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Ezzsential
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"THE OFFICIAL OKP FREESTYLE PROM:(CO-ED) POETRY COLLABO POST"


  

          

WELCOME!

For the month of April 2007-
We ask that you get out your gowns and tux... cuz we got OKP couples strutting their stuff-getting out of their limos and strollin down the carpet- gettin jiggy in the FREESYLE BOARD (hehe)
& everyone’s lookin' so fresh and clean!
http://re3.mm-a4.yimg.com/image/2984485693
http://re3.mm-a5.yimg.com/image/3258288150
http://re3.mm-a5.yimg.com/image/3164745918

Yo, and it’s a guarantee that this is the most creative PROM that you’ve ever seen...
http://www.bsu.edu/studentcenter/popup/ballroomprom/

Aiight-
I’m just playin’-(yeah I know- I’m corny)
but na, forreal though-

We named this event a “PROM” to give ya’ll that giddy feelin’(kinda cute ain’t it?)
-but mostly just to keep the unification-cuz we’re all FAM up on here and ITS ALL LOVE
Ja hearrrd......

So read these lines and observe-

nah, but we’ve been doin this for along time now (having these events and whatnot)-& I mean this is OKP’s 8 plus year and some of us have been up in here posting that long-consistantly....always welcoming-reading and responding-
and that’s what’s up - I mean, that’s real love....
And we all come here and post to show that... nowhatimsayin???

So-show ya luvvv
Feel meh?

( tears- nah implayin- back to the subject- lol)

ok - (ahem) Here’s the rules for this post:

1) You have to have a partner to post on a topic in this thread.
2) You had to of asked someone of the opposite sex to participate with you.
3) You and your partner (date) have to agree on the same topic and write about it.
4) There are no guidelines about the style or length of your posts.
5) There are no guidelines of length of time on the boards that you have to have to post. (Another words newbies welcome)

and after everyone has posted we are going to vote for the cutest couple (best team) and they will be our OKP PROM KING & QUEEN.

http://re3.mm-da.yimg.com/image/1600899107
http://re3.mm-a7.yimg.com/image/3829744300
www.burkeville.com/Prom1.html

Then they will be featured the next month in an anchored post

So get out ya creative hats and votes.

Oh- and another thing-

As you know- most hip-hop is still misrepresented-just because they underground the conscious-thought-provoking kind and mainstream the superficial.
And this”union” shows that not-all hiphop events are violent and redundant-but rather the opposite-poetically creative-sincere-positive-congealed- like everyone up in here.
This is just another representation of that and it’s REAL.

So get cha real onnnn
and welcome...

Visit- the “STAGE”:
http://www.ptb.de/en/org/1/17/173/elmia_stage.jpg where each couple’s poems/rhymes are displayed.

Visit the “COTILION’:
http://the-falcon1.tripod.com/schedules/id13.html -mingle and mix and get to know eachother-with flicks, links, intros-whatever.

Then visit the “BALLOT BOX”:
http://re3.mm-a1.yimg.com/image/2034794129 and vote for the cutest couple.

& That’s it- topics are YOUR CHOICE.

I’m takin coats at the door- heh
http://www.dpsinfo.com/sf/inter05/photo9.html

xoxoxoxoxo

-E








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stolen by the Devil
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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
STAGE: (COUPLES POEM/RHYME POSTS) HERE
Mar 31st 2007
1
Here we go...
Apr 11th 2007
19
DAYUM!!
Apr 11th 2007
23
reading this had me wanting to travel back in time to my
Apr 12th 2007
29
Awwwwww Maynnnnn ...
Apr 16th 2007
36
RE: Awwwwww Maynnnnn ...
Apr 17th 2007
41
awwww!!
Apr 17th 2007
44
RE: Here we go...
Apr 27th 2007
62
msmind and Nowachaoticthing
Apr 12th 2007
25
wow...
Apr 12th 2007
31
*Smiles* ... & ... *Tears*
Apr 16th 2007
37
RE: *Smiles* ... & ... *Tears*
Apr 17th 2007
42
RE: msmind and Nowachaoticthing
Apr 17th 2007
45
ASIEM & PHOTO ...
Apr 16th 2007
35
      Beautiful
Apr 17th 2007
40
      co-sign.
Apr 25th 2007
54
      all because we danced
Apr 17th 2007
43
      RE: ASIEM & PHOTO ...
Apr 17th 2007
46
THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE
Mar 31st 2007
2
*spikes the punch bowl*
Apr 08th 2007
16
The Couple: Ms Mallory and Tha Ant...
Apr 11th 2007
21
Anth was an awesome date...
Apr 11th 2007
22
I had my hair in this updo, you know?
Apr 12th 2007
26
I was rockin the white tails...
Apr 12th 2007
27
      *bats eyelashes and plays the coy role*|pics
Apr 12th 2007
28
RE: THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE
Apr 16th 2007
38
      RE: THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE
Apr 17th 2007
39
BALLOT BOX: (VOTE ON COUPLES) HERE
Mar 31st 2007
3
asiem n photo
Apr 26th 2007
56
i'm going w/ Asiem N Photo as well
Apr 26th 2007
58
Damn...
May 21st 2007
64
SHOT OUTS (OLD OKP HEADS SHOUTS) HERE
Mar 31st 2007
4
shout outs to...
Apr 12th 2007
30
To Ruck Spin
Apr 12th 2007
32
Big ups to...
Apr 25th 2007
55
Mrs Mallory and The Anthology
Apr 26th 2007
60
TOPIC SUGGESTIONS: (you don't have to use these)
Mar 31st 2007
5
my date and i are going with childhood memories|summer reminiscence
Apr 03rd 2007
6
good idea & yeah...
Apr 03rd 2007
7
      RE: good idea & yeah...
Apr 03rd 2007
8
      what cha mean?
Apr 03rd 2007
9
           not enough people submitted their date info
Apr 03rd 2007
10
      oooo-sorry for the confusion
Apr 03rd 2007
11
           RE: oooo-sorry for the confusion
Apr 03rd 2007
12
                (wink)
Apr 03rd 2007
13
My date and I are working as we speak
Apr 04th 2007
14
      lol
Apr 04th 2007
15
      *daps* ;-) yesssiiirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....
Apr 11th 2007
20
April 15th -- DATE OF PROM ... (As well as TAX Day)
Apr 08th 2007
17
RE: April 15th -- DATE OF PROM ... (As well as TAX Day)
Apr 08th 2007
18
      it has nm
Apr 11th 2007
24
I'm late (shoe's unbuckled)
Apr 13th 2007
33
:)~
Apr 16th 2007
34
      Y'all Still Gonna Come To The Prom?
Apr 18th 2007
47
everybody gone home ?
Apr 23rd 2007
48
*sat alone at a table for the whole prom*
Apr 24th 2007
49
you could have asked
Apr 24th 2007
50
I could've asked someone girly?
Apr 24th 2007
51
      understood
Apr 24th 2007
52
           Ohhh lol.
Apr 24th 2007
53
I wanted u 2 ask me... "Sadie Hawkins" style.
Apr 27th 2007
63
well dont feel bad
Apr 26th 2007
57
I never got back cuz we don't have a subject!!!!
Apr 26th 2007
59
      lol i asked u
Apr 26th 2007
61

Ezzsential
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1. "STAGE: (COUPLES POEM/RHYME POSTS) HERE"
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Sat Mar-31-07 10:03 PM by Ezzsential

  

          

shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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19. "Here we go..."
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Wed Apr-11-07 12:36 PM by Mrs_Mallory

  

          

ThaAnthology & MM... like WHAT!

------------------------
He's the new Queen's kid
walkin out the bus
He's across the school yard
at 12 o'clock

First bell rings,
I fan my girls to go on
fire'n up my foot mobile to him
trying to catch up

My eyes glaze over his
sweet russet skin
My raisins risin’
from my imagines
of me on top of him

us swimmin n divin
kissin limb 2 limb
a suga rush commencin’
I’m dateless and I'm feenin for him

“Please don't be taken!”
says my wishful thinkin

So I
lock up my nervous hiccups
cool breath mint up
as i gracefully step up

To him I pop the question…

-

Schoolyard springtime banter
between lifelong friends
who will probably lose contact after senior year

heart pauses deeply for effect
as affection
turns to she who be
golden Hip Hop drenched in bedazzling smile
My seventeen years becomes seventeen inches
as my warrior woman approaches Sin City

Patti LaBelle memories of older sister prom
slow tape
plays soundtracked steps
If Only You Knew How Much I Do...Do want to dance
with you until dancing is illegal
I want to hold your charisma close to mine
and breathe babies
with similar personalities

I want to touch every place I watch as you walk
closer and closer

I know I'm new to this school
but I am not new to you
as I've seen you naked many times over

and to be right would be wonderful

"Sup Ma. How you?"

-

“I’m fine…You’re Fahim right?” he responds Yes with a nod
“I’m Pele, so pleased that we’ve met...
I was wondering if you had a date for Prom, yet?"
Shyly his blushing cheeks moon me, telling me No
Shortly after he accepts my proposal with an ecstatic YES!

As we part ways, usually this is the time where
A girl’s supposed to go down the line in her mind
of dresses, nail presses and hair impressin, stressin’
Instead I’m rewindin and playin what I just witnessed

Oh me Oh my
Oh we Oh I
Oh he Oh High
So high
I feel when he greets me
To the sunrise
of his brown eyes

How can one deny?!

I buddy up with him for lunch
To talk background and such
I pass him a napkin,‘cause what happened,
He
Choked on his Coke as we went for broke
Laughing at each other’s jokes

Come to find out, he also tokes
So we conclude the day with 1 on 1 lesson
Of this teenage girl to young man session

Kissing each other’s smoke...

-

Thursday night Baskin and Robbins
shift
Talking to friends I flashback
to after school kisses
hand holding
and "I have a date" speeches
floating effortlessly though fevered mindstates
waiting for Prom night
and the end
of what was given at birth
my dad called it childhood
(which he wants me to keep a little longer)
but golden caramel
drapes silkily from fingertips

I want to glide with her through slow jam high notes
spin her through waves of
passionate songbirds
whispering Someday is Tonight
as if Janet jumped from jukebox to real life
in one swift press of play

that day
is near
my heart pounds as I slang ice cream to customers
like crack to fiends

I long to stroke her vertebrae like a fender Rhodes
Serenading orgasms from lips to heaven

Well, after I pay for the Limo

"Two banana splits coming up"

-

Sunny brown eyes is on his way with the limo
Anxiously, I blink out my daydream of he
that holds captive of my every splashing fantasy
I cannot wait to dance with Fahim
till our feet become smithereens

Then in comes the paparazzi

Pa kisses my forehead
Ma’s snappin’ happy with her camera
With frequent pauses, sizing me up
Her eyes tellin’ me that
her mind is driving in reverse…
She’s cruising down
My early days in Memory Lane
From colorful and fresh petals
slowly closing up to an innocent bud, then shrinking
To a seed kicking up room in her womb

I pat the streams of running mascara
Off of Ma’s soft warm face
As she assists me with my custom tiara
meanwhile
Pa heads back downstairs to open the door
For my Knight in shining armor has promptly arrived

I pace my breaths like women in Lamas classes
dab my oil
grab his boutonnière
and hurriedly skip down the stairs

All sounds are muffled

There he was before me (inhale)
an automatic King who didn't need the proms validity
6 feet of spectacular
breath taking
draped in panache

Beautiful has soiled his pants
at the looks of you Fah’

He woos me with his mile wide smile
Opens up the corsage box
and his strong hands
caterpillars it onto my wrist (exhale)

I pin on his boutonnière

Sashay and strike it for our paparazzi
We then say our goodbye’s
grab hold of each other’s free palms
punch a fist of joy into the air with my other hand

Lungs filled with excitement and rebelliousness
We jam this baby up a few gears

His laugh confirms it

That it’s on on and onin’...

Eat your goddamn heart out Fred Astaire!

-

Freshly bathed in good scents, good times and black tuxedo-shoes-tie
fresh fade
fresh breath
scared to death
palpitations
'cause damn she looks good
dress clings to all 5 feet eleven inches of
why is she so fly....
I smile at her parents who smile at me
with that, yeah he's black
but he's hers and she's happy
so we's happy
type eye winks

Okayplayer High School
has no clue what is in store for the dance floor
as ambidextuous are we as fresh beats intertwine
with shoes and souls
grooves become conversation as all other talking done
My man's and nem nod
appropriately trying not to eye backsides
of best prom date ever...

"You havin' fun Pele?"
"Yes, I am...baby..."

My heart jumps Olympic feats
as beads of sweat drip from brow...
what now...

It's been two hours already...

when can we kiss...

when can we leave...

can we love more than just the idea of loving
or the physical representation of loving
that comes toward evenings end...

I hate peer pressure,
but I love my date...

High School sucks.

-

I cut it short with the girls
Didn’t come to gossip ladies
In their eyes I can see a mix of
Admiration and envy
For he
They wish they could have

What seems like the beginning has been hours

He’s east-coastin me fiercely
onto his New Jack Swing
and I’m digging it
So I sprinkle him Oaktown 3-5-7
His pheromones fahrenheightens my Juicy

DJ’s spinnin Guy’s track “I Like”
I snake my spine and unwind
as he mummifies himself around me
gently from behind

Aaron Hall belts out this very moment
“…Feelings getting stronger, Oh you are my lover
When I’m with you, there is no other…
A spell you got me under…”

Damn my heart he has plundered
We’re meshed in motion so close
Not even a quake could put asunder
I listen closely to his energy
releasing tender moans of thunder
does this demystify the fact
that he might have pondered
on what I’ve wondered?

His fingers whispers to my skin
Touch messagin’
Transmissions of attraction
Spins me around facing him

In slow mo he
Pulls me close
our lips are plugged

Instant electricity

School teach tries to referee
In-between us

I take off my shoes
He loosens his bow
Grabs my hand and our eyes meet
“Let’s go baby…” he says

my feet agrees as we run
towards the exit
-

" I have a confession..."
I say, staring into the world before me
forecasting futures through her eyes
"I dig you..." she smiles, nestled head between shoulder and chest
I inhale bath and body works cucumber melon
(I have sisters...)
hairspray and electricity

my lower mind's eye says take this intoxicating angel
to room 131 where keys to such a palace lay
in breast pocket...uncle's doing...

but mind's owner says
"I want to be with you, P...f'real"
she looked up at he who be bashful, trying to understand puberty, love and manhood
all within tocks of digital clocks
as sticks and stones
form tree trunks and boulders...
her kiss massages my neck
like rolling r's in Spanish class

my left hand truly wants to massage her ass,
but respect for my date plus mother may I equals good brother who wants to more than make love but love my date

as limo driver coasts California highways
moonlight spotlights my words as I ask her to be my girl
and seal the fact that prom date sex
is not enough to sustain me...

I want you tomorrow, next Thursday and every semester I'm at UCSF

If you will have me...




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23. "DAYUM!!"
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That was nicely done... I'd love to hear this collabo performed live.

You two have set the bar pretty high...


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29. "reading this had me wanting to travel back in time to my"
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Senior Prom Night...

good job, you two.

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36. "Awwwwww Maynnnnn ..."
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This *duo* flow captured the whole ambiance of the prom experience -- from start to finish -- with all the delicious thoughts and pangs & wonders sandwiched in between -- *smiles*


You sure you guys just met on the board recently? --



(((Awesome Job You Two)))



Beautiful corsage, Ms. Mallory! --





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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41. "RE: Awwwwww Maynnnnn ..."
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Cosign plus the detail is accented by a feeling that it was actually experienced by both of you at the same time...
nice portrait

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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44. "awwww!!"
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This was lovely and definately painted an accurate depiction of a prom.. and gave that giddu feelin! nice!!

i lol @ "okayplayer highschool"
adored that.. heh

  

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62. "RE: Here we go..."
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I loved reading this.!!

Peace
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25. "msmind and Nowachaoticthing"
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Summertime Reminiscence and Wintertime Blues

her summer

I’m sitting Indian Style in my
mother’s porch swing,
watching Lisa an’em jump double dutch
with that red, white, and blue rope Ms. Sandra
done up and bought.
Charlie came skippin’ down the block
with his brand new trousers on, happy
to be out of school for the summer.
in my hand, there are four used-to-be
Lemon Heads. I toss the candies over
my shoulder and kick my legs up
to give myself an extra push. the breeze
kisses my lips, and I forget
that my afternoon chores have not
been done. my mother yells from
the second floor in her biggest voice,
“Get your narrow tail up here
and do these dishes.”
I race from my seat,
wipe the sticky lemon flavor from
the corners of my mouth with my tongue,
and hurry up the stairs.

his winter

I like dragging my big green boots in the snow
They make cool prints and I feel like an explorer
Only, I'm just goin over to antee Tina's house
She ain't my real antee though,
Momma make me call her that cause its polite
And momma said she raisin a gentlemen
I go every day after school,
Even when I don't want to
Momma don't like me home alone
But I do what I'm told
Cause mamma said Sharon’s sweet
Sharon is Tina’s daughter
She two years older, but a lot a years crazier
But she funny though, and real cool
Sometimes she try to teach me jacks
But mostly, she just like playin house
She showed me her panties and let me touch her butt
An I get on top of her, like I'm daddy and she mommy
But a lot of times, when I come over, she be cryin
I don't even ask why
I just hug her till she stop
Like when I hug momma

our seasons

momma means bizness when it
comes to chores. I spent the
rest of the evening washing dishes,
dusting furniture, and vacuuming until
the house was spit-shine clean. this is
the beginning to a very long summer.

I never knew why she cried so much
But her momma found out
An she sent her step-daddy far away
Then they moved far away soon after
I miss my friend and I sometimes cry
But I'm glad her long winter is over.


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31. "wow..."
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period.

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37. "*Smiles* ... & ... *Tears*"
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^This^ was clever ... How "her Summer" and "his Winter" trickled into their seasons of change and separation -- (((Beautifully Illustrated)))


*Emotion Felt*


I could read this a few more times and recall similar incidences in sync with a coupla childhood friends of mine -- *sigh*


U look flyyy in that tux Chaotic! -- *wink~wink* --






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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42. "RE: *Smiles* ... & ... *Tears*"
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there is a moment between seasons that blends perfectly naking one equally appreciated by the other and so it is...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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45. "RE: msmind and Nowachaoticthing"
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definately talent here woah!

i enjoyed the collab of the season memory refletions indeed..

(getting kinda nervous)

theres alot of competition!
really nice work from both of u!
-=)





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35. "ASIEM & PHOTO ..."
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I thought my date was gonnna post this, but I guess he's waitin' on me -- *My Bad* --

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~


she makes indigo words
with expressions from heavens gate
found between lips divine
...so I long to listen to her…
when she smiles my pen seems to glide
a hero she says I am
she believes in me what more can I ask?

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

he talks to the angels
and then tells me their secrets
rows of heavenly flows grow way below innuendo
so I know his pen speaks truth in volumes I over~stand
with pen in hand he soars & lands on the edge of dreams
with streams of knowledge balancing energy way in between
he fortifies me with synergy; how could I not (((glow)))
fluorescent green

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

radiance permeates … we dip in and out
bringing together worlds once divided
our peace speaks in tongues
reaching dark places raptured by fear
we enter … seeing beyond boundaries
spirits awaken, minds change, hearts open
as we smile looking eye~to~eye
something happens

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

connection re~routes rejection
mutual mind frames circle calm introspection
the peace I seek speaks decibels around his sound
I hear it on stormy days – pounding principles like rain
Insanity directs calamity so we feel each others pain
Sharing words of wisdom –- logic -- & common sense
PH Balanced, this man’s talents gets all up under the skin
Hence …

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

we connect -- her yin blends my yang

with respect -- reciprocation hangs

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

so I feel this alchemic chemistry
..:::master~minded ministry:::..
where time & space erase limitations of distance
at his insistence I reach through clouds touching beta rhythm
brain waves
the frequency of activity electro magnetizes sensory logins as
it saves
consciousness behaves --
mindsets greet each day with a misted spray of poetic wordplay
it is when I blend with his wind that spores scatter over
prose~aic matter

:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:~:

equations found in a virtual world
she speaks softly
heartfelt elation
elevated by purpose and content
these moments bloom in anticipation
bodies move in rhythmic harmony
nightwinds carry songs to places forgotten
a morning star finds hearts listening
bowing before royalty
all because we danced...


Perfect peace -- dances on ink stains -- leaving imprints on the heart & mind




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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40. "Beautiful"
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Your styles compliment each other very well! Very fluid piece!

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54. "co-sign."
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Your styles blended so well that the flow seemed effortless... almost as if it came from one mind.

A perfect blend.


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43. "all because we danced"
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i thought it ended very well... very well, indeed...

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46. "RE: ASIEM & PHOTO ..."
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woah! I DEFINALTY felt the connetion here! I felt looove..

with really amazing imagery and word play! beta clouds
the deepest of poetic connection indeed! woaaah! adored!




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2. "THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE"
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shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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16. "*spikes the punch bowl*"
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*goes back to holding up the wall*

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21. "The Couple: Ms Mallory and Tha Ant..."
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Thee place, Okay Player High (lol)
The pictures will follow. (but check the lank anyway...lol)

Ms mallory has been a wonderful date, as you are about to read and it has been my great pleasure to be a part of the prom.

Introducing...Ms. Mallory!

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22. "Anth was an awesome date..."
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fun as all hell, sentimental and thanks for allowing me to ask you out to the Prom! It was great, let's do it again! Ha! *hugs*

Here's my old prom flick, now be nice dammit, or else I'll be forced to plant my dawgs where the sun don't shine. lmao jk

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y257/pelenatita/mmprom.jpg

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26. "I had my hair in this updo, you know?"
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and a fire red dress with silver sequents sewn into the outerlining seams. i'm not an avid lover of heels, but i embraced my feet in the most elegant pair of pumps one could ever feast their eyes on...

we had a grand time...

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27. "I was rockin the white tails..."
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White wingtips, with a royal-blue tie and sash. I even shaved off my dreds for the occasion. Moms tried pushin the ruffled shirt on me to give me a retro-vibe, but I wasn't feelin it.

So what if we didn't match in the photo... I think our differences compliment one another. And Mindful was just as engaging and fun to be around as i envisioned.


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28. "*bats eyelashes and plays the coy role*|pics"
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did you take the limo back tho? i'm saying. lol...

http://lespacemotorcoach.com/img/heads/prom.jpg



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38. "RE: THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE"
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http://a248.e.akamai.net/f/248/5462/2h/www.artisanartsonline.com/images/b41dkkh4.jpg

I had a wonderful time at the prom, but tryna get ASIEM to stop goosing me in da butt wasn't easy! --

In fact, it was quite hard! -- *snickers*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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39. "RE: THE CATILION: (INTROS, LINKS, PICS -ABOUT YOURSELF, ETC) HERE"
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this woman is so sexy inspiring intelligent and simply unforgettable i could not help goosin everypart of me responds to her every move can't you tell just check out the content of the words like water we just FLOW purely crystal clear...
by the way the look on her face says so much more...lol

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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3. "BALLOT BOX: (VOTE ON COUPLES) HERE"
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shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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56. "asiem n photo"
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they get my vote because i felt the most love from them! inbetween them.. not that ALL of them werent E X C E P T I O N A L



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58. "i'm going w/ Asiem N Photo as well"
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i wish there were far more participants, but it is what it is...


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64. "Damn..."
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I would vote for us, but that would just be down right faulty, right? LMAO... anyway... my vote goes for Photo & Asiem. J'yeah...YUP!

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4. "SHOT OUTS (OLD OKP HEADS SHOUTS) HERE"
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ADDED: this is a section to shout out some of the old OKP Freestyle emcees/poets that haven't posted, or are no longer with us, etc

R.I.P. NIKKI (aka 3rd I)




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30. "shout outs to..."
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the following beautiful and very influential writers:

paperdollpoet (she still comes around, but not as much)
aminamoonbeam
madawaka
CulTurE
bananaman
onedrop
TET (it's been ages since he logged on)
semlohspeaks
presyzion
pointfivefag

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32. "To Ruck Spin"
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aka DJ Teddy Bear; Nikki... I wish it weren't so hard.

To B(ok)- You showed me love and I will always show it back.

DPP and the Lilies crew! Fiyah!

To the new breed- love the word and all else falls into place.

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55. "Big ups to..."
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Toothpick (Holla at cha boy!)
Bartek (one of my favorite hotheads)
MiracleRic (I won't forget how he hit me up to collab, but then dropped off the planet. You ain't right!)
GSquared (1st cat to ever show me love on here)
Mara (1st female to ever show me love on here, and a kind soul)
Decstar (cool as hell)



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60. "Mrs Mallory and The Anthology"
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They kept with the theme and knocked my socks off with their chemistry


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5. "TOPIC SUGGESTIONS: (you don't have to use these)"
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Here are some suggestions but you don't have to use them:


> actual prom experiences"

> "What we do for love"




1) The Sky's The Limit

2) Friendships/Relationships/Hardships/Penmanships

3) Get’n My Party On

4) Split Personalities

5) Thank You For _________

6) Let The Rhythm Move You

7) Blindfold Love

8) First Impressions

9) I Got It Like That …

10) Empowered By _________


> "moods"

> "dreams"

> "your ideal mate"

> "gossip"

> "pain"

> "trials and tribulations"













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God's my only vacation


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6. "my date and i are going with childhood memories|summer reminiscence"
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*ahem* once we've gotten the poem together do we just post here all willy nilly, like a response to the actual thread?

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7. "good idea & yeah..."
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just post it with your names as the title..
or make a title post then put ur work underneath

its just kinda a freeforall thing-if you want-jump in and join!lol

  

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8. "RE: good idea & yeah..."
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I may be in the minority here, but I think we should have a thread specifically for all the Prom couples -- (So all the prom flows will be in the same thread, nahmean?) -- *Instead of separate flows falling to the bottom of the page*

That thread needs to anchored too! --


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Maybe that's whatchu said, and I'm just not understanding -- *duhhhh*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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9. "what cha mean?"
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i dont know what u mean but the couples are supposed to post under the "stage" part as in with the female collabo
and they can put their names subject or make their own name part then thread it underneath




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10. "not enough people submitted their date info"
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thats why i didnt just do their name titles myself

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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
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11. "oooo-sorry for the confusion"
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post ur rhyme/poem under the "stage" part of the thread-please




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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
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12. "RE: oooo-sorry for the confusion"
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Gotcha! -- *My Bad*


Just needed some direction ... THANX


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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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13. "(wink)"
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thanks for supportin this sis-as always..
i havent even wrote my rhyme or decided on a topic yet lol



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14. "My date and I are working as we speak"
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*fun* And again Ezz... thank you for everything you've done here. Werd!

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15. "lol"
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your welcome anth.. and welcome back if i didnt say that already!



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God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
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Mrs_Mallory
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20. "*daps* ;-) yesssiiirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...."
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I'm Back!

  

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17. "April 15th -- DATE OF PROM ... (As well as TAX Day)"
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In other words: Date collabo flows should be posted by?

Or do we have another due date?

I ain't ready yet, my dress needs alterations --





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18. "RE: April 15th -- DATE OF PROM ... (As well as TAX Day)"
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Actually, I think tax day has been extended to April 17th -- *hmmmmmm*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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24. "it has nm"
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33. "I'm late (shoe's unbuckled)"
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but can I have a date still?

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34. ":)~"
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n/m

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47. "Y'all Still Gonna Come To The Prom?"
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It ain't over -- *I don't think*


:::Post Summthin':::

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48. "everybody gone home ?"
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is there a vote now
this was not a boring prom it was genious a great idea that said thank you Eszzential altho you kinna died out

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49. "*sat alone at a table for the whole prom*"
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No one asked me to dance

  

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50. "you could have asked"
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someone girly. lol...

  

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51. "I could've asked someone girly?"
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>someone girly. lol...

???????????

Also, I didn't know who to ask because I didn't know who was actually interested in participating. You see how I posted a few times about being available? Yeah... didn't see any male posters doing that.

  

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52. "understood"
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girly... was the first thing that came to mind. i usually type lady or dude, or chile... but for some reason, girly popped up. i just went with it. lol...

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53. "Ohhh lol."
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>girly... was the first thing that came to mind. i usually
>type lady or dude, or chile... but for some reason, girly
>popped up. i just went with it. lol...

Okay. I gotcha. I say "lady."

  

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63. "I wanted u 2 ask me... "Sadie Hawkins" style."
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LOL

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57. "well dont feel bad"
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If u werent asked or whateva.. cuz my date neva banged me back on some bullshit

then, i was focusin my time on the loud thing so i didnt even pay attention and forgot about it until like 2 days ago then i was like O SHIT!

but thanks all for participatin~!

ESSENTIAL KEEPS TRYIN THESE THINGS

despite

ya heaaaaard




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59. "I never got back cuz we don't have a subject!!!!"
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But I ain't mad. We can still go to Motel Sha Boom Boom and I'll titillate them toes and copulate them cuticles nahmean.

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61. "lol i asked u"
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and then made suggestions but u neva got back to me.

we have similarities in our rhymes so i thought we would flow together nicely...

lol well if u still wanna do this then just inbox...

(shrug)




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