Yo...you both were substitutes....but it looks like I will be able to get you in. Problem...you only have until Oct. 8th to finish due to time constraints. The rules are as follows<BR>1. 16 lines per verse...max<BR>2. Alternate verses for a round. After a round is completed, either combatant can set it for next round.<BR>3. Vote on other pieces so we can get this done!!<P>Any questions...hit me at divineversatile@hotmail.com.<BR>
************************* MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!
1. "early morning mayhem" In response to Reply # 0
battlin me is like havin the AIDS virus/<BR>you gonna die cause im the osirus/<BR>so be afraid for whats instore/<BR>when im done you'll be all bruised and sore/<BR>you'll be screamin please no more/<BR>when im stompin you in the floor/<BR>so ill give you pain killers/<BR>and make you over dose/<BR>steppin to me/<BR>you wont even come close/<BR>you cant even touch me/<BR>cause im like a ghost/<BR>try and come back/<BR>lets see what you got/<BR>but im a human warning/<BR>i say cation, red hot<P>PEACEr<BR>this is just a taste...its just to get the ball rollin<P><BR>
3. "I was at work!! round one..." In response to Reply # 1
time 7:19pm...<P>peace to all/peacer will fall/when my lyrics descend/grab a pen/and jot down/this hot sound/zen/let it breathe/yo I see you/say i got AIDS/that might be true/but I'll still delete you/defeat you/first I'll eat you/then I'll skeet you/out my cock, kid/I'll drop shit/that unravels most/peacer tried to battle posts?/take him out and cattle roast/then I'll feed/all the fam/throw it out/taste like ham/Van damn!/I'm hopin' the players understand, man/look a this/realize the bullshit that I'm cooking with/he soundin' like a piece of ish/try again and come equipt/likewise/mic wise/bring it on, wise guy/my lyrics can fry guys/look into these blind eyes...<P>sorry i was late, and if my posting format is wrong, then let me try again.<BR>sorry, peacer <P><BR>Can someone explain this rap game? I lost my "how to be a playa" insruction book...<P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000
6. "would you like to try my kung fu style???" In response to Reply # 5
im seepin into your brain/<BR>and causin more damage then acid rain/<BR>now your turning deaf, dumb, and reatarted,<BR>your the one who busts ass and says who farted/<BR>my style just to massive to try and be charted/<BR>with my penetration to your brain/<BR>your now easyily out-smarted/<BR>basic skills for you/ <BR>is countin to 2 and tying your shoe/<BR>your trying hard to build up some IQ/<BR>but your skill level resembles a kangaroo/<BR>your probably a fool who sports imatation fubu/<BR>im okayplayers guru/<BR>chugging you down like you were some yoohoo/<BR>just do the dew/<BR>just wandering...what kinda name is boocho??<P>peaceR<BR>organic expressions<P><P><P><P><P>
8. "sorry for my lateness, round 2" In response to Reply # 7
7:16pm<P>to put kinda plain and such<BR>I aim to touch your skills<BR>dude, you lame as fuck<BR>my name erupts and kills<BR>all cats and critters with bull ish rhyme tactrics<BR>you friggin actress<BR>i'm givin' ass kicks to bastids<BR>flip like gymnastics<BR>your ish is simple sad and sucka like<BR>you try to touch my light<BR>watch how I bust you like a fuckin' fight<BR>but I'm not violent, i sit silent on my island<BR>defilin' those who wild and wickedly smilin'<BR>whateva man, you clever and I'm qiuck to fuckin' sever hands<BR>you'll never understand <BR>but that's how your life I planned..<P><BR>thank you peacer...<P><P><P><P><P><P><P><P><P><P>Can someone explain this rap game? I lost my "how to be a playa" insruction book...<P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000
Someone gotta win...wasn't overly impressed with either rhyme (maybe it's 'cause the competition has been so hot), but both of you are far from slobs. BOOCO...the only rules are at the top...I posted them on everyone's battle<P>DVSJ
************************* MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!
13. "what im really about..." In response to Reply # 11
i really dont care about this battle any more. i cant write good battle rhymes but i can write a dope song. this joint right here is what im really about. this will get people to read my shit...my good shit. <P>we must resist to wrongful actions/<BR>and heal the world like michael jackson/<BR>increase the peace all over the nation/<BR>we as citizens have rights take the emancipation/<BR>proclamation/<BR>out dated for this generation/<BR>trying to keep up with the times that are changin/<BR>still fightin for segragation/<BR>our whole world needs a transformation/<BR>a seperation/<BR>of different classes/<BR>if you cant see this then get some glasses/<BR>depliting the ozone with harmful gasses/<BR>murders are commited in unbelievable masses/<BR>average passes/<BR>but why not excel/<BR>if your gonna do something why not do it well/<BR>take an example like the liberity bell/<BR>it represents america but its there to sell/<BR>oh well/<BR>i guess america excepts the fact/<BR>were made suckas everday now aint that wack/<BR>strikes against you if your skin colors black/<BR>its time to react/<BR>everything you see is just propaganda/<BR>id rather live in a secluded place like merida/<BR>i wish our skin was just like the panda/<BR>sayin this most wont understand ya/<BR>but we would all be balck and white/<BR>rasicm would be abolished aint that right?/<BR>not quite/<BR>people seem to always find things wrong/<BR>you must have felt this righteous song/<BR>cant you see society is only built for the strong
real hot. too bad this is a battle comp, cause I have no love for opposition. that rhyme was tight, and I will be sure to check for more of your stuff when posted.<P>DVS, the question of "can somebody explain this rap game..."is really my signature "", along with"boocho=out..."I know the rules.
I know that wasn't one of my hottest, and you will see better. whatever... can I set it, or should I wait for peacer to?<P>if no peacer reply in 10 minutes,(I'm always at work, he might be, but oh well) I will start it off...<P><P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000
14. "round three for starters" In response to Reply # 12
time 8:34pm<P>anger explodes with eyesight of terminal theatrics/<BR>developed monster attitude when I'm spottin his rap skit/I hate it, yo/I unravell for living/now I'm takin' your/ass to the surface with the purpose of just breakin' your/spirit/yes you hear it/it's the sound of your deflowering/and entering the castle of the master who's now towering/over your/miniscule rhymes that your showing forth/I'm don't give a damn I'm simply grabbing you and going off/"for the love!!"you scream/but I'ma play it deaf style/defeating you is just a test trial/bring on the next while/I sit back/and play FREECELL/you will see hell/this is over I'm as wide as the ocean/check out the sea shells...<P><BR>how's that? be honest, and if I lose, then he came harder...hmmm that would be ill, wouldn't it?<P><P>Can someone explain this rap game? I lost my "how to be a playa" insruction book...<P>boocho=out; ______=in...2000
im kickin you booty through a telephone wire/<BR>you see my words and cant help to admire/<BR>call me uncontrollable like a forest fire/<BR>im the mafia and you just called me a liar/<BR>now your gettin special cement boots/<BR>to the bottom of the ocean <BR>your planted like a root/<BR>like sylvester stallon<BR>"Stop Or My Mom Will Shoot"/<BR>for me hiphop aint about the loot/<BR>boocho bust his shit like he was some sorta fruit/<BR>a homosexual/<BR>ive all ready made you retarted <BR>cause im so intellectual/<BR>but ill do it again<BR>and again and again/<BR>your brainstormin ideas like your were only ten/<BR>i saved the best for last/<BR>your coughin form my dust<BR>cause youve been left in the past/<P>you thought you brought your best lines/but they couldnt touch mine/---guru---<P><P><P><P><P>
20. "I know we overshot..." In response to Reply # 18
But the judges are in...we was all out of town getting our secular lifestyles on!! I gotta say that it was split after the first two...but BOOCHO took the third to me. I will ask the other judges to check...but that was the breakdown I saw. I feel you though, peacer, I ain't know battlin' MC on the regular...but I wanna be the decatha-nigga...you know? All different angles be covered!!<P>DVSJ
************************* MY VERY OWN HIPPIDY-HOP! I'M GOING TO LOVE YOU AND PLAY WITH YOU FOR EVER AND EVER!!!
23. "Late judge with inconsequential results" In response to Reply # 0
I thought I had responded to this one, I did read it a few times, guess it slipped my mind.<BR>Here's me breakdown:<BR>r1. BOOCHO, "Say I got AIDS/might be true, but I still delete you." I just liked that. Keeping it real.<BR>r2 Peacer, close, that ending did it. Boocho's verse flowed incredibly well, but seemed kinda filler, and wasn't specifically attacking enough.<BR>r3 "I'm as wide as the ocean, check out the seashells" OH SHIT!!!! I love that line. Boocho takes it. Peacer, Why acuse someone of being a homosexual over the internet and then claim your high intellect. Nothing personal but the fag diss is getting really old to me. plus you must be carefull not to structure your lines the same in the same rhyme. Alot of time you have the perfect jawn but just arranging right controlls all the power.<BR>Yee asked and so yee hath recievest.<BR>Peace<BR>~Toe
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