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MiracleRic
Member since Oct 21st 2002
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Tue Dec-02-03 09:50 PM

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"Possessed"


  

          

Me and my imaginary posse of alter-egos
patrol streets with lips closed
and desert eagles
as self-concealed weapons
we communicate silently,
on passin possesions
heads jerk violently
unsurprisingly, a chorus of wows,
the narcissist is pissed, and shouts
"she should be adorning me with smiles!!!"
the insecure in me advises "forget purity,"
she's got legs for miles...
"You got the cooties" sings my inner child
meanwhile my left brain mang freestyles
now, my inner priest prays to release
the sinner's lustful beasts
now the pessismist is even torn
head twist like the exorcist
i grow a demon's horn
and then... a pimp was born...
so i step, pessimist picks a porn
hard to keep my eyes off her chest
my romantic's frantic
"did u see those thighs and breasts!"
calmly speak "are u stressed
by the burden of being blessed?"
..."yes?"...
"well, im usually shy,
but when u just
walked by
i was... possessed"









Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
archive
Dec 02nd 2003
1
RE: archive
Dec 03rd 2003
3
RE: archive
Dec 05th 2003
10
Yes?
Dec 03rd 2003
2
RE: Possessed
Dec 03rd 2003
4
RE: Possessed
Dec 03rd 2003
5
RE: Possessed
Dec 03rd 2003
6
RE: Possessed
Dec 03rd 2003
7
Look Atchu!
Dec 03rd 2003
8
RE: Possessed
Dec 05th 2003
9

BarTek
Member since Nov 10th 2002
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Tue Dec-02-03 09:55 PM

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1. "archive"
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damn...ric..your poetry just took on another realm..you swimmin near the lava..

peace.

let's play ping pong ■

  

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freedomfighter
Member since Apr 03rd 2003
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Wed Dec-03-03 04:04 AM

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3. "RE: archive"
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off the salami(hard)
move me don't u c
thanks for the read

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Soledad
Member since Nov 11th 2003
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Fri Dec-05-03 06:40 PM

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10. "RE: archive"
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co-sign

www.marlenelillian.com

www.planetcory.com

  

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lunaeco
Member since Dec 13th 2002
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Wed Dec-03-03 02:01 AM

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2. "Yes?"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I'd tell you to go join a multiple personality disorder group.. but continue writing please.. this was wonderful, dexterous and fun to think on
bless

~~~


my
blue
song
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Toothpick
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Wed Dec-03-03 06:21 AM

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4. "RE: Possessed"
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nice ta know I'mnot the only schizo around the boards, lol. Naw, I'm feelin this Ric. And I'm kinda pissed that your poetry has developed to a point that it can stand beside your lyrics. Renaissance writers. I hate people like you. Boooo!

lol,
2th.

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MiracleRic
Member since Oct 21st 2002
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Wed Dec-03-03 09:08 AM

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5. "RE: Possessed"
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*tips earth-toned beret*

lol, thanx tp, and er'body else, glad ya felt this one, this has a few purposefully placed lines in it to just get ya thoughts going a lil differently, as much as this seems like a story type of theme, its really just a glance at lust, how it can possess u, and how our personas react to it, the one line that i wanted to camoflague but stand out at the same time was the demon's horn line, how the hell did we come up with the word horny??? i was mos def buggin out on this one...wasnt sure where i was going tho, i felt it lacked a real resolution other than...damn i love and hate lust, *shrugs*

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Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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blak_yukon
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Wed Dec-03-03 09:45 AM

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6. "RE: Possessed"
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schitzophrenia never sounded better,ha...


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Desmon
Member since May 02nd 2003
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Wed Dec-03-03 10:06 AM

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7. "RE: Possessed"
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this is stupid nice
ive never seen someone do this
and you did it very well
kept me entertained
and ain't nothing wrong with having some friends.

Blah..

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Dec-03-03 02:32 PM

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8. "Look Atchu!"
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Witcho sick self! -- *LoL*


Crazy~Mad~ILL~Sic -- And I love it! -- *smiles*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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MiracleRic
Member since Oct 21st 2002
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Fri Dec-05-03 06:16 PM

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9. "RE: Possessed"
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im just a demon waitin to pe exorcised, ya dig?

lol

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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