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the_best_part
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"belly dance"


  

          

adorned with little
emeralds and finger symbols
chiffon flowing freely
in the staged breeze
ever so slightly
head tilts and
hips move in extremes
my torso becomes
an expression of
desire to entice
belly button
a third eye
seeing all
drawing in energy
fueling my body to
move fluidly
as if it were
a ribbon of silk
floating aimlessly
i dance to bring you
into me
shakra 2
a dam of kinetics
can
you
feel
me?
i touch me
with slight fingertip whispers
where your mind travels

the beat changes
heavy, rhythmic
steady movement
back and forth
up
and
down
over and over
and over
again and
again
until
your knees
shake
as my knees
give way
to the power i hold
within
i succomb to
the explosion of
sex inside of me
it escapes my mouth
with a moan of
exstacy bliss
i travel out
of my body and see
my physical
in a heap
of spent energy

again let's dance
this time you dance
the belly dance
with me

  

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lovely....
Nov 02nd 2005
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RE: belly dance
Nov 02nd 2005
2
RE: belly dance
Nov 02nd 2005
4
RE: belly dance
Nov 02nd 2005
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RE: oh wow..
Nov 02nd 2005
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Two Bellies Dancing ...
Nov 02nd 2005
6
RE: belly dance
Nov 02nd 2005
7
daaaamnnn....
Nov 03rd 2005
8
RE: belly dance
Nov 03rd 2005
9
look....
Nov 03rd 2005
10
i'm never disappointed
Nov 03rd 2005
11
RE: belly dance
Nov 03rd 2005
12
RE: belly dance
Nov 03rd 2005
13
RE: belly dance
Nov 04th 2005
14
RE: belly dance
Jan 25th 2006
15

KnowOne
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Wed Nov-02-05 10:15 AM

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1. "lovely...."
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Keep flowin' Sis'......

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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Wed Nov-02-05 10:53 AM

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2. "RE: belly dance"
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Um, I threw up in my pants. So no need to tell you that was nice imagery and wordplay. Wonderful piece. Thumbs North. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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the_best_part
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Wed Nov-02-05 06:01 PM

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4. "RE: belly dance"
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you so nasty.

but. thanks

  

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invisible ink
Member since Apr 07th 2003
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Wed Nov-02-05 06:00 PM

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3. "RE: belly dance"
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much snaps....nuff said...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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BarTek
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Wed Nov-02-05 06:10 PM

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5. "RE: oh wow.."
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this was amazing.. really felt it.. whoo..


~After 12, I'm worse than a gremlin, feed me Hip Hop and I start trembling! (c) Rakim

http://www.soundclick.com/djbartek

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Nov-02-05 08:03 PM

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6. "Two Bellies Dancing ..."
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What a sensually nice graphic image you painted here! --


*Dance On* --





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Intrepid Vixen
Member since Nov 07th 2004
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Wed Nov-02-05 08:43 PM

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7. "RE: belly dance"
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i dance to bring you
into me


Very sexy, sis!!! Nice poetic rhythm u have there like the dip and flow of someone's belly moving. NICEEEEEEEEEEEE!! *fans self*
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken."

  

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southernboy_423
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Thu Nov-03-05 07:10 AM

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8. "daaaamnnn...."
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Thu Nov-03-05 07:11 AM by southernboy_423

  

          

hold on......**grabs dancing shoes***, okay lets dance.

<-----okay bust it!


"People say u one of the nicest dudes breathing/
God Blessed U, like during birth u came out sneezing/" - YoungSleep

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

  

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Focus23
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Thu Nov-03-05 08:13 AM

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9. "RE: belly dance"
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May I have the next dance?
Up this piece!

Steam-Powered Spit-Sessions Re-write the Bright-Lessons of Life each day with Nice-Blessin's...Word/Life/Write

ToBeContinued;
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Check out theBoxCarBoys...(InGeniousPoet R.I.P./The_Epiphany/inkwell360/Focus23/O-Wellz/Amnesiak)

  

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Prolif
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Thu Nov-03-05 08:51 AM

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10. "look...."
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...we got minors on this board too....can we keep it clean please?
lol....j/k....belly buttons have ALWAYS been a weakness of mine...this doesn't help Asia

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

  

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mindful
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11. "i'm never disappointed"
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never when reading your words.

fueling my body to
move fluidly
as if it were
a ribbon of silk
floating aimlessly
i dance to bring you
into me

Peace~

------------------------
Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

thighs taut like two front teeth
down pressing a full bottom lip
©Boon Quadroon

  

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HueyNewton
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Thu Nov-03-05 06:36 PM

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12. "RE: belly dance"
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whoa it's gettin' real HOT IN THIS PIECE!!!!!
i always enjoy reading your work!!!!!!

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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ArKay01
Member since Oct 29th 2004
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Thu Nov-03-05 07:45 PM

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13. "RE: belly dance"
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You had me moving my hips with this one.
Nice

- En-Vista

  

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the_best_part
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14. "RE: belly dance"
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thank yall for reading/commenting.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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15. "RE: belly dance"
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I'm actually taking a class in March at the YWCA --


~(~(~(~Dancin' My Belly Off~)~)~)~


^UP^ for 2 Bellies Dancin' -- *chuckles*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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