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ThaAnthology
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"Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
Thu Jul-31-03 12:44 AM

  

          

Congrats homie!!!! It's your time... shine!
You know how we do it! Post as many joints as you wish and have a ball!!!

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Subject Author Message Date ID
GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
1
*backhandspring*
Jul 01st 2003
23
CONGRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jul 01st 2003
2
waaat!
Jul 01st 2003
3
WORD!
Jul 03rd 2003
35
DO YA THING, G
Jul 01st 2003
4
....thanks so much...
Jul 01st 2003
5
Congratulations
Jul 01st 2003
6
RE: Congratulations
Jul 08th 2003
43
Tethers To Surf
Jul 01st 2003
7
RE: Tethers To Surf
Jul 09th 2003
65
RE: Tethers To Surf
Jul 14th 2003
84
My bad
Jul 26th 2003
111
RE: My bad
Jul 26th 2003
112
RE: Tethers To Surf
Jul 30th 2003
127
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
8
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
10
Struttin' like Mutton
Jul 01st 2003
9
Definitely Deserved....
Jul 01st 2003
16
HH....
Jul 08th 2003
44
RE: Struttin' like Mutton
Jul 02nd 2003
27
..Jumanji
Jul 08th 2003
45
this should be call'd THE QUESTIONS..
Jul 08th 2003
49
yo...
Jul 08th 2003
50
      huh?
Jul 08th 2003
51
           RE: huh?
Jul 08th 2003
52
RE: You wrote:
Jul 09th 2003
66
RE: Struttin' like Mutton
Jul 14th 2003
83
Hm
Jul 26th 2003
113
excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret*
Jul 01st 2003
11
excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret* #2
Jul 01st 2003
26
excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret* #3
Jul 02nd 2003
32
RE: WOW
Jul 09th 2003
67
RE: excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret*
Jul 26th 2003
122
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
12
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
13
Limes (not a haiku)
Jul 01st 2003
14
RE: Limes (not a haiku)
Jul 14th 2003
85
LOL
Jul 26th 2003
114
congrats...n/m...
Jul 01st 2003
15
RE: congrats...n/m...
Jul 08th 2003
46
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
17
delrica
Jul 08th 2003
47
Bout damn time
Jul 01st 2003
18
Blaze..
Jul 08th 2003
48
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
19
snow flow..
Jul 09th 2003
57
use it wisely and congrats nm
Jul 01st 2003
20
mindful...
Jul 09th 2003
58
wrote this today...Inside Out
Jul 01st 2003
21
Feeling it
Jul 26th 2003
115
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
22
nowachaoticthing...
Jul 09th 2003
59
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 01st 2003
24
brown sugs....
Jul 09th 2003
60
the company store
Jul 01st 2003
25
man, ill as always
Jul 02nd 2003
28
RE: the company store
Jul 09th 2003
55
know one...
Jul 09th 2003
61
not sure i get it, but
Jul 15th 2003
93
SHO NUFF!
Jul 26th 2003
116
RE: would've been my choice too...
Jul 02nd 2003
29
muse....
Jul 09th 2003
62
Altitudes
Jul 02nd 2003
30
RE: Altitudes
Jul 16th 2003
97
RE: Altitudes
Jul 26th 2003
117
RE: Bring the Geometry on *winks*
Jul 02nd 2003
31
Sampaguita..
Jul 10th 2003
70
Still, I wonder
Jul 02nd 2003
33
RE: Still, I wonder
Jul 03rd 2003
34
Presyzion.....
Jul 10th 2003
71
RE: Still, I wonder
Jul 17th 2003
98
awww
Jul 26th 2003
118
RE: Still, I wonder
Jul 26th 2003
123
Independence
Jul 04th 2003
36
RE: Independence
Jul 05th 2003
37
Um hm
Jul 26th 2003
119
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 05th 2003
38
Mayo King...
Jul 10th 2003
72
We Wait
Jul 05th 2003
39
RE: We Wait
Jul 06th 2003
40
I'm feeling it
Jul 26th 2003
120
If I Knew Where Home Was
Jul 07th 2003
41
RE: If I Knew Where Home Was
Jul 09th 2003
54
Expectation
Jul 08th 2003
42
RE: Expectation
Jul 09th 2003
63
*WOW*
Jul 09th 2003
53
my friend Otto...
Jul 14th 2003
86
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 09th 2003
56
You Create It, a hip-hop keystyle
Jul 09th 2003
64
Kindling Has Been Gathered
Jul 12th 2003
79
      RE: Kindling Has Been Gathered
Jul 26th 2003
124
my lateness
Jul 10th 2003
68
Who Do I Blame?
Jul 10th 2003
69
RE: Who Do I Blame?
Jul 13th 2003
80
Decades
Jul 10th 2003
73
Illuminati Rap (from tek's anti-war cypher)
Jul 10th 2003
74
RE: Decades
Jul 12th 2003
77
RE: Decades
Jul 13th 2003
81
word.
Jul 15th 2003
92
RE: Decades
Jul 16th 2003
96
damnnnn my bad
Jul 11th 2003
75
Wildout...
Jul 13th 2003
82
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 11th 2003
76
Reef...
Jul 14th 2003
87
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 12th 2003
78
...Toothpick...
Jul 14th 2003
88
Keep Showin' Up
Jul 14th 2003
89
RE: Keep Showin' Up
Jul 14th 2003
90
      sage...
Jul 14th 2003
91
passages
Jul 15th 2003
94
RE: passages
Jul 16th 2003
95
RE: passages
Jul 17th 2003
99
I ache to understand
Jul 17th 2003
100
RE: I ache to understand
Jul 19th 2003
101
RE: I ache to understand
Jul 22nd 2003
102
you just......
Jul 30th 2003
129
RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!
Jul 22nd 2003
103
Fly Eyed Fear Fiends
Jul 24th 2003
104
RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends
Jul 25th 2003
105
RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends
Jul 25th 2003
106
      RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends
Jul 26th 2003
107
           sorry ma'am...
Jul 26th 2003
108
                RE: sorry ma'am...
Jul 26th 2003
109
                     naw...
Jul 26th 2003
110
                          RE: naw...
Jul 27th 2003
125
RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends
Jul 30th 2003
128
A Little Birdie Told Me ...
Jul 26th 2003
121
....when....
Jul 27th 2003
126
      RE: ....when....
Jul 30th 2003
132
For The Road
Jul 30th 2003
130
RE: For The Road
Jul 30th 2003
131
RE: For The Road
Jul 31st 2003
133
nice way to close it....
Jul 31st 2003
134
      I really need....
Jul 31st 2003
135

Sage
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1. "GSQUARED!!!"
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Let me be the first to say Congratulations.. Your work has energy unknown by many....

"To create a thought is devine especially done with spectacular company" - Seyi Awolesi S@ge080219710500(Wordsmith)

My space http://cerebralcausality.wordpress.com/

  

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serpentinefire
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23. "*backhandspring*"
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i am TOO excited about this!!!! *huge grin*
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it would be called something else
like cake...
or pie maybe


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do not be deceived...myra WILL whoop your ass
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KnowOne
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2. "CONGRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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You mos def deserve it....... can wait to read your work....

Keep Flowin'......

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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3. "waaat!"
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Represent! Represent!

-Tp

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35. "WORD!"
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congrats Gsquared u deserve it.. for your dedication and well written peices..
ur time to shine mayun =)



-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Decstar
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4. "DO YA THING, G"
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u deserve it

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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gsquared
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Tue Jul-01-03 04:44 AM

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5. "....thanks so much..."
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...well well well...the most meaningful thing about this is that honestly, no bull, I hadn't written any poetry in years before coming to this site and I truly, literally, owe all of the writing I have done these 9 months or so to all of you, so, giving someone the gift of art and beauty and bearing witness to it is the highest good, so, when I say *thanks* to all of you playas I mean it in the deepest way...





We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mara
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Tue Jul-01-03 04:52 AM

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6. "Congratulations"
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Bring on the poetry. I'm ready to see more of your abstract work.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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gsquared
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43. "RE: Congratulations"
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Tue Jul-08-03 03:16 AM

          

thanks mara, for the kudos..ok, now the poetry's there...


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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7. "Tethers To Surf"
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I corkscrew my feet/knee deep in my earth
got blue eyes that meet you/can you measure their worth?
surprises can speak/and turn tethers to surf
while analyzers retreat/like the feather of sand
magnetic moon speaks/tidesong's demand
landlines stand candidly/playin' the band
randomness climbs/timely sunlit rhymes
a tandem alive/we fittingly derive
our meaning from our pens/and from the vibe that we send
bending realities and/leading friends to gems
we comprehend comprehension/and help relieve the tension
wrenchin' the power/from the ivory tower
by mentioning less/and implying more
we clean up the mess/and reclaim the shore
coring our aura/like fauna and flora
of humanity cleansed.../having made our amends




"balance" is up and we're going to add another new tune or two today, album should be done around the end of the month....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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65. "RE: Tethers To Surf"
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this seemed very romantic...and you have such a way with words...

you started it off so beautifully:I corkscrew my feet/knee deep in my earth
got blue eyes that meet you/can you measure their worth?
*sighs* gsquared...I'm feelin' that!



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Otto
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84. "RE: Tethers To Surf"
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I corkscrew my feet/knee deep in my earth
got blue eyes that meet you/can you measure their worth?
surprises can speak/and turn tethers to surf
while analyzers retreat/like the feather of sand
~~~~~~~~~~

Yes romantic indeed, and clever too...


-Otto

  

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mara
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111. "My bad"
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I finaly got a chance to sit down and read your AOTM work (Yea I now the month is almost over) Usually I'm not one for the "rhyme" but it worked to your advantage. The flow of this was nice and it read real smooth all the way through. Tone was chill and sort of on the "Heed the words of the wise" tip. A real solid piece.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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gsquared
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112. "RE: My bad"
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that's cool, thanks mara :>)




Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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KnowOne
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127. "RE: Tethers To Surf"
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Really like the flow of this piece.


Keep Flowin'.......

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presyzion
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8. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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congratulations, man. this is well deserved--
and i'll be reading and responding.

peace and congrats, again.


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My chapbook, "Exhibits Require Understanding Open Eyes" available from Trainwreck Press: http://www.ditchpoetry.com/trainwreckpress.htm

  

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gsquared
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10. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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thanks man I do appreciate the love...



We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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9. "Struttin' like Mutton"
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They got us struttin like mutton/through the funhouse maze
sometimes it's hazy/or a little bit crazed
hope my station isn't wasted/I don't think with my brain
why don't it ever fuckin rain/why didn't Abel kill Cain
why is shit so lame/why don't they start namin' names
why do people fuck with that Natalie Maynes?
Why ain't Bush ashamed/why does shit stay the same
....man I thank God for John Coltrane
why was Oswald framed/why did they create AIDS
why does Stevie wear shades/why was the lion afraid
what makes a man made/why do edges get frayed
why am I still swimmin in this fuckin marinade?
why did Monk play splayed/why do crunks get laid
why is flounder filleted/why do they have parades
why are trains delayed/why are options weighed
Why do cats gotta lip sync when they go on Soul Train?




We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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HEBREW_HONEY
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Tue Jul-01-03 08:17 AM

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16. "Definitely Deserved...."
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And a little overdue...man you been enlightening me for a while now and i got much Love and Respect for you and what you doing. Not to mention the circles of life you sent me, that's what i call them because it's power in the 360. I cee that everytime i get to check your pieces just 360 degrees of power. Keep expressing and letting loose truth. This piece right here is raw and i don't think i have read this before but i'm feeling the questions especially the last one...Ha Ha mad me laugh. I always wondered why they lip sync on Soul Train...crazy. Keep Shining!

Know Thyself and surroundings to better understand things non-existing and existing, unseen and the seen in order to be able to deal Equality(Equally with all things in life)...Be True to U!

RIGHTEOUS SOULS
Soul Cleansing MuSiCk...LiSing
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gsquared
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44. "HH...."
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..your work has been an insprationa and your acceptance of me has meant a lot to me, thanks so much for being you... :>}

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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27. "RE: Struttin' like Mutton"
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This was dope. Tight flow and some good questions. Congrats on AOTM.

"You can't change the past, but you CAN make the future and anyone who tells you different is a fucking lethargic devil"
-Immortal Technique


משה גידון בן יעקב עיסר

  

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gsquared
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45. "..Jumanji"
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...thanks bro, you were the first person to listen to any of our audio on here and I remember that shit, you're always giving the new cats feedback, supporting...it's great to have you here, much respect to ya and thanks mang...

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Giovanni
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49. "this should be call'd THE QUESTIONS.."
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just like Common's joint.. "why are flounders filleted".. lol
that's cool..

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50. "yo..."
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thanks I can feel the love in the response...there is a poetess w/ your name, that's kind of ironic, but cool...and I wonder if Common was the first person to use that rhyme..?...no way....peace, I get the message and it is in very, very, very poor taste

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51. "huh?"
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i was giving you props on the piece.. oh well..

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52. "RE: huh?"
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seemed to me like you were pointing out the only line in the hundreds I wrote on this thread that you had heard somewhere before...I don't recall you ever responding to anything else I've ever written...seemed like a sincere desire to compliment a cat during his "month" could've been less ambiguous as to it's true intent...I don't consider that particular line to be anything more than a more or less inane but fun sounding stab...far from quotable, by me or common...if I owe you an apology, I sincerely apologize...

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66. "RE: You wrote:"
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Why do cats gotta lip sync when they go on Soul Train?


the whole piece was clever, but I really dug the last line...waaay too many jokes for me to share-lol...





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83. "RE: Struttin' like Mutton"
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Why ain't Bush ashamed/why does shit stay the same
....man I thank God for John Coltrane
why was Oswald framed/why did they create AIDS
why does Stevie wear shades/why was the lion afraid
what makes a man made/why do edges get frayed
~~~~~~~~~~

the reason g, that this appealed to me is:

Why ain't Bush ashamed/why does shit stay the same
....man I thank God for John Coltrane
why was Oswald framed/why did they create AIDS
why does Stevie wear shades/why was the lion afraid
what makes a man made/why do edges get frayed
~~~~~~~~~~

the reason g, that this appealed to me is:

I agree with the politics in the bush remark...that sets a precedant in the piece to me...

John Coltrane seemed a completely random thought...that is what made it "Exciting"...the complete randomness had me asking on edge..."Whats gonna be brought up next"...and yes, i do luv me some coltrane...

True...The whole concept of AIDS being created by "Them"...well, that had me thinking....if nothing else, i feel the passion, and the curiosity behind that line, and it adds an element of..."Oh yes, that is sad" to the post...

why does Stevie wear shades...
why the hell does he???\

what makes a man made>>>at the cost of sounding gay, and i know i will, that line was just cute...i swear im not gay...ok...
but more than congenial, that line posessed a lot of thought catalyzing...like:
By whose sandards in society, are we considered fit, or made...makes me think of all the american societal(if thats a word) b/s thats floating around...all those misconceptions of what a man really is...

what are edges frayed or sumthing like that...i just like that line man...

a lot of great stuff here g...thats why YOU are The Artist Of theMonth...


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113. "Hm"
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The "rhyme" aspect was a little too much for me (Felt a little overdone) I saw where you were going with this though. This line made a sista do one of these numbers "LOL":

>Why do cats gotta lip sync when they go on Soul Train?

That's the same shit I ask myself EVERTIME I watch that show and I have yet to come up with an answer. When you figure it out let me in on the secret yahmean?


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11. "excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret*"
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....yes, of course it can be done, and it could in fact be no other way. The blossoming of the flower knows no particular time frame. As the process begins, it becomes timeless, enduring the constraints of no particular destination, worrying not about the awkwardness inherent in the journey toward *becoming*, the blossom simply is, and it is indeed quite elementary, for simplicity is at the heart of even the most mind-bending complexities. All things emerge into being with the simple shout of "I am!" Though the shout is simple, it is powerful, and it commands instant respect and cooperation from all that it encounters, for the shout of "I am" is a familiar one that tugs at the heartstrings of all who have ears to hear it's warm and familiar resonance. Every attempt at self definition meets the inevitable barrier of asking why, or supposing that it just can't be done, it's too big a task, it all happens too fast, and it's constantly changing. The perspective that is chosen to tell the tale will never be able to capture, in the moment, the intention of the bigger picture, the divine plan that paints upon the canvas of perspective with the light of eternity, the light of differentiation within the oneness of the expanding present.
It's like Jackson Pollack, applying the paint to the canvas with no conscious intent but to *create*, trusting in the process, the process of the divination of the purity of his creative act. Even when an artist of true genius is touched to embark upon the creative highway with a very specific end in sight, she is open to the liklihood that the winds of nowness will blow pell mell upon her original intentions and spray them a little here, a little there, so that she herself can, in the end, marvel at the cooperative effort that her final product has become. The artist is moved beyond description by the higher processes of pure creation, so there should be no problem in reconnecting your nowness with the future, which is just the informed present, after all.
Purity of intention is the pathway to the Secret, and Mr. Pollack knew that there was, in the past, a Guardian of the Secret, and the Guardian took many guises, projected many personas, and served it's purpose for a time. But that time is past, and the Guardian is no more, because in the light of day the shadows that we guard things from are dissolved, they exist no more, and the eternal present is a place bathed in perpetual light, or truth, if you will. The Guardian of the Secret was only us, we ourselves, playing the games that we came to play but, like they sometimes do, playtime got too serious and seemed like reality for a time. That was the secret, that it was all just a game, an eloquent, complex, educational but deceptive game that need not be guarded any longer, for there is no longer any secret to guard.
The blossom bathes in the light, indeed, the blossom helps to define the light, it is an expression of the light that informs all things, but you know that, you only need to remember, you and me, we are great rememberers, like the elephants we never forget and as the memories come back to flood our collective and individual consciousness with the realization that we are in fact the light that dissolves the shadows, automatically and organically, we realize ourselves as roses in bloom, circumventing definition, doubt, and hesitiation. The replacement for the haze that we leave behind is love, loving freedom to know all that is known, to experience all that there is, to grow, to expand exponentially in each moment, to create and to express our nowness with the primal shout of "I am," resonant throughout the cosmic ethers are these multitudinous shouts erasing history and informing the present that the future is here at last, come back to reconnect the essence of eternal oneness to the unbroken chain, a familiar refrain, familial, heart warming, inspiring, beautiful--"I am!"


We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



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"I'm stalling in flight
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Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
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26. "excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret* #2"
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I say to me that I am free, now how can that be? There are no secrets anymore, the word is out, so as we ask ourselves these questions the truth shall let itself be known and it is an all encompassing truth at that, silent no longer, unguarded, the Guardian has been unceremoniously reassigned to the duties of clarity, his secret another grain of sand dissolved in the infintite and eternally churning waters of the essence, the source, the love that is the only truth.
So it could be said that nothing stands between us, you, me, and the facts that have been kept hidden from our view for this time that seems to have been so very long but in reality is just a cosmic sneeze; a lesson learnt, some karma burnt, that is all there is in the future, where the knowledge of eternity is there for all to live, to experience, to embody with grace and dignity and a sense of humor. So creation is easy in the future, once we remember, all of us, once we remember the future, creation will come back to us with the ease that it has always known. It's easy to remember, to put down the veil; there's no longer anybody guarding the facts of our true nature, we have the power now, for knowledge is power and the power is ours, yours and mine. The power is yours to love, to be free again, to allow your unified body to soar throughout the world of your personal creation with the ecstatic certainty of your origin, the loving "I am" presence that permeates all of eternity.
To tell a tale to myself from the future you have to let it flow, says the future me in the now...keep it hip, moving, a gestalt pattern of awareness that defines the edge of the pipeline waves curling into the essences of the moment, the churning heat of the lava beneath the craggy shores of undertow and homage to the creator of the surf, the billowing smoke wafting up above the volcano's incubating wisdom, a sign, a potential, an icon representing the Parthenon of all existence, a song, a symphony, a harmonic convergence of forces incomprehensible but as simple as pie, a sigh; an eagles's eye, the talon of forgiveness, a triumphant rendering of flickering transient eternity, a caricature, a portrait, a vagabond whose home is finally found, a telling reminder, an enticing sound--these are the parameters, the boundaries where none can be found, the sarcophagus unhinged, the sermon on the mount, the parrot that repeat's the verses of destiny, as one at last, churning within the cool inferno at the heart of the volcanic uprising, but a whisper, a softly uttered phrase of nowness that only the cupped ears of the unified can comprehend; the blink of the third eye, the newborn baby's cry, exasperating renewal, the Hawaiian luau at the foot of the moment, breathtaking, life-making, trancelike...essence...cantankerous truth taking shape and form, oscillating, predicting, revising, surmising, clear though shrouded, never lost, and never doubted. The moment is the message, and the messenger is you...and we, in the future, shuttle the news your way on the wings of angels.



We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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32. "excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret* #3"
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It's hard, says eye, to get the news across, it's wings take flight and we wonder if it's out of sight, has it gotten past, is it's relevance but an illusion, some ill-conceived vanity upon which to hang one's hat. There is but a word that harbors the great ships of doubt that churn past one another in the night of nights, under moons so bright that only the sighted can miss them, a word that ushers in the father and embraces the mother with the warmth and joy of a country Christmas dawn, a child's delight, after the night of anticipation has come and gone.
When the earth is your mother, you need not ask where your sustenance be, or what shall become of you when your definitions no longer hold true...the word is trust, trust is the key to unlocking the doors of the Secret. Put intellect and "reason" aside now, says the future as it speaks to me, and trust your mother, the source of what you are, trust that thing, that's what we have to do, and we're all in this thing together, whooshing and ptatatattat galloon treefallying, awash in the ebb and flow of eternity's end game, the spacious now, there can be no other, we all know that, we all remember....now.
The healthy mind disassociates itself from repetitive or profit/control oriented programming and lets the creative Goddess stuff flow from the inside to the surface, or so it seems, to me, using my limited tools to communicate to myself that which is to be transcended, but what is art--and art imitates life--but the joyous celebration of inevitable obsolescence, unless, unless, of course, one's subject is the timeless and, if you stop and think about it, why devote any time to anything other than those things that are timeless. We will never have enough time until we jettison the concept, and your time can be no other's but your own, which is mine as well, and we don't want to hand over our time to other's willingly, it is our intention to seize complete control over our collective time and then connect it with the Secret, which has already been freed because the Guardians thereof (us) no longer have any use for it. One thing about the unleashing of the Secret, though...as above, so below, so we can no longer have any secrets from one another. You can have the contents of my mind, they're free to you, as is known in the future from whence we came--it's all right there for the taking, springing from the fractal macrocosm, enfolded but "as above, so below."
Imagine lying on your back as you vibrate whirring inside like the cells that you are and up the spherical line, on it's axis round and round whirring, whirring around celestial bodies in a whirring universe, the snowflakes big and lazy they waft down upon you layer by layer, over here, over there, softly wavering in the breeze. Your perspective from your back and your aloneness make the scene more real, seems like eternity, or no-time, and you grok in fullness the higher geometry that's implied there, it feels soft, you are fluid, digital at the cusp of the nowness, just an "I am" scoping the universal wholeness, holding down your end, see, but it's the twists, the turns, the spinning whirring that drives the movie, that's the thing to try to define...it's luscious, alluring, hazardous, maddening, it's tragic, it's magic, it's freedom, and bliss, dying in time and defining mind. You just can't do it...so of course you have to try.




We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



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"I'm stalling in flight
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Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
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67. "RE: WOW"
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these three parts were soooo powerful and I'm speechless...the language flowed so easily...my eyes were happy, my soul giggles coz I *remember* ....would make a nice book...



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122. "RE: excerpt from *The Guardian of the Secret*"
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*The Guardian of the Secret* --- 1, 2, & 3 -- Are my favorites in this thread -- Just because of the wisdom an insight laced through~out!

There are "mini~messages" wrapped within the bigger picture here -- And unravelling/unwrapping them was indeed a pleasure! -- *smiles*

I think I'll read them again & again & again once they hit the archives!


(((Touched the Mind, Eyes, & Heart)))



~Thank U~

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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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12. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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definitly gotta say congrats to ya G, youve climbed very quickly at OKP and made quite a foot print, i can see it fam, i can see it, peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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13. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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...thanks mang....



We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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14. "Limes (not a haiku)"
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Somehow...
limes got into my brain

and there was no tequila



We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



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"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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85. "RE: Limes (not a haiku)"
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im glad its not a haiku....

im glad that you wrote it...

its so chill, so random...so clever...i like it a Bunch...

-Otto

  

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114. "LOL"
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Tickled the funny bone (Cliche I know but you get the point)

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15. "congrats...n/m..."
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46. "RE: congrats...n/m..."
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...thanks holister, keep on droppin .....
Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
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Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
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17. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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Congratulations

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

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47. "delrica"
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...we may not agree on everything but we ain't s'posed to, I do appreciate you and thanks for the congrats...onelove

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"I'm stalling in flight
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Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
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18. "Bout damn time"
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You got this and we know you won't disappoint. Congrats!!

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  

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48. "Blaze.."
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..thanks so much for being there, reading everyone's work, and inspiring with your own very unique and visual style...it will be fun to continue to grow together as artists...thanks you....:>)


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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19. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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Job

Snow_Flow

"Who say f*ck the major
labels...Who unsigned and
dead broke can still make
name before they even make a
demo"- Slug from Atmosphere

"Still say f*ck the major
label till it limps, put your
deal up on the table and
we'll show you who the pimp"-
MC Slug

"Songs are nameless, guns are
aimless, how long you been
famous..."- MC SLUG

Sometimes it's darkest just
before dawn.

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"I live in the city, like any other/We all live alone/ The only difference is we don't seem to know it/Frozen and lonesome,When it's cold/ In the summer gotta wait for the loathing" - P.O.S.

  

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57. "snow flow.."
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...thanks for the ups my friend, it means a lot to me....


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mindful
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20. "use it wisely and congrats nm"
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I reveal my
to you.
I wear it like a tattoo.
©Sade

------------------------------
my work
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gsquared
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58. "mindful..."
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....many thanks for taking the time....

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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21. "wrote this today...Inside Out"
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...i'm gonna try to write poem every day this month, here's something fresh outa my noggin...


I turned myself
inside out and I
couldn't tell the diffference so
I guess it worked

I imagined myself
confined to the universe
and felt squeezed but
only for an instant because
just then
a byway introduced itself
to my periphery
and it sighed for me...

my elbows had room again
and the cosmos
was my friend









We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mara
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115. "Feeling it"
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>I turned myself
>inside out and I
>couldn't tell the diffference so
>I guess it worked

Don't ask me why but there is something about that part that I love. It's just how it was put made me smile (Another solid one)


*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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22. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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Congrats, GG.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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gsquared
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59. "nowachaoticthing..."
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...thanks man, we've done a lot of growing as writers on this board together and I appreciate you...peace

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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brownsugs
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24. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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i told you that you had heated up and this just proves it

way to drop

  

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gsquared
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60. "brown sugs...."
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...thanks mang and you too keep droppin gems and growin...


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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25. "the company store"
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I saw you with
humanity's burden
asked to smile

saw your face
nearly break and
shatter
because they
tried to buy your smile
and in so doing
rendered it a heartbreak

but I
noticed
and I looked past your
shoulder
and saw the others
my sister
with the
full hair pulled back
and the dimples
and the
earnestness on the real

Sendin' a i'm witch'ya kinda thing ya know...

and then
she smiled
and it was real like
currency
and
tragedy had a
spine






We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Spread
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28. "man, ill as always"
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I'm just gonna give you one big up right now cuz, I could post about all your pieces. I like the freshness and the rhythm of the first tow. I got some instrumentals playing and your shit is rockin. I also liked the Soul Train line. It's like, if they gon' stop showin' titties and asses bouncin' at least let us see someone really perform. I'd rather watch an hour of titties and ass than my favorite artists lipsyncing (not that my favorite artists are usually on that show but...).
I also liked the one about the Cosmos being your friend or something. I was feeling that one. You on a spiritual vibe that I hope everyone gets, cuz it's some ill shit to me. I can tell you know what you're talking about. That's refreshing. Keep droppin'. play on
piece

yep

  

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KnowOne
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55. "RE: the company store"
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>saw your face
>nearly break and
>shatter
>because they
>tried to buy your smile
>and in so doing
>rendered it a heartbreak

Wow thats good stuff. Feelin' this piece.
Keep Flowin'........

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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gsquared
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61. "know one..."
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..thanks for taking the time to read it....and thanks for being who you be... :>)

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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glass
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93. "not sure i get it, but"
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i damn sure enjoyed reading it.



~~~
remember...
billie holiday 4/7/15-7/17/59
john coltrane 9/23/26-7/17/67

.

peace.

~~~
: healing stone...brings joy, love, fidelity. assists psychic abilities and awareness, protection, peace, courage.
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.
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mara
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116. "SHO NUFF!"
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>but I
>noticed
>and I looked past your
>shoulder
>and saw the others
>my sister
>with the
>full hair pulled back
>and the dimples
>and the
>earnestness on the real
>
>Sendin' a i'm witch'ya kinda thing ya know...
>
>and then
>she smiled
>and it was real like
>currency
>and
>tragedy had a
>spine

This was a real solid piece all the way through. It wasn't difficult to read and/or understand and the sentiment was felt most definatly. The scenerio was laid nice from jump, solid work G (No doubt)

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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MUSE
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29. "RE: would've been my choice too..."
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Congrats, fam!

*daps*

~MUSE

now blaze this screen with OKP fire... gimme some o dat
gsquared-ness... right now...


...
..
.

Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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gsquared
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62. "muse...."
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...many many thanks, earning the respect of your peers is the best a poet's gonna do, so it does make me feel good if I have done so ...


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you




think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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30. "Altitudes"
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Altitudes calibrate fiction/mythic actions factual
celebrated contradiction/only reactions actual
contractual contact/backing we're lacking
map rap/soundtrack/crap trap/outback
whack attack/beat hacks/smack that brat frat
crack shell get well/new spell can't tell
bell wave invades/cooling it shades
gradient symbolism/faded isms
coronate the risen/I wait and I listen
for a christening collision/ of my own volition
with the origin of diction/storin' more vision
mandate the mission/collaborate the competition
enumerate similarities/eliminate disparities
subsidize charities/live out parodies
give out rarities/spit out sharities
of precision and vision/with caring and clarity



We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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KnowOne
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97. "RE: Altitudes"
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I really like the way this piece flowed!

Keep Flowin'.....

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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mara
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117. "RE: Altitudes"
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>coronate the risen/I wait and I listen
>for a christening collision/ of my own volition
>with the origin of diction/storin' more vision
>mandate the mission/collaborate the competition
>enumerate similarities/eliminate disparities
>subsidize charities/live out parodies
>give out rarities/spit out sharities
>of precision and vision/with caring and clarity

The flow of that part was on point. It read real smooth. Nice work (Another solid one)

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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31. "RE: Bring the Geometry on *winks*"
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Congrats Man! this will be exciting...




I AM...

Cocotazo Records

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gsquared
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70. "Sampaguita.."
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...thanks for "acquiring the taste" .... :>)

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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33. "Still, I wonder"
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Wed Jul-02-03 07:35 PM

          

I grew accustomed
to the steam roller that
rolled by in my
American dream and
flattened everything

I wondered as a child
as I stood on a busy street corner
and looked down a
paved over hill
that was cut by a
river
I stood there and
traffic screeched by and
a white guy
who lived in the burbs
took action
from a newstand on the corner and
a junk sick cat shuffled by
behind me--
I was leaning against a mail box
and sirens wailed around the
winding edges of my ears and
I wondered...

I wonder still

Why does everybody dream a
flat dream

Damn, man
there's so much going on
in the space between things

Early in the mornings
the sun would shine then
and the street cleaner would groan past
Tuesdays and Saturdays and
they reminded me
that things weren't really flat and
that made me glad

but still,
I wondered
and
my Grandmother said
I had to do everything *my way*
and
regardless, she's dead now, but

still,
I wonder

Why does the
steam roller roll by
and flatten everything
in my
American dream?









We have a new tune up from the album that's gonna be done in July called "Balance"- ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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34. "RE: Still, I wonder"
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Damn, man
there's so much going on
in the space between things

definitely feeling that.

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gsquared
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71. "Presyzion....."
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...many many thanks to you for enriching the pool of energy and art that we all share here exponentially by your participation...and damn, you write good too...:>)

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Otto
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98. "RE: Still, I wonder"
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but still,
I wondered
and
my Grandmother said
I had to do everything *my way*
and
regardless, she's dead now, but

still,
I wonder

Why does the
steam roller roll by
and flatten everything
in my
American dream?

~~~~~

To me, that was real poetry...sumthing id expect to find in a library archive of the classical works...dang gsquared...i tip my hat to that work of art...

-Otto

  

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mara
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118. "awww"
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>I grew accustomed
>to the steam roller that
>rolled by in my
>American dream and
>flattened everything

That speaks for itself.


*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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123. "RE: Still, I wonder"
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Your wonder~ings are legitimate & universal -- Cuz those of us who think outside da box are always seeing the flip side of life -- turning it upside down -- and shakin' it to see what's inside!

And like you -- Still, I wonder -- too! -- *smiles*


Great thought ~~wave~~ -- Thanx for lettin' me ride it!


(((Surfs Up)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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gsquared
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36. "Independence"
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I'd like to
condense the word "citizen" into
a flaming lightening bolt and
hurl it beyond the influence
of mother earth's gravity and
celebrate over cognac as
it flashed one more flash and then
dissipated into nothing at all

I'd like to use the flag
to wrap up all of the
deadness
and, like a shroud
have it cremated along with the
rotting remains of the past and
I'd watch the smoke from the pyre rise,
wafting into spirals up and
into the ethers and
I'd sit with my back
against a tree as that
remnant smoke
flexed it's
independence

Submit only
to the most high
who is alive in the
spirit
of all who
pass by
In their eyes
it thrives
eternally alive
and beyond
all the lies

Stay wise...
and
independent


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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presyzion
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37. "RE: Independence"
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I'd like to
condense the word "citizen" into
a flaming lightening bolt and
hurl it beyond the influence
of mother earth's gravity and
celebrate over cognac as
it flashed one more flash and then
dissipated into nothing at all

that's slick, right there. great poem.

----------------------------------------
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My chapbook, "Exhibits Require Understanding Open Eyes" available from Trainwreck Press: http://www.ditchpoetry.com/trainwreckpress.htm

  

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mara
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119. "Um hm"
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Sat Jul-26-03 01:17 PM

  

          

This joint started out strong (Very strong) and I liked that. I don't know what else to say. The whole thing holds it's strength all the way until the end. Message laced through-out the piece was chrystal clear. Another solid piece G

(Edited for clearity)

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38. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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congrats fam. i finally checked yo site... that's some unique ish

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It's good to be the King.

  

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gsquared
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72. "Mayo King..."
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...thanks a bundle for your props and damn, man, caught your battle with tek and you sizzled, had me smilin' and wowin'...

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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39. "We Wait"
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As we melt the
mortars
into plowshares
the fields beckon
anxious to
feel the sweet massage of
the preparatory
softening

Ah, then
the seeds enter
like man-ness completing
moist couplings
Diligent is the planter
who bends at the waist
under straw hat and
sun
hands weathered by
lessons learned

Sundown
a sigh
a breeze supplants
a sweaty brow and
there's food
waiting
on the table

It was made with love

we eat...
and after that
we wait



Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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presyzion
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40. "RE: We Wait"
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theres a beautiful painting by diego rivera called "the flower carrier" and this part here:

Diligent is the planter
who bends at the waist
under straw hat and
sun
hands weathered by
lessons learned

reminded me so much of it.

quality work, man.

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120. "I'm feeling it"
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Your work generally tends to have some solid wisdom laced in it. It's not that "in your face type" but it's presented with just enough maturity. You repped the month of July nicely indeed.

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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41. "If I Knew Where Home Was"
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This tugging
this longing
this empty room that
asks to be filled
So real,
so palpable, so overriding a feeling
like Sunday
wandering into another week,
groping for some kind of
meaning

Art is like an
exotic island rising
up from a vast ocean
A godsend to the
shipwrecked sailor who
washed up upon it's shore
Tired, thirsty
bedraggled by the surf
long since submitted
and past the fear of death
his destiny collides
with his free will and
he finds himself
there

The painter paints
and his study comes to life
the difference between the two
is the way back home
I'd go there if
if
I only knew
where that was








Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Otto
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54. "RE: If I Knew Where Home Was"
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Wed Jul-09-03 03:12 AM

  

          

Art is like an
exotic island rising
up from a vast ocean
A godsend to the
shipwrecked sailor who
washed up upon it's shore
Tired, thirsty
bedraggled by the surf
long since submitted
and past the fear of death
his destiny collides
with his free will and
he finds himself
there

^^^^^^^

I like those lines g....

-Otto

  

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42. "Expectation"
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I held a
bird called expectation
in my right hand and
let it go just
in time
lest my
best laid plans
go the way
on mice and
men

It fluttered and flew
like it knew
bittersweet
but true

Little wings spread
intrepid
finding the seams in the
jet stream
navigating Venetian
wind canals like
it had done so
many times before

Small birds
called expectation
never forget
to remember








Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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63. "RE: Expectation"
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"best laid plans
go the way
on mice and
men"

My pops was always quoting something like this to me when one of my childhood, hair-brained schemes backfired on me. I like the way you incorporated that into your work.

Comparing expectations to a bird struggling to fly on small wings... I can mos def see the similarities.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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53. "*WOW*"
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Shiza...( german profanity)

yo know man...i been votin like a crazy man for you every month, and the month im not around to vote, YOU FRIGGIN WIN...maybe im a negative sumthin or other, bad luck or sumthin...Im proud of, and for YOU my man...Thumbs up, and use the spotlight for a nobel cause...

-Otto

  

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86. "my friend Otto..."
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...thank you for taking the time to read some of these posts, you have a great and open mind and helped me along with your insights...hopefully we will play together someday in the perhaps not too distant future...




Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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56. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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congrats. your work is always inspiring, and surreal.

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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64. "You Create It, a hip-hop keystyle"
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Wed Jul-09-03 07:57 AM

          

I throw shit that sticks/tricky licks in the mix
imprints that ...hit/like a kiss that don't miss
a passionate fashioning of/triangular patternings
scattering leaves as I go/blowing long lines that
satisfy so tasteful and concise/never wasteful, so nice I
travel while I stay../manifest, don't pray
cuz there isn't any other/the earth is my mother
and I bare my soul/to my sisters and brothers
you know wonders never cease/got a long term lease
share my sorrow, my wisdom/ my joy and my peace
this is my release.. my opportunity to mention
the cries that stain my eyes/it helps relieve the tension
packin syntax and facts/instead of Smith and Wesson
it's me I'm addressin/to myself I'm confessin
fuck the middle man/I'm up-to-date on my lessons
recording these sessions/leavin lasting impressions that
mess with minds and inspire/ me to take this spire
of thunder and fire/higher and higher and higher
not a tryer, a doer/a sinner, a saint
not bein' what I ain't/a spinner collating mindstreams
screaming softly in your ear/cheering you on to
let go of the fear of/going beyond you
it's real and it's new/if you believe it it's true
you create it for me/and I create it for you




Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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79. "Kindling Has Been Gathered"
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Borders trickle like
rivulets melting
shadows
while
radial rays
point me in
the right directions

Fissions fuse while
perpendicular treasures create
something out of nothing

Links rise from the the tethers
and smokes billow from
springs that churn hot,
the womb of the mother
protecting the
innocence of her children

Stationary points
menader in the wilderness
exploring new frontiers and
demarcating nothing for the
voidnesses that will
inevitably follow

Triumphs
do the bump
with once removed heroes

Kindling has been gathered





Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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124. "RE: Kindling Has Been Gathered"
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Burn Baby -- ~BURN~

Kindling has been gathered -- And the fire is HOTTT! -- (Like this lil' liquid lava flow~stream) -- ;^)


*SSssssssizzzzle*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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robynwildchild
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68. "my lateness"
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CONGRATULATIONS G.. YOU KNOW IT! SO OWN IT!!!!

i knew you'd make it .. enjoy!

love the shit.. thanks for being a personal inspiration.... out of the DAMN BOX.

ha HA~!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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69. "Who Do I Blame?"
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Who do I blame
when my dreams won't come true?

Should I
put the blame
on you
or would I
have things
misconstrued
if I do?

Who is the culprit
when I don't get my way
is it a remnant memory
of a long gone day?

When I stumble
and stall
should I blame you all?

If my pen runs dry
is the perp...
the sky?

If my love
finds another
is it the fault
of my brother?

If God
seems asleep
who's tears
do I weep?

Whose voice
do I speak with...
whose hands
do I type with...
whose eye do I
feel with...
who accepts
the praise that I get...
who tingles
when frozen...
whose fingers
massage my guitar...
who has seen much,
and come so very far...

Who was given
this gift of life?

Trust in
the game
and
brush off your shame and
come,
join the party




Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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80. "RE: Who Do I Blame?"
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this is a fundamental question--and this flow had an amazing charm to it.
(thanx for the invitation-should i bring liqour?)

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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73. "Decades"
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Decades have
cascaded around me
and yet
I feel the same

I have a son
who is a man
still,
I feel
the same

But cracks
get my attention now
little by little

Overnight it took
just forty-three
rings around my trunk
to grow a little
wisdom on my branches

How arrogant
the acorns that chat
amongst themselves
how little they know
and how haughty
they become
so empty
they have not the
means
to give
what is due
so foolish...
they cannot see
that they will never
get past until they
...can


Woe to the child
who resents
her elders'
rewards












Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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74. "Illuminati Rap (from tek's anti-war cypher)"
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underneath this shit is energy/a battle to get yours so you won't be free/bush don't give a fuck what you're afraid of/just so long as your too afraid to see/that his ilk has controlled every government and every country/his Pop ran the CIA before veepin' under Reagan/they created all the governements that now they be hatin/he was defacto prez for 8 years unelected/Reagan was senile and his office was neglected/bush couldn't care less about democracy/that's the utmost hypocrisy/lost the fuckin' election and now we got oligarchy/remember Malcom, Martin, Bobby and JFK/the last one was murdered in Texas/where all dem Bushes stay/funny how it went/after Kennedy got gunned down/got twenty years of oil cats/but you didn't hear a sound/outa the congress or the senate thay was wearing dem NASCAR suits/reppin big biz and connin' for the loot/if you payin' attention this shit is a cartoon/and if you ain't you will be soon/this nation ain't been a democracy for a very long time/it's been run on skull and bones society's white supremacy and crime/500 plus congress cats up on the hill/just one got a kid who be footin' Dubya's bill/I ain't got no patience for no Bush sympathizers/I'm here inside hip-hop cuz here we be wiser/we need to stay solid and not waffle or waver/cuz it's up to ourselves to be our own fuckin' saviors/hold on to the truth not TV lies that be shoddy/if you don't know what's goin on look up the fuckin' word ILLUMINATI!

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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77. "RE: Decades"
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you relayed your wisdom within this piece.

elegant.

peace

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slicklyric
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81. "RE: Decades"
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you have wisdom-and i stand here to listen and i learn a little bit more every time i read one of your works. thank-you.

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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glass
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92. "word."
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>Woe to the child
>who resents
>her elders'
>rewards

the first piece i click on here, and look what i find

*smile*

congrats.


~~~
remember...
billie holiday 4/7/15-7/17/59
john coltrane 9/23/26-7/17/67

.

peace.

~~~
: healing stone...brings joy, love, fidelity. assists psychic abilities and awareness, protection, peace, courage.
.

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96. "RE: Decades"
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very strong piece......nice drop.

Keep Flowin'.....

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75. "damnnnn my bad"
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i should have been like first to respond.

Congrats G, lol mang u been surprising my knuckle head ass since i first thought u were goin be on some gangster shit..lol..

peace dunn---WILDOUT

  

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82. "Wildout..."
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..you mean I'm not on some gangsta shit...?!.... :>)
...thanks for the props my friend, peace.....

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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76. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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Its a beautiful moment player. Big congrads. I aint been on in a minute but another OKP and myself were kickin it last night and talkin bout how dope your work is. Keep doin your thing and makin me think. Peace

  

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87. "Reef..."
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...gracias my friend, you don't know how good it makes me feel to know that peeps are diggin my work, spent a lifetime trying, every kind word is like gold to me...peace and thanks again

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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78. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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It should be illegal to have this much dope shit in just one thread.

G-man, I feel like if I respond to one piece, I have to respond to them all. So I can't...

...just know that I'm reading, enjoying, being touched and enlightened.

peace,
-Tp

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bamf.

  

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88. "...Toothpick..."
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...you have been a bright light since you've arrived and I'm just glad we live in the same 'hood up in here, sincere thsnks homez, your words mean so much to me, honest...peace


Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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gsquared
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89. "Keep Showin' Up"
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Mon Jul-14-03 08:03 AM

          

I spilled
my heart on my sleeve
and it made a stain
for you all to see but
I keep showin' up

I realized I
went to work
with a tag still hanging
under my arm but
I keep showin' up

I played a
bad chord and
wrote a
trite line but
I made a promise
to my music so
I keep showin' up

I missed a
free throw
and I
took a bad shot
and my man
blew by me
today
but tomorrow
I'm gonna show up

The earth shows up

The moon shows up

The sun, it shows


I've learned
so many things,
facts and numbers and
shapes and
angles and concepts and
theories and chords and modes and
scales and harmonies and
words and words and words...

but in the end

it was harder to learn
the importance
of
simply
showin' up



Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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90. "RE: Keep Showin' Up"
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GS.... I have read and reread and have not had the words to say how much respect i have for you as a writer, you obviously write from the view point of an experienced entitiy... As you said you had not actually started writing until you hit the boards, I guess it must be nice to be able to feel the solace of knowing you are not alone in your ability to wow with words... I learnt to keep showing up from a very young age and i appreciate the frame of mind it takes... Thanks and once again congratulations on your takingthe AOTM, you desreve it..

Peace

"To create a thought is devine especially done with spectacular company" - Seyi Awolesi S@ge080219710500(Wordsmith)

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91. "sage..."
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...thanks so much... :>)

Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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94. "passages"
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Passages
like nooks
flicker into and
out of sight

I turn
and leave my attention
there
lingering like
the heat of the day at dusk

But something remains
over here
some hair, a jaw
hands
legs and

wait

Is it here
or there

is it both?

are there more?

Beings in and
of themselves

projected...





Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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KnowOne
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95. "RE: passages"
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>wait
>
>Is it here
>or there
>
>is it both?
>
>are there more?
>
>Beings in and
>of themselves
>
>projected...

I love the abstract nature of this piece.

Keep Flowin'......

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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99. "RE: passages"
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I turn
and leave my attention
there
lingering like
the heat of the day at dusk

i loved that part, right there.

peace

----------------------------------------
www.felinosoriano.com

My chapbook, "Exhibits Require Understanding Open Eyes" available from Trainwreck Press: http://www.ditchpoetry.com/trainwreckpress.htm

  

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100. "I ache to understand"
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I hold you to
my heart with
with a magnet's guile
while
our separate tongues
keep a part of us
apart

But it's just for now

If the world
is made of language
how do we blend into
a universal means of sharing?

Let's build
a new new structure
and call it our home
where we speak
with our emotions
and art flows
directly from within
shaping the symbols
that we call our
shared reality

This way that
I speak, this idiom
this syntax derived from
somewhere somehow
It separates me from most
as it enables me to
come closer to some
sometimes
depending on how we
choose to use it

I yearn to talk in Spanish
Chinese
Arabic
French
Russian
Swahili
Inuit
Japanese
Hebrew
Tibetan
Indonesian
Zulu
Burmese

but wait

There must be a way
a universal symbolism
understood by all,
a future filled with
sharing, with ease and
eloquent elegance

If my world
is made of language
I want everyone
to be there

I ache to understand

I've seen language
in the air around me and
felt it
tingle my chakras and
I've held language in the
palm of my hand

I sit on language and
eat it raw and
smell it's sweet aroma and
I hear it in
places that have sound but
no words

When we learn
a collective language
that leads to the transcendence
of profane His-story...

...the galaxy open it's doors






Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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101. "RE: I ache to understand"
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ur speaking to the world...damn thats a mission for the chosen few...lets build....

Let's build
a new new structure
and call it our home
where we speak
with our emotions
and art flows
directly from within
shaping the symbols
that we call our
shared reality

....dammit lets build.....

very righteous!


"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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102. "RE: I ache to understand"
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i sit on language and eat it raw...

~~~~~~~~~

My favorite poetry indeed, from one of my favorite poets...

-Otto

  

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129. "you just......"
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Made the Sig!

>I sit on language and
>eat it raw and
>smell it's sweet aroma and
>I hear it in
>places that have sound but
>no words

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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103. "RE: Drum Roll... July AOTM: GSQUARED!!!"
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..thanks O it feels good to know somebody's enjoying the words...







Do check out the new song "Soular"--tell me what you think ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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104. "Fly Eyed Fear Fiends"
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Latter day fodder for fly-eyed fear fiends/
sap sucking scenes, smashed dreams and resignation
real humans scheme federated liberations
heat pummels the pavement and people crave libations
station to station energetic communication
permeate gelitanous airwaves that crave the attention
ignorance lessens on the heals of confessions
random housings trick foxes and socks turn black
radicals in transit track tracking numbers to
induce paranoia so as to deflect negative intentions
pigeons relax on hot wires sending e-mail
on the wings of snails who ply the trades
of yesteryear, and sweat wells like tears
from pores that see and feel crystal ball
visions purely like skin and bone and sinew
so true, it seethes with the perturbations of reality's
clues to the key's location, holes inexact
but factual, a lessening of frailties leading
to a sped-up slowdown of impact
spoon-fed a steady stream of answers, nutritious
and satisfying, profound, nutty like almonds
similar to psalms informing in a non-intrusive manner
using mnemonic techniques culled from the masters




Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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105. "RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends"
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mad manipulation of words!your very, very talented!

loved this line for the truth in it...

"ignorance lessens on the heals of confessions"


"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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106. "RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends"
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thanks mang I just recorded this minus the last few lines for our album yesterday....it sounds dope flowin out loud, (I think :>)



Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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107. "RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends"
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Sat Jul-26-03 04:46 AM

          

hey, i listened to that link (takes forever to load up on this primitive comp...lol)-but yeah, i was digging it-my fav was the first track, soular-cos it chilled me out with a zoned out feeling(do u know what i mean???...lol)

in fact i think ill go back and listen to it cos it was "jus that nice"...lol....

ps; "man"...i think u meant "ma'am"..

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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gsquared
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108. "sorry ma'am..."
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don't know why I did that....but thanks for listening to the tunes, they need to be listened to so they can grow up and be big and strong...





Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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109. "RE: sorry ma'am..."
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np, i dont really mind cos on here we're all lines of text.

ur music is like kids i suppose-give it nuff love and hardwork and it'll grow to shine bright, and pass on ya love to others...but i aint sayin this to be nice or any bs like that...but i was really diggin the tracks on there-let me know when u put new ish up, so i can have a listen pls?

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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110. "naw..."
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..we're more than that, maybe at first but it's good to get to know one another..hey it's great to hear that you dig the music, we have worked for years, literally, to get to the point of being able to make this album and I do really think that it is something special and just plain fun to listen to...I'll mos def keep you apprised and when the thing is mastered and duplicated I want to send out some free promotional copies and you will be gettin one for sure...should be in a about 3 weeks....peace




Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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slicklyric
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125. "RE: naw..."
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*waits by the door, twiddling thumbs in anticipation*

even if u arent able to send out cd's for any reason-pls make sure u inbox/email me a link, so i can hear ur tracks-id like to particulary hear the above extract.

good luck with the completion of ur project.

"when a man aims at nothing, he seldom misses the target"

"absence of occupation, is not rest"

"write it down. the worst ink survives the best memory"

  

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128. "RE: Fly Eyed Fear Fiends"
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It is oh so clear why you deserved AOTM. This is impressive:

>visions purely like skin and bone and sinew
>so true, it seethes with the perturbations of reality's
>clues to the key's location, holes inexact
>but factual, a lessening of frailties leading
>to a sped-up slowdown of impact
>spoon-fed a steady stream of answers, nutritious
>and satisfying, profound, nutty like almonds
>similar to psalms informing in a non-intrusive manner
>using mnemonic techniques culled from the masters

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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121. "A Little Birdie Told Me ..."
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You were over here ( ( ( S H I N I N G ) ) ) *Bigg Time* -- But your shine only had a few more days left -- So I wore my sunglasses to peep you out B~4 you get bronzed in the Archives.

"G"~Baby ... I'm so proud of you! -- *smiles*

I'm sorry I bounced B~4 I had a chance to vote or check you out sooner -- But I just wanna say that you've added a special signature quality to this board -- With "Out Da Box" sentiments, classic wisdom & insane knowledge!

And because of your dilligence, your principles, & your love for this board -- You were able to rise to the occasion without a scratch or abrasion -- (In a relatively short period of time) --And share the best that we could possibly expect to see -- For this month of JULY!

*sigh*

I'd expect nothing less than the best from you -- Cuz thas' just how you do!!! -- *muah*

I'm just creepin' & peepin' for a hottt minute -- (to give you your props & honors) -- But I'll be back later next month -- So hold it down til' I get back, aaiight? -- ;^ )

Congrats again "G" -- You really did da damn thang -- ALL UP & DOWN THIS THREAD! -- (Played it like a zylophone -- Or is it xylophone?) -- *LoL*

Your music~ality seeps thru your poetry like india ink through raw silk -- Mega~Deep Mind~Frame Ink~Stain!


Luv ya! -- *wink*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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126. "....when...."
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...louis armstrong died dizzie gillespie said "no him, no me"...i don't know what it has to do with diz and satch but, as it pertains to this board, no you, no me...it means a lot that you made your way here to give me some love and I won't forget it any time soon...we all anxiously await your return sis....





Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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132. "RE: ....when...."
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Ya Photo (Mit ein German acccent)
kompt heir soon...ok?

-Otto

  

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130. "For The Road"
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In motion I
can't see myself
I'm a blur spinning
centrifigally
alive
Everything I had
falls by the wayside behind me
and blocks of erect
houses situated side by side
congregate in places
and they whisper my name
but still I move,
suddeness just a
cliched now,
prioritizing memories and
cushioning blows
Forever trickles
down my forehead as I glide,
music is a byproduct and
willows gather in my
tear ducts,
their appendages bristle in
the passing breeze and
I feel my legs long to
become roots
and paradoxically
standing still seems comforting
because roots can grow and
network and
maybe reach down, down,
and they move
yeah, roots are on the move too
trees of life,
yin and yanging up one side and
down the other,
sisters and brothers connected,
reflected,
brightness and spheres collapse the
silence and
everything that has magnetism
pulls me and
I smell garlic,
it soothes me and
suggests something,
it lingers,
it is acquainted with patchouli and
and it shoots through me
until it becomes part of the
fragmentary desiccations
that crackle and reduce and
become moonbeams
vehicles
that I straddle
on my way
to heaven's day
So, profusely I
suvive,
sensory landmarks whistle past
constancy eludes the
extruder and
fissions
pardon
temporary lapses
in judgement and the
lines in the middle are
broken and it is
clear that
this is
the way
of
the
road







*Thanks everyone for the honor of being AOTM, I will alway remember everyone who was kind enough to show me this love, it really menat a lot to me*

















Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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131. "RE: For The Road"
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houses situated side by side
congregate in places
and they whisper my name
but still I move,
suddeness just a
cliched now,
prioritizing memories and
cushioning blows
Forever trickles
down my forehead as I glide,
music is a byproduct and
willows gather in my
tear ducts,
their appendages bristle in
the passing breeze and
I feel my legs long to
become roots
and paradoxically
standing still seems comforting
because roots can grow and
network and
maybe reach down, down,
and they move
yeah, roots are on the move too
trees of life,
yin and yanging up one side and
down the other,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Is it safe to ccall you my mentor? Because I surely would love to be granted that priveledge....

-Otto

  

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133. "RE: For The Road"
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...that would be the biggest honor my friend....







Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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134. "nice way to close it...."
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Just wannt take the time to give you madd props. Not just for AOTM but for everything you've done around here. Its obvious by the responces about that you inspire many (including myself), so I only encourage you to keep it up.

Keep Flowin'......

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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135. "I really need...."
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...to thank you fam, being in the sig is a great honor and, sincerely speaking, evey ounce that I have given to this board has come right back to me--I've been around for a while and there is no community like this one-I look forward to growing along with everyone else and see no end in sight to my participation even if my dreams were to come true...you and everyone else here are my fam, and I take that to heart....thanks for your inspiration as well...onelove





Album is just about done, keep us on the charts ....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/geometrymusic.htm



http://www.GaryPatrickGarry.com

"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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