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KnowOne
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"October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"


  

          

Congratz yo.....you deserve it! You know what to do.....looking forward to it.....



"I sing in strokes of indigo blues
From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis

"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne

"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter

"I sit on language and
eat it raw and
smell it's sweet aroma and
I hear it in
places that have sound but
no words "-gsquared

"I have a shadow that
needs your
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Subject Author Message Date ID
congrats mayne...
Oct 01st 2003
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Hm
Oct 01st 2003
2
wow
Oct 01st 2003
3
RE: wow
Oct 01st 2003
4
RE: wow
Oct 31st 2003
66
thatta boy!
Oct 01st 2003
5
The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)
Oct 01st 2003
6
RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)
Oct 01st 2003
15
HI HATER
Oct 01st 2003
16
RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)
Oct 01st 2003
20
RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)
Oct 04th 2003
35
RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)
Oct 03rd 2003
32
congrats ric :)
Oct 01st 2003
7
Urban Middle Class Street Blues
Oct 01st 2003
8
YEAYYYY BOYYYA!!!
Oct 01st 2003
9
RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues
Oct 01st 2003
21
RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues
Oct 03rd 2003
33
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Oct 01st 2003
10
RE: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Oct 01st 2003
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RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 01st 2003
12
congratulations!!!
Oct 01st 2003
13
madd congratz to you....
Oct 01st 2003
14
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 01st 2003
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RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 01st 2003
18
Someday Smooth
Oct 01st 2003
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RE: Someday Smooth
Oct 01st 2003
22
RE: Someday Smooth
Oct 28th 2003
62
      RE: Someday Smooth
Oct 28th 2003
63
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 02nd 2003
23
Sweet Jesus!
Oct 02nd 2003
24
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 02nd 2003
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RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 02nd 2003
26
too nice
Oct 02nd 2003
27
Lima Beans and Kidney
Oct 02nd 2003
28
yeahhhhh!
Oct 02nd 2003
29
too many quotables
Oct 02nd 2003
30
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 03rd 2003
31
yo Ric
Oct 04th 2003
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RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 04th 2003
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RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 04th 2003
37
congratulations ric
Oct 04th 2003
38
Pussy-foot-loose
Oct 04th 2003
39
Dancing Tears
Oct 04th 2003
40
RE: Dancing Tears
Oct 05th 2003
41
that was a great piece, nm
Oct 05th 2003
42
Genie of the Lava Lamp
Oct 06th 2003
43
congratulations Ric!!!
Oct 06th 2003
44
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 06th 2003
45
HAHA
Oct 06th 2003
46
shining light on...
Oct 06th 2003
47
RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic
Oct 07th 2003
48
COLISEUM Conclusion
Oct 08th 2003
49
Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs)
Oct 08th 2003
50
RE: Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs)
Oct 10th 2003
51
RIC!
Oct 12th 2003
52
peace and props to you.
Oct 14th 2003
53
No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE)
Oct 14th 2003
54
RE: No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE)
Oct 15th 2003
55
LUCIPHER Is A Mindset
Oct 15th 2003
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RE: LUCIPHER Is A Mindset
Oct 16th 2003
57
classic battle verse
Oct 16th 2003
58
SHIT SUIT
Oct 16th 2003
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RE: SHIT SUIT
Oct 18th 2003
61
what in the..?
Oct 17th 2003
60
Yo Ric.....
Oct 30th 2003
64
You've Made Me So Proud This Month -- *Big Ass
Oct 31st 2003
65

TheProdigiousPoet
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1. "congrats mayne..."
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Don't Duck

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mara
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Wed Oct-01-03 03:07 AM

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2. "Hm"
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Congratulations sweetie. You know I wasn't even paying attention to that damn thread and next thing I know you're AOTM. You're a sneaky little something aren't you? LOL

*I'm hella hella sexy*

  

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MiracleRic
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3. "wow"
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ummm, im honored to be held in this high a regard by people i hold in such a high regard...this means a lot to me that folks are enjoying my verses/pieces, i deeply appreciate the respect,inspiration, and feedback i get from everyone, thanx and i hope i dont disappoint.

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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BarTek
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Wed Oct-01-03 04:10 AM

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4. "RE: wow"
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you never dissapoint. peace fam. congrtulations.



let's play ping pong ■

  

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InspiredFree
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Fri Oct-31-03 09:14 AM

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66. "RE: wow"
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congrats

______________________
we must never be frightened or cajoled/into accepting evil as deliverance from evil. - Robert Hayden

  

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LaXyDaZiCaL
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Wed Oct-01-03 04:12 AM

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5. "thatta boy!"
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awwww... i remember when ric first stepped on to these boards and we almost immediatley formed a crew... it seemed a little weak at the time but over the course of a few months we have proved to be some of the most talented cats on these boards in all medias, poetry and rap. ricdogg, ya written word has gone from being highly mediocre to an entirely new level. youve elevated ya style so much i can smell the funk in ya words. i mean all this from the heart dogg, im proud to be in a crew with you and ya words have truly spoken to me over the last few months. hit me up for a collab and well kill these cats. holla back...

shylocke!
lax the desert dragon

laxed

  

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MiracleRic
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Wed Oct-01-03 04:36 AM

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6. "The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)"
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(this freestyle was recently inspired by Hunuh and Decstar and the new Outkast)

hell yes, but i gotta stop fartin...and start actin with the strength of a spartan,oskie woskie, poski woskie, chonkyfire, i never perspire enough, full of that brown stuff, i tire, through pores, try to keep the skin tough, but im soft as velour, and a baby bottom, the crowd said "all the maybes got him" the lovely lady shot him, devil in a in blue dress, at a higher level im still clueless, but it doesnt matter until i run on all cylinders, the ceiling whirs, the ceiling fan, blowin the breeze of a secret, victoria, the story o, the feelin man, grab the lotion, rubber (ducky), and my flow's motion, and ya got a lyrical love potion, "what is miracle smokin" i leave the spiritual chokin, on failed faith, my spirit black mailed wraiths, and posed for a ‘black tale’ place, its true yo, fuck this ish, let me run with the tounge, like a native nickname, ahhh a sick brain, RUNNING TONSIL, rappin rumperstiltskin, i peeled men, distressed like a damned damsel, witnessed the abduction, at home with disfunction, draw the shortest straw, and still asked to master suction, masters of the universe, uni-verse, quote the pastor first, "can i get an amen?" is that a question? or a request? he-man needs to suceed at his she-quest, master of procrastination, like the lonely master masterbation, like petty felons master probation, like a smooth haitian, pardon my french, lick the bark offa park bench, what i spit results in a farts stench



Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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gsquared
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15. "RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)"
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...nice drop homez, mad congratulations, you deserve it, keep improving, say what you feel....





"The Hiphop community exists as an international culture of consciousness that provides all races, tribes, religions, and styles of people, a foundation for the communication of their best ideas and works. Hiphop Kulture is united as one multi-skilled, multi-cultural, multi-faith, multi-racial people, committed to the establishment and the development of peace."

--Hiphop declaration of peace, Temple of Hiphop





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"I'm stalling in flight
Hovering over horizons
Waiting for night"

"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis

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Decstar
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Wed Oct-01-03 09:06 AM

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16. "HI HATER"
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lol
no doubt, man. that's y i didnt even vote, knew u wrapped it up, fam. mos def well awaited, kid. u deserve this. now get ya head outta ya ass and spit that fire i'm used to.

much props to ya

"There is nothing more poetic, but depressing than a male writer" -yours truly

  

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BarTek
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Wed Oct-01-03 06:54 PM

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20. "RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)"
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amen?" is that a question? or a request? he-man

DAMN! do they get it? do they get this wizzad??? this was hot ric, fa'fuckin real.

peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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MiracleRic
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Sat Oct-04-03 04:04 AM

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35. "RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)"
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to tell ya the truth, im not sure i more then halfway get that line, inspiration doesnt stop to explain herself very often, good lookin

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Otto
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Fri Oct-03-03 06:49 AM

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32. "RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around)"
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breeze of a secret, victoria, the story o, the feelin man, grab the lotion, rubber (ducky), and my flow's motion, and ya got a lyrical love potion, "what is miracle smokin" i leave the spiritual chokin, on failed faith, my spirit black mailed wraiths, and posed for a ‘black tale’ place

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that is some crazy inversion there....nice visual word play, and i voted for YOU my friend.......

-Otto

  

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MayoKing
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Wed Oct-01-03 05:32 AM

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7. "congrats ric :)"
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It's good to be the King.

  

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MiracleRic
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8. "Urban Middle Class Street Blues"
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With a pen and a pad,
i ride the train
since ten i was sad,
so i hide the pain
and then my pen slipped
but left a stain

on my lucky Gap sweater
wait, i probably rap better
with my black hoody...
and black timbs
with a black woody,
yeah, my 'fifth limb'
time to hit the gym

cause i got no girl,
a crap car,
and no money...
plus, i tend to write funny
when will cold nights turn sunny???

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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HEBREW_HONEY
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9. "YEAYYYY BOYYYA!!!"
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Yeah this is well deserved of you, do it up!!! I got to dip for a minute but i'll be back to cee what you spillin. ConGrats!!!

Know Thyself and surroundings to better understand things non-existing and existing, unseen and the seen in order to be able to deal Equality(Equally with all things in life)...Be True to U!

RIGHTEOUS SOULS
Soul Cleansing MuSiCk...LiSing
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BarTek
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21. "RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues"
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the REALNESS!!!!!!

YO! where the fuck this all of this ish come from?????


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Otto
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33. "RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues"
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with a black woody,
yeah, my 'fifth limb'
time to hit the gym

cause i got no girl,
a crap car,
and no money...
plus, i tend to write funny
when will cold nights turn sunny???

~~~~~~~~~~~~~
yeah, i got grease on my jeans today....this cracked me up man....awesome piece !*)

-Otto

  

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10. "YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!"
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when cats hated on you who said you were one of the best!!!!!
I always believed in you man! and now youre finally gettin the love u deserve.
thanx to all you writtens and replies..
that deserves mad rec forreal!
peace and love


-Stephani
peep www.3kingsmusic.com and post ur poems on the forums! Support independent, positive hiphop!

I'm a H.E.R.B.
Holotyped Existance
Rhetoric Bound

The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood
Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love...
Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me
my dreams are:
Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls
my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve...
engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me



the colors were NEVER accurate!and people dont go thru people!


my music:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NgNuVHrEKI

  

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MiracleRic
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11. "RE: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!"
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i could never thank u enough, u have always encouraged and inspired me, i loves me some EZ, lol, ~

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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12. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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Congrats, Ric. Well-deserved, too!

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
http://www.lulu.com/content/187759
http://www.hdfest.com/Barry/allreviewsbarry.html
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delrica
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13. "congratulations!!!"
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can't wait to read ya...again and again and again...YAAAYYYY!!!!!

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

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KnowOne
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14. "madd congratz to you...."
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even though you stole a few battles from me......I aint' mad.

LOL!

"I sing in strokes of indigo blues
From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis

"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne

"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter

"I sit on language and
eat it raw and
smell it's sweet aroma and
I hear it in
places that have sound but
no words "-gsquared

"I have a shadow that
needs your
color. " - presyzion


_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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17. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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Show us your "MIRACLES" Ric! -- *smiles*

I wanna see rainbows & thunder~bolts at the same time -- *wink*

I wanna see yo pen doin' a drive~by -- Shooting ink pellets at my eyeballs! -- *LoL*

Show us your "MIRACLES" -- *muah*



Oh -- And Congratulations boo -- You deserve the accolades, props, & kudos! -- (((Forreal Tho)))

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Instant Axis
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18. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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from a calm into a storm the kid was reborn and raged on, congrats champ, you deserve the reign, do ya thing young buck!!! peace.

fuck a sig!!!


why MiracleRic thinks me and him clic aight, here's the reason, u real with yours, i am once i bring my guard down, we both stupid as hell, we both got our talents, want a lot of the same things, like a lot of the same things, we both

  

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MiracleRic
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19. "Someday Smooth"
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Someday smooth I’ll move out of my own way
“Pardon me good sir, good day”
“No, after you, but thanks anyway”

Someday smooth I’ll lose my sense of shame
Find life’s reset button
Redefine the game

Someday smooth, cheers from peers where everyone knows my name
Feels a lot better then fame
Strange and mellow but no fellow is ever the same

Someday smooth, speed bumps will never interrupt my cruise
Spanish guitar riffs drift
To face lift a gift above the Blues

Someday smooth, I’ll choose Olympic sports of peek-a-boos
Hues of baby pinks, baby blues,
Maybe still overfill my father’s shoes

Someday smooth my presence will exist in the present’s groove
Find a niche for fish that swim in twos
Pisces, triumph is a nice tease
flirt with strife’s keys,
The hot scott Joplin,
Rap’s ragtime ya gots
To start coppin
The NEWs…
Someday smooth…

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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BarTek
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22. "RE: Someday Smooth"
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the quick tumble:

Pisces, triumph is a nice tease
flirt with strife’s keys,
The hot scott Joplin,
Rap’s ragtime ya gots
To start coppin
The NEWs…

..yes...this is it....ric, versatile.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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Natalie
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Tue Oct-28-03 05:38 AM

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62. "RE: Someday Smooth"
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Someday smooth, I’ll choose Olympic sports of peek-a-boos
Hues of baby pinks, baby blues,
Maybe still overfill my father’s shoes

i like those lines...

n.


==================================

"I'm a curbside prophet with my hand in my pocket and I'm waiting for my rocket to come." - Jason Mraz

"Conformity is the refuge of a stagnant mind."

  

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journey88
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63. "RE: Someday Smooth"
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Yes, I'd have to agree, it was a good line!


~This is my journey
~"Some people recognize the light but they can't handle the glare."-Common

~Stay cool motherf*cker ya'll know the rules... stay cool, stay coooooool!-BT, TTP

  

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blak_yukon
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23. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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yessir...they did good getting you here

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24. "Sweet Jesus!"
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*rob pokes lik* ... hey you see that.. ya boy got props for the whole month... what you make of that!!

i'm jealous!! i'm jealous!! lol

congrats Ric.. you deserves it!!!

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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MiracleRic
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25. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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Cavalier,
I dabble with the gift of gab, ya hear?
stab a deer, DOE! Go grab a beer,
Duff, cut a hoof and huff, puff,
into a new atmosphere,
AOTM… or Atom?
Got a patent on a flow ya cant fathom,
the Phantom,
minus billy zane, train,
of thought, shit im on a mental plane,
“where will he land next?
Wearing purple spandex.”
she had a man vexed, ya heard well,
put a bird to the third rail,
ya preferred Hell?
Im satan’s absurd sales-man,
I tell men “most ladies,
prefer Hades…less vermin”
I don’t give a rats hell,
if Rush puts a perm in,
and rocks pastels,
with Chris Berman,
and does the pee-wee herman,
with a weak stomach, i keep hurlin,
I topple things,
when I dopplegang-bang the wall of Berlin,
its the the Miracle Merlin,
"if she only gave some brain,"
to the wizard, with a savage stance,
the blizzard known as Avalanche,
the piper pied sniper tried,
to do a lavish dance,
at the local Shell,
I post to go postal, well,
I make a getaway in a Volvo,
with malvo on my tail,
i escape fast, damn i hate math,
word problems is what i solve yo

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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26. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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Damn...I know I havent posted lately but Ive been visiting and reading here and thurr.......and congrats main......this was deserved...u got it...fire, poetry, stories, characters.......u goin crazy on us man....keep it illin'.........lol

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27. "too nice"
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>the piper pied sniper tried,
>to do a lavish dance,
>at the local Shell,
>I post to go postal, well,
>I make a getaway in a Volvo,
>with malvo on my tail,
>i escape fast, damn i hate math,
>word problems is what i solve yo

damn.

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when whodini made friends it was well spoken.

  

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MiracleRic
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28. "Lima Beans and Kidney"
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Lima Beans or Kidney
Paper or Plastic
its drastic
how fast it
becomes evident there are too many options:
destroy/create
participate/ or...d...i..sipate/fade/rage/explode

I wanna live today...
but i dont know the date
to love or hate.!?
that is the question? or the state-ment.
the state of mind i find that penetrates
the time is to be me today

but what about the crimes of those i admire
what about letting my hardships and achievements define who i am
whatever happened to saying no!!!...to...
drugs/society/history/fear/beer/peers/tears/fame/shame/blame/false claims, to boxes instead of spheres...

earth/water/green/blue/awake/sleep
should i be shallow or deep
reality relies regularly on the relinquished, repossessed, raped raity known as land/earth

rebirth

too often swimming the depths of the sea/me
may certainly create complications concerning how clumsily i clamber and climb out of the shallows

and gradually gain the gall to go against the grain of gravity
and stand on solid ground
I hope it doesnt rain for I might then drown

Keep my Balance as the tide rises, and enjoy the shallow,s embrace the deep, and never forget u dont have fins...ONLY FEET

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29. "yeahhhhh!"
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congratulations! you deserved this, you've always been a nice writer and its a pleasure being fam with you. i loved this piece baby. keep coming with what you do best. one love. Af.

šālōm

P.rodigious
S.emplisstech
A.frika
L.aXyDaZiCaL
M.iracleRic

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"An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind." -Gandhi

"Until they become conscious they w

  

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30. "too many quotables"
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very nice

i like the spoken word feel of this

definately not what i expected

sick ass piece man.

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31. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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congratulations!!

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'it's like i'm
fightin for freedom, writin for freedom...' -Common

'God opposes the proud but gives grace to the humble.'

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34. "yo Ric"
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you know I got mad respect for ya. You the marvel superhero in this shit.

peace,
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36. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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congrats brother...keep holding it down...peace.

---poet---try---suggestive---lifebits

exist in limbo.

"The Black Artist's role in America is to aid in the destruction of America as he knows it. His role is to report and reflect so precisely the nature of the society, and of himself in that society, that other men will be moved by the exactness of his rendering and, if they are black men, grow strong through this moving, having seen their own strength, and weakness; and if they are white men, tremble, curse, and go mad, because they will be drenched with the filth of their evil."

-Amiri Baraka, from "State/meant" in the essay, "Home"

"My love is my soul's imagination. How do I love thee?...Imagine." -Saul Williams

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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
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MiracleRic
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37. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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The Lone Ranger
Masked
With pains of the past
A well known stranger, at last

Blindfolded mattadoring ,
Torro,
Z (ZZZZZ) on my chest,
Like Zorro,
Chicks insist on snoring,
Slept on,
Cause ‘Ric is boring’
Love’s Teflon,
To self I seem foreign

Dearly Deported,
Peep the overseas Steez
Please, let me join a circus of Parisian
Thieves
I’m leavin
With a Latin Legion,
Exit stage left even…
Write til there’s no page left breathing

At times when I’m ranting…
I leave the pen panting
I Cardio-write
Soon, ima keep my audios tight
My gaudy flow’s like
The one on Titanic
Still finding time to rhyme
On his-panic
As the ship sinks
My light bulb blinks

That flows very sloppy
El Mariachi
Lookin like a scary Raffi
Mary Papi (poppins)
I wont give a bird shit,
Except hot droppings, Copy?

Desperado
Today aint promised tomorrow
So take ya sweet sorrow…
And stuff it up ya cooch yo,
This hero, is after Mucho
Dinero
An artistic fiend
Call me Pinero

With a twisted lean
Soon to have track marks
Where’s my heroine
Black’s darts,
Where to put the arrow in
I feel like a pharaoh when
I release inhibitions
I speak Easy Rawlins
Sprawlin prohibition
With Al Capone’s
Stallone stone slanger, SICK
Home to The Lone Ranger RICK

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38. "congratulations ric"
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39. "Pussy-foot-loose"
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pussy-foot-loose, chickenhead, chickenhead, mama goose, bartender, send her, a shot of pimp juice, miracle the baptist, cap tips, crack fists, quack, DUCK low to LL...Ric's blessin it, blessin it, and blessin it well, undercover brother, lover of jezzebelle,not tonight, too much to lose, like time and sprite, we blend, blind lemon-limes, nah ho, save the convo for johnny bravo, no pretendin, back bendin, u aint shy, why not work the nozzle, peep the milk mustache, skin of silk class, fall for u?, ma, i'll pass, it wont happen, pimp-cape laced with satin, this game of twister will leave ya toes plaitin, ya chokin?, and i'll manuever the heimlach, tootsie pop challenge, only took me nine licks, i put the C double O in ya coogi, excuse me miss bougie, this floozy just stole my L, not my mojo, ah hell, hit her with the speak and spell in slow mo, so sick, cold shoulder, til her whole ho clique told her, "OHHH, RIC", school-time notes, i check the box marked 'NO TRICK', im 'edge of the bed champ', i got a clapper, so backshots keep flickin my lamp, Slick is a tramp, a heartless wippersnapper, heartbroken pimpslapper

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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40. "Dancing Tears"
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Drip...Drop
Drip...Drop
Drip...
the path of saline
unresolved solution
Drop...
the trail of en-tangoed
southern semi-scars
drip...drop
a beach of skin
acknowldge dancers of the tide
regret rides the wave
sorrow sails along the surf
pain pollutes the pier
barricaded by the bridge of my nose
a strange dance of condensation
meets at archipelago chin
dancing tears dissipate
leavin me here to
drip...drop
where'd they go???
i take a stroll along the bored-walk
with pocket full of dreams
harvesting sand on cheeks
its been weeks
since i took a peek at the horizon
cant swim with this crutch
a heart injury,
afraid to throw the cast-away
Alone, I skinny dip
Drip...Drop

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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41. "RE: Dancing Tears"
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Awwwwwwww Miracle baybeee -- I felt the condensation of this flow drippin' off your wordplay -- And I loved the lil' alliteration sprinkled through~out!

*Kiss the Tears Away*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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42. "that was a great piece, nm"
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-Tp

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MiracleRic
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43. "Genie of the Lava Lamp"
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Genie of the Lava Lamp

Granted gullible delicacies
Sweet tooth soothsayer soothes
Tongue in cheek tonsil teasing
Tussling with tortured train of thoughts

Gilded genie wishes of solid gifts
Lakes of liquid poured from lava lamps
Latex barrier obstructs our oneness
Lies never told lay trust with tangled lullabies

Massages with magma mocked by mute moments
Secure sounds of subterranean scrubs
Clavicle caress clearing cluttered cold chambers
Cremated chances of Caribbean enchantment

Gallivanting along for Greek gem goddesses
I wonder what plunder pirates redeem as booty
I admire indiscretion’s gallantry
Passionately I polish lava lamps for clarity’s treasure

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44. "congratulations Ric!!!"
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I hope you enjoy your month, I look forward to reading your work. Much Love.


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"No on can make you feel inferior without your consent"--- E. Roosevelt

"If it is the dirty element that gives pleasure to the act of lust, then the dirtier it is, the more pleasurable it is bound to be."
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45. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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Dani Journey

Hoody hoo nephew, you know who this is! I had no idea how much people sweat you on this site! I swear I'm going to email you back my favorite poem, 'Lucipher is a Mindset' for your display as the Artist of the Month! Really you are one of my favorite writers, just so happens I know you, very well!

Mad love!

~Stay cool motherf*cker ya'll know the rules... stay cool, stay coooooool!-BT, TTP

  

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46. "HAHA"
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u crazy girl, hoody hoo to u toooooooo!!!!

VIBRATE

lol, and send me my damn piece

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47. "shining light on..."
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MiracleRic...congrats

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48. "RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic"
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congrats, man. you are a versatile writer.

keep at it.

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49. "COLISEUM Conclusion"
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Conclude to the Coliseum, this is my colossal theorem, to a brolic serum, Reflex, Heart, Gut check, whats next, the Desire, Valor, king ring of the tiger, violent Gallantry, Silently, I accept death, as a family reunion, stop bafoonin, get ya shit straight, swing a sword, lead a hoard, of soldiers, mists of life, poltergeists in dust, shadows in wraiths, triumph in battles we face, trace the lace of the insecure, embroidery, sure to be, evil when left unchecked, galactic gladiator, stab a hater, secure ya soul, or else stretch ya hole, don’t avoid that void, the spirits’ lyric(al) steroid, fear it, ya tight-ass get a hemorrhoid, high-strung, my tongue, overjoyed, among the comfort of wheat grasps, I repeat to the meek, let ya speech last, and remember even weak grass, contains a blade, retrograde, petrol aids, in fueling the fire that is MAN, gasoline dreams, sober presents, stoic gifts, this poet’s kiss lifts a Ceasar to see, to lead is to replace greed with ideals, and for these you bleed, ya feel?

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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50. "Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs)"
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Earth-Toned Beret
A filet of a man
I stand tall
Eiffel Tower of Pisa

An artist’s pose
Stabilizing my surroundings
Strumming cafés
I pay my way

Caressing coffee grinds
Among cool-hued confidants,
Indigo informants
I Hula dance with the sun

Crawl along the horizon
As a sunset stripteases
Pen requesting a lapdance

Serpent Shadows belly-dance with
Spinning Silhouettes, Adobe princesses,
Persian Acrobats,
I receive robes of Canvas

It rains acid kaleidoscope paint
Masterpiece imprisons
Convicts of Beauty

Fugitives of Faith
Thieves of Theology
Vandals of Love
I trace the Sistine Chapel

Reverse the trail of a Moroccan Hun
From his Fumanchu to fetal fights
Snowy peaks greet warm wanderers

Carnal Carnival cruises
French Fire-Breathers
Maui Mimes Mimic Me
I break the imagined box

I don Lucipher’s mustache
Adjust my Earth-Toned Beret…and…
Enjoy My Station as Fantasy’s Vagabond

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51. "RE: Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs)"
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Like the closing lines:

>I don Lucipher’s mustache
>Adjust my Earth-Toned Beret…and…
>Enjoy My Station as Fantasy’s Vagabond


Keep Flowin'.......

"I sing in strokes of indigo blues
From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis

"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne

"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter

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52. "RIC!"
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you bastard, I been reading this thread too much, and now I'm jokcin yr style without even noticing! Read my new post. I just realized my flow sounds more like *you* than it does like *me*.

Argh. Haha. Take it as a compliment!

peace Ric,
-Tp

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53. "peace and props to you."
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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"everytime you allow yourself to get away with something wrong, everytime you do that, you're changing your character."
Afeni Shakur on personal courage, XXL October 2003.

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54. "No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE)"
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No writing…

Suppress the will to Breathe
Withhold for the sake of Living
My chronicles are better served
If only I can find some other Love,

Passion
Mona Lisa
Scent
Image
Addiction
Company

You never judge
I do it for you…

No figures…

Suppression
Memorization
Knowledge

Just expression
A definition previously untaught
None sought
The science of identity

You have been my heroine
Sold to me
To make me a hero
That blessed needle
Leaving marks upon my hollow canvas
Truth’s insertion

So I roam as Romeo
Juliet’s family jewels are my tragedy

No writing…

For it is the submission to reality
And the denial of my afterlife

What design made me choose Life above Air

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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Otto
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55. "RE: No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE)"
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What design made me choose Life above Air
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hmmm...this is so final and sad man....dag....

-Otto

  

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MiracleRic
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56. "LUCIPHER Is A Mindset"
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~my best friend sent this to me and told me to repost it, thanx dani ~

LUCIPHER Is A Mindset

The devil is no shade of skin,
the devil exists and resides in, the minds of men, LUCIPHER is a mindset, a gang mentality, many demons claim a crime set
satan boasts immortality, please dont call the disenfranchised racist, to be a bigot, u must contain power, wonder why we sour, our power exists through our trigger...digit, I dont know the answer, i wont even pretend to know the problem im a nigga, a jigaboo tap dancer, and i know this, the word isnt very nice but for cash, i'd ask someone white to promote this, for he stands between me and paradise, i say things for a purpose, im amused by the world, along with those that believe they fully understand it, im hardly the person to reprimand it, i commend all attempts but im a dreamer, u hear my simple thoughts of girls from ipanema, to call me ignorant on a different view, bOOOO, im not religious, im spiritual, lucky to be alive, a Miracle, so instead i turn the other ass cheek, so, u dont like being called a devil, im sorry, i hated the irish blood in my vein, too many raped grandmothers, cherokee, black, irish, my skin the same as OSIRIS, curly hair, envied by my brethren, i dont condemn them, i understand, my compassion has no end, i know how to embrace the devil within.


Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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journey88
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57. "RE: LUCIPHER Is A Mindset"
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*snaps,snaps,snaps,snaps,snaps* You know this is my favorite piece of yours, I loved it, angry yet sincere.

~This is my Journey

~"Some niggas recognize the light but they can't handle the glare." - Common

~Stay cool motherf*cker ya'll know the rules... stay cool, stay coooooool!-BT, TTP

  

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MiracleRic
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58. "classic battle verse"
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My first verse was cursed unstructured but still left u hearsed and flustered, game of clue im eatin lunch with a side of Colonel Mustard, the killer used hot shit straight from the commode, it was 3 against 1 so I lightened the load, shook spread’s jet cola, gave it to lunch, and watched it explode, ur punchlines were wack, I slayed u in 30 seconds flat, so quit all the chit chat, when im dissing u, I leave the board like Tamia, officially missing u, my dicks the reason ur wife hesitates in kissing u, ur eric benet gay, fuckin poultry mutts, ask wifey why my bumper say “adultery ‘sucks’”, u way too busy peepin my pic prick, when u look like dude from tales from the crypt wit tits,ur bitch’s thick but she forgot her lipstick, u rep the DISTRICT??!!! Oh no!!! i’ll have to remove ur whole cliques clit, u nit-wit, my liquid, removes ur sideburns, when will u guys learn, my tide turns, the dapper whipper-snapper, groupie ass-clapper, leaves vets wet with tears, its still been less then a year, and already I done jump-started two vets careers, Lunch, the gay ghost “BOOOOOO” came in spooked, u keep missin…u aimless fruits, ya a bunch mangos, with me as ur main goals, come at different angles, spittin obtuse juice, I unloose a spruce boost, bruising ur caboose deuce, til it looks like bruce bruce… ITS OVER

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

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MiracleRic
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59. "SHIT SUIT"
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I was given a suit to safely maneuver
Thru this strange land of manure
They labeled my gift ‘pure’ and made sure
It properly repelled
“now chart these wastelands, son”
“u may have to travel them again”
but I didn’t remember
so I ignored it all until…

My sense of smell betrayed me

I could practically smell all the shit I was missing

Someone get me out of this suit!!!!!!!

None answered, so I searched for signs…

U must be this tall- - - -
Not for a ride of simple amusement,
Just to see past the high heap of bullshit
That awaits to soil bare foot fools,
Wandering tarot card village idiots
With small baggage strung on a simple stick
They seem to think its fertilizer….

and in turn grow

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Toothpick
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61. "RE: SHIT SUIT"
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oooh, yea. I'm feelin this one.

peace,
-Tp

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bamf.

  

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Iridescence
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60. "what in the..?"
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damn my man is nice as hell. known it for a while but this man is straight killing it in the spotlight...i havnt even read 'em all yet, just appreciating what ive already read. feeling it for real.

  

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KnowOne
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64. "Yo Ric....."
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just wanted to let you know that I got (and have had) a ton of stuff going on so I have not really been able to peep most of ya stuff this month. But what I have read has been madd tight. And I will mos def finish checking it all once its in the archive. But just wanted to give ya your well deserved props!

Keep Flowin'.......

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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65. "You've Made Me So Proud This Month -- *Big Ass"
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Although I haven't responded to EACH & EVERY one of your showcased pieces -- I've peeped over most of them -- And I notice that they all have that *miracle* signature quality (((Shine))) that I've come to know & love!

May your "way with words" extend beyond the INTERNET -- May they assist you in life as you politik & network thru everyday conversations -- May they elevate your status in the workplace -- (Or where~ever need be) -- and grant you favor with Executive Decision Makers thru~out your lifetime!

In other words -- Let your words sprout wings and carry you WHEREVER you desire to go! -- *smiles*


Great Job Boo! -- *wink*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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