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Giovanni
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Sat Nov-12-05 11:50 AM

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"night guest"


          

for AA


the night i felt my way through
your darkened apartment,
stumbled over coffee table
and throw pillows

i followed our voice to where
you waited to be held and nuzzled
before we were overwhelmed
with dreams

before we woke up
stirring in whatever sunlight
filtered through your blinds

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piensero stupendo
Nov 12th 2005
1
RE: night guest
Nov 12th 2005
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RE: night guest
Nov 12th 2005
3
it works so well
Nov 13th 2005
4
RE: night guest
Nov 13th 2005
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RE: night guest
Nov 14th 2005
6
RE: night guest
Nov 14th 2005
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RE: night guest
Jan 16th 2006
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minikiss
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Sat Nov-12-05 12:47 PM

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1. "piensero stupendo"
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"stirring in whatever sunlight
filtered through your blinds"

piensero stupendo

"the origin of a mans heart is black" laurynhill

Life aint complete without minikiss- "im lifes last puzzle"

  

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newolf
Member since Jul 26th 2005
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Sat Nov-12-05 03:08 PM

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2. "RE: night guest"
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this was so perfect and visually stimulating.

awesome drop

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newolf, formerly wolfie.

time to save the world, where in the world is all the time?

  

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revalation
Member since Nov 03rd 2005
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Sat Nov-12-05 08:57 PM

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beyond sexual...love knowing there are others out there that live in passion...
Rev

  

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rgv
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Sun Nov-13-05 06:39 PM

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4. "it works so well"
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Sun Nov-13-05 06:39 PM by rgv

          

id keep my hands off of it
awhile if i were u

i know ur rewrite hand itches,
but let this one live

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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HueyNewton
Member since Feb 27th 2005
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Sun Nov-13-05 07:15 PM

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5. "RE: night guest"
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ahhhhh, a night guest . .

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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delrica
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Mon Nov-14-05 08:15 AM

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6. "RE: night guest"
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dammit man!

why ya gotta be so good???

but in all honesty, you're still one of my favorite writers (even if i don't get to hear you as mch as i used to).

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invisible ink
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Mon Nov-14-05 11:19 AM

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7. "RE: night guest"
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aaahh..it's so good to feel your vibe on a Monday morning gio...nice flow...real nice flow...kimabe

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Jan-16-06 07:06 PM

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The "raw" beauty of this pCe is breath~taking -- *sigh* -- And the fact that you left it alone -- (No Revisions) -- Keeps that "RAW" beauty intact! --

Everything doesn't NEED to be polished in order to be perfect --


*Word*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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