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DivineVersatile
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"OKP TOURNEY: 2ND ROUND BATTLES AND VOTES!!"
Thu Aug-07-03 12:07 AM by ThaAnthology

  

          

Hidey hoe, neighbors.

By now...you guys know the drill...but just in case you don't...

1. 3 rounds, AB-BA-AB format! If you spit 1st in one round, you go 2nd in the next. If you went last in the 1st round...just drop your 2nd verse right afterwards. Don't wait for votes and shit...all that does is slow things down.
2. 16-24 bars max. Don't try to overkill your opponent. The 1st person to go in a round sets the tone for the rest of the round...so if your opponent goes 16....try your best to go 16 with him/her.

3. VOTE ON OTHER PEOPLES ROUNDS! This will get easier as time goes on. I'm setting the MINIMUM (meaning PLEASE do more) at 5 battles for the 1st round (Translation: vote on 5 other people's shits if you are a participant)

4. ALL ARE ENCOURAGED TO VOTE! If you didn't make this tourney...please vote anyway, 'cause we will need your opinion.

5. ONE WEEK PER ROUND! I'll try hard to stick to this. Now, I know not everybody has a DSL at the crib like I do...but please do your best and get in here timely.


6. IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS/CONCERNS...POST THEM IN THIS THREAD OR HIT THE INBOX! I'll do my best to answer whatever I can.

ONE MORE THING. VOTE IN A BOXING SYSTEM! THAT MEANS

10-9 for a win
10-8 for a knockdown in a round
9-9 for a draw in a round.

The Battles are listed below. LaXyDaZiCaL has won the right to be a first alternate. So, if somebody doesn't show in a timely manner, LaX will step in as first alternate. ThaAnthology is penciled in as second alternate, with Demon coming in as 3rd alternate (this was based upon the margin of victory in your Sudden Death squabbles).

I also have one Mr. Lyricist Z who wants to squabble...but he'll have to prove himself in battle before I let him in. (Legend in your own mind or not! HA!)

I gotta give y'all hella love for the participation levels. I've done my best to keep shit timely. Lets get at this, aight?

HAVE AT YOU!


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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
2ND RD. BATTLE: MiracleRic vs. dave
Jul 21st 2003
1
super dave...*trumpets blare*
Jul 21st 2003
15
      eh, lemme critique.
Jul 22nd 2003
16
           here we go.
Jul 22nd 2003
17
                ya not on my level dave
Jul 22nd 2003
20
                     *yawn*...oh wait....*wipes sleep from eye*...goodnight
Jul 24th 2003
31
                          miracle ric?
Jul 25th 2003
38
2ND RD. BATTLE: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous
Jul 21st 2003
2
Round 1: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous
Jul 21st 2003
13
RE: Round 1: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous
Jul 25th 2003
35
MayoKing vs. Spontaneous: Round 2
Jul 25th 2003
36
RE: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous: Round 2
Jul 25th 2003
37
Round 3: A Letter to Spontaneous
Jul 25th 2003
41
      RE: Round 3: Return To Sender
Jul 27th 2003
48
2ND RD. BATTLE: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Jul 21st 2003
3
RE: 2ND RD. BATTLE: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Jul 23rd 2003
25
      I hate battlin peeps in cool with =/
Jul 26th 2003
42
           i understand ya plans!!!!!
Jul 27th 2003
54
                ya understand wha????
Jul 30th 2003
74
                     lets just finish the rounds
Aug 01st 2003
104
                          =P
Aug 04th 2003
110
2ND RD. BATTLE: syllabicdivinity vs. jayare214
Jul 21st 2003
4
round one
Jul 21st 2003
14
rd 1
Jul 22nd 2003
18
rd2
Jul 22nd 2003
19
RE: rd2
Jul 23rd 2003
24
rd.3-im tired of waiting
Jul 31st 2003
85
      my bad...
Aug 03rd 2003
107
VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave
Jul 21st 2003
5
1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 21st 2003
9
Round 1: MiracleRic over dave 10-9
Jul 23rd 2003
21
dave over MiracleRic 10-9
Jul 27th 2003
49
dave over MiracleRic, 10-8 nm
Jul 29th 2003
64
dave 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
66
rd.1 ric 10-9
Jul 31st 2003
82
      Hmmm
Jul 31st 2003
86
2ND ROUND VOTES GO HERE!
Jul 23rd 2003
22
MiracleRic takes dave in Rd. 2 10-9
Jul 23rd 2003
23
RE: MiracleRic over dave 10-9
Jul 27th 2003
50
Miracle 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
67
ric 10-8
Jul 31st 2003
83
RE: ROUND'S 1,2 AND 3: MIRACLE RIC VS. DAVE
Aug 04th 2003
108
RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave
Jul 25th 2003
34
rofl @ dave
Jul 26th 2003
43
heh
Jul 26th 2003
44
wtf??? dave DAMN dave 10-9
Jul 31st 2003
84
RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave
Jul 26th 2003
47
Hmmm
Jul 31st 2003
87
Round 3: draw 9-9
Jul 28th 2003
60
RE: Round 3: Close Call
Jul 28th 2003
61
RE: Round 2: 10-9 Dave...Close Call
Jul 29th 2003
63
best round
Jul 29th 2003
65
i give a 9-9 as well
Jul 30th 2003
68
Hmmm 3rd Round
Jul 31st 2003
88
RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave
Jul 31st 2003
80
VOTE FOLDER: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous
Jul 21st 2003
6
1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 21st 2003
10
rnd 1, 2, & 3...mayo wins 10-9
Jul 26th 2003
46
How did you vote for all 3 rounds before Rd 3
Jul 27th 2003
51
      RE: How did you vote for all 3 rounds before Rd 3
Jul 27th 2003
53
           cool beans homie
Jul 27th 2003
55
my votes
Jul 29th 2003
62
Mayoking 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
69
RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 31st 2003
96
rd1 mayo 10 spont 9
Aug 01st 2003
100
rd1: mayoking 10-9.
Jul 25th 2003
39
rd2: mayoking 10-8.
Jul 25th 2003
40
word! mayo!
Jul 26th 2003
45
mayo rd. 2 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
70
rd 2 mayo 10 spont 8
Aug 01st 2003
101
Mayo Takes Spontaneous 10-9, Rd. 1
Aug 04th 2003
109
Spontaneous over MayoKing 10-9 Rd. 2
Aug 06th 2003
113
Rd. 3 Spontaneous over MayoKing 10-9
Aug 06th 2003
114
RE: VOTE FOLDER: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous
Aug 06th 2003
118
      ooops
Aug 06th 2003
119
           you get the gas face....lol
Aug 06th 2003
121
VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Jul 21st 2003
7
1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 21st 2003
11
Rnd 1: Ezzsential over Instant Axis 10-9
Jul 27th 2003
52
RE: Rnd 2: Ezzentials 10 vs. Axis 8
Jul 27th 2003
56
      ummmm
Jul 27th 2003
57
           RE: ummmm: O
Jul 28th 2003
59
Ezzential got him
Jul 30th 2003
71
RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 31st 2003
79
      nah i just
Aug 01st 2003
97
RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Jul 30th 2003
75
first of all
Jul 31st 2003
78
      excuse me miss.....
Jul 31st 2003
81
           RE: excuse me miss.....
Jul 31st 2003
91
                even though u got me pissed off
Jul 31st 2003
92
                howd i fail womens studys??
Jul 31st 2003
94
                     i would stop
Aug 01st 2003
98
                RE: excuse me miss.....
Jul 31st 2003
93
                i wasnt mad
Aug 01st 2003
99
                RE: excuse me miss.....
Jul 31st 2003
95
RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Jul 30th 2003
76
Hmmm
Jul 30th 2003
77
round 3
Aug 04th 2003
111
      Hmmm
Aug 04th 2003
112
Rd. 1: 9-9 draw
Aug 06th 2003
115
Rd. 2 Axis over Ezzsential 10-9
Aug 06th 2003
116
Round 3: Ezzsential takes Axis 10-9
Aug 06th 2003
117
RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Aug 06th 2003
122
      RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential
Aug 06th 2003
123
VOTE FOLDER: syllabicdivinity vs. jayare214
Jul 21st 2003
8
1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 21st 2003
12
Round 1: jayare214 over syllabic 10-9
Jul 24th 2003
28
jayare over syllabic...10-9
Jul 25th 2003
32
jayare 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
72
RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!
Jul 31st 2003
89
Round 1 jayare214 over syllabic 10-9
Aug 01st 2003
105
i give it to syl
Aug 06th 2003
120
ROUND 2 VOTES GO HERE!!
Jul 24th 2003
29
      Rd. 2: jayare214 over syllabic 10-9
Jul 24th 2003
30
      jayare over syllabic...10-9
Jul 25th 2003
33
      syllabic 10-9
Jul 30th 2003
73
      RE: ROUND 2 VOTES GO HERE!!
Jul 31st 2003
90
      Round 2 jayare214 over syllabic 10-9
Aug 01st 2003
106
RE: OKP TOURNEY: 2ND ROUND BATTLES AND VOTES!!
Jul 23rd 2003
26
Look who came outta the darkness....
Jul 24th 2003
27
someone please drop out....
Jul 27th 2003
58
LAST DAY TO VOTE/POST BATTLES!!
Aug 01st 2003
102
RE: LAST DAY TO VOTE/POST BATTLES!!
Aug 01st 2003
103

DivineVersatile
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1. "2ND RD. BATTLE: MiracleRic vs. dave"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Oooooo...this is an ugly draw. You know the drill. Whoever goes 1st in round 1 goes 2nd in round 2. 3 rounds. BEGIN!! (C) Karate Champ

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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MiracleRic
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Mon Jul-21-03 01:37 PM

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15. "super dave...*trumpets blare*"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

Just for replying I'd call u brave
Super Dave, but ur weak stunts
Will leave u laid
In a stupor, dazed
Peep the resume of cats I slayed
Over-qualified to waste ya breadbasket
Into a custom open-faced-head-casket
Where’s the torso?
My stepping stool fool, toe tap attacks in morse code
Remorse??? NO!!!
U too sweet a morsel
I floss beef, defeat to u like what my dick secretes,
They both fillin the cavities in ya teeth
Unlucky draw for Dave, I enslave what this hoar says
I treat this tourney like a journey by Cortez
Divide and Conquer and as the gore spreads
Upon Aztecs that ass-bet
I’m skilled enough to smash vets
I deserve vet status as a lyrical genome
Miracle phenom
DVS, why u got me killin Dave thee Gnome?

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Tue Jul-22-03 10:15 PM

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16. "eh, lemme critique."
In response to Reply # 15


  

          

>Just for replying I'd call u brave
>Super Dave, but ur weak stunts
>Will leave u laid
>In a stupor, dazed
>Peep the resume of cats I slayed
>Over-qualified to waste ya breadbasket
>Into a custom open-faced-head-casket
>Where’s the torso?
>My stepping stool fool, toe tap attacks in morse code
>Remorse??? NO!!!
>U too sweet a morsel
>I floss beef, defeat to u like what my dick secretes,
>They both fillin the cavities in ya teeth
>Unlucky draw for Dave, I enslave what this hoar says
>I treat this tourney like a journey by Cortez
>Divide and Conquer and as the gore spreads
>Upon Aztecs that ass-bet
>I’m skilled enough to smash vets
>I deserve vet status as a lyrical genome
>Miracle phenom
>DVS, why u got me killin Dave thee Gnome?

ok, creativity was absent, your punchlines was weak,/
rhythm was kinda suspect, you rushed it, illogical speak,/ and
diction was off centre, not enough to confront this rhyme ox/
for three rounds you spittin feeble?, i'll leave you in a ill fitted pine box-/
and, your shine stops here, i'm the underdog with a bark like a sequoia tree,/
your delusions of grandeur be feeding you silly dreams of destroyin me,/
stop toyin with me, dont you know i'll fuckin outgame milton bradley/
while you runnin thru chutes and ladders tryna avoid the inevitable tragedy, just call me magesty,
your honor, before i time bomb your whole persona,/
yo, put up a fight, man! spit some heat, you givin me bad karma!!!

  

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dave
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Tue Jul-22-03 10:17 PM

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17. "here we go."
In response to Reply # 16


  

          

okay so, like,
pardon my ignorance, right? but WHOS fingerprints is on the throats/
of cats who came 3 TIMES as nice as you and still couldnt rack up enough votes?!/
this shit is unanimous decision, my precision is legend, the final chapter,/
i'm a different breed of lyricist, i'm the thinkin man's rapper/
spittin classics til the hereafter, while you spit soft nickelodeon references/
i drop percussive body blows in accurate immaculate measurements/
my presence gets/
the adrenaline flowin of the candy rapper nearest to me,

DVS, maybe we should get this cat lined up to battle lyricist Z?


  

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MiracleRic
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Tue Jul-22-03 11:21 PM

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20. "ya not on my level dave"
In response to Reply # 17
Tue Jul-22-03 11:38 PM

  

          

Ya flow is so sad D,
Not one attack even grabbed me,
Weak jab at my reference to Nick Junior
No sooner,
U speak of Milton Bradley???
I left this Dog down Under like I flew him to Sydney
Forgive me, but a brown bear is bound get grizzly
I animate more cats then Disney
Ya bore me, like a prequel to Toy Story
Stick to old pastimes like Bingo and Keno
Ya spits cause more gender questions then Janet Reno
I’ll give a Clue, but not the answer,
I radiate with kemo,
and relieve ya breast cancer
Leave ya ass-out like the Lion King’s Rafiki
I leave ya thoughts numb, like u rocked a too small Dashiki
I spit at ya level, my hot shit embezzled the Devil
In Monopoly, ya sloppily forgot ya ‘get out of jail” card,
Thinking man’s rapper?
Well think about ya missing bars real hard
ahhhh hell, now watch me cave in ya cell
I’d be better off battling dave chappelle
my nonchalance dominance impales ya pride
“did u know dave shit himself right b4 he died?”

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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MiracleRic
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Thu Jul-24-03 11:44 PM

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31. "*yawn*...oh wait....*wipes sleep from eye*...goodnight"
In response to Reply # 20
Thu Jul-24-03 11:51 PM

  

          

I’m much too sleepy,
MiracleRic spit lyrical dick DP
Skewer, rotisserie
de-feet like Misery
Ya couldn’t be cold as ice
If ya rolled with M.O.P.
Ya frutier then the pink scented marker
Ya Bob Barker, but fuck the price
Ric’s uppercuts precise
Dave’s lungs too concise
Three written kittens just splittin ya life
Insurance, benefits dropped due to no endurance
Ya sight that of three blind mice
Be nice, sit back and relax
Ya HOT AIR spits could float the balloon of REMAX
Invest, ya runnin outta real estate sir,
No vest, all I need for defense is a WINDBREAKER
It’d take a Miracle for u to muster a KO
It’d take more then a dragonball to remove that halo
PSALM ties stronger then that of NATO

*DVS can i get a challenge next time? not some overly rusty vet with a new loggin*

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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dave
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Fri Jul-25-03 12:52 PM

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38. "miracle ric?"
In response to Reply # 31


  

          

you just a lyrical dick spittin this terrible shit that i get a spiritual kick off/
hittin out of the park, kid, im a battle tested outlaw/
waitin for extra basic rappers with too much confidence to flip and mouth off/
thats when i snatch they mouth off and fill their jaws with my southpaw,
i'm sicker than a gang of quarantined syphillis infected outcall/ patients,
patiently waitin for competition and my patience is runnin thin fast/
how the fuck am i beyond the 1st round battlin cats with a chin of glass???/
just waitin for a motherfucker to man up and spit a line worth my while/
you couldnt sneak a win if you was in the back fellating DivineVersatile/AND anthology, i'm a prodigy you just the prodigal son/
gettin sunned by each bar i drop, cats get choices but never make the logical one/
it's becomin clearer, you/ NEED a miracle/ cause ric's spits is inferior,/
your feminine approach to rockin the mic is better suited decoratin my interior/
your level of wackess is unparalleled and family, its really offendin me/
dont make me have to grab my pen and pad ,get mad and bitchslap your style into the next century/
it's my turn to rock now, you can jump up off the cock now,/
tryna battle mine? you outta line and and mufuckas is scared to hold your spot down,/ we can get multisyllabic if thats plot now,
whatever dog, your rhyme schemes is too weak, how?/
your AB-BA cadabra couldnt conjure enough miracles, ric, to halt this lyrical beat down,/
man, fuck the votes now, i'm dumpin just to show that dave is a human wreckin ball
but damn, rics rap career began and ended on a motherfucking message board...

:-/

  

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DivineVersatile
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2. "2ND RD. BATTLE: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

*************************
MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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13. "Round 1: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous"
In response to Reply # 2


          

Spontaneous emcees spontaneously combust
let this thread be your cremation,
so ash to ash dust to dust...

matta fact, let's just incinerate the remains
'veteran' pipe dreams ain't worth my bong and pipe flames
your lyrics is lame, claimin'
veteran ain't no excuse for this cripple
my words is fat with an 'f'
don't you see how it ripple?
..like sex with a fattie,
i slap u and ride the wave
..your rep is fallin so fast
it digs your own grave
..like cher, wish you could turn time
against this instant fodder...
even my slop*-piest verses
got ya spontaneously slaughtered

*fodder and slop/ are forms of feed for livestock

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It's good to be the King.

  

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Spontaneous
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Fri Jul-25-03 07:34 AM

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35. "RE: Round 1: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous"
In response to Reply # 13


  

          

Once again I'm late but I won't stand you up on this date/
The way I stomp ya rhymes out is far from a mistake/
I respond-react like a hypochondriac/
So you can never creep cuz I never sleep like an insomniac/
But I lay down tracks and pound wack chumps to dust/
I squeeze the life out ya crew like I do bumps and pust/
Front and fuss if you must I can't be defeated/
Energy can't be depleted and posts can't be deleted/
My consanants and vowels cover miles like the Nile in Egypt/
Claimin to be the boss you just lost like a child misleaded/
the truth I speak it no need to keep it secret/
You could eat a barrel of mussels and still drop nuthin but weak shit/
On this court I'm killin you with basics layups and fade aways/
Leaving this page ablaze crashin ya database mashin the king of mayonnaise



It takes years to become an overnight success...

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36. "MayoKing vs. Spontaneous: Round 2"
In response to Reply # 2


  

          

On your mark get set go I explode out the gate/
take the gold plate you on the front page holdin ya face/
You can't back me in cuz I'm a true champion/
I'm full of rage and have no mercy like my girl when her cramps begin/
Goin back and forth like tennis matches but this fact is/
you not movin on to the next bracket, put down your racket/
You get Serena'd up--you are the King of what?/
You're really just a Queen cuz it seems you got your penis tucked/
Never subliminal my lyrics will disassemble you/
Infect every mineral in your body in three round intervals/
This battle'll leave you scorched like you got torched cruel/
Offer ya soul or you'll get tossed to the pole like horseshoes/
I gobble up your rhymes regurgitate the wack shit/
And whats left is like 1 bar cuz the simple fact is/
When you spit it drops and disappears like my stool/
Are you just entering high school? I break up your prose and haikus/









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37. "RE: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous: Round 2"
In response to Reply # 36


          

Spontaneously
i expose MC's glass jaw
in haiku... or not...

for someone named Spontaneous,
you take a long time to bust
exposed your small dick lyrics in round 1,
when you beat you Beatnuts!
'Watch Out Now!' remix featurin J-Lo in round 2
'Jenny from the Block' got mo' street cred than you!
i'm sorry dog, don't mean to shit on your name Spon...
but you know i'ma Triumph and it's there... 'FOR ME TO POOP ON!'
in tennis is the only time you get 'love', yet you STILL throw a racket
i ain't even flowin and you drown in mayonnaise courtesy packet!
it's sad kid, K-Swiss'd (-case switched) up like a basket-
the dirt above is more enriched than the dust fillin ya casket
u ain't no mineral but it's vital men like you get dumped on the plate
so you can see again the hardest word you came with was 'REGURGITATE'???
to save your rep you shoulda left it at a no-show
cuz we love your lines as much as Nascar fans love Soul Glow!*

*http://free-sb.htnet.hr/lcn/pranks/nascar.mp3

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It's good to be the King.

  

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MayoKing
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41. "Round 3: A Letter to Spontaneous"
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Dear Spontaneous,

3000 posts plus, 11 in the last 3 months
can i say we have a lurker? that's as fruity as Runts
fruity as Nuts in that Grape-y serial
this guy a copy of Kid Rock midget sidekick...
short and to the side on new material!
i'm ethereal, intangible, you can't touch me
you try to catch my flow? you get high on nose bleeds
you kiddin right? you tryin to take the tourney trophy?
you shatter Spontaneous-ly like 'Porcelain', and even rap like Moby!
Dick! bet you even Dick Jockey like him...
open up honcho it's the second cummin of Slim
i'm shady, yeah, you's as shady as treeless Tropicana
orange you dat maryland bamma? you 'Slippin' like DMX... on a banana!
so what ya doin kid, you don't belong in F S B
i send ya backpacka ass back ta GD quickly!

-Mayo

PS - on your way out the door don't forget your coat
and for this second round PLEASE remember to vote!

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It's good to be the King.

  

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48. "RE: Round 3: Return To Sender"
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Failed delivery cuz there's no way in hell you could get to me/
There's no remedy for the sickness I bring with my metaphors and simile's/
Breakin ya neck checkin stats and drawin conclusions/
I'm not the only one amazed you're in the lead..the order is sorta confusin/
Cats steady jockin my style talkin bout copy & pasting/
at the same time tryna find everything I've ever dropped-they never stop watchin and waitin/
I never tried to use big words your focus is in the wrong place/
You're not safe I bodybag you and tag you cuz you're way off base/
Your disses are wack this is a fact visions of black /
is what you see when I begin my attack so don't start kissin my crack/
Your queer ass folk tales would get no sales/
sellin yourself short like midgets in a $10 a night motel/
Its time that you start growin up and to this board you stop showin up/
You the white cream king? Son..that aint mayonnaise you've been throwin up/
Chump, you suck -punks jump up, you know the rest/
Now, you know the best these bars'll leave you holdin ya chest/
Screamin "this the big one"-thought you could finish the god?/
I took your rhymes to Fred Sanford he won't even put that shit in his yard/
Oscar the Grouch can vouch for you he's a garbage connoisseur/
He holds you in high regards like a garage full of manure/
My verses have you hittin the floor make u shit in ya drawers/
Keep trippin thinkin you spittin I'll slap my dick out ya jaws







It takes years to become an overnight success...

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3. "2ND RD. BATTLE: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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Tue Jul-22-03 12:46 AM by ThaAnthology

  

          

Ezzsential repping for the lone female in the draw!

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Instant Axis
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25. "RE: 2ND RD. BATTLE: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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yeah!!! i see ya was shook before we even cracked a chapter in this book.........................................check it, i know you aint want Frak in the battle, shorty tried to pay off DVS with a knockoff JKJ for her ammo/i understand yo, i wouldnt want Ax either, its like comparing Madden football to NFL fever/no contest , the strong vet, shot put ya thong babe, no disrespect but check the intellect, viking swing, i bare the ezzentials inside this high strung queen/sly individual lean break down ya center, old age crept up saggin swiftly under ya neck hun/Frak aint the one for them complex frontiers, thats the reason you get ousted in every war you appear/you.......try......tooo......hard, stop thinkin and lay ya verse, show ya cards, poker face only gonna get you poked in the face, Ax might even choke out this dame, i aint one for separation but take it E Z there mang/let me clarify dame, broad actin hard foolish Ashanti or was it mariah there god, slept ya head nod/ya shit aint knockin,chicken squakin bird chested and ya pic needs a locksmith!!!!/keep that shit locked up!!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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42. "I hate battlin peeps in cool with =/"
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s'all in fun..


When it comes to actors my factors are utterly obliged/ to smack rappers in the back of their minds till googily eyed/ eliminate their species and breed a new kind/ bind out the carbon/ spew “instant” emcees into tarts and/ leave their parts apple bobbin/ dissin me with words as “dame” had me render you ostrich/ your shit’s garbage/ suck the meat off your bones and cartilage/ this ain’t the Parttridge, “lil Davey” strumming banjos is equivalent to your lyrical stamina/ I put a match to your plastic hatch and melt the “axis” right off the banner/
I’m doin rounds on you, like ya momma’s moo-moo/ plunge your face so far down to taste, you call it taboo/ its OK to diss my style, cuz my intellect has you taunted/ and to diss my picture is wack, cuz in IMs you be stalkin’/ asking me if I have any others…stressing me cuz “u know what it’s like to have a single mother”/ bitch please, I saw your sequel when u claimed a freckle was the “real” color- of your skin/ I didn’t know them wiggers on “Whiteboys” the movie was your kin/ yo, claimin’- you the best is a straight up sin/ your boom volume is “min”/used to floss my teeth with/ you got beef? I’ll have you losing before we begin, just ask Zin/ battle me first, then inboxin with mad questions/ “females do that?, I think I’m crushin” /what’d I tell these cats about being thought provok-in?? To be an emcee requires effort, not what u think up when you be “smok-in”/ Cuz frak-rocks like “fraggle-rock”/ talk itchin’- the toe jam in my socks/ you need “lyrical glocks” “verbal gats” and “speech grenades” to stop- the pop of my lightning striking the stage/my plaque, spins your speech into ice cream/yo, winning me is a pipe dream your creating/ your simple-ton seasoning is the bottle I be shaking/ not only is your isshh incomplete, the styles straight lazy… giving birth to the concepts of the gerber baby… I’m chalkin’ up your popularity vs. your skills and doin’ the estimating/ they don’t match!
-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Instant Axis
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54. "i understand ya plans!!!!!"
In response to Reply # 42


  

          

wigger shiiiiit, more like split ya wig, fuck it, american history x ya jaw to the concrete ya skunk prick/claimin color lines in public cause E aint been hip since the invention of the sputnik/and ya wonder why we have so much in common, "single mother", thats you, lil dun without a father/your fault!! your fault!!!!, you can handle it, your grown, cop ya son some scuba gear cause hes basically swimmin on his own/stalkin ya pictures, E!!! come on, what the fuck that look like, you on aim practically suckin my dick under the nightlight/not a cat fight but a brawl, you want intellect spokin then drink alcohol, cause thats the only time the truth is exposed in this mic draw/one flaw, time limit on ya spinach, olive oil pull a brutus to ya soil the way i manhandle these broads, on call.....Ezzential couldnt hold Frak let alone Instants balls/ya stalled out the gate heavy weight, feather punchin rhymer part timin this battle mang/plenty of time to train ya lines, get at Ax then politik another week before ya drop ya next rhyme/i understand perfection, but if we was on stage aint no etch and sketch to save ya, ima hata, yeah yeah, ima hata, stick you in the pavement and let the cement enslave ya/thats the only time you'll be concrete, cause powder puff emcees aint got the lifespan for this heat/take that wedgie out ya technique....ya lookin stiff!!!

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Ezzsential
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74. "ya understand wha????"
In response to Reply # 54


  

          

your cluttered syllubus, sends me shuttering spontaneously/
I keep beating your presentations til' you break down to gravy/ you understand my plans to flip your skin inside out and binge on your giblets?
you fidget with gimmicks, irrelevent statements and still on WIC sentiments, adolescent stages/
I get intimate with every regurgatation, who the fugg you phasin??/
Turn your mascarade into marmalade, got hormones ragin'/ slayin' you non-chalant pourage to paralyzed pillage/
monotoned attempted killins, Need I flip you over on ya backside for some excitement, deflower your image? scrimmage your recycled character that's macarated bitch with mascara/
this cat's straight producing pink estrogen in his cathader/ Have me askin ya.. did u run home to your ma-ma like "anthony" did on prince pasta? I foster the steelos of imposters cute and cunning- watering their glossy gluttoning color until its running/
you'll be benchwarming, anticipating the "short bus" with your pre-empted thrusts/ your a "toys R us" spoken, chucky cheese token- emcee "short cut"/turning your tuning the wrong way/ I pruning your puny foolish the long way/ i stay sway while I slay emcees with this languid linguistical labrynth/ behead you and smash your cabbage into tablets/
come on! tinker with my sickels and shovels! I'm sicker than the "famine" in ethipia, when I juggle/ emcees, and palm their pleas into remaining renaissance puddles/ scuffle these mental mockeries and detect them sappy sentimental/ romantically, I spread their remaining entity around like rose petals...


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Instant Axis
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104. "lets just finish the rounds"
In response to Reply # 74


  

          

fuck it, Ax drops first in every round, pound for pound, E couldnt see this verse birthed thru ultra sound/check ya culture now, feed off my rhyme and get engulfed by the vultures mouth/concerned with Lax when you catchin an L from Ax, distract punchin judy rhymers that cant handle the crap/you snivling lil bastid, crying to sway them votes, you was leading already, Frak hurt ya feelings i gotta question ya chest E/no heart......pitiful excuse for an emcee throwin darts, fuck ya shoppin cart flows, type of cat to pay for them groceries sit at home and freeze poems/keepem on ice, only a few gonna get that, cause everyone knows E cant compete without written raps/division facts talk about fiction perhaps, yeah Fraks a wigger now watch me clip out ya diction snatch/come with that blah blah blah Ax and that gibberish act, only infant in this battle is E babblin some diaper rash/step in a cypher laugh cause you probably rhyme like Brittany on punked with that high strung Ash/what the fuck!!!!! i shatter light bulbs with more energy then you, electric current cant function with how many E's does it take to screw/spittin ya horse manure doodoo

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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110. "=P"
In response to Reply # 104


  

          

I swipe more brain on these pages than your Barbie doll lover swiped for silicone/pipe on- ya vagabond equilibrium, plaster ceramic antics for the millionth-time, <sigh> splice the spirits right out of mediocre minds/ possessed with totin swine, / I run through cloned zones like prime-meridians- shape-shift particles and hang them to dry/ get giddy when, your mans gave you props…then conjure enough self-esteem to actually say something hot! I ought- to render artificial pleather sectors- suicidal, slittin’ wrists/ the jest is, I hiss at phony corner rejoinder annoyers with extensive vocabilists/ while “axis” resorts to, toy bent blacksmith catalyst tactics, fathomin’ with- untruth/ The “freezing poems” part was cute but not complete enough for a dispute/ see, I mastered both so you soak in juice till I drain you destitute/cuz squinty-eyed and saber toothed-I swoop, and capture your counterfeit somber-spits/ then spit unorthodox random samples you cant be fuckin with/ changin’ channels, ADD mind-ed, soap-opera scandalous/
Cuz you’re stoopin’ on stupid, gurglin’ coos on hiphop P’s and Q’s/ use lyrics like receptacle stations/ I engage in- investigating ya bitch that stitched my hosiery/ text and sentiments more messed and meshed than Arab orgies/ hard to see- when u junction “sorbet” semantics and skew substitute fallacies/ I’m scuffin’ ya badly-till repoitre “falters”/ words wallow when- postures- hand tittie-strained, bent kneed- at alters/ then, halted when, initiated to offer another thought angle/ and lay off of your own bastard insecurity rant and rambles/ I offer samples, before your umbilical cord could carry a real WAR/ what’s in store for an emcee who calls me shit like “judy rhymer”? you tell me
Add water to become an emcee in an “instant”???? your hypocrisy has me smitten…
I don’t need props cuz essentially I stand alone in my lyrical omniscience…..(om-nish-shintz) get a dictionary if u don’t understand what I be spittin…. Blah blah blah blah...



-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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DivineVersatile
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4. "2ND RD. BATTLE: syllabicdivinity vs. jayare214"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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14. "round one"
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Jayare don’t want what I’m bringin, this here some mental mudslingin… you can’t spit shit so don’t talk it, cause I’ll make you walk it for just swingin /
ding ding already birds singing, knocked yourself tryin to get through the ring stringing… don’t beat yourself up over it it’s not your fault, blame it all on your upbringing /
had you any at all and you probably would’ve known, to quit while ahead… gracefully bowed out after Lucky, but unluckily, you let it flush right to your head /
gassed up like you got petrol to spray, or even a hose to spray wit… this stops just for diesel engines where my Mack truck packs coups like you in the pavement /
so save it, with your corny 2 fast, 2 furious ass… Civic tryin to growl like a Harley, after-market phony blowin through chrome just to pass /
but Bics a thoroughbred, my breed of emcee too pure to supercede… metaphors are mastiffs bout to detach limbs unless Jay quick to concede /
it’s the dopest vs. the dopeless, your style restless, sessed, and quoteless… turnin and tossin in your sleep countin sheep knowin shit’s hopeless /
should count scapegoats instead startin wit self, since I’m bout to take shit out on you… play it like I just got fired from the post office so you got a pretty good idea of what I’m bout to do /
run through your frontline like a fullback on coke, roids, and contract incentives… still wanna battle? then get your thumb out your ass what is you anal retentive? /
but take your time second in line, maybe a day off to plan your point of attack… the Kraft I’m servin you wit is instant and I know it’s cheesy but you can call me Emcee Easy Mac /
and this is just a smack, an appetizer, a measly hint of what I’m bout to do… time this is through i'm leavin you in stockings and garters playin bitch like some chick from Moulin Rouge……

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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18. "rd 1"
In response to Reply # 14


          

walk shit or talk shit? thats the best you can throw???
yo DVS! the fuck i told you bout these amateur foes
flimsy with flows fraudlent flacid rap bastards
simplistic syilabic done got his food and feces backwards
your boxing meatphors as weak as ya limp wristed punches
your rhyme sheets like star jones gut they both need crunches
your lyrical slump is leading towards pathetic patna
your confused like white boys that wanna be rastas
imposter cost ya more than ya ass can cash
low class no talent upstart overly brash and gassed
on my upbringing or balls swingin or whatever ya fantasy
you can injest my petrol spray like diet pills for ya vanity
im commandin these manatee endangered species rappers
back to the confines of their cage silly-bitch is courtin disaster
im master of my domain lines that plaster ya frame-
then solidify only to dutch oven ya brain
your not a rhymer your lines jacked from mother goose crook!
rhyme scheme makes as much sense as lyrics from scoob and books thats das efx you digidedy derlect devoid of intellect
destroy ya flesh so theres no trace for csi to inspect
infest ya chest and swallow ya heart ya ludacris mark
refrencin ya favorite movies to give ya saggin lines a spark
plug ya mouth not ya butt chump ya skill is knob slobbing
your shits depressing like kobe's punk ass sobbing....



my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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19. "rd2"
In response to Reply # 4
Tue Jul-22-03 11:24 PM

          

in round one i set ablaze a sullen bic
that was dry of fluid and couldnt spark this blunt to hit
but im blunt when i hit like clubber lang good with them thangs
sling hands words or lyrics the same, yall know my name
silly of you denise williams low self esteem writer
to think that i would light ya ass with nothin less than fire
inspired i sired you in a night of drunken passion
when ya moms was thinner cute and still into fashion
now ya bitter like beanie seagal i didnt raise you bastard
ill give u the truth or the reason whichever will make you exit faster
im the o.j. of rappers psychotic slasher
your job description in hiphop is victim or flasher
revealing your most revealing embarrasing parts
like the words u use to disgrace this art. u lack heart
I create this art true to my mission like shaolin preists
my lyrics challenge syllabic brain to form a new crease
to process the power of punches in my prose
but his enhanced new brain only creates a world he controls
your slow simplistic sloppy and sub par
your names a cliche like pras singing ghetto superstar
i used to char you weak cats but now im vegan
so instead of death i chasisty belt ya lips from speakin
whatevers leakin from your mouth peaked before it peeked out
now youve soiled ya speech with urine vomit feces and doubt.

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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syllabicdivinity
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24. "RE: rd2"
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sticks and stones couldn’t dent my bones and your words barely hold my attention /
thinkin the odds jay are in your favor when you ain’t even in contention /
get my dick out your hand, the mic you’re holding is just it’s extension /
similar to pre-ejaculation your script ain’t got no suspension /
no horror, no drama neither, plus your conflict lacks dimension /
it’s all internal, midlife-crisis-esque, not even aimed in my direction /
suspect for emcee impersonation I got junior here in apprehension /
cause when it comes to exposition I got the patent it’s my own invention/
see I know you’re relyin on the popular vote so take the sympathy to boot /
cause there ain’t a registered voter in here that I’m afraid to shoot /
and your first two verses, I was countin and couldn’t find one attribute/
attributing to the reason you fell in the vet bracket in need of a salute/
take away the charter and post count, you’re just General Discussion the deaf-mute /
got me wonderin if your mentally capable of standing trial and handling my prosecute /
funny how I got you speechless and not one of your lines have I yet to refute /
so far I’m countin 16 bars: that’s 8 jabs, 3 hooks, 4 crosses, plus 1 steel tipped boot /
now this is the part of the program when junior assumes the fetal position /
an gets stomped like a measly beetle til his dome leaks all that excessive ambition /
and as I recall the stallion from philly put Clubber Lang the fuck out of commission /
overzealous pussy footin around the ring like Apollo vs. that Russian thinkin this just exhibition /
and you a shaolin priest? please the only art you master is superimposition /
my names a cliché since it stays leakin out your mouth in constant repetition /
basically the only way you’re walkin away is if you’re bringin your whole coalition /
just cosmetic pretendin to be a writer on your day off from your career as a beautician /

((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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85. "rd.3-im tired of waiting"
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Thu Jul-31-03 12:06 PM

          

ive waited a week for this freak to peek his head thru the hole
so i could conclude rd3 of lyrical whack a mole
this guacamole dip shit with less then mediocre spits
has exited the pit of violence drawls full of shit
saggin like hammer pants syllibics hands is still shakin
cant type his verse cus he scared of his nails breakin
fakin the role mistakenly showed his ass and got embarrassed
now he's bare assed rectum booted for rhymin so careless
im fearless fucker! fillet rappers like the frugal gormet
syllibics cliche'd verbal vagina is spayed it wont spray
it wont create psyche bruised when i berate
his verse menstraul cycle and talent all arrive late
Im one of the graets your smooth like metal wheels on roller skates
rhyme skills reak like the producer of kris kross and xscape
get the tape chalk the outline syllibic has spit his last line
flatlined cremated his demise is just my past time
perhaps im being to hard on this cat who spits these scat lines
fecal freak chap lyin be better of jackinn rhymes
catch a buckwheat hit critical bill dead in denver
this cat reminds me of my favorite female place to enter
send a message broken into syllables like bics will
pride and desire to ever grab a mic and spill
"bic im sorry come home i promise no more shots to your dome"
i tried to leave a message but he disconnected his phone...

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syllabicdivinity
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107. "my bad..."
In response to Reply # 85


  

          

i just bought a house and the phone line didn't get hooked up until the 31, and this pc didn't get unpacked until just now, but i see i ain't missed anything...so jay:

fuck ya psuedo-celeb status, politik cliques, and equip /
pesonally hang the jury if not guilty of supreme penmanship /
bic's reader's digest what i feed 'em, jay's inflate stock in Tums /
so far this tourneys 'bout seniority so i shit on the fix, piss on the predicted outcome /
not to mention you're just a junior and a miss i'm 'bout to split /
banged wit ezz way back and compared to you she had the bigger dick /
shogun swords embroider scripts with more forms than loan agents /
your styles simplistically typical and way too fuckin over-rated /
so let me dumb it down for you and yours and not mess with inflection /
can't have yous confusin' 'ension' and 'ition', oh the 'ion' in this one is 'ection' /
you're stressin premature ejack like 'oh my god it's been a week /
i had buisness to handle real life type you fuckin modem emgeek /
don't make me come through this screen and add to a scene already obscene /
ya know what fuck it i disqualify myself dog i'm only droppin fourteen..........
((((((((.dioneye.))))))))
...meye style relieve...call me dioneye the eucalypt...


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DivineVersatile
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5. "VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave"
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BOXING FORMAT!!

10-9 FOR WIN
10-8 FOR KNOCKOUT
9-9 FOR DRAW

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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9. "1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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21. "Round 1: MiracleRic over dave 10-9"
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after reading MiracleRic's verse...I thought that dave was going to have an easy first round...because Ric seemed kinda rusty. However...dave's first felt like he took the whole first round off....so Ric gets the nod. But...on the real...I'm expecting better from both of you.

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49. "dave over MiracleRic 10-9"
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...

It takes years to become an overnight success...

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64. "dave over MiracleRic, 10-8 nm"
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66. "dave 10-9"
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a little short, but nice rebuttal

yep

  

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82. "rd.1 ric 10-9"
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more cleverness...better rhymescheme, and better flow. punches hit harder as well....dave yours read plain and punchless to me...
-j

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86. "Hmmm"
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Miracle gets dave 10-9

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  

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22. "2ND ROUND VOTES GO HERE!"
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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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23. "MiracleRic takes dave in Rd. 2 10-9"
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I dunno...dave, you seem like you was just rushing to put some shit up. What's killing me is that I've seen some of your previous verses...PLUS I've seen a metaphor or two in this battle that lets me know you can come better.

Ric...this is the type of shit I expect from you...very solid....nice use of pneumonic devices...verses folding back upon themselves. I argue with vets ALL the time about the fact that your nicer than folks are willing to give you props for...

Ric takes it 10-9 in a battle that was 10 seconds away from being 10-8
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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50. "RE: MiracleRic over dave 10-9"
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I felt MiracleRic came with it this round...

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67. "Miracle 10-9"
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got himthere

yep

  

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83. "ric 10-8"
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in boxing if somone gets knocked down they do more than lose the round. dave dropped a short lackluster verse, that had some decent rhymes, no punches and not enough lenght to do much of anything. it read like a throwaway verse.

ric punctuated and had this round won after about 6 lines....

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Chaste_Souls
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108. "RE: ROUND'S 1,2 AND 3: MIRACLE RIC VS. DAVE"
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1ST ROUND: 9-9, liked both battles

2ND ROUND:10-9, RIC HADEM

3RD ROUND:10-8, DAVE came back from the dead, ressurected.
I now he has more in store, would like to
see him in another tourney. Last round
show's that he's not gonna hold back anymore.

  

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Chaste_Souls
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34. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave"
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Both: 9-9

Dave fed from Miracle's verses, they both get the knods on the 1st round.

I believe they holding the KO's for round 3.

  

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43. "rofl @ dave"
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this was the illest line in your peice

stop toyin with me, dont you know i'll fuckin outgame milton bradley/
while you runnin thru chutes and ladders tryna avoid the inevitable tragedy,

i loved that..

damn i still cant decide.. I gotta read again... both of you had mad fire.. =)

-Stephani

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when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


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44. "heh"
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this line was tite too!
spittin classics til the hereafter, while you spit soft nickelodeon references/
i drop percussive body blows in accurate immaculate measurements/


hmmmm.. I would have to call it a tie..

9-9 just cuz you had some blows dave.. but ric did address you for callin out nick junior than sayin "milton bradley"

also.. ric's first verse killed it.. dave had some tight ass lines tho


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
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84. "wtf??? dave DAMN dave 10-9"
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dave came back HARD!!!!!
rics verse was lackluster.....kinda started cliched and predictable....
dave came in SMASHIN...dug the rhyme scheme content...everything....wished your other verses hit me like this one....
that shit had some lines to it...
-j

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47. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave"
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Round 1: MiracleRic, 10-9
y'all both brought heat but dave's verse was too short...
Round 2: MiracleRic, 10-9
see above
Round 3: dave, 10-9
once again, lotsa heat, dave had a little more tho and he finally brought a whole verse

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It's good to be the King.

  

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87. "Hmmm"
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Round 2 Dave 10-9

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  

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60. "Round 3: draw 9-9"
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Dave...ya punches were better...but your flow just make my head hurt. I couldn't spit it...so I couldn't credit u with the victory.

Ric...you look like you took the round off. But you were tight enough to get the draw.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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Chaste_Souls
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61. "RE: Round 3: Close Call"
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Dave 10: Ending was grilled/smoking/Bar-B cued tasty

"your AB-BA cadabra couldnt conjure enough miracles, ric, to halt this lyrical beat down,/
man, fuck the votes now, i'm dumpin just to show that dave is a human wreckin ball
but damn, rics rap career began and ended on a motherfucking message board...

Miracle Ric 9: Close Call, Ending was right but shorter with lesser fire/spark.

Dave 10-9, gets this vote

  

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Chaste_Souls
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63. "RE: Round 2: 10-9 Dave...Close Call"
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Miracle almost had him at the end, Dave came with the torch nearing the ending.


  

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65. "best round"
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IMHO...

dave over MiracleRic 10-9

because of these lines..
it's my turn to rock now, you can jump up off the cock now,/
tryna battle mine? you outta line and and mufuckas is scared to hold your spot down,/ we can get multisyllabic if thats plot now,
whatever dog, your rhyme schemes is too weak, how?/
your AB-BA cadabra couldnt conjure enough miracles, ric, to halt this lyrical beat down,/
man, fuck the votes now, i'm dumpin just to show that dave is a human wreckin ball
but damn, rics rap career began and ended on a motherfucking message board...


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Slowly Surely,
walk away from....
©Jill Scott

------------------------------
my work
http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/7598631
http://evan-roth.com/grey.php

  

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68. "i give a 9-9 as well"
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niether of you really went for the jug

yep

  

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88. "Hmmm 3rd Round"
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Dave 10-9

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  

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80. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: MiracleRic vs. dave"
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round 1-Ric 10-9
round 2-Ric 10-9
round 3-Dave 10-9

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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6. "VOTE FOLDER: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous"
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BOXING FORMAT!!

10-9 FOR WIN
10-8 FOR KNOCKOUT
9-9 FOR DRAW

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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DivineVersatile
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10. "1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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MiracleRic
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46. "rnd 1, 2, & 3...mayo wins 10-9"
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rnd 1...mayo
rnd 2...mayo
rnd 3...mayo

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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51. "How did you vote for all 3 rounds before Rd 3"
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was even over? Seriously? Not taking anything away from Mayo...but you put yourself out there to be questioned.

It takes years to become an overnight success...

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53. "RE: How did you vote for all 3 rounds before Rd 3"
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human error, my bad, let me correct myself...
rnd 1&2...mayo 10-9
rnd 3...spontaneous 10-8

just human error, trying to read to many things at once thought i remembered a 3rd verse, i didnt like ur first two verses spon, and i didnt like mayo's last verse, he knew he was up and gave ya a round and u took well advantage of it, so i have this as a tie, sorry folks...ignore my 1st vote, 28-28, peace

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55. "cool beans homie"
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No harm no foul....

It takes years to become an overnight success...

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62. "my votes"
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round 1..... thought both rhymes were wack 9-9 draw
round 2..... 10-9 spontaneous
round 3..... 10-9 spontaneous

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3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
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3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
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69. "Mayoking 10-9"
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yep

yep

  

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96. "RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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Thu Jul-31-03 06:32 PM

  

          

round 1-Mayo 10-9
round 2-Mayo 10-9 but barely got it, Spon was bringin it
round 3-Spon 10-9

"I've got seven kids. The
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100. "rd1 mayo 10 spont 9"
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mayo had punches spontaneous kicked mostly the bragadocious and some of that hit cliched. mayos punches wernt the tightest, and NEVER explain your shit....im old school but cats should be reading that detail out of the material....I know thats just me being an idealist and most wordplay misses the readers, but explaining yourself breaks the rhythm of ya piece...least in my eyes....
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39. "rd1: mayoking 10-9."
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40. "rd2: mayoking 10-8."
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45. "word! mayo!"
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mayo u won 10-9 cuz he's wack!!! he had some lines in there that looked like they were cut and pasted.. had me goin "hmmmm"..

but ur references to all that swizz beatz n jlo.. were kinda.. well.. weak =X




-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
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lol I overuse my "emotional center"
peep my wack site and pic!http://hometown.aol.com/ezzsential/myhomepage/index.html

when my soul speaks:
when watchin VH1 soul and they play back to back videos that i like, when I'm intertwined with intimacy, goin' to a Jill Scott concert and gettin in the front row, recievin a drum stick from the drummer, gettin on the vip bus, love, when talib pulled me on stage, then I asked him "what sign are you"?
,Common tellin people to "love themselves" at his show, tellin ?uestlove
"listen to me flow" hehe, and he listened, when collaborating with people who write like me, findin a poetry spot for women!, bubble baths and rose petals, "100 ways why he loved me" as a christmas present, breakdancing and deejaying, expressin' my autonomy and femininity,
phycoanalysis...

"I am enough of an artist to draw freely upon my imagination. Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world."
"The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science. He to whom this emotion is a stranger, who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe, is as good as dead: his eyes are closed." Albert Einstein

the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


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70. "mayo rd. 2 10-9"
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and Spon gets round 3 10-9

yep

  

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101. "rd 2 mayo 10 spont 8"
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this was a one sided round. the light punches spont thru were deflected and met with some real punches....
last line of mayos was killer...

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109. "Mayo Takes Spontaneous 10-9, Rd. 1"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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113. "Spontaneous over MayoKing 10-9 Rd. 2"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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114. "Rd. 3 Spontaneous over MayoKing 10-9"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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118. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: MayoKing vs. Spontaneous"
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round 1 sponetaneous 10-9
round 2 spontaneous 10-9
round 3- very creative approach mayo 10-9


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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119. "ooops"
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i already voted on this one.. i guess I'll have to give it the first shit i said.. sorry =-X


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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121. "you get the gas face....lol"
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7. "VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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Wed Jul-23-03 07:10 PM by Lunchboxxx

  

          

BOXING FORMAT!!

10-9 FOR WIN
10-8 FOR KNOCKOUT
9-9 FOR DRAW
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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11. "1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

  

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52. "Rnd 1: Ezzsential over Instant Axis 10-9"
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Ezz verse seemed to flow better.

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56. "RE: Rnd 2: Ezzentials 10 vs. Axis 8"
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Ezzentials had better word gain and a better flavor in this round, Axis came out like "RAAAHHH" with a comic view skit about Pop-eye and Olive Oil???$%^@^


Ezzentials over Axis on this one.
10-8

  

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57. "ummmm"
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Ezz didn't post round 2 yet

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It's good to be the King.

  

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59. "RE: ummmm: O"
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(Pausing) Now I'm gonna re-read both Round 2's when she drop a come back...

ty for alerting mey

  

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71. "Ezzential got him"
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You started out okay, but she came with the heat again and surprised me. I think she ripped you so hard actually I'll give out my first 10-8 of this whole tournament to round one

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79. "RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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ya see, this is exactly why we shouldnt let people talk on there own threads, cause all it is to me is a way to sway votes which i doint get when ya already winning, honestly i wouldnt have said njothin about you being a single mother, and yes im a product of a single mother but hey E, hey E, hey E!!! this is battle, you actin like i meant the shit, you didnt see me get bent out of shape for callin me a wigger and thats cause i know whoi i am, maybe its you whos not sure who you are but whatever yo, if ya want the win that bad, ayo DVS, i havnt voted on any battles so disqualify me duke, peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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97. "nah i just"
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got heated cuz cats quoted that line.. and its irrelevent.. im not bent cuz u wrote it.. but cats are gonna give u vote specifically for that line???? come on.
Like I said.. I saw better lines in your other round sides that one.
and nah its not about wins lol.. I;ve lost before, but yo.. cats wanna see shit get personal.. thats why I changed up the flow for the second round


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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75. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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round 1- 9-9 both made me say damn....

round 2- 10-9 frak, cuz he made me say, awww fuck no!
"our fault!! your fault!!!!, you can handle it, your grown, cop ya son some scuba gear cause hes basically swimmin on his own/"

someone save his soul...

laxed

  

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78. "first of all"
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figures "lax" would like that fuggin part, I dont think that people who are products are single mother hood.. should diss it.. lol..HYPOCRISY..
after your verse that sucked and the only thing that made it good was your link to this cat's losing post.. and how u sold out your online "fam" when they were battlin' moderators...
we know how grimy you'll get lax.. just to win and be on top .. on the fuggin "INTERNET"..
yo, i hope i battle you next..
keep talkin about my single parent hood.. gauranteed... 80% of ya'll are fuggin bastards just like the rest of us...


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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81. "excuse me miss....."
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show some respect por favor.... trust me the last thing i need to hear some chick whining online... yeah, i thought the diss was funny. whether or not frak can diss such a thing is between you and frak, not me... but whether or not i can laugh, is up to me... secondly, i can admit that my verse to ant wasnt my usual homecooked sweetness, but it got me a win... secondly, ask my fam when ive ever "sold out on them." you dunno anything about me and my crew so dont act like you do.... i was there with prod when he went through that shit and i was backin up ric when he was doin the same shit a couple months ago.... so mind ya Ps and Qs cuz your right, lax does get grimy... but not to be on top, to make myself and the other sonsofbitches out there laugh... so stop crying, you got dissed....

and why wait to battle me next... ill take ya now...

laxed

  

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91. "RE: excuse me miss....."
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in my last verse.. i tried to take the personal shit out.. cuz its wack for me and him to go back and forth about personal shit just to win an online battle..
skills are evident in rhyme scheme and punchlines, etc.

and I feel I offered more support than you did in ric's moderator battle.. shiet... while u were just rootin for lunch.. werdum up.
and I just got mad cuz that part was wack.. the part about me not being able to "handle" my single parent hood..its fuggin fallacy

cuz basically.. how the fugg do any of you know! lol.

anyway, straight up.. i dont have enough time cuz I'm in my last semester of school for extra battles..,however, I hope someone backs out so I can battle you in the tourney...
if not, I'll spit after wit you after. mos def.
I just still dont agree with you on that being the hottest part of that particular verse (fraks second)and.. u need to give props due for the first.. cuz there's no way he even came remotely close in the first...


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Ezzsential
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92. "even though u got me pissed off"
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wif that cryin shit.. (read ur response again)
just cuz ima female doesnt mean I'm crying.. so ur stereotypical narrowmindedness renders you inferior.. werd up
I'm glad cornballs think that herb shit is funny... when it aint
I diss cats like you "lax"/ cats so high on their fuggin egoes n shit.. yo bring it... lol

-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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LaXyDaZiCaL
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94. "howd i fail womens studys??"
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i love bitches!!

hahah, totally just playin... listen sister... it doesnt matter if you a girl or not, if you were a dude and i knew it youd still be whining and shit to me, its not cuz your a girl its cuz its what your doing... so stop using your sex as an excuse...

secondly, im not high on my ego at all... im as cocky as any mc on these boards... i got alot to learn, and i recognize skills... your an ill mc, and i aint sayin that your not... i just thought frak had a smashin line... thats all... i never dissed you for nothing... that was all you sister, comin at me... so calm down...

i never had problems with you until this point, and im just saying- dont diss me cuz i laughed at a diss in a damn tourney... get it together. your falling apart...

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98. "i would stop"
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getting mad.. but u manage to fling in your low blows at the end of ur sentences so obviously you think youre slick.
"get it together you're falling apart" shit like that makes me wanna battle you =)
but s'all good. Just to reiterate I can state an opinion without whining, etc


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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Instant Axis
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93. "RE: excuse me miss....."
In response to Reply # 91


  

          

"and I just got mad cuz that part was wack.. the part about me not being able to "handle" my single parent hood..its fuggin fallacy"

honestly i dont see how that part was wack, you came with some shit on your part, i didnt bitch about it,i didnt get mad cause i recognize its a battle and also realize what you are saying is just for battle purposes which mine is as well, if ya take it to heart maybe ya shouldnt be in the tourny cause i certainly didnt take being called a wigger to heart or being a product of a single mother to heart, its all battle, yes, ima bastid, thats one of my known quotes anyway, but fuck it yo, you coo with me, if i hurt ya, i apologize, never meant it tho, peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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Ezzsential
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99. "i wasnt mad"
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but cats started quoting shit.. i got mad. =)
but im not nomore cuz i stated my opinion


-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

the new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning confetti like
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection on emotional strain
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy dreanching destiny to bloody toned walls



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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LaXyDaZiCaL
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95. "RE: excuse me miss....."
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>and I feel I offered more support than you did in ric's
>moderator battle.. shiet... while u were just rootin for
>lunch.. werdum up.
fuck lunchboxxx hes beefed with everyone in my crew basically... what you know about it?



>u need to
>give props due for the first.. cuz there's no way he even
>came remotely close in the first...
and theres no way ant came close to me in our verses either (in my mind anyways) but i didnt start callin you a halfway retarded bitch when you voted against me... at least i gave you the tie... which i felt more then fair...

whats really bothering you? do you want a date with me or something???

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MiracleRic
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76. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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round 1: ezz 10-9
round 2: ax 10-9

both are spitting acidic heat, best battle of this stage, no doubt, third round decidng round in my eyes, keep it up u 2, peace

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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77. "Hmmm"
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1 st Round Ezz 10-9
2nd Round 9-9 a draw b/c they both brought it well to eachother

Peace
Kitkat

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

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111. "round 3"
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axis 10-9
he just had me laughin more, hard one 2 judge

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112. "Hmmm"
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After rereading both ryhmes I give slight edge to axis
10-9

I need a vacation, can I sleep like Mr Van Winkle here?

The sexual revolution was born in between these thighs waiting to be reinvented.

  

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115. "Rd. 1: 9-9 draw"
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Very nice start...I couldn't give the nod to Axis because Ezzsential had more punchlines...I couldn't give the nod to Ezzsential because her flow was scattershot at best.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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116. "Rd. 2 Axis over Ezzsential 10-9"
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Ezzsential went personal first...but AXIS went personal better.

The scuba gear line was like the highlight of this entire tourney.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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117. "Round 3: Ezzsential takes Axis 10-9"
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One of the better verses I've seen from Ezzsential goes up against one of the lighter ones I've seen from Ax.

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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122. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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First Round Ezz, 10-9
Second Round Ax, 10-9
Third Round Ax, 10-8
You both brought your unique styles but Ezzsential seemed to be
caught up in writing poetry, while Ax was landing clean blows.
Good battle.

!@#$%^&*()!@#$%^&*()!@#$%^&*()!@#$%^&*()!@#$%^&*()

People amongst People...
Love amongst Love...
Sin amongst Sin..

  

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123. "RE: VOTE FOLDER: Instant Axis vs. Ezzsential"
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Round 1: Axis vs. Ezzsential 9-9

Round 2: Ezzsential vs. Axis 10-9

Round 3: Axis vs. Ezzsential(Ezz gotem) 10-8

  

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DivineVersatile
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8. "VOTE FOLDER: syllabicdivinity vs. jayare214"
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BOXING FORMAT!!

10-9 FOR WIN
10-8 FOR KNOCKOUT
9-9 FOR DRAW

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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12. "1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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28. "Round 1: jayare214 over syllabic 10-9"
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Syllabic...I felt some of your punchlines...but the run on sentence structure left a little to be desired. I couldn't really catch the flow...even though there was a rhyme at the end of every couplet.

Jayare...either you done came up since we battled or I caught you on a bad day. This verse was niiiiiiice! Kinda tapered off in the end....but I was saying to myself that you took it after reading your first 8. Good shit.

Jay takes Syllabic 10-9

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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MiracleRic
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32. "jayare over syllabic...10-9"
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jay, had a better then decent verse whereas i couldnt even keep my attention on syllabic's, the rhyme scheme is too stretched out, no real flow to it, too simple a rhyme scheme too...

jay 10-9

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72. "jayare 10-9"
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you didn't bring it like you did on me syll, what's up with that?

yep

  

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89. "RE: 1ST ROUND VOTES GO UNDER HERE!"
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Jay take sit 10-9, kid came out the gate ready to eat and he feasted. Bic had some heat but just not enough.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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105. "Round 1 jayare214 over syllabic 10-9"
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120. "i give it to syl"
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round one jayare you threw some heat 10-9
round two and three you just fell off.. it was like u ran out of shit to say..and the flow was off as well =X
and if you go back to my first battle with "ranjaniero" u see similiar vibes to your shit like "flimsy foes" with mine.. i felt kinda violated =X but i still give that round to you
2: syl 10-9
3: syl 10-9

he just brought more heat...while jay's flow just fell off...plus i liked the part he threw me in =X sorry



-Stephani

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
www.soundclick.com/sylana
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Brb8g8f18xE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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29. "ROUND 2 VOTES GO HERE!!"
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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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30. "Rd. 2: jayare214 over syllabic 10-9"
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Jay...you started off well in round 1...and kept it consistent in round 2. Not as tight as your first one...but the difference between the two wasn't much. You did have a punchline or two that made me say "Oh, my damn!" though...

Bic...I really think you killed yourself with the constant "-ion" rhyme scheme. Even though there are a plethora of words that you can freak using that...it gets a little contrite after time. Just seemed like you were forcing the battle, even though you did show glimpses of true skill. Oh...and that last line? Bananas! You did decent...just not great.

Jayare over Bic 10-9
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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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33. "jayare over syllabic...10-9"
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decent verse again by jay

i despised this verse syll...overkill on the "-ion" words, anybody could do it, and throughout the whole verse, only 2 punchlines kept me awake...the last line and this one...

"attributing to the reason you fell in the vet bracket in need of a salute/"

jay wins 10-9

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73. "syllabic 10-9"
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thought his verse was just fresher and smarter. Although, I'm still waiting for some real heat from one of you.

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90. "RE: ROUND 2 VOTES GO HERE!!"
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Bic got this 10-9 but J was really close to makin it a 10-10 round but Bic had just a lil more heat in my opinion, good shit fellas.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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106. "Round 2 jayare214 over syllabic 10-9"
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26. "RE: OKP TOURNEY: 2ND ROUND BATTLES AND VOTES!!"
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looks like you guys are handling shit well in here. good to see it.


.quidom.
.posts.guaranteed.to.boost.iqs.

.the.N.stands.for.Nnowledge.

what the world needs now...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/loudminoritymusic.htm

get involved!
http://www.mixedexpression.com/okaymentary

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27. "Look who came outta the darkness...."
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Whassup Quidom. Last I heard, you were busy as hell studying in Cali. Hope everything is going peace.

Yeah...there are a few old heads still around.

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation.

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58. "someone please drop out...."
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i want in this so bad....

laxed

  

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102. "LAST DAY TO VOTE/POST BATTLES!!"
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Sorry, y'all. I been in the studio and haven't really kept up on this. I will tabulate the votes over the weekend...and the new battles will be up on Monday or Tuesday....more than likely on Monday!

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Waldorf and Statler Vol 4:CONAN IS OUT NOW!!!: http://waldorfandstatler.bandcamp.com

and don't forget to check "DVS 4 ALDERMAN"

http://windimoto.bandcamp.com/album/dvs-4-alderman-bandcamp-exclusive-expanded-editio

  

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103. "RE: LAST DAY TO VOTE/POST BATTLES!!"
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hey DVS, not tryin to tell ya how do this, but is jayare just gonna get the win since they almost finished the battle and what about ezz and ax?

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