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TheProdigiousPoet
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"*What Is My Purpose*"


  

          

What's my purpose?
Not that I don't let my light shine bright on purpose,
But my mind is not right so I write words waiting for my soul to surface...
And this earth is...
Taking a toll on my soul and terrorizing my horizons,
As soon as I pass my task, I move too fast, and I realize then...
That the more I ask, the more I'm left with unanswered questions,
And I shouldn't be second-guessing my fait but fake followers ferociously wait, to serve their food for thought but I already ate off the plate...
But wait...
I find silence in noise, and get injured by the violence of choice...
And we lift every voice to sing, but it seems Satan is waiting with poise to posses the very offering that we bring...
I can no longer take it, I sounder through Sadam, all most hit rock bottom,
Lord I don't think I will make it...
And I feel naked, but not nude, through my distorted views I peruse through the Bible's pages...
I depend on fake friends, continue to view this life through cracked lens...
What happened, my life's a lie, I'm just actin, waiting for the demonic director to say action...
And it happens...
More often than not, my heart is hard, Lord please soften the spot...
I'm feeling suicidal, sacrificing sanity to live in vanity, struggling for survival...
I need a revival or a revised resolution, my Christianity has stayed complacent, I need a revolution...
God I'm writing you this letter, it probably would have been better to call you when there wasn't stormy weather, whether you receive this or not, I'm not trying to be clever, I'm just thinking if life is this bad,
Death might be better....

Don't Duck

P.S.A.L.M

http://cashmonet.blogspot.com/

http://www.myspace.com/hollisterholliday

  

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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 01st 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 01st 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 02nd 2003
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Whoah!
Sep 02nd 2003
4
RE: Whoah!
Sep 03rd 2003
5
how's vegas?
Sep 08th 2003
10
RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 04th 2003
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best stuff you've written....
Sep 04th 2003
7
RE: best stuff you've written....
Sep 07th 2003
9
thanx mayne...
Sep 14th 2003
12
RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 07th 2003
8
Felt
Sep 08th 2003
11
RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 14th 2003
13
good idea...
Sep 15th 2003
14
^Up^ For A Purpose --
Sep 19th 2003
15
Minus the last line
Sep 19th 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 25th 2003
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Whoa
Sep 25th 2003
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RE: Whoa
Oct 01st 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 25th 2003
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oh i love you.
Sep 25th 2003
20
RE: no not this way
Sep 25th 2003
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      RE: no not this way
Sep 25th 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 26th 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 26th 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Sep 27th 2003
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RE: *What Is My Purpose*
Oct 01st 2003
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Yo KnowOne...or ant....
Oct 01st 2003
28

NewsiC_NoyC
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Mon Sep-01-03 08:21 AM

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1. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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As soon as I pass my task, I move too fast, and I realize then...
That the more I ask, the more I'm left with unanswered questions
^^^^^I feel ya' bruh.....


God I'm writing you this letter, it probably would have been better to call you when there wasn't stormy weather, whether you receive this or not, I'm not trying to be clever, I'm just thinking if life is this bad,
Death might be better....
^^^^^^Ended real nice with this......crazy ish main......props.......One

" I make beats that make beats say Uhh!"

www.soundcloud.com/m-born

  

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Snow_Flow
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Mon Sep-01-03 08:25 AM

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2. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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First off, I have been waitin foreva for you to put up a piece, and you finally did. So thank you. Secondly, this whole peice was just...wow. Thirdly the last line got me hook, line and sinker. And lastly my fav. lines....

And I feel naked, but not nude, through my distorted views I peruse through the Bible's pages

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"Oddly enough, I'm happy I
ain't famous. Imagine waking
up to the fact that you're
simply entertainment."- Slug

"Who say f*ck the major
labels...Who unsigned and
dead broke can still make
name before they even make a
demo"- Slug from Atmosphere

"Look out for the white girl
Suicide Bombers"-Sole

"Make money and die, that's
the American way, it don't
matter what name you gave the
bucket that you played"- MC
Eyedea

"Still say f*ck the major
label till it limps, put your
deal up on the table and
we'll show you who the pimp"-
MC Slug

"Songs are nameless, guns are
aimless, how long you been
famous."- MC SLUG

"...So when they say I don't
respect the culture, truth
is, I only rap cause I ain't
smart enough to write a
book"- Sole


"And if I did have a choice
I'd never want to live
forever, Just let me have a
voice so I can make my points
I can't imagine running a
race with no finish line
Just let me keep my pace and
make to most of my time" Slug

"Jobs ain't nothin but free
pens and long distance calls"
-Sole

Sometimes it's darkest just
before dawn.

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"I live in the city, like any other/We all live alone/ The only difference is we don't seem to know it/Frozen and lonesome,When it's cold/ In the summer gotta wait for the loathing" - P.O.S.

  

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Snow_Flow
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Tue Sep-02-03 01:11 AM

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3. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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up

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"Oddly enough, I'm happy I
ain't famous. Imagine waking
up to the fact that you're
simply entertainment."- Slug

"Who say f*ck the major
labels...Who unsigned and
dead broke can still make
name before they even make a
demo"- Slug from Atmosphere

"Look out for the white girl
Suicide Bombers"-Sole

"Make money and die, that's
the American way, it don't
matter what name you gave the
bucket that you played"- MC
Eyedea

"Still say f*ck the major
label till it limps, put your
deal up on the table and
we'll show you who the pimp"-
MC Slug

"Songs are nameless, guns are
aimless, how long you been
famous."- MC SLUG

"...So when they say I don't
respect the culture, truth
is, I only rap cause I ain't
smart enough to write a
book"- Sole


"And if I did have a choice
I'd never want to live
forever, Just let me have a
voice so I can make my points
I can't imagine running a
race with no finish line
Just let me keep my pace and
make to most of my time" Slug

"Jobs ain't nothin but free
pens and long distance calls"
-Sole

Sometimes it's darkest just
before dawn.

Snow_Flow
That's Key Row G!

"I live in the city, like any other/We all live alone/ The only difference is we don't seem to know it/Frozen and lonesome,When it's cold/ In the summer gotta wait for the loathing" - P.O.S.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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4. "Whoah!"
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*Diggin' Deep*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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HEBREW_HONEY
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Wed Sep-03-03 04:12 AM

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5. "RE: Whoah!"
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Look within...nevertheless the end was felt most, it's crazy living in a world full of negativity constantly rotating. I know you'll find peace and peace of mind your answers aren't hard to find. Keep shining!

Know Thyself and surroundings to better understand things non-existing and existing, unseen and the seen in order to be able to deal Equality(Equally with all things in life)...Be True to U!

RIGHTEOUS SOULS
Soul Cleansing MuSiCk...LiSing
http://www.i

  

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TheProdigiousPoet
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10. "how's vegas?"
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Don't Duck

P.S.A.L.M

http://cashmonet.blogspot.com/

http://www.myspace.com/hollisterholliday

  

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rukudzo
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Thu Sep-04-03 12:08 AM

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6. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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the gospel according to tppoet has just sproted the shoot of life

peace

  

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bluetiger
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7. "best stuff you've written...."
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and now:

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
- ρδω

♀¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤♀


don't be fkn evil.

  

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Atlas
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9. "RE: best stuff you've written...."
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that's the best graphic, by the way.

  

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TheProdigiousPoet
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12. "thanx mayne..."
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Don't Duck

P.S.A.L.M

http://cashmonet.blogspot.com/

http://www.myspace.com/hollisterholliday

  

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Atlas
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8. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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bump

  

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Imagination_7
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11. "Felt"
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This was felt. Nice work. I especially enjoyed this line...

I need a revival or a revised resolution, my Christianity has stayed complacent, I need a revolution...

Nice. Thank you for sharing.



"Everybody wants the hero. Who just wants the man? Who fights with his devils and does the best he can. Everybody wants a player. I just want a friend..." Jill Scott

"The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf" Unknown


Lesley

  

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Atlas
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13. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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Sun Sep-14-03 06:21 PM

          

That was awesome.

I like that style...
I thin I hope I even paray you sell a series.
I guess that's just what came from your heart.
I think that would be awesome if you told it...
second heart...
then third heart...
then worn heart....
then say a funeral service and invite all the friends...

Like...
I wrote a story to a ghost...
something I never Could! know...
and luckily I took one fast look...
and I felt so good you don't even know.
Before I sent it...
But what it's like not to know...
before I asce nd it. And now....
BThis thrumb of mine. Deaf.

///keep your Is on the raod and your head back your tongue
flapin your neck straight and hyour djaw lose and ghost know
look know... know now bmine. Like I said. Know your aa bbdds.

Death is a love that never dies.
Die with god.

_______________________________________________Atlas

  

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TheProdigiousPoet
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14. "good idea..."
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Don't Duck

P.S.A.L.M

http://cashmonet.blogspot.com/

http://www.myspace.com/hollisterholliday

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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15. "^Up^ For A Purpose --"
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(((Cruizing Round Da Block Again)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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mara
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16. "Minus the last line"
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>God I'm writing you this letter, it probably would have been
>better to call you when there wasn't stormy weather, whether
>you receive this or not, I'm not trying to be clever, I'm
>just thinking if life is this bad,
>Death might be better....

That is exactly how I'm feeling right now

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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slicklyric
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Thu Sep-25-03 08:17 AM

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17. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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..and to think i could've completely missed this!
im sorry i didnt see it before, but im glad i caught it now, def inspiring stuff-loved the inner debate going on...you captured this dilema real well with ur words.

  

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wolfie
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18. "Whoa"
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i hope you get out of this rough spot... you feel like fam' to me. this was well written but so freakin' real... keep your head up ::smiles::

~*~*~*~*~*~*~newolf~*~*~*~*~*~*~

the light: so, you're having a pre-pre-midlfe crisis?
wolfie: yes.
the light: well, that's wonderful!


icantspell

  

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Holister Holiday
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26. "RE: Whoa"
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i agree

  

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19. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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...This was packed with emotion... and FELT!

  

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isis
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20. "oh i love you."
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lord jesus blessed you!!!!


*faints*

----------------------------
i s i s.

  

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freedomfighter
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21. "RE: no not this way"
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intro 1st

nice work enjoy'd?????.......

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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freedomfighter
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22. "RE: no not this way"
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intro 1st




nice work enjoy'd??????..........

".................................from across the street"

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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Thought Knoxx
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23. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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Fri Sep-26-03 03:47 AM

  

          

Damn
That's a tight peace
But I hopes the way ur feeling don't last to long
we all need a lil bit o happiness
Stay up
Peace




<><><><><><><><><><><><>

As i walk though this devestaion around me
I can't even feel the broken glass pierce my feet.

<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Mystic mindset, Travel at warp eight
Flash-Back to my very first taste of hash cake
Oh lord i feel so sensual
And every now and then i get a great sense of WOAH!

Roots Manuva (UK Groova)

  

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24. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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iont know if you do open mics or not but this piece is definately a performance piece. it reads like it should be on stage. if not at least to an audioblog.
good shit.

---------------
Veronica-Precious
'Moon'

Check out my publishing company
UnSilenced Woman Press
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AquaMoon
Aqua Beats and Moon Verses: Volume I
http://www.spokenexistence.com/aqua_moon.html

  

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monte
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25. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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^^^^^^agreed^
cont to push keys
manifested a powerful piece

  

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Otto
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27. "RE: *What Is My Purpose*"
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And I feel naked, but not nude, through my distorted views I peruse through the Bible's pages...
I depend on fake friends, continue to view this life through cracked lens...
What happened, my life's a lie, I'm just actin, waiting for the demonic director to say action...
And it happens...
More often than not, my heart is hard, Lord please soften the spot...
I'm feeling suicidal, sacrificing sanity to live in vanity, struggling for survival...
I need a revival or a revised resolution, my Christianity has stayed complacent, I need a revolution...
God I'm writing you this letter, it probably would have been better to call you when there wasn't stormy weather, whether you receive this or not, I'm not trying to be clever, I'm just thinking if life is this bad,
Death might be better....
~~~~~~~

you dont know the depths inside of me, that i feel this, i know what ur talking about.....forget those pretensions you calll friends, so what u gotta do....its all in the bible man, i know if you pray for guidance and strength, you will recieve it, and you are humble and that is where it starts, i struggle so much, cuz what the world wants you to be, and to do is a vast contradiction to what you haveto do to follow christ....

inbox me or sumthing, and i didnt see this, or ida replied earlier...peace...

-Otto

  

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Otto
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28. "Yo KnowOne...or ant...."
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can we get an archive, this is the stuff here man, its a nice piece for history, shows what one of our most respected family members is dealing with....please consider an archive here...

-Otto

  

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