaired
Like Blacks in Biloxi and Whites in Watts - you fuckin scared
Syllable you a silly fool to really think my belly full
I compress MCs like MP3s so the space you take is really null
and void, I get annoyed by lyrical droids in cyberspace
I'm a mean vet, I'll make your screen sweat, I'm hot, so wipe your face
Throw in the towel or I'm a go in your bowels and yank ya innards out ya ass
Take beginners out to class and expose pretenders fast
You threatening like Richard Simmons in a bunny suit
You like a quadrapelegic bragging about how many guns he shoot
You paintballin', ain't ballin', more like grocery baggin'
I seen your bloodstains in five buroughs, what you supposed to be taggin'?
Your territory gettin' pissed in, got you christened by my raptism
You've been deflowered and devoured, my shit is funkier than project rat jism
You like Project Pat -imprisoned, doin' time in your ruined mind
Like Daryl Straw, I cut you raw and now I'm doin' lines
Snort your short retort and have you strapped to life support
The court used your case to uphold the right to abort
Cuz mistakes like you are unacceptable, you even too ugly to be a circus spectacle
Emcees that fuck with me just end up as tax-absorbing vegetables
flatline^^^___________________________________________________


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syllabicdivinity
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41. "spread out, it's your only chance"
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glad you got that all off your chest?… must of been one hell of a bench press /
being that 99.9 percent of everything you just said… was Grade A B.S. /
must confess i’m not impressed… and those mp3s of me you compressed /
make sure my name shows up in the linear notes on your throat where this verse gets pressed / no stress…
verbs packin more action then science faction leavin you resortin to science fiction /
just plain lazy like contractions that beck cat would stand a better chance of winnin /
head spinning singing them biloxi blues pumpin watts too much for your fuse/
fear is for the mortal not the divine damn i expected more thorough research outta you /
and thanks for all of your concern really… but don’t worry about me walkin on thin ice /
i’ll spit flames in my path while i stomp wit spiked shoes… i’m jesus fuckin christ /
but twice as nice especially when it comes time to twist the mental versa vice /
and flatten some fattened livestock claimin to rock some veteran stripes /
and let me get this right if i don’t white towel it… your gonna shove your hands in my ass /
now besides being blantantly homosexual… that’s just sickenin with no class /
for real least you could do is take me out maybe a movie or something to eat first /
or better yet how ‘bout you break me off wit a verse that ain’t so goddamn rehearsed /
this here for the shear pleasure of murder in the utmost first degree /
kill yourself 360 times and you still couldn’t cypher within my proximity /
got a firey quench for first blood and since your first drop was a dud /
guessin I’ll satisfy my thirst for the moment any play patriot to your scud /
cause you stuck like suburban cats on tracks sprayin a style that don’t fit /
and all that blood your findin yeah it’s mine the product of dedicated penmanship… you ain’t sayin shit

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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syllabicdivinity
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42. "let me switch it up, finessed and to the point"
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picture big bic being thrown to the rook side of the fence… playin big brother foundation to these damn adolescents… no matter / i splatter spread’s brain matter in layers thick and stacked like bricks… shatter his dreams like a revolutionary bolshevik… type sick / the way i spit split domes leave it alone… wit a name like spread this cats bound to get grindstoned… washin my hands clean of this mess blood stainin the water… my holy scripture defining this shit here a goddamn lamb slaughter / don’t envy my thought pattern get my knowledge from your daughter… in a halter while i’m swingin swords… wreckin headboards… and if i was in it for loot my smile be on the front of forbes / underlord… the dark high priest got spread on a short leash… draggin you through the river styx til all the shit shrinks and stinks up your fleece / screamin like bahhhhhhhhh… but there’s no one here wit the gall that can save you… fuck rook or vet status i’m that free agent that played you / out… tried to take bic on that deep post route… introduce helmet to helmet fuck the flag and fifteen, you're laid the hell out / picture this cheese head tried to spread but got covered instead……… don’t waste your time on a paramedic ayo this cats already dead……………
((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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Spread
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51. "blasphemy"
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100 words a line your thin rhyme is stretched
Aside from the fact you about as divine as David Koresch
With the rhythm of John Tesch and the strength of leper flesh
You as fresh as the moldy, cheesy substance secreting from the cleavage of your 500lb. mamma's breasts
and all the rest of your flow was mine line for line
but if you didn't flip it like a Special Olympics gymnist, it woulda been fine
I wish your verse was good enough to at least piss me off
When you just lay there gettin fucked it only gets me soft
Jesus "fucking" Christ? I'm Abraham, son, you gettin sacrificed
Immortal bitch, I'm eternal pimp, now I've smacked ya twice
The third will be for birds to eat your carcass, I'm the darkest
Funkier than Hatian armpits showering in the dripping water from a can of Starkist
"Water, slaughter, daughter, swords, boards, duds, scuds"
Your dopest rhymes are mediocre, you a pack of Jokers, I'm the buds
You may wrap, but I get them high when incinerated, your skin's been penetrated
By burning embers turning members to ashes that descinegraded
You could imitate it, won't flatter me, I'm a DieHard battery
You AA, minor leaguer with a Pee-wee strategy
Dionysis? man, that's priceless, you so wack that I'M embarassed
I'm double-length, you EP, and the MD has to inform your fam you've Parrished
Cuz you carless, but in all fairness, that was a dandy rap for a handicapped
Damn he wack, got this candy cat by his panty strap
I hope yall standing back, cuz I splatter MCs like Galagher
Sending syllabicdivinity back to infinity, who's the next challenger?

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Spread
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74. "necrophelia"
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It's tragic syllabicdivinity is in the vicinity of me
Should've wore protection, won't be resurrection cuz the only Trinity I see
Is 3 to the dome, 3 broken bones, 3 blasts and 3 smokin' homes
3rd round, 3 seconds left, but you need more than a 3 to even the score that is shown
3 syllables: deleted, defeated, depleted, runner-up
Your strategy is to read my rhyme then just repeat it, what the fuck?
So go to the degree of trying to flip '3' on me
That'll make you the 245,678,910th fallen MC
Ain't no way around it, you've been pounded to the ground kid
16 MCs, 4 rounds, and just 1 nigga got you surrounded
But fuck the numbers, I clowned it, judges want the punchlines
But while Glass Joe is jabbin', Spread is stabbin', don't nobody want mine
Like orphans, survivors of abortions and leftover chitlin' portions
But wait! I'm morphing from negativity to releasing endorphines
Brawny-like absorption of flows that spill prematurely
Cum out the gun in round one, but you will never kill me early
I'm burly like dykes with chili bowls and firearms
You'll run this shit when 3-6 mafia starts singin' choir songs
I'll bury you with slugs and worms then I'm off to fly with birds
Fooled you with the way I'm blowin' up today, it's only July the 3rd
I hold it down with independence kid, you're dope every twenty sentances
They say spontneous human combustion is rare, but I could show you plenty instances
Like every time I bless the mic, I'm hotter than summertime nutsack
Since you like football so much, I'll kick it to you, better off taking the touchback
cuz I got you in the Endzone



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syllabicdivinity
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79. "i promise i won't fuck you once you're dead"
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your styles cut and paste, you’re all control x and control v… take a line from your rhyme book then try to apply it to me /
that’s cool, whatever it takes i don’t mind exposin posin fakes… spit a verse down your ant hill equivalent to earthquakes /
thinkin i flow like you, fool don’t even try and flatter yourself… style inherently original beyond sale or theft from even the top shelf /
that’s your problem, you’re run of the mill, for sale at the local five and dime… all your gay imagery got me wonderin on which side you tryin to ride /
and so you’re abraham now, huh… well that must make me the burning bush… now go kill your kid you fuckin sheep and hurry i’m in a rush /
laced, defaced like a porn stars face by the sticky white paste… but it’s a win-win situation since you’re getting paid for it plus lovin the taste /
laugh when i think of the fifteen or twenty minutes i spent on this battle so far… and how you’ve been grippin your pencil so tight and long the lead givin you lock-jaw /
spread spent the last two days and nights locked air tight in his room… wit riddelyn, a rhyme book, some scissors, lube, and a big ole tube of elmer’s glue /
a mad scientist jackin off every ten minutes to the thought of my syllabics… tactics too tragic for you manage son this is far beyond damage /
it’s detrimental enter the mental and deal with the hand i dealt you… even your girl told me “last time you fucked spread’s mind that deep, I swear I felt you” /
don’t know who you got by the panty strap cause dog it can’t be me… cause i freeball when i freestyle it just makes me feel more… well free /
you’re overconfident dog and it’s blurrin your vision obviously… i gave your punk ass round 2 just so i’d have something to do here in 3 /
i flip your script and turn your words on you have you hatin of course… cause you spent your whole day salivatin and creatin rockin on your war horse /
then in walk syllabic smooth as shit unrehearsed and disperse… a freestyle outwittin your best written spittin diverse it’s perverse /
look i could pound you all night but i don’t beat dead horses… oh and i just flipped ‘3’ on you too so i got three more corpses /
since the third round is cubed guess that means i’m three times as rude… spreads just three times as lubed waitin for them votes so he can get three times as screwed /
next time don’t get your facts misconstrued…………..

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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DivineVersatile
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6. "Round 1: Ezzsential vs. Ranjeniro757"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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112. "where he at? (quick kill)"
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Either rook or vet labels amp me to consistently plunder flimsy foes
Impose wackness to backflips/ put emcees in rows and mow
sew tactics to dollar bills and fold/ sold your talkin’ auction half-price reduce/smear your spleen across computer screen, leave you angular and obtuse/ garden your jargon sprout in hap-hazardous pussy juice/ I jenga your past time/ brick wallin’ your vestibules/ façades stays non-chalant and layed back/ I scorn corns and leave em’ boxed like hay stacks/ sway back, on your teeter totter martyr/ emcees are straight bitches/ britches held by garters/ I smack u into thin air, you disappear like powder/ emcees are churned like chowder/ duplicated and processed I gut em and stir in stew/ half you, rock bracelets with “WWPD”- what would Pac do?




-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Rajeniro757
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120. "pulls out wwpd bracelet"
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i'll hit you hard enough to fuck up your perm/
then watch lay on the floor wallow and squirm/
strech you like jane fonda/are you feeling the burn?/
you cross the street when you see me like lets make a turn/
i see you hate emcees so what would you be?/
a poet, a sellout, a wigger watching WB/
quit writing why you wasting trees/it's unfair when you battling me/ I'm godzilla you the chinese that flee/ bet you looking at that bracelet that says wwymd/ thats what would your moma do?/
and by the time this battle is through/ the answer would be to abort you/

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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Chaste_Souls
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157. "RE: where he at? (quick kill)...Dayum"
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Thats what im talkin about...Lady's UP...though it's about flow and not sexes this time around, your style is SICK!!!

  

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Rajeniro757
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125. "(awakes from sleep) ohh round 2"
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I'll jump start you heart with this lyrical dart/ white out your entire notebook then rip it apart/ you thinking you hot but you not/ your career will be shorter then john starks/ shorter then the life of a flea/ shorter then a midget taking a knee/ you aint fucking with me/ i'll hit you ten times before you count to 3/ have a blackout and choke you like spree/
your lame like shaq taking a three/ you beating me is something you'd never see/ like chistopher reeves getting up trying to ski/ or r. kelly waiting in line trying to pee/ beter off trying to pimp slap ice -t


R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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BarTek
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159. "RE: (awakes from sleep) ohh round 2"
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Tue Jul-08-03 08:57 AM

  

          

hahahahahahahaahahahhaha, lets see what ezz brings back...this is a funny battle.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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7. "Round 1: Untitled vs. NewsiC_NoyC"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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NewsiC_NoyC
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160. "Round 1 (max 24 bars)"
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Tue Jul-08-03 11:35 AM

  

          

Yo,

Everybody in formation and report to battle stations
Watch Richard get defeated, so get seated, for the presentation
Featuring the vet slayer, here to answer your prayers
I bring that "fire" like Stoudamire,malice like Wallace, the Trailblazer....
Chek it, yo, forget the next step after I beat this vet wet
Im focused on the present, this peasant, foget my heat, Im boxing left
With one hand behind my back, a blindfold over my eyes
I rope a dope, leave you smoked, knock you out wit my 3rd eye
Dont make me try, yo, I spit lava volcano till your unstable
Spit hot flames to your brain, then put the remains in a jar....Unlabeled
Untitled, you've yet received one, cuz they cant find a name
For a veteran so feminine, so brainless and lame
Its a shame, another vet slayed with an array of attacks and wordplay
I got you screaming and feening for more metaphor-play
Skip the foreplay! Its time you really feel what real pain is
Whip out my Kong!, but its needless, cuz this guy gets turned On!!..... by his own Anus!
I'll make you famous,with a new title, "Bee Arthur the Suicidal"
I lube, spit, stick, penetrate,groan, smack, and repeat the cycle
Now you just popped your own cherry, be merry, you lost your virginity to yourself
At least it was someone "special", you should be glad that I helped.....lol
Yeah! now back to the topic at hand, Im hotter than the tropics main!
Smack your face so black, peeps mistake you for a gothic (damn!)
Im supersonic, rollin over boulders speeding through stages
Forget a veteran, there's no medicine to cure my SiCness, Im contagious!
Im SiC!

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

www.soundcloud.com/m-born

  

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MiracleRic
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162. "RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)"
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HOLY HOT SHIT BATMAN!!!

this joint was like...CRACK...BOOM...OOF...BANG

this is the best battle verse i seen from u news, i dont think i would even try and outdo that joint, gave me the "i feel sorry for opponent" bitter beer face the enitre time, good gravy

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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Lucky187
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164. "RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)"
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Oh my fuckin' lord C Mo! That was murderous! You just took some acid and turned it into words to melt my eyeballs out! No shit you're still a better battlist than I am- wanna give me lessons?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sig-

"I wandered around darkened hallways,
Lab-rynth, filled with,
Blood vessels and plasma,
Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

I

  

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NewsiC_NoyC
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169. "RE: Round 1 (max 24 bars)"
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Just glad I got that out of me..........Ive had writer's block for like a month and a half.....I came out sicer than I expected too.....I just hope he shows so we can get this over wit.....thanx fam.....Peace

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

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DivineVersatile
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8. "Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Mag30
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77. "RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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breakin outta this cage armed ready with razor blades
the fists sting within the pain with a venomous way
brace yourself as swung straight at ya face like spiked mace
i come back an baste the place with verbal bullet sprays
like a dragoon gold tooth I prose in shows while insane
sixten bars lock chain shattered in light the most profain
genocide, snappin off veins holdin thick he trips mains
of lion untamed ripped raft ready to battle for fame
this shits my game, powered by my disdain of all for pain
rappers burnin off in acid rain, go home, fold crains
before hiroshima blows off my mic leave ya dazed
they never before felt script, many roads descripts and lanes
blow arms the limbs off in an array on top of my game
i stay locked in border leave the morning to blaze
we chatter back clips as blood splatters viciously untame
this shits post mortem i leave ya moribund ya so lush son, okay?

  

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Mag30
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128. "RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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did i miss somethin? i thought he was supposed to come back at me with somethin.

  

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Spontaneous
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132. "RE: Round 1: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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U must be bidding for battle rhymes on ebay sorry for my delay/
still I'm the truth..I'll fill you with holes like tooth decay/
I drill you, there's only 1 me..I know you wish you were ill too/
All yall dudes watch ya back cuz he likes bein in the cracks like mildew/
This is a mismatch like Tyson fightin cats that hit that pipe/
you get ripped til your shit starts droppin like kit kat bites/
Every rhyme you write, type or recite is just hype/
Don't need a mic device--you're not even nice on this site/
You're just a tyke you wouldn't pass me if we were runnin laps/
my rhyme principles leave kids suspended like shirts on lumberjacks/
Meow mix emcees are encouraged to step up their game/
Before the thought even hits their brain for them to step in my lane/
Climbin trees hidin from me best believe you wil get shookout/
so lookout when i'm rockin ice grills like eskimos at cookouts/
Round 1 is done beatin MC's thats sweeter than Cadbury/
Mag30..you can find duke in a bodybag buried.....


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135. "RE: Round 2: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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2nd verse I spit first they cleaning out your hearse/
don't need a nurse..just tell your mother to break out that purse/
Gotta get a suit&casket-- bought ya family a fruit basket/
Tombstone reads he got his internet ass whipped/
Guess again if you thinkin that you can step to this/
or eff with this ,these rhymes posted are effortless/
I know you fearin me and you know there is no fear in me/
U inboxin the moderators cuz you think its a conspiracy/
Lyrically, my verbals'll hurt you/
You stay up past your curfew tryna blaze the purple/
thinkin it'll help your vocab and help you write tight rhymes/
But aint no comin back after this attack- you're on your 9th lifetime/
I'ma blast you and I aint talkin bout with the steel/
u the type that rock air force 1's with the heels/
Please come with something ill so I can smash it/
Those that cross me like a catholic get stomped into ashes....




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Mag30
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148. "RE: Round 2: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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Yo ya just entered the game, death camp shutter back gates as locks go clank /
your mind draws blank as prison bars encircle like shark fins in glass tanks /
a stark dank air appears in a fogged out mirror, its all clear, your chained /
to an ideal of pain, that's self driven regardless of what or how much I say. /
this means my way will always prevail while you fail I got self vision okay? /
I'm armoured in thick plates you're no paddle on lake hiding behind your skanks /
I'm climben the ranks in terms of a coupe of the intelligent youth of today /
ain't cool but I hold on to a vision of overcoming the cliche of being the same /
some say lame yet associate this to bein gritty from goin against the grain /
your lifes in vain as you're sat back in ego trips packin to stay the most "profain" /
I'm sick to mind bane or that most insane blood driven like a wolf as it draws prey /
a shotgun cane on dwellin thieves i steal brainwaves and feed on disbelief, a disdain /
of those who came with a style to flow. so pack up go back home dont point fingers to blame/
ya wantin cake im fine with this bread you're about as twisted as marie antoinette /
ya purched back on AK "forte" seven, more like eleven cracked back on snortin rags. /

  

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Mag30
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149. "Round 3: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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yep it's the third round, third dance, third chance to show ya ammount
to nothin but ya sure good at fallen down I'm the shadow laughin in the crowd
you're lashen out at life aint fair graspen for style but nothin but thin air
I'm shooten on battles but I'm a sit on gattle at the down end of them cold stares
so I write letters in pairs as I spit rhetoric writen rage a whole new page
so I rhyme quick and lick ya spits back to hell and loom back to my cage
shatter bars and dessimate stage in form of locks in axis disregardin fame
so I got backpack full of anthrax to formulate attacks on targets played
down in monopoly, this aint no game when I roll back tanks on boardwalk, okay
I understand your pissed I understand ya been dissed but you understand this
roll back a flag over my face, one star two stripes soaked red from blood stains,
connect the dots its a map mind traps my camps with ink red still damp and slain
you understand? my brain and wishen I could say there was some kinda work of frame
but no, nothin to gain,caught on crew cut eyes on graveyard lies insane grotesque
genocide, throwin back a test he cheated no fail he dropped an ace on dime
you on stage resemble a mime, ya choke on vibe, and frankly I dont got the time.

  

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152. "RE: Round 3: Spontaneous vs. Mag30"
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Like you said its the 3rd round its like 3rd down and you're behind in the game/
Holster this minolta and picture how I kick your mind out the frame/
Your lack of multi-syllabic linguistics gets you erased from existence/
For instance, your rhymes are soft like the faces of infants/
I have no exodus You can try and kick some devilish messages/
But I'm the King, watch how I spread my wings like Pegasus/
I got stamina you playin yaself like Jeru the Damaja/
I set trends and check chins like a Mickey D's manager/
You gaze at my rhymes in amazement on some copy paste save shit/
I sweep you off your feet on some <--- + <---- + A shit/
but in this game when i finish and diminish you/
you can't enter a quarter to continue cuz your rhymes are miniscule/
I've tried to make it as simple as possible so your brain won't get fatigued/
But I'ma major player so its obvious you're in the wrong league/
So keep going to practice, lift weights, simply man up/
for now you're just the latest member of the Spontaneous fan club.




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9. "Alternate Battle: Demon vs. alexathens"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Demon
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19. "Enter the DEMON"
In response to Reply # 9
Tue Jul-01-03 10:22 AM

  

          

Money, I'm tragic spitting classic vocalism type drastic/
Stretchin' asses like fat bitches doing Tae Bo in elastic/
Youza Blockbuster weekend, Kool Aid without the sweetnin'/
Lift the nuts 45 angle to better hear what ya speakin/
I'm the Demon, you're a busted semen spawn without the Freon/
Rocking hand me down garters and LA Gear kicks with the Neon/
Case in point is ya dated/
I smoke signal better lyrics half-inebriated/
The other half palming ya mother's Blackberry Molasses/
Guess "some things will never change"/
I still remain the same sadistic spitting hot ones at the slow lane/
I like the Greek motif, Alex, kinda cute like a bunny/
Heard ya face is on the cover of "GETTING BITCHSMACKED FOR DUMMIES"/
It's OBVIOUS I'm housing you, Alex, but then, I reckon/
You'll get votes 'cause Demon only been round here for 5 seconds/
See, it happenned with SPONTANEOUS, I'll see him in the second round/
And beat you till you Grandma in Heaven says "CAN YOU KEEP IT DOWN?!?"
Fa sho, bitch! Just give me a sec to harness the energy/
To play this motherfucker like the Philaharmonic Symphony/
And when he starts to rapping with nary a toe tapping/
He'll run back to you like "MOMMY, CAN YOU REVERSE THE CONTRACTIONS"/
"FUCK, I'm SORRY I started yapping, HIDE ME QUICK, this nigga SNAPPING!"/
"WHY THE FUCK I gotta battle him?" Shaddup, kid, shit happens!/
So let me say, in all seriousness, thank you for playing/
'Cause I bet ya penis shrunk like 3 inches after the weigh-in/

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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alexathens
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22. "The Cold War"
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ok, ok, rookie little fucks getting out of hand shooting off hollow threats
girls scout cookie dollar bills tucked into the waist of your slender sillhouette
two points for the correct observation about the sweetening because i'm bitter
wasting my joints in conversation with a ball boy when i'm the designated hitter
i see you saw me on the cover of the book in glossy A4 stature staring at you
but son i think you're a little confused, i'm not the victim, i'm the author
i'll keep attacking till i get through, till my name in your househould is taboo,
a tattoo, permanantly etched into your mental like child abuse from an irresponsible father
you know about that right? fuck the philharmonic i'ma conduct a philadelphia experiment
a worldwide symposium to discuss the dementia calling yourself demon represents
grow the fuck up, you're not a product of the underworld, you just need a girl
both hands fucked up and calloused, stroking your locust, wallpaper a tint of pearl
hick trailor trash whore, dare to mention my country so how bout some hardcore?
DVDA by Aids infested crack junkies on your mother, oh brother, here comes another cold war
good news isn't that comforting, that means i'll just keep it psychological
i'm not violent, i'll fuck with your brain and make your illness pathological
schizo psychic pessimist predicting death for both your personalities
the key to my immortality is my exercise in brutality, but you'll be gone demon, don't worry, that's just a tecnicality


  

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25. "Round 2"
In response to Reply # 22


  

          

check one, round two, time to kick shit off again,
welcome back to bloodsport uncensored, live worldwide on your espn
i've been trying to figure out my angle of attack for this cracker jack
had some ideas, all where vetoed so i decided to look back, to backtrack
height? wouldnt be fair i'm 6'4 standing proud so i cut you some slack
that i'm the veteran and youre the rookie? naw cause DVS hooked me up just for the bookies
the turf we claim? my country laid the foundation for modern civilization
while your u s of a is still trying to become a civilized nation
so fuck a demon, fuck a bush, fuck a blair and all those in between
push my buttons and i'll show you what youre worth just like an atm machine
i've got my rhyming personality and it's giving me feedback
so try and slooow down demon, you just entered my speedtrack
bucket back firing while i duck and move with the swiftness
so put my mc skills next to the barbie on your christmas giftlist
now i'm speaking to these boards cause i just caught you in the act
staring at your verse thinking "what the fuck is that?"
so now you're twisting, you're turning, you're lack of a legacy is burning
you should be fighting in the battlefield but you've still got a lot of learning
you need a yearning, to be the best, to stand out, to fight it to the death
so goodbye mr. demon, kapoof youve been finished like how osiris was by seth

  

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Demon
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27. "Round 2: The History Lesson"
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You think ya culture founded shit? The highest elevated?!?/
Take it back further to Nile Valley pyramids carbon dated/
Son, ya facts are faulty as fuck, so take them viaducts/
Straight up ya ass and ask Socrates where the fuck he got his tightest stuff/
I'll guarantee the warranty's Egyptian but a Mystery/
To young gullible punks who get their history off TNT/
My culture's not American, props to my stolen legacy/
Zulus with rebellious watery graves 20 thou underseas/
But now, Athens is under siege for fucking with the major leagues/
And pissing Demon off to the highest of pissedtivity/
The best product that ever arose out ya Grecian community/
Is child molestation, anal sex and gyros disputably/
But this ain't bout genetics, its about phonetics, keep ya focus/
My plague of LOCUSTS consuming your magnum opus/
Demon made of more fire levels than Dante's Inferno/
Licking at shots at ya verses like Fisher Price 'MY FIRST JOURNAL'/
Get this one out ya ass crack, find a reason to snap back/
Or flux capacitate yo bitch ass and pray you can back track/
Pray for penance and take back every dis you've ever thrown/
Or D will disconnect ya fam like MobileOne cellular phones/

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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28. "Round 3: The Jump Off"
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Rook to King 7, Checkmate, Log it to memory/
I'm housing with better punches, flows and acidic imagery/
You claimin' gizzled vet but ya lyrics smell like a baby's breath/
With Demon playing Freddy in ya sleep, ghost like the Loch Ness/
Stabbing you with a 3 pronged pitch, ya lose conscious/
And start reciting ILIAD verses acting despondent/
I'm not only educated, both tested and approved/
U.S.D.A. Mad Cow fired clay pigeon stabbin' ya power you/
You couldn't crack my bracket if you was Pookie in "NEW JACK"/
Get bounced like a pinball thru my verses 'til you was Blue Black screaming "FREE MUMIA!"/
Carpe Diem, the Truth speaker/
Off top turnbuckles causing trouble, slapped in a sleeper/
And left in a pool of urine adjacent to the speakers/
My hand so far up ya anus you're a Muppet like "Beaker"/
You mo' bitch than bodybuilders drinking Bacardi Breezers/
Selling out the culture that fathered ya style like Condoleeza/
Man, I'll fuck you quicker than crooked prechers with amnesia/
Be it limerick, haiku, lyric or onomotopoeia/
In desparate need of chalked outlines and streetsweepers/
Coughing and wheezing like "Demon, STOP IT, I need a breather"/

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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101. "Round 3: It's OVER"
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Stupid American little kids buying into conspiracy theories and myth
i've heard it all before egyptians and phenoecians to back your shit up with
we didnt steal their medicine, we took voodoo tactics and updated them for the times
oh yeah aristotle raided the library in alexandria to steal the knowledge?
too bad it burned to the ground before he was born, a fact you morons never acknowledge
you've been reading "black africa", put down the propaganda and the usa today
celebrating your bullshit independece day nationalistic feeling are too cliche
september 11th struck hard, i understand the pain, but you all need to understand OUR motherfucking dismay
two world wars, one civil, invasions, and a constant turkish threat with armed forces not too far away
but on the 25th of march i'll celebrate OUR independece, but july 4th will be know as alexathens' transcendence
into mc heaven for casting out the demon that was trespassing,
you can choose your execution, hanging, stoning, lethal injection or even gassing
so put the keyboard down, unplug the mouse from the usb
and stop downloading photos of my name on a real life marquee
sou gamo tin mana, i'll kick it multilingual since my shit is still over your head
don't need to undertand, don't need a connection i'll take this thread over through infrared
overhead projector with transpancies describing how i'll take a motherfucker out
knock out in the third, this is a marine against a suburban boy scout,
be prepared, welcome to this national service, we join the army for our country not a college degree
three rounds, a beatdown, some intellect, and a partridge on a punk mc dysfunctinal family tree

  

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DivineVersatile
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10. "Alternate Battle: LilNephya vs. LaXyDaZiCaL"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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LaXyDaZiCaL
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134. "RE: Alternate Battle: LilNephya vs. LaXyDaZiCaL"
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why do cats always no show on me... every mutha fuckin time... so do i still write a verse or what???

laxed

  

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11. "Alternate Battle: dave vs. Chaste_Souls"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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40. "RE: Alternate Battle: dave vs. Chaste_Souls"
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Dave? iz ur Tombstone carved with 703(july03)/or call 911/Cause ur Hitten the bottom/Grave diggin ur drop-in/6ft Deep/While im counting sheeps/OKP's wearin white at ur FUNFERALL/oops/I mean Funeral/Playin "Bottlez of Liquor"/ Preachers reciten Apacalypse/ Dave ur not sayin shhh/while i freestyle from my lips/Mac'd down and shhh/I'm ur female pimp/while u makin me papers/Wearin skirts and slips/Balls saggin to the tip/Show and proove/this here iz 4 ur benifit/now practice ur spit/I'll be waitin 4 our revival/ur attempts better be mental/some off the wall type shhh/If ur not feelin the blaze/get out of my bizness.

Just Blaze! h're we go!

  

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82. "RE: Alternate Battle:Chaste_Souls vs. Dave: Round 1"
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Dave? iz ur Tombstone carved with 703(july03)/or call
911/Cause ur Hitten the bottom/Grave diggin ur drop-in/6ft
Deep/While im counting sheeps/OKP's wearin white at ur
FUNFERALL/oops/I mean Funeral/Playin "Bottlez of Liquor"/
Preachers reciten Apacalypse/ Dave ur not sayin shhh/while i
Freestyle from my lips/Mac'd down and shhh/I'm ur female
pimp/while u makin me papers/Wearin skirts and slips/Balls
saggin to the tip/Show and proove/this here iz 4 ur
benifit/now practice ur spit/I'll be waitin 4 our revival/ur
attempts better be mental/some off the wall type shhh/If ur
not feelin the blaze/get out of my bizness.

Just Blaze! h're we go!

  

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84. "word."
In response to Reply # 82


  

          

while you busy postin your verses twice, spittin nonsensical chatter/
i'm slicin ya screenname off the msg board, spittin out bits of cadavers/
of wack rappers and actors,/
and actresses in your case/
you wanna *fuck* with the champ, we can take it to the mattress, maybe then you can save face/
just know ya place,/
cuz honestly, you couldnt see me if you did something retarded/
like tattooed my likeness on the insides of your eyelids
i'm a hybrid/ with the mic device kid, and it translates to the keys, now/ please refrain from statin my name, you lame/
after this you should be afraid to even breathe loud/
much less spit another verse, i'm thinkin a forfeit is in order/ better yet post your next shit 3 times, so i'll have more bullshit to slaughter!!

  

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Chaste_Souls
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89. "RE: word. Chaste vs. Dave Round: 2"
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Finally you awake/ had to post twice with ROUND 1 to put your eyelids open/ As I watch you choken on 50's Dik/ you TRICK/21 dayz til payback/Now break away an reTREAT/ An keep rehearsin ur Harlem Shake/ Reciting "THEEEZZ ARE THE BREAAAKZ" witcha old time flava/Holdin back for 4 dayz/You had ONE shot at the Crowne/ WHO SHOT YAH??/ Yeah Chaste Blew up your ground/Ur feet will never have pavement/Post-pone anotha Battle/I'll End Ur Account with OkPlaya/No body can save yah/Go study ur game/and eat rapmints/UR last breath iz lethal.

  

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122. "hmm."
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lethal is as lethal does and you aint doin a damn/
cap locking your fucking phrases wont help you in a jam/
you not even competition, your mc card is revoked, your rhyme scheme is horrible,and sorry but/ your punchline game is a joke,/
you just a low tier emcee, extra basic,
a punching bag, and just for the record/
you prolly spent a few minutes before posting your shit looking for loopholes and exits/
clicking on the edit/ and inboxing the mods for respite
i chased souls out every battle i been in, i'm warning you, dave is on some next shit...

  

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123. "RE: Not Enough"
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Dave got one last shot//and/ still couldn't drop/A hard beat off the top still couldn't help his props/Chasing Souls??/Ha!/try again if ur ready to fry in hell/Ur a Disappearing Act/Wesly Snipes double/cracked up and in trouble/I never hit a man be4/the rythm of my ism//knocked u down on the floor//Bold, Caps, Locks Ur words will need more Italics/Oh/ better yet go back to grammar school/Rule number one don't include this battle//I refuse to over advance my unph/ That U couldn't handle //So be blissed//The Final Status of this//U are Dismissed.

  

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151. "RE: Chaste_Souls VS. dave: Round 3"
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(Biggie Smalls "Love the Doe" Tracks this rap rythm)

"hmm" dave's last breath/last words/last chance to riddle/calling me a punching bag when his hands been sustained and critical/strokin keys with his toes//ingrown toenails gave the keys a stroke//Now the fun is over/let me slap this ho//Yeah I searched for loop-holes and exits//cause ur words were to effectionate//wasn't hurtin my Soul/Chaste is az PURE az the meaning//when ur name has no definition//This is now my "Love the Doe" remix>>>play> "I Love ta Grow"/Cut ur name out the hall of PLAYA//Put u back in tha shelf/cause/OKAY is not O.K. with u overstayin ur welcome//Doors been opened now step out if ur clever//U's a wack emcee//Ur MY! practice demo//U'll be rewinding<<<this shhh until u pop the PLAYA//Fuk a bed//If u had a chance to enter these lips//u'd would damage ur head cause ur brain is spermless/ Ur better off dreaming of some next type shhh...ur battling rep. Couldn't live to see u drown in ur own spit//Lethal is as Lethal doesn't//Ur not as Great as the Chaste script is cuzzin//Ur an Actor tryina play a hard role//U couldn't read me if I donated my DNA to a Laboratory for DUMMIES/This is LIVE!/Speak with intelligence or get injected back ta yah pinnacle...this shh is mental/ Ur pro-nounced___________________________________________________________________. RIP Dave Round 3

  

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184. "lets wrap this up."
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ahem, a rather late but special delivery
i did my best to be courteous and drop some fkn chilvary
and offer you a way out but you way out on your own tits
but the thuth of the matter is that you flatter wack rappers with that clone shit
that you spittin in your posts, ramblin bout chasteness and startin shit/
the sheer weakness of your name got us stuck in the alternates/
but i sucker punch your confidence, cuz i been rhymin since the embryonic stage, phased out mcs twice as skilled as you before i was walking age,
and if the way that i proceed to rock this
battle/
makes me obnoxious/
i can live with that definition, i spit bars thats laced with toxic-
sis, i'm sick with the diction and got a predeliction to squat over your rhymebook and shit at the same time while im pissin,
listen, i'm all for equal opportunities and women in the workplace but if you speak before you think chances are you get the gasface,
you extra soft like pornons that dont show no penetration, bein a "newbie" and a girl is no excuse for this garbation...

  

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DivineVersatile
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12. "VOTE FOLDER!!"
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All votes go here. Please specify which battle you are voting on....and which round in the battle you are commenting on.

MAKE SURE YOU VOTE IN A BOXING FORMAT! (meaning 10-9, 10-8 or 9-9 for a draw)

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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13. "A comment..."
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What about the inevitable 10-7 round.... ya feel me on this?

Pappa

  

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14. "If I see too many 10-7 rounds..."
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I'm going to start thinking shit is suspect. 10-8 should do.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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150. "i dont get that shit"
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wtf does shit like 9-8 mean or 10-9?
is it an individual grading (like 1-10) for each?
i just who I thought won


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Chaste_Souls
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158. "RE: Ezzsential vs. Rajeniro757: Round 1 Vote"
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10-9

Ding!!

  

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Spread
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31. "yo DVS I'm hard-headed"
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just to be clear, should we vote for each round or wait until the battle is done? just making sure it's round by round and not all three rounds together.

yep

  

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37. "as the rounds are finished...vote on them..."
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I'm thinking about just putting up a voting thread...'cause this one could get messy...considering how I added the Time vs. Anthology battle last.

Oh...and for the record...Time is a grizzled veteran. Thanks for show up, Mr. Parker.

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46. "RE: as the rounds are finished...vote on them..."
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Bartek and MayoKing

1st round-Mayo wins 10-9
2nd round-Tek wins 10 to 8
3rd round-Mayo wins 10 to 9

both cats didnt really bring it in my opinion, gotta get off the gay and ass disses fellas, it was coo but could have been alot better, peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Ezzsential
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73. "demon's verses were dope!"
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axis's were too!
ric u were holdin it also..
aight.. since im the only female..
ima spit!
-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Ezzsential
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114. "mayoking"
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took it.. but it was close tho

-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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35. "1st round so far"
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I got Mayoking over Bartek 7-6
I got instant axis over JKJ 7-6
and the hottest battle so far?
round 1: Alex over Demon 9-8
round 2: Demon over Alex 9-8
yall both kicked ill first verses and then flipped each other's even better. the way it supposed to be done.

yep

  

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36. "also"
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Time over theAnthology 8-7
it was close, but Time just had more to it although I liked the anthology's flow better
and round 2 between Mayoking and Bartek goes to Bartek 6-5

yep

  

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54. "I did that shit all wrong"
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chnge all those scores to 10-9; No one really had a knockout blow.

yep

  

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38. "damn...."
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im officially a Demon fan... homeboy is off the bricks!!! hahha...

laxed

  

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52. "InstantAxis vs. JKJ"
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Round 1: 10-7 Axis
Round 2: 10-8 Axis
Round 3: 10-9 Axis

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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jayare214
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67. "jkj/ax -ax wins 3rds-0"
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round 1 10-8 AX

i give to ax both for the strenght of his punches and the frequency. from a lyricissts perspective his words were tighter,

jkj:

"y's the sista, z the motha
a mathematical verse
equation'a common sense
as J approaches K approaches J"

wheras i understand the play on axis i feel like this opeining without real punches hurt you. you ended stronger than you began but i gotta give it to ax clearly,

RD2 10-7 ax

jkj: you lacked punches all the way thru your verse and you commitment to that simplistic and unimaginative rhyme scheme handcuffed you into spitting lackluster.

ax:
suspect looks second round shook, you better speed up the process, this is only 3 rounds and 2 got Ax winnin regardless/im heartless pick apart ya carcass, spark the spliff cause J is just a smokescreen for my target/nothin to hit not equipped Ax would be better off battlin miracleric/:

and he called that garbage. more punches in this than in all of jkj's and he ended with a COLD one (no diss to mric) but DIZAMN!!!



rd. 3 10-9-Ax

AX:first 2 rounds in the pocket, cats would need a telescope to see how far back is ya optics/diagnostic just not up to par, ya droppin bogies in sand traps while im eagle smokin cigars/vulcan spock arms metal stamina grabbin ya, how you expect to think when i basically trampled ya cabbage bra

WHAT THE FUCK???? this is the point when the referee stops the fight cuz the other fighter is not defending himself.....
but for shits and giggles

jkj:FINALLY you came with some stingers in that last....i felt like had you done this the whole battle would have been much close....much more respectable here....too littel too late....

gotta go with ax 3-0

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53. "BarTek vs. MayoKing"
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Round 1: 9-8 Mayo
Round 2: 9-8 Tek
Round 3: 10-9 Mayo

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...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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75. "RE: BarTek vs. MayoKing"
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bartek got destroyed.

in all honestly i didnt think you had verses for the frist two rounds playa, in the 3rd it read like verse and i dug the punches. Im weird but it gotta read like a verse for me to feel it or not....

my scorecard:

rd 1 - mayo 10-7
rd 2 - mayo 10-7
rd 3 - 10-8

cat was just outdistanced...
3rd round knockout

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76. "RE: BarTek vs. MayoKing"
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hah! i kno you ain't forget bout our confrontation righ??? you still carry the scar...

peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Demon
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55. "MiracleRic over Alias 10-9 1st round"
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I dunno if I'm doing this right, but MiracleRic slayed Alias, but it wasn't a KO or nuthin. Just better rhymes.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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56. "MayoKing over BarTek 10-9 Round 1"
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But neither one of them was really tight.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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57. "MayoKing over BarTek 10-9, Round 2"
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BarTek, wtf was that? Poetry?

MayoKing should be an easy mark, but BarTek can't get the cowry shells out his mouth.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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58. "MayoKing over BarTek 10-9 in round 3"
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BarTek actually made more than one line rhyme, but halfway thru he went all Saul Williams and shit

This was MayoKing's best round, but that ain't really saying much.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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59. "InstantAxis over JKJ 10-9 in round 1"
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Solid verse from Axis, aided by the fact that JKJ was spitting nerdish gobbledeegook.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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60. "InstantAxis over JKJ 10-9 Round 2"
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It was almost 10-8, but I thought JKJ's verse was funny. Not really that tight, but it was funny.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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61. "Instant Axis over JKJ Round 3, 10-9"
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Axis took this in straight sets. This was JKJ's best round, but he wasn't talkin' 'bout shit, so he got took.

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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62. "syllabicdivinity over Spread 10-9 round 1"
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Spread's verse was decent, but syllabic went above and beyond the call of duty. He clowned like every LINE of that shit!

Welcome to torture.

<--We miss you Granville. You, and Dave Corzine

  

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Demon
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63. "Spread takes syllabic 10-9 round 2"
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Syllabic's verse was nice, but Spread's first two lines set the tone for the whole battle. Decent flows.

Welcome to torture.

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Demon
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64. "Time over Anthology 10-9 round 1"
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This was a close call. Time started out hot, but it lost a little as it went on. Ant started out flat, but it got hotter as it went on. Both of y'all earned my respect, though. I can only say that for 1 or 2 other motherfuckers in this shit.

Welcome to torture.

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MiracleRic
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65. "Instant Axis vs. JKJ"
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Round 1: 9-7 Axis
Round 2: 10-7 Axis
Round 3: 9-8 Axis

easy win by instant axis

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66. "Demon vs Alexathens"
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Round 1: 10-9 Demon
Round 2: 10-8 Demon

unless a Miracle appears this seems to be well in Demon's hand (i think Demon is an alias for someone else i once half-battled, i just noticed the similarities, cool ish though)

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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103. "RE: Demon vs Alexathens"
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3rd round also a 10-8 to Demon, good battle overall but demon just overpowered him, where alex seemed to stray from battle tactics and got stuck on the history debate

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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68. "DEMON over alexathens 10-9 in Round 1"
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69. "Demon over alexathens 10-9 in Round 2"
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104. "RE: alexathens over Demon 10-9 in Round 3"
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that's right, the greek kid wins the round. why? cuz he brought
real knowledge to the table
(i can vouch, i know lots of greeks)
so Demon wins the overall but only because he's more consistent.

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70. "RE: VOTE FOLDER!!"
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Rnd1: Mric over Alias: 10 - 9

BarTek vs MayoKing,
All 3 won by Mayo. This was the weakest shit I ever spit. I was experimenting with diff flows and methods here. This wans' tmy usual style cause cats ain't ready yet but Mayo, good win, I wanna get at ya again after the tourney is over or after you're out. peace dun.

Ax vs J
Ax came nice as usual on some laid back type ish. only round 2 had a bit of extra fire to beat j. All 3 won by Ax.
10 - 9
10 - 7
10 - 8

Syll vs Spread
This is a nice battle no doubt. Spread started of wit some nice fire:

"I compress MCs like MP3s so the space you take is really null"

"I seen your bloodstains in five buroughs, what you supposed to be taggin'?"

Syll came back wit style and put Spread on the bench wit his verse.

"and all that blood your findin yeah it’s mine the product of dedicated penmanship… you ain’t sayin shit "

and this line by spread didn't help him either:
"You threatening like Richard Simmons in a bunny suit"

done did it.

1: 10 - 9 Syll

Round 2 was a diff story. Syll came too laid back underestimatin Spreads versatility and paid for it. this was a classic slapping, and spread dind't let up for a second. started of a bit weak wit that mama line but than just buried s yll.

2: 10 - 8 Spread

Demon vs alex

This is mos def the hottest battle so far. Demon started of ripping with straight heat but alex stepped up major and sent demon back to the underworld wit a black eye.

1: 10 - 9 alex

alex got stomped in the second verse, wasn't even close.

1: 10 - 8 demon

Time vs Ant
I woulda have gived it to Time if he dropped a few more lines. Ant brought more punches and less of the self glorifying Time did.

1: 10 - 9 Ant

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80. "syll vs spread."
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>Syll vs Spread

"and so you’re abraham now, huh… well that must make me the burning bush… now go kill your kid you fuckin sheep and hurry i’m in a rush"

Spread brought some heat no doubt, but syll rose above the call of duty and sent Spread 500 ft outta the park. Spread threw a nice fastball but syll connected dead centre. that was my favorite round from this battle tourney so far.

10 - 7 syll over spread, knockout.

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111. "RE: VOTE FOLDER!!"
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Demon vs alex

demon won by the sheer fact that he threw punches, alex had a nice rhyme scheme but he was battlin Turkey instead of Demon. Demon made a reference to the foundation of knowledge and struck a nerve in alex who wouldn't let up until 3/4 of his final verse was over.

3: 10 - 9 to Demon

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113. "ric's verses kinda turn me on =X"
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yo.. i knew u had it in u babybwoy
u straight RIPPED all three verses no doubt!


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
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lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
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81. "Spread vs. syllabicdivinity"
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Round 1 goes to syllabicdivinity 10-9
Round 2 is a draw, both were alright, but neither really stood out, so 9-9
Round 3 goes to syllabicdivinity 10-9, this round Spread brought it, and syllabic followed suit

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83. "Miracle ric vs. Alias round 1 9-9"
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i call it a draw 9-9

alias did come out a little rusty but was hot at the end

ric picked up on that but didn't push it for the win

  

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85. "RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias round 2 8-10"
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i call it a knockdown for alias 10-8.

ric was spittin a nice flow and connectin shit with good metaphors but then used the same type of line with that whole
nut thing at the end. it either seemed forced or maybe just old.

alias was into this one and was solid and kept it movin the whole
way through, and went for the throat.

<Its only Round 2>
<& I got this kid on blast>
<Musta learn 2 rap from JLO cuz his rhymes-so-ASS>

hotness right there

not to mention he succesfully mocked ric on the subject line

  

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117. "RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias round3 10-7"
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i give this to ric with the knockout punch.

i had him hurt, but i thought that Alias' was a little lackluster. the lines didn't hit me as good as ric's

which was dense to the point and didn't mince any words whatsoever.


  

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118. "27-26 ric"
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i had alias with a knockdown in the 2nd but ric came back with
some dense shit. and it felt like he concentrated what alias was
trying to come with(although i did like that j-lo line)but ric countered with puffy so fair is fair.

  

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163. "RE: Miracle ric vs. Alias: Round 3"
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"flip ALIAS's from Anna Mae to Tina
I'm the Ike Turner mic burner" haha!! Orighty

That was punchline and direct

M ric VS. Alias

10-8

  

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86. "Bartek V. MayoKing 9-10"
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i'd make this a 10-9 win for mayoking

bartek went a little too heavy on the mayo in that first verse

mayo through took out his knife and showed him how to spread it.

i would of called it a knockdown but i didn't this line worked the
way it was intended to.

<<it was tight, cuz my pen-is flow as thick as my dick>>

  

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87. "RE: Bartek V. MayoKing rnd2 9-9"
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i call it a draw

i wasn't particularly feelin either verses. Barteks flow was just
off as far as i could read.

It read like mayo was playin the defensive mode a little bit in that round

  

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88. "RE: Bartek V. MayoKing Rnd3 10-9"
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i call this 10-9 bartek to make it a draw

i didn't think either really dented the other
it was tit for tat

mayo could of pulled it off with a better verse

but a win for bartek is what i call this one.

  

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90. "Draw"
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92. "Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd1 10-8"
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I think JKJ knocked himself down on that one

  

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93. "RE: Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd2 10-8"
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once again tryin to beat the ignorance out of him, but the kid
gets all bloodied up and then knocks himself out again.

  

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94. "RE: Instant Axis v. JKJ Rnd2 10-8"
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need i say more, this kid Gave himself the TKO and AX kept pummeling when he could squeeze one in between J's self inflicted
jabs.

  

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95. "30-24"
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yo

  

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96. "Spread v. Syllabic Rnd1 9-9"
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both flexed they styles i would like to see syllabic not focus
so much on replyin to everything spread said.

  

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97. "RE: Spread v. Syllabic Rnd2 9-10"
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Syllabic ripped it up pretty alright i didn't like that rhymin out route out unless he was gonna develop a little pattern. but
i give him the win cause he had the better verse and spread was just too full of himself, too cocky.

one question though....How do you sacrifice an "Immortal bitch"?

  

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98. "RE: Spread v. Syllabic Rnd3 7-10"
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i'll call that a 10-7 and i didn't think i was gonna post one
but spread played this one wrong with the strategy and got out
gamed by syllabic.

syllabic stood over spread and said "you got knocked thaaa FUCK OUT!!!!!!!"

  

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99. "29-25 syllabicdivinity"
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100. "syllabic vs spread"
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Round 1: close but syllabic takes this one 10-9
Round 2: a knockdown for sure in this one, Spread takes round 10-8
Round 3: i liked both verses a whole lot, they cancelled each other out well, 10-10

if syllabic hadnt slacked that 2nd round it wouldve been even harder to judge...this battle and Demon and Alex battle are the best two and hardest to judge, i saw someone say that syl won the 3rd round with a KO and i had to reread the ish, i was confused, the punchlines in here were hilarious, Syl had some quality retorts, but good defense doesnt always allow a good offense there were some memorable punches though:

"but twice as nice especially when it comes time to twist the mental versa vice /" - syl
"The third will be for birds to eat your carcass, I'm the darkest
Funkier than Hatian armpits showering in the dripping water from a can of Starkist" -Spread...LMAO
"Aside from the fact you about as divine as David Koresch
With the rhythm of John Tesch and the strength of leper flesh
You as fresh as the moldy, cheesy substance secreting from the cleavage of your 500lb. mamma's breasts" spread
"I'm burly like dykes with chili bowls and firearms
You'll run this shit when 3-6 mafia starts singin' choir songs" spread
"it’s detrimental enter the mental and deal with the hand i dealt you… even your girl told me “last time you fucked spread’s mind that deep, I swear I felt you” /" syl...LMAO




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102. "RE: VOTE FOLDER!!"
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ok, here they are all together,

Alias vs. MiracleRic

1 miracle 10-8
2 Alias 10-9
3 Aliias 10-8

Bartek vs MayoKing
1. Mayo 10-8
2. Mayo 10-9
3. Mayo 10-8

Instant Axis vs JKJ
1 axis 10-8
2. jkj 10-9
3 axis 10-8

Syllabidicdivinity vs spread
1 syllib 10-9
2 spread 10-8
3 syllib 10-9

  

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105. "MiracleRic over Alias 10-8 in Round 1"
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ric dominated this round, it's that simple

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106. "RE: MiracleRic and Alias draw 9-9 in Round 2"
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this should really be 10-10, i loved both of y'alls verses in this one,
Alias surprised me and Ric gave me a shout-out (well, sorta)

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107. "RE: MiracleRic over Alias 10-9 in Round 3"
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there was Round 2, and then there was this...
neither one a ya impressed me too much here, Alias slipped back to Round 1 form
and Ric toned his fire down 'stead of going for the jugular

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108. "Instant Axis over JKJ 10-9 Round 1"
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Ax starts choppin the tree..

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109. "RE: Instant Axis over JKJ 10-8 Round 2"
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for some reason, while reading JKJ's i heard that one song by em with the weak verses
'first off you don't know Marshall, so bitch don't go grow partial/Saturday thru Sunday Monday, Monday thru Sunday yo'
so while JKJ was slowin his beat down, Ax was rocksteady

Ax almost done cutting the tree..

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110. "RE: Instant Axis over JKJ 10-8 Round 3"
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JKJ brought some to the table but Ax won it with
<from scrimmage the vintage antique spinnach equipment easily clinches victory over ya dim wit division>
not sure if it makes sense but it flows off the tongue no doubt
TIMBER!!!

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115. "RE: VOTE FOLDER!!"
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1st round-Ric 10-8 too easy for Ric, i saw the rust in Alias
2nd round-Alias 10-8- very strong come back for Alias, Ric didnt put much out there
3rd round-Ric 10-8-it was all Ric, basically smashed it here

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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116. "miracleric vs. alias"
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Round 1: 9-8 Ric
Round 2: 10-9 Ric
Round 3: 10-8 Ric

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
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119. "Time vs. Anth round 1"
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10-9 Anth...i like a good ending way better then a good beginning, anth's ending had me dying laughin too, that shit was hilarious, this was a close one though

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121. "Tek vs Mayo"
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rnd 1: mayo 10-9
rnd 2: draw 10-10 this was a mud slug-fest
rnd 3: mayo 10-9 still nothing tooo impressive by either but this line had me rofl, i dunno why but it basically won the round to me

"Foundry, no bound'ries in this Bar fight
your vocal jabs leave audience cringin' like albinos in sunlight"

shit still funny yo, i dont know where u came up with that shit

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136. "demon vs. alexathens"
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Round 1: 10-9 demon
Round 2: 10-9 demon
Round 3: 10-9 demon

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137. "jayare vs. lucky"
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round 1: 10-9 jayare
round 2: 10-8 jayare
round 3: ???
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138. "spontaneous vs mag30"
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round 1: 9-9 draw
round 2: ???
round 3: ???

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161. "RE: Aight...You can vote on our battle now"
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we've done all 3 rounds.

It takes years to become an overnight success...

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176. "RE: spontaneous vs mag30"
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Round 2: 9-8 Spontaneous
Round 3: 10-8 Spontaneous

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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139. "dave vs chastesoul"
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round 1: 9-8 dave
round 2: 9-8 dave
round 3: ???
((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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177. "RE: dave vs chastesoul"
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round 3: 9-7 dave


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...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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140. "ezzsential vs ranjeniro"
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round 1: 9-8 ezzsential
round 2: ???
round 3: ???
((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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141. "dave vs. Chaste_Souls"
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dave 10-9 Round 1
dave 10-9 Round 2
? Round 3

whoever wins this, remember to abide by AB-BA-AB in the future...

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185. "yeah. i know."
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i posted my first reply and next thing i know there was another verse from her up there.

*shrug*

  

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186. "RE: yeah. i know."
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Dave you hot pa, had a good time spitten on you...I mean with you. ~~~

  

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187. "oh, no doubt!"
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's all love in the end.

  

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188. "RE: dave vs. Chaste_Souls"
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Alright, we'll call it a draw. (Come back here and take what's coming to ya! I'll bite your legs off!)
yeah, so i'ma call 3rd round a draw cuz Arthur said so...

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142. "jayare vs lucky"
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this is a close one, interesting battle

so far...
rnd 1: lucky 10-9 lucky callin the matrix rhymes unoriginal was the best strategy here, both had pretty good verses but lucky not only discredited jay's first verse but came with some good offense too
rnd 2: draw 10-10 jayare could've had this but didnt really do too much, lucky also came with some humor here too, both verses were solid, but jay's started out a lil cliche but ended strong, u could tell jay was heating up

rnd 3 is going to decide it and jayare came pretty strong, the worst that could happen right now for lucky is a draw, but jay's verse against a weak verse could make a KO, this should be an interesting 3rd round

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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145. "RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3"
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rnd 3...just as i said jay's verse would KO a weak verse by lucky, and lucky's weak verse reered its ugly head and so jay takes this round with a 10-8...i was feeling this battle, yo luck, u came with it, but u shouldnt have felt pressured after 2 solid verses...jayare takes battle 29-28

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146. "RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3"
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Hey, 1 point is pretty good for a guy who ain't a battlist.. I do this ish for fun, I never said I was any good at it. I only get hot at about line 40 or 50, =P

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Lab-rynth, filled with,
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Caught glances of windows-
Peeking OUT, exoflective,
Invective messages left on my own voice mail..
And by looking out from within?

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147. "RE: jayare vs lucky rnd 3"
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no doubt, ur first 2 verses were ill yo, u dont seem out of place as a battler either

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143. "m-ric and alias"
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rd 1 ric 10 -7
rd 2 ric 10-7
rd 3 ric 10-8

rd 1:
look how quick i change an ALIAS to kNOwONE
my hay-wired trapeze steez shows Im a showman
ur poetic pussy punches perhaps need a slogan
here goes: "Ric rips foes lips like the shirt of Hogan"

DAMN playa....thats hard.....

rd 2:
He's surfin, Ric battle in third person
even leavin bomb threats burstin
dispersin MiracleRic's packets of Mayo(KING)
i lay bro (Alias now a box spring)
Ayo,
u do know this here is a battle
not some prose about the traits of ur shadow
i suppose ur pose is to keep clean ur nose
i must impose, intrude
its funny how ur adams apple dont protrude

there was nothing in any of alias's verses so far to fuck with this here. the battle isnt just about original quips its also about hot writing and use of rhyme, and ric you definitely seem to agree with me.
alias. hearty effort....

rd 3:
alias showed the best of the match....but still came up short....

overall:

alias....you never got out of poetry and into hi
-j

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154. "Time vs ThaAnthology"
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Time 10-9 Round 1
Anthology 10-9 Round 2
Time 10-9 Round 3

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167. "Spontaneous v. Mag30 30-27"
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i'll go with

round 1: 10-9
round 2: 10-9
round 3: 10-9

i thought that spontaneous' flows were tight the whole battle,
except for that back to back fear line that he tried to use.
but he stayed on topic and it felt like mag's concepts took a little
too long to develop and he got lost in his own world.

  

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168. "jayare214 v. lucky187 28-26"
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Tue Jul-08-03 08:25 PM

  

          


round1: 9-9
round2: 10-8
round3: 9-9

i thought that luck just dropped off a little in the second verse
and jayare, oppurtunistically, came a little stronger.

  

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171. "Alias vs. Miracleric"
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Round 1: ric 10-9
Round 2: ric 10-9
Round 3: ric 10-9

Alias wasn't bad, just didn't have the punchlines and humor of ric's

yep

  

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172. "jayare vs. lucky"
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Round 1: Jayare 10-9
Round 2: Jayare 10-8
Round 3: Jayare 10-9

lucky almost got the last round, but fell off towards the end. nice yall

yep

  

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173. "Mag30 vs. Spontaneous"
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Spontaneous 10-9 all rounds

Mag dropped a real nice third verse, though it was hard to tell what the fuck he was talking about and spontaneous exploited it well.

yep

  

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174. "alexathens vs. demon"
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Round 1: Alex 10-9
Round 2: Demon 10-9
Round 3: Alex 10-9

At first I thought alex was gonna give up his free shot by dropping too much history, but he kept going and broke it all down. Demon had a hot first 2 rounds but the 3rd verse didn't develop any kind of rhyme scheme till the last half. Nice battle though

yep

  

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175. "dave vs. chaste souls"
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Round 1: dave 10-9
Round 2: dave 10-9
Round 3: ??? dave didn't kick a vers but chaste did 2?

yep

  

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178. "Bartek VS MayoKing"
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Round 1
MayoKing10-9
---Tek's verse was coo......till I read Mayo's verse......Mayo smashed it.....

Round 2
Bartek 10-9
---Tek killed it....longer and stronger in this round.....heat

Round 3
Draw 9-9
---Both had real sic punches and lines.......even....both ended real strong......but just too close

OVERALL
Draw 28-28
--Nice battle folks.......

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

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179. "Instant Axis VS JKJ"
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Round 1
Axis 10-8
--Axis came real hard......JKJ had a cool theme goin on but not enough to defend from that Instant Ax from Ax

Round 2
Axis 10-8
--What the f...?? JkJ just suiciding.....that verse was.....Axis killed it....whatever

Round 3
Axis 10-9
---Axis killed it again....battle's over.....JKJ came his strongest this round but still came up short...valiant effort...

OVERALL
Axis 30-25
---Uneven match.....Axis too much for JKJ......

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

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180. "Jayare VS Lucky 187"
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Round 1
Jayare 10-9
---Real close round...I almost voted it as a draw.....Jay came with real ish....and Lucky came wit some too.....good battle so far....real close

Round 2
Jayare 10-9
---Lucky's comin nice wit it.....but Jay did too with a longer verse......had some funny lines too.....felt that one...

Round 3
Lucky 10-9
---Lucky won that round.....he had some funny ass lines in there....close but he got the edge


Overall
Jayare 29-28
---this almost went as a draw.....the first round decided this match....it was real close......I felt that Luck couldve came harder but Im aware that he didnt have time and I know he writes his ish in like 5 minutes anyways...this was a fun match....big ups yalls......Peace

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181. "Spread VS Syllabicdivinity"
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Round 1
Draw 9-9
---Both was sic.....punches to punches.....that was fun to read....I like this....

Round 2
Spread 10-9
---Syllab tried to switch it...and it turned out better....it was easier to read and flowing but Spread came strong...had hella funny lines in that round....haha.....

Round 3
Draw again 9-9
---I almost gave it to Syllab...but I was feeling both verses....both just swingin away...damn....best battle so far.....

Overall
Spread 28-27
---Real damn close but that 2nd round funked up Syllab.....he came wit something but Spread just real strong wit the punchlines...this was a siC battle...ha!....One

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183. "RE: dave vs. chaste souls"
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"Not Enough" Titled, wasn't a battle verse...I'm not guilty like R.kell.

  

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182. "Miracle Ric vs Alias"
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Wed Jul-09-03 09:26 AM

  

          

Round 1: Ric 10-9
round 2: Alias 10-9
Round 3: Alias 10-9

Just how i see it! I don't have 20/20 so don't have a fit over the shit!

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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15. "Moderator's Whim Battle: Time vs. ThaAnthology"
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Thanks for the love, Ant! Have at you!

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

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16. "I'll spark...."
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But Moderators get dealt with too.. Your too light from this confrontation...
Best Bet is kill yourself and save whats left of your reputation...
Cause Time is just that.. Unescapable.. low in patience...
I date raped your destiny and your fate is a hoe in waiting...
Basically Im hate and channeled reason seasoned by age...
I was out thinking you before you were thought of..How can I phrase it...
Your Too Weak - I'm Two Weeks of knowledge crammed in a day...
Your name is man made... I existed way before man was made...

Anthology:
a collection of selections
that werent worth thier own book...

Your existence_
a persitence of memories
that werent worth thier own life...

Two Bodies of knowledge I couldnt put behind bars or rephrase
Your whole element is a gas that nature needs to rephase
Fuck being poetic.. When I run up in the coffe house you getting pelted...
I'll beat you to death with the stereo you sterotype yourself with...
Im selfish.. You should quit reading and sell fish
Your last CD was on the shelf until the shelf melted
Im hells 12 inch!!!
Spinnning Death for any challenge that met
But your revoltion will not be televised
because your already dead

  

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24. "RE: I'll spark...."
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Time, you rhyme like
a nocturnal secretion
a masturbation exhibitionist
Boo hiss
Ya juvenile like Lil Wayne step cousin
You got plenty of time to spit
once you wake up from the concussion
contusions beat about ya head, neck and shoulders
just nod ya dome, work on ya shit, come back when ya older
Scolding the lil one with scalding hot venom
destroying your courage
til I dehydrate my adrenaline
Ya coffe house wit amounts to feces conversation
This ain't even a battle
but merely a consultation
Get ya mind right ya style is kinda phallic-like
hard at the beginning, limp at the end-
But I'm positive in ya life you've heard that before
Sexually, I make girls moan
you make 'em snore
But really-- dissin' the God and I'm a smite you
How you battling with a Tanka and a Haiku
What? you waiting for the crowd to snap fingers?
Order a latte, and wait for the guest feature?
This ain't open mic Sun it's fight night, what!
Like OC's first LP
Ya Time's Up.

HA!


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26. "Matta fact"
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Matta fact I'll put an end to your weak regurgitation
A million metaphors without the need for contemplation
You dealing with a cat that's more underground than Zion
Call me Penny's mama-
I'm ill with a hot iron
You battling me is like Canibis with record sales
a friendship with LL
doing a duet for Rock the Bells
It's just your simplistic rudimentary imagination
I'll fix it though- dawg my flow's your castration
I'm Kagero's poison, fuck with me and die
Ya mama keeps my posters on her wall- don't ask why
Just acknowledge the fact- I coulda been ya daddy
But if I was blind crippled and crazy, she couldn't have me
I'm a cranial tattoo-
always on ya mind
I've done the impossible...
I've just stopped Time.

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47. "RE: Matta fact"
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yo man
why you want to be more underground than zion
i mean shit ofcourse keep it real
im sayin though
if you more underground than zion
than aint nobody bout to hear your shit
and by the way man
who in the hell dont want to make a living doing what they love to do
i aint saying sell out
i am saying you should try to make money by doing what you like
anyway
do your thang player


Lef' Hangin' Lower Fo' Life, Nagkle

  

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129. "RE: Matta fact"
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Better late then never- I'll apologize apollo style
and tap dance on your face with soccer kleetz and a borrowed smile...
Fuck Tommorow's child... Time is Dead cause of Time and How??
I killed myself cause God told me to father apocalypse Now.. .
Ressurected like Jesus so its only right that I crucify you...
...havent been gone a week..and look at all these people you telling lies to...
Talking like you live fool?? Bitch you barely survived Highschool!!!
You went to a Slam and got body slammed by some skinny white dude...
You a Racist retarded kid that couldnt run to save his life
If some one ever gave you a mic you'd collapse of stage fright and die...
Your a sad disgrace- Your face is a trap you cant escape
Your Whole sex life is based on a blank black planet page
Your only fan is a folded piece of paper you kidnapped
with a stapler... so it couldnt get away from your bitch ass
Your rhymes are wack.. your unprofessional... your skills are lacking..
..but its okay ..Im back...Im a teach you some Time Management...

  

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130. "Round 3"
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Your an Ant.. Im not your average Picnic.. I'll beat your ass...
I'll Nit Pic at your wackness untill you jump off the over pass...
Your a pseudo poet, battling me doesnt suit your flow...
Whole style is based on using words that YOU dont know...
Metaphorical-Oractorical-....bla..bla.. fucking fight me...
You couldnt kick a simile super glued to your crusty nikes...
You'll never shine behind me- My shadow murders daylight nightly...
The reason why suns die lies between my left and right cheek...
Shit on your writings.. Your Anthology's baby wipes...
Plus you soft like charmon and couldnt come hard on ladies night...
Your punchlines are empty gloves with no body standing behind them...
You had a man in your chest but the bitch in you couldnt find him...
Now all this time you've been using time as a crutch
but Im still here...
Best bet is sever your other leg...
and use my name as a wheel chair...
Set yourself on fire and roll of the nearest cliff...
..cause thats the only way your ever be dropping hot shit....



  

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ThaAnthology
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153. "Sun"
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You battle like Kool Moe Dee thought up ya metaphors/
You got trouble spittin'
rhyming hurts your mouth like cancre sores/
How you dissin' me
ya lil Marvin Martian Cartoon/
Rockin' Marshall Mathers Underoos jockin like Stan do/
Even ya moms can't stand you/
If she swallowed you'd be lifeless/
In this battle, your my secretary Trick, come here and type this.../
I- State your name- apologize to the Anthology/
Battling a veteran with lines composeed sloppily/
With silly putty on my posts Time, you still couldn't copy me/
I'm the very emcee definition of what you try to be/
Half-ass poet, why lie to yourself ya soft as Lentil
printing out my pieces, tracing against 'em like a stencil/
You know you wanna be me you prove it Time and Time again
so bad you spell ya screen name F.A.H.I.M.

Ya not ready homie!
LOL

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Chaste_Souls
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165. "RE: Sun"
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Dayum, SP-4-18 couldn't help this Sun-Burn...Anthology, stop peeling skins.

  

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Chaste_Souls
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166. "RE: Round 3"
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OOOhh, that was nastyyyy

  

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Mag30
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78. "Axis Vs. JKJ"
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10-9 Axis.

i was diggen JKJ's whole math thing though.

  

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NewsiC_NoyC
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Tue Jul-08-03 09:39 PM

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170. "Alias Versus M. Ric"
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Round 1
Miracle Ric 10-8
-----Alias had lenght but no strenght....pretty much said things Ive heard a thousand times against Ric.......

Round 2
Alias 10-9
-----Ric didnt come wit it as hard so he payed the price....Alias best verse
Round 3
Miracle Ric 10-9
----Alias had a long verse, but got killed by that little bomb Ric produced


Overall--Ric with the victory 29-27....nice battle yalls

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

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DivineVersatile
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189. "TABULATING VOTES! ROUND ENDED! NEW BATTLES UP SOON!"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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