Yo...you both were substitutes....but it looks like I will be able to get you in. Problem...you only have until Oct. 8th to finish due to time constraints. The rules are as follows<BR>1. 16 lines per verse...max<BR>2. Alternate verses for a round. After a round is completed, either combatant can set it for next round.<BR>3. Vote on other pieces so we can get this done!!<P>Any questions...hit me at divineversatile@hotmail.com.<BR>

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

ima set it off in this first round battle<BR>like a cowboy ima round ya up like cattle<BR>i migfht have won but im not about to tattle<BR>tale between ya legs cuase ya head is gonna rattle<BR>so saddle up and leave this town<BR>i represent the philly underground<BR>2-1-fifth we never clown around<BR>down there you go 6 feet deep<BR>my rhymes attacking even while you sleep<BR>insomnia is what youll suffer<BR>dazed is the winner screams michael buffer<BR>you might be tough but i am tuffer<BR>so bring your crew and all your back<BR>when i rhyme i leave you no slack<BR>puffin on blunts this is fun<BR>lunchbox lets see who is number 1

where you at lunchbox....... bring what you got

What the fuck was that about <BR>After three boring minutes the box says <BR>KNOW YOUR ROLE AND SHUT YOUR MOUTH<BR>I'm not about to have my name played with<BR>I'm Christ first draft pick, with projectiles of pure hogspit<BR>Each contain a nucleus,the difference between us is I'm marijanna you can-i-bus<BR>Asking that very question every time the mic's in front of us<BR>I rock without permission my words bitchslap you concious<BR>Now it's just you angainst me times three <BR>Gemini personalities a brain with six subscreens<BR>Taking your heart to perform you aint for my boy <BR>I'll time travel let you battle my teenage form<BR>Whatever, you'll still leave dazed <BR>Then I'll lube my size 12 boot real good and <BR>TURN THAT SON BITCH SIDEWAYS......

well...dazed i liked yours..though it was simple...and i know you could have done better....<BR>...lunchbox....well i couldnt really understand what you were rhymin about..but it did flow...but imma have to vote for dazed....peace

so since both violates the "divine" rule of time and lines, your equal with minus marks, actually dazed stayed with in the 16 line guidlines-i call it a draw....<P><BR>D.a.m. n)- (1) metaphor user (2) certified okayplayer (3) wordplayer (4) part time story teller....<P>"and if i loose my voice n*g*a then ima flow online"- JADA(MUAH)KISS -L.O.X.

D.a.m. n)- (1) metaphor user (2) certified okayplayer (3) wordplayer (4) part time story teller....<P>"and if i loose my voice n*g*a then ima flow online"- JADA(MUAH)KISS -L.O.X.

Dazed battled it out...Lunchbox just to confusing..but keep it going.<BR>Round 2 whose the victor?<BR>PEACE<BR>Scratch17

dazed is edgin it out for now but there is still two more rounds

Am I the only one who can see that Lunchbox ate Dazed!???? Dazed wasn't really sayin' anything that was battleworthy or worthy of really reading.<BR>Maybe Dazed will daze next time.<P>"MC's need to fall off just to save me the trouble" - M.F. Doom (Metal Face, Metal Fingers, Metal Fist)<P>"Be givin' crews a brush with Death, like between meals" - M.F. Doom<P>"Nothin' is new to me, but I'm still learnin'" - Talib Kweli<P><BR>"Trust me, I'm a Doctor" - Duela

I felt that one, lunch.I understand it all. round one to you, doc.<BR>your my hero!!!!!<P><P><BR>Can someone explain this rap game? I lost my "how to be a playa" insruction book...<P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000

R1-TO THE LUNCH<BR>R2-TO THE LUNCH<P>I LIKE THE COMMENT ABOUT THE JUDGES!!!HA HA HA!!<BR>

Lunchbox had that rhyme for lunch! It's obvious Lunchbox reigns here.<P>"MC's need to fall off just to save me the trouble" - M.F. Doom (Metal Face, Metal Fingers, Metal Fist)<P>"Be givin' crews a brush with Death, like between meals" - M.F. Doom<P>"Nothin' is new to me, but I'm still learnin'" - Talib Kweli<P><BR>"Trust me, I'm a Doctor" - Duela

how can u say dazed won just cuz you cant understand the lyrics...lunchbox slaughtered him the reason im so mad is because same thing happens to me but my votes for lunchbox

I'm not voting on that. Both of you need to come alot tighter. Dazed did flow better, but alot of those rhymes I've heard too much, and lunchbox had a couple good lines that jumped out at me, but too many that weren't clear. This is your chance to show all okayplayers what your made of, and remember, what you write is more important then what they do.<BR>Peace<BR>~Toe

i'm not saying anything. dazed, youre rhymes were played out ones (just some of em) and lunchbox, you were hard to follow. i'll judge after all three rounds. till than, keep flowin'....<P>the abbot has spoken.

this imaculate elixer/ is like a school mixer/ bringen heads together under one fixture/i wanted to be nice but i just bucked yah sister/ she was leanin over and i bumped her in twister/ right hand blue/ left hand green/ oh shit/ did i just find a dank bean/growin my crops/ from your verbal manure/i also got with your momma/ yeah i heard she's a whore/ no wonder it was easy, easy to score/yah dad i cut his throat/ left a note in blood/hid his body in mud/ only noise i made was a loud thud/boom maybe another/oh im sorry was that your brother/your whole fam/ i just fucked or killed/ now they really know that dazed is skilled/ plus willed to win this verbal event/slammin lunchbox's face on the rough cement

well it was about 4.10 maybe. i dont know but i like this rhyme its up to you lunchbox... bring it back...

Okayplayer, it's said that they don't understand this ryhme sayer<BR>Who spit the freshest without anticeptics or lifesavers<BR>Instead of thirty one flavors I possess four that serve as they least common denominator<BR>I'll hunt this "Dazed" character as the Last Action Hero, Terminator, Eraser all in the same caper<BR>Awarded the first round cause I missed one line?<BR>Why kill you with sixteen what could be done with nine?<BR>KEYstyled upon the screen in bout half the time<BR>It took to compose your wac offering you call a ryhme<BR>It's obvious the judges is oblivious to mine, judging with closed minds if they like yours then fine<BR>My words will immitate Kirk Franklin and stomp you to wine battles heard all the way in San Francisco got Sway and Tech yelling "TIME"<BR>Looking behind them like who ryhming Black Thought monitoring my typing like ?uestion go find him<BR>And when I do get signed I'll give your ass a shout out, and when you open your mouth who words you think fall out?<BR>Mine of course cause you steady biting me boss<BR>A faggety form of flattery like sucking me off<BR>But I bite back so you better hope they award it to me before round three <BR>Or I'll start biting ears like Tyson did Holy

My bad about the time I'm new at this 10:21

Maybe I'm a bitch ass simile, metaphor type a nigga...but I felt like Lunchbox left him a little dazed...pardon the pun.<P>DVSJ

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

it's over. get this cat some new comp before dazed calls someone to try to kill him.lunchbox!lunchbox!<P><P>Can someone explain this rap game? I lost my "how to be a playa" insruction book...<P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000

Lunchbox eats again! Still understandable and still victorious. However, that Tyson line at the end almost killed the whole thing. Keep nyour shit the way you had it; don't try to dumb it down if folks complain (That's every MC's downfall).<P>"MC's need to fall off just to save me the trouble" - M.F. Doom (Metal Face, Metal Fingers, Metal Fist)<P>"Be givin' crews a brush with Death, like between meals" - M.F. Doom<P>"Nothin' is new to me, but I'm still learnin'" - Talib Kweli<P><BR>"Trust me, I'm a Doctor" - Duela

But I agree...both of you need to come a whole lot tighter. No disrespect...just being constructive.<P>DVSJ

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MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!

Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

r1...Dazed (regretfully)<BR>r2...Lunchbox <BR>r3... We'll see...<BR>I don't know... that first round wasn't too impressive, but Dazed may have edged out Box... As far as r2 goes... "I killed your whole family and fucked your momma" is the oldest battle cliche and I've seen it done better anyway... Box seemed to step it up in r2 and I was impressed at the comeback... anyway, its time for r3...<P>One.1. Quidom<P>Posts guaranteed to boost IQ's!!!<BR>School's in session...

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both of yall rhymes give me headaches, i cant read them no more, im waiting for round three, then ill clean up the uh, mess..

r1 dazed<BR>r2 lunchbox<BR>need to see r3<P>Peace Is Not The Word To Play<P>and the shoutouts:<BR>In no particular order except the first one who started this:<BR>First to: qoolquest, P!, angieee, newguy, Erich, Mercedes, Morockin (JellyBean), notyou, Tank, YaYa, Trinigalnatty, OutLau, Natural1, T-bear183, T510, girlkoko, stylus, Airicka, Django, Phil, GoldenWon, Jihad, KRH, Nay, kawright, nebt_tet, Melanism, ABACUS, janiejones, the Fatness, Nesta, YardBird33, lyricalbullet, DJBumRush, DJFLYGEAR, MistaMeek, Iriealldatime, the_fifth, KnoMad, Shinobi Shaw, Phil, Maria, marie laveau, Tracey, Planet Infinite, spirit, MisterGrump, Ghaz, soulchild, Aaron, mcfaceless, zee, burbnight, pablo, VeRs, Ray_Snill, BigO, juanadrama, allreal69, azucar18, T_Roy, kayci, jannaec, Lyrical44, UrbanCowgRRL, Blackmagicallydelicious, Improv, Vet, nocturnal, sereion, peterparker, Ursus, deephunk, donwill, poetx, HeavenLei, AminaLovely, gravity508, NazDak, PRNITEMARE, mace_windu, AbdulJaleel, SAVIR, Ayana, Darkstar, stevelove, analog2digital, missphilippinethang, nickelz45, bc, HotSpittable, Mil, BrainChild, EL_Juba, MojoTaters, BTMBQHKDR, theREFINE1, RamXL, mikaela(h), LyricalJester, rEvolution, Illadelph_kat, allday, emil, Blizz, jose3030, ILLWILL, knobady, BooDaah, knicksrule, Re_Alief , onedrop, Yu53F, PoetessCrystal, illmatic, jabril74, thisisme, ICE, Sleepy, JDET313, LaDieMeCCa, pfunk, SqueegeeXM, stattic, Mal, digabomb, RexLongfellow, wellmanneredshark, ATRUHEAD, eD, Blizz, Mr_1989, Augustuz, drunkenthoughts, octagon, res1, QueJay, Kasino, Eriness (RIP) and Atavistronic. (of course the Roots, Black Lily, and Motive)<BR>

don't be fkn evil.

I'll wait untill this thing is over.. I can't make anymore judgements until all three rounds have been fulfilled.<P>PEACE<BR>Scratch17

i personally would like to cast my vote for lunch...i will not wait until the last round because i dig him that much. but i give love to the opponent as well although i give it up for mr. lunch!!!!peace. <BR> aka "buttafly"<P>"i scream and stamp and shout for more beautiful beautiful men with outasight afros..."<BR> --nikki giovanni

i'll vote when its all over. <P>the abbot has spoken.

r1 dazed<BR>r2 lunchbox, mos def.<BR>r3???<P>"Where the F*CK is my purse icon??????"

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"And I know what the fuck an option quarterback is. He's the black QB under six feet that ends up being converted to wide receiver once he's selected on day two of the NFL draft because he can't hit the ocean from the edge of a boat."

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I wasn't feel'n Dazed at all. That's just me.

hey poowy...go get him tiger<BR>hsp 4 life

This may be a disqualification, cause Round 2 Lunchbox has got mad too many lines. You can't just say "nah...forget that rhyme let him write over" cause judges couldn't forget something already posted.<BR>CHECK IT OUT DVS.<P>PEACE<BR>Scratch17<P>"got the investigatin' skills"

some of those rhymes were just mad long. i noticed every new line started with a capital letter. there were 16 lines that started with a capital letter (not counting the ones with "Eraser" and "TIME" at the front--those just happened to end up at the beginnin of a line). see what i'm sayin? i know, at first i thought he said "eff the rules, i'll do it my way" but he kept within the guidelines.<P>the abbot has spoken.

I aint on this shit to play around or to disrespect anyone judging, but you aint judging you commentating evertime I see your name there is no vote except for round one when you voted for dazed. Not to hate cause I dont but I know I aint the only one who watch wrestling "Raw is War" and loves The Rock( the illest wrestler out now) but if you dont understand why must you condone wacness? it's senseless yo. I'm an M.C. to the fullest letter and instead of picking my shit apart in round two you should have done so in round one then maybe you would have understood it. So either vote, shut up, or dare I say it BATTLE ME!!!!!!! word.

whats with these mc's thinking that they the shit(lunchbox). we are all here for one reason and thats to post rhymes and have fun...right??? this tournament is just fun for me. something new. i usually dont write battles. but they are fun. lets stop with this "you wanna battle me" crap. i think we all have talent on this board and no one should diss others. some are just startin and some have been doing it for while...keep that in mind.<BR>PEACEr

i hate votin on these things...cuz its like who am i to say whose better...even if it is just my opinion i hate causin ruckus for votin...so i'll read the battles but i aint votin....peace

Yo, I'm not votin for anything after round 1...cause both of your rhymes in round 1 weren't tight at all...i'm waitin' til this thing is all done..then i'll cast my vote, and don't worry, just cause your being a dick, doesn't mean i'll hold it against ya at the end Lunchbox. Abbot i se what ya mean about the lines. And as for the battle request...hah, go right ahead, i fein battlin' those who get bent at a comment of too many lines, I'd love to piss ya off a little more.<BR>As for now...<BR>Finish your rounds...and chill the fuck out!<BR>PEACE<BR>Scratch17

Scratch,<BR> First of all the subject read "No Disrespect" meaning I was not pissed. Secondly you laughed as if you think beating me is and easy task, it is not. This IS fun and I don't hate anybody's comment its just you were starting to sound rediculous. I'm not aplogizing for my words and I dont think I'm the SHIT either so lets just keep the spirit of Hip-Hop alive. All that I ask is that you vote.<P><P><BR>

I don't think Lunch was on some "I'm the shit" type of mentality. Him challenging Scratch is not wrong in my eyes, and I agree it was in the spirit of this emcee shit. That's how it's always been....someone calls your shit wack (which Scratch did when he said his verse wasn't tight), you then have the right to challenge them. Nothing wrong with that.<P>But for now, Box needs to just concentrate on beating Dazed.<P>PEACE<P>Doug (The New Guy)<BR>"While you exist in a perpetual state of mediocrity, I be droppin these on ya dome"

"A faggety form of flattery like sucking me off"-this line alone gives lunchbox the round... the lyrical beat to this line is amazin. also dazed's round 2 seemed old and tired...he needs to keep the rhyme fresh, all he did was rhyme about killin the family. ill be back for round 3. peace<P>"I said my shit and ran my lyrics and now my verse is over" -Big Boi

i guess its 7.05 here we go

school in session little girl, better not miss the bus/<BR>rhymin persistent with DAZED,hey yo its a must/<BR>alright little girl take off your pink socks/<BR>lets take a look at your "MY LITTLE PONY" lunchbox/<BR>it seems this lunch is nothin, so i give it the diss/<BR>did mommy make lunch, with love and a kiss/<BR>aint that sweet? nah its not, prepare for defeat/<BR>im the scariest bully, that'll stomp yah with my cleats/<BR>you came with nothin like squished p,b, and j/<BR>your gonna hate this recess son, cuase theres no time to play/<BR>ive slacked off and paid no attention/<BR>but in the end your done, punish you with detention/<BR>sit in the corner your nothin but a dunce/<BR>i make you shit your pants in school atleast maybe once/<BR>in these rounds, you just spoke so dismal/<BR>i'm here to discipline, cuase this time, im the principal.......<BR>

youre just gonna hate me for this but......i just know that wasnt a freestyle. first, i wasnt anything like all your other freestyles, which you could tell were freestyles. different set up, different context, way less sh*t talking. second, it made too much sense to be made up in 7 minutes. just look at it people. it all fits and flows too good, stays perfectly on topic, and all in 7 minutes?!? sorry, but i doubt it. its easily your best rhyme, but i cant give you the thumbs up if you spit a verse you already had thought up. holla back at me (calmly) and give me a reason to believe differently. its all love, and i want a fair battle. <P>the abbot has spoken.

it wasnt thought out or anything i wrote it this afternoon sittin in my backyard... i do hear what your syain though. aight if it dont cant ill go again...

first thanks for understanding what i was saying. i was fearing you'd blow up on me and hate me for life. i say let DVS decide what to do about it. if he lets it go, than you spit a tight verse. if not, than you'll have to come up with something new. keep makin' em dazed.....<P>the abbot has spoken.

Why are y'all even going the 3 rounds??? Dazed really has nothing for Lunchbox. That last rhyme was Dazed's best, but it was still mediocre. I wanna see Lunch battle someone of equal caliber. I ain't tryin' to dis, but the truth is the truth.<P>"MC's need to fall off just to save me the trouble" - M.F. Doom (Metal Face, Metal Fingers, Metal Fist)<P>"Be givin' crews a brush with Death, like between meals" - M.F. Doom<P>"Nothin' is new to me, but I'm still learnin'" - Talib Kweli<P><BR>"Trust me, I'm a Doctor" - Duela

I've met Dazed at a party at Drexel..and i actually freestyled with him...he spoke some ill shit..and it didn't seem written to me.7 minutes seems like enough to write this up for this kid...his other shit was definitely keystyled...I gotta say that shit was planned and dope as shit...Fuck the off the head right away shit..i am more impressed with the in the mind created shit...keep it up..My Opinion..<BR>PEACE<BR>Scratch17

Half these heads in this tournament didn't even time in.(including me and DVS) so .. it really should't matter in this tournament..<BR>PEACE <BR>Scratch17

Timing In, bow to the judges, bow to the competition,FIGHT

Dammit dunce,you need discipline,must be deranged to test Dodge's own you dum dum diddy<BR>Action before words,acurately,shit on assholes,feeling akward, slaying all alphabetically<BR>Z doesn't deserve to be stretched cause you just like the letter ya herb, from a deep click with the least words<BR>Emperor, educates, embarrass,jerk off then ejaculate in your eye meanwhile you try to emdulate allow me to <BR>Demonstrate, by damaging, demolition, shot with dum dums then dumped, faggot shoulda ducked<BR>Have beef I'll travel curious how judges feel walking the streets with long robes to conceal gavles<BR>If lazy then sit I'll sit in my hubble watching from my monitor as you check yours to peep my rebuttle<BR>Thats when the activation of the bomb beeps aint nobody paging you geek just dont raise up from your seat<BR>As sweat beeds on your forehead glisten realizing that this chair's your prison you have two vital<BR>One think hard a write the freshest thing you ever put to paper or two stand up and do us a favor<BR>I'm feeling like Vador slayin Ben with the red saber or Ben's plotting revenge on Maul to decapitate em<BR>Me telling you to practice aint gonna reach your problem is you're under-experienced and too eager<BR>When you disable your warden then take a breather<BR>Stay in a student's role and never challenge a teacher<BR>

dont want my ryhme to flow the wrong way

r1... Dazed<BR>r2... Lunchbox<BR>r3... Lunchbox<BR>The starwars references were just i!!... a little wordy perhaps, but, I feel that he would best rep this duo in the next round of the tourney... Dazed... you're i!!, and I respect your verses, but Box edged you out in this ish... kudos to both ya'll...<BR>One.1. Quidom<P>Posts guaranteed to boost IQ's!!!<BR>School's in session...

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RD.1 Lunchbox<BR>Rd.2 Lunchbox<BR>Rd.3 Lunchbox...<P>This is what I like...both of you started off wet but as the rounds progressed, you're style got hotter! Sorry, dazed, but Lunchbox was staying one step in front of ya, God!!<P>DVSJ

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Elmyra....the choice of a new generation

r1 : Dazed <BR>r2 : Lunchbox <BR>r3 : Lunchbox <P>Peace Is Not The Word To Play<P>and the shoutouts:<BR>In no particular order except the first one who started this:<BR>First to: qoolquest, P!, angieee, newguy, Erich, Mercedes, Morockin (JellyBean), notyou, Tank, YaYa, Trinigalnatty, OutLau, Natural1, T-bear183, T510, girlkoko, stylus, Airicka, Django, Phil, GoldenWon, Jihad, KRH, Nay, kawright, nebt_tet, Melanism, ABACUS, janiejones, the Fatness, Nesta, YardBird33, lyricalbullet, DJBumRush, DJFLYGEAR, MistaMeek, Iriealldatime, the_fifth, KnoMad, Shinobi Shaw, Phil, Maria, marie laveau, Tracey, Planet Infinite, spirit, MisterGrump, Ghaz, soulchild, Aaron, mcfaceless, zee, burbnight, pablo, VeRs, Ray_Snill, BigO, juanadrama, allreal69, azucar18, T_Roy, kayci, jannaec, Lyrical44, UrbanCowgRRL, Blackmagicallydelicious, Improv, Vet, nocturnal, sereion, peterparker, Ursus, deephunk, donwill, poetx, HeavenLei, AminaLovely, gravity508, NazDak, PRNITEMARE, mace_windu, AbdulJaleel, SAVIR, Ayana, Darkstar, stevelove, analog2digital, missphilippinethang, nickelz45, bc, HotSpittable, Mil, BrainChild, EL_Juba, MojoTaters, BTMBQHKDR, theREFINE1, RamXL, mikaela(h), LyricalJester, rEvolution, Illadelph_kat, allday, emil, Blizz, jose3030, ILLWILL, knobady, BooDaah, knicksrule, Re_Alief , onedrop, Yu53F, PoetessCrystal, illmatic, jabril74, thisisme, ICE, Sleepy, JDET313, LaDieMeCCa, pfunk, SqueegeeXM, stattic, Mal, digabomb, RexLongfellow, wellmanneredshark, ATRUHEAD, eD, Blizz, Mr_1989, Augustuz, drunkenthoughts, octagon, res1, QueJay, Kasino, Eriness (RIP) and Atavistronic. (of course the Roots, Black Lily, and Motive)<BR>

don't be fkn evil.

r1: lunchbox<BR>r2: lunchbox<BR>r3: lunchbox<P>Box's second verse was the best in this battle. Dazed was tight, but not tight enuff.<P>PEACE<P>Doug (The New Guy)<BR>"While you exist in a perpetual state of mediocrity, I be droppin these on ya dome"

umm after reading all of these<BR>rd 1 Dazed <BR>rd 2 Lunchbox<BR>rd 3 luncbox<P>Rd 2 lunchbox was the best overall<BR>Rd 1 dazed won because Lunch seemed a bit confused<BR>about what he was doing on here probably since<BR>it was his first time.<BR>Rd 2 you both picked it up but Lunch's style was more on point His metaphors etc were creative<BR>while dazed style is more Strict to the rhyming<BR>of the word exactly..less metaphors <P>Rd 3 same as round 2 basically.

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what is the purpose of existence without persistence?

that last verse from lunchbox was just too ackward. and dazed last verse was way better. i'm gonna give this one to dazed. <P>the abbot has spoken.

lunchbox just had more creativity so he gets my vote

hey this is a battle tourna. and your supposed to be battlin. i think dazed rhmyes were moer battlin type then lunchbox. lunchbox was tight no doubt but i think dazed out battled him. dazed definetly did more dissin. go back and read for your self.<BR>r1..dazed<BR>r2..lunch<BR>r3..dazed<P>PEACEr<BR>

Lunch gets my vote for all 3 rounds... Dazed needs to go back to the drawing board.<P>"I don't mix with MC's, 'cause I just don't like them muthaf*ckas" - Common<P>"MC's need to fall off just to save me the trouble" - M.F. Doom (Metal Face, Metal Fingers, Metal Fist)<P>"Be givin' crews a brush with Death, like between meals" - M.F. Doom<P>"Nothin' is new to me, but I'm still learnin'" - Talib Kweli<P><BR>"Trust me, I'm a Doctor" - Duela