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3rd i
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"i hear you knocking but u can't come in"


  

          



i hear you knocking but you can't come in
it's time i said no
stood my ground like an old oak tree that will not be moved
nor swayed by the dripping of honey that come from your lips



oh...i hear you...but you can't come in








www.myspace.com/3rd_i

3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.

i am a self-mutilator
of the worst kind...
(c)MyLife

  

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Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!
Jun 27th 2006
1
RE: Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!
Jun 29th 2006
3
RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Jun 28th 2006
2
most important and poignant lines, i thought...
Jun 29th 2006
4
RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Jul 07th 2006
5
RE: yeah but u missed sumthin...
Jul 13th 2006
6
RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Jul 14th 2006
7
^^^^^
Aug 25th 2006
8
yo fam u cant be doin that
Aug 25th 2006
9
STOP!
Aug 25th 2006
10
      I guess we are all desperately trying to hold onto her.
Aug 25th 2006
11
      true... my fault ProLix ....
Aug 25th 2006
13
      i'll apologize before
Sep 06th 2006
14
      RE: i'll apologize before
Sep 07th 2006
15
      RE: STOP!
Sep 07th 2006
16
           its my sig dumb ass
Sep 09th 2006
18
RIP 3rd_i
Aug 25th 2006
12
her icon is so captivating
Sep 07th 2006
17
left this for you in BRC
Sep 11th 2006
19
RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Sep 13th 2006
20
i absolutely agree w/ u
Sep 16th 2006
22
Ieye(i)
Sep 16th 2006
21

KnowOne
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Tue Jun-27-06 01:06 PM

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1. "Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!"
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n/m

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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ASIEM
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Thu Jun-29-06 08:56 AM

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3. "RE: Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!"
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for real knowone got my first response hell i'll just go thru that window you leave open

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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newolf
Member since Jul 26th 2005
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Wed Jun-28-06 12:25 PM

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2. "RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in"
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man o man 3rd.

last night i had a dream that my ex showed up on my doorstep and made a scene...

then i read this. it's like an echo of my dream.

!

============sig========================
newolf, formerly wolfie.

time to save the world, where in the world is all the time?

  

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mindful
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Thu Jun-29-06 06:25 PM

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4. "most important and poignant lines, i thought..."
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it's time i said no
stood my ground like an old oak tree that will not be moved

*nods* Peace~

-----------------------
Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

no shit in 06.

  

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revalation
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Fri Jul-07-06 09:49 PM

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5. "RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in"
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YES..the title builds the conviction....

:::and don't forget to lock up the windows too..


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

  

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MUSE
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Thu Jul-13-06 03:44 PM

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6. "RE: yeah but u missed sumthin..."
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notice i ain' knockin no mo?

"It's me, surprise!" - Young Joc

MUSE

LOL - u wuzn ready...

...
..
.

Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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rubbersoulonice
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Fri Jul-14-06 07:51 PM

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7. "RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in"
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I been on the other side of this one lately.
------------------------------
Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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ProLix
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Fri Aug-25-06 02:57 PM

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8. "^^^^^"
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~~~~~~~~`~`~`~`~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I get no satisfaction from this at all.

http://www.myspace.com/tiye

  

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Aeon
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Fri Aug-25-06 03:01 PM

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9. "yo fam u cant be doin that"
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..

_

shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

_

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KnowOne
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Fri Aug-25-06 03:14 PM

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10. "STOP!"
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You just made me cry yo. You cant me uppin her stuff rught now. My twisted mind clicked it all fast, hoping some how she was here posting, and this was all a mistake/joke.
Dag.....

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"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

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DawgEatah
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11. "I guess we are all desperately trying to hold onto her."
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None of us are ready to let go.
I know what you mean though.




R.I.P. 3rd i: Heaven has a new Poet Laureate.

  

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KnowOne
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13. "true... my fault ProLix ...."
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didnt mean to lash out. Just the pain I guess. Sorry bout that.

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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robynwildchild
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14. "i'll apologize before"
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but this is the last post left on the current board to read of what is the remaining truth to her soul.

let it flow on.. and up on the boards with pride and affection.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
https://www.facebook.com/robyn.wildchild12
psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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ms mimi diva
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15. "RE: i'll apologize before"
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So hard to read this one now, but I'm hoping someone will put together anthology of her work.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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Mahogany5952
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16. "RE: STOP!"
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Yeah. . .that caught me off guard, too. It was a lovely piece though. I wanted to hop thru the screen and slap whoever it is that typed they got no satisfaction from this. But I guess that closing part, that "I am a self-mutilator of the worst kind" became self-fulfilling prophecy.

See you on the other side 3rd i.

~Kyla

"There are two ways of meeting difficulties. You alter the difficulties or you alter yourself to meet them." ~Phyllis Bottome

  

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ProLix
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18. "its my sig dumb ass"
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~~~~~~~~`~`~`~`~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I get no satisfaction from this at all.

http://www.myspace.com/tiye

  

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fashionistamt
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12. "RIP 3rd_i"
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ASIEM
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17. "her icon is so captivating"
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i find myself staring into her eye wandering wondering a dimension so vast i am still

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PG
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19. "left this for you in BRC"
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~*~

Goddammit Nikki
You did everything you could
But still I miss you

~*~


Love Pappa

  

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20. "RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in"
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If no one else minds, I'd like to archive this post.

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Cop my stuff, mayne!

My first chapbook: "This Chapbook Was Made With Pilfered Office Products" available now - $6.00

My 2nd chapbook, coming in 2007: "Orgasms and Ice Cream"

fmi: http://www.myspace.com/delrica

  

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22. "i absolutely agree w/ u"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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21. "Ieye(i)"
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......Man C you later

sig.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Guess who's Back

  

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