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blaksilence
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"Random Ass Spit"


  

          

this post is just because i don't feel like putting up a new post everytime i feel like throwing something up.

i'ma act stupid in here.

feel free to do u.



i'm an

asshole of astronomical proportions...
jordan on phonics.
my stylish ass glows like astros on an onyx

i transport comets.

and am as whole/tight as an anatomically portioned
asshole
in castro's cordurouy(fk spelling)bonnet


i meant pants
i'm ten ants drinking dim sam
on a flim flam japanese designed bench stand

meaning..

i got the strength of ten men in one of my antenn- am
even when i'm slurring on the best designed equip- mant

and i can change words
i know u reading like
he ain't right
that aint the same words

but since you peeking deep into what i'm speaking
ye and ya three geek men should retreat to my een-trance
seek it, reach it, eat it,
process, shit
then obsessively pick it up
and take it home for the weekend

ayyy!

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
these usually amuse me
Nov 27th 2005
1
thats w'sup
Nov 28th 2005
5
RE: truly Random Ass Spit
Nov 27th 2005
2
i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove had ...
Nov 28th 2005
3
RE: i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove ...
Nov 28th 2005
4
i appreciate everyone's comments. and southern you got a
Dec 01st 2005
16
RE: i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove ...
Dec 15th 2005
32
RE: Random Ass Spit
Nov 28th 2005
6
RE: Random Ass Spit
Nov 28th 2005
7
ur cloak
Nov 28th 2005
8
naked is good. i'm never mad at naked.
Dec 01st 2005
17
i'd like to see you and aeon/dave
Nov 28th 2005
9
i don't like that guy
Dec 01st 2005
18
      HA
Dec 02nd 2005
27
      RE: i don't like that guy
Dec 13th 2005
30
      LOL.
May 24th 2006
33
      u're so cool when
May 24th 2006
34
Baltimore 4x4
Nov 29th 2005
10
fam.
Nov 30th 2005
11
LOL...I dunno why I laughed...good script man
Nov 30th 2005
12
ole tracee ellis ross ass nigga...
Dec 01st 2005
19
whole lotta shwaaaggg goin'on in here...*daps*
Nov 30th 2005
13
you will be a great addition to the Topic Tourney for sure
Nov 30th 2005
14
RE: Random Ass Spit
Dec 01st 2005
15
Not Bougie Nigga Safe(NBNS)
Dec 01st 2005
20
RE: Not Bougie Nigga Safe(NBNS)
Dec 01st 2005
21
g'head
Dec 01st 2005
23
u did that
Dec 02nd 2005
26
5 o' clock Free Crack Giveaway
Dec 01st 2005
22
RE: 5 o' clock Free Crack Giveaway
Dec 07th 2005
29
Eh. i ain't done
Dec 01st 2005
24
Those last two
Dec 02nd 2005
25
RE: Random Ass Spit
Dec 06th 2005
28
i saw a woman have a heart attack right in front of me today
Dec 14th 2005
31

rgv
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1. "these usually amuse me"
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i just like to see u use the same words
again and again in different ways

it's a gift

i wld change my signature
but what i got is so dope
& by another one of my favorites here

so eh

my stylish ass glows like astros on an onyx

sumpin abt dat

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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southernboy_423
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5. "thats w'sup"
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that was a hot drop, but of course u wrote it so its like ganrunteed

peace


...this is southern face it/ if we too simple, then yall dont get the basics/ - Lil Wayne The Carter 2

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

  

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revalation
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2. "RE: truly Random Ass Spit"
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ahhh...I like the way you refered to you as an ant...the humblest and mighty..not to mention one of the most important of God's creatures....nice ramdom spit

  

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blaksilence
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3. "i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove had ..."
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sex wit a rifle.

just so you can click it and witness this next line:
you're sucking my dick if you're clicking this shit and not replyin!

if i add yall up...i'd find us somewhere near a 69
with nuts in ya eye
wondering why you can't see how i'm 'coming' with these lines

i'm dumping my mind...
at you
squeeeeze
three strapped jewels
til you 'dickheads'
freeeeze
and break off like greek statues

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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southernboy_423
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4. "RE: i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove ..."
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what was mean and i dig it.

peace


...this is southern face it/ if we too simple, then yall dont get the basics/ - Lil Wayne The Carter 2

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

  

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blaksilence
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16. "i appreciate everyone's comments. and southern you got a"
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inbox from me ockee

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The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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revalation
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32. "RE: i'ma put breast in my titles. eff michael,chests,bud, and questlove ..."
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>sex wit a rifle.
>
>just so you can click it and witness this next line:
>you're sucking my dick if you're clicking this shit and not
>replyin!
>
yeah...ASS seems to attract the masses....My Breasts were also tempting..you got it though...I would click on your posts even if you said you were postin a pile of cow dung and disecting it to see whats inside...
> No space is wasted with that juice you spit..

Rev
>


umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

  

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HueyNewton
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6. "RE: Random Ass Spit"
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nice one yo!!!!!

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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the_best_part
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7. "RE: Random Ass Spit"
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my man likes ants too

and i play with words
and sounds

and im not tryna give up
too much head
so instead of just clicking
im letting you know it was read

i better quit while im
at an appropriate level
cause im tempted to get
butt naked up in here
and put my body in positions
that will have yall callin a priest
for an exorcism.

im only brave enough on tuesdays and fridays.

wear's my coat? my cloak?


@asiaradiant

  

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rgv
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8. "ur cloak"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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blaksilence
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17. "naked is good. i'm never mad at naked."
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unless you're a dude

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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9. "i'd like to see you and aeon/dave"
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battle just for the helluvit...

the both of you can spit w/ the best of them, but have never battled each other. at least, i don't remember that ever taking place...

double *head nods* to these lines:

i got the strength of ten men in one of my antenn- am
even when i'm slurring on the best designed equip- mant

and i can change words
i know u reading like
he ain't right
that aint the same words

but since you peeking deep into what i'm speaking
ye and ya three geek men should retreat to my een-trance
seek it, reach it, eat it,
process, shit
then obsessively pick it up
and take it home for the weekend

Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

What this country needs is
more unemployed politicians.©Angela Davis

i shaved my head so u could
see how i feel ©3rd i

  

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blaksilence
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18. "i don't like that guy"
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everytime i have a private conversation with a female okp...
they end up being "a friend of dave's"

it's to the point where i'm about to put an Ae in front of my shit
on some, Aeblaksilenceon
just so more women can like me on here

either that or i'ma start walking around the city smacking producer-looking niggas
until one of'em stops befriending every woman with an internet connection..

i mean damn..

nigga u aint barney


_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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rgv
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27. "HA"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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DIGGA MAN
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30. "RE: i don't like that guy"
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now thats funny...i agree...i'm really laughin hard



>either that or i'ma start walking around the city smacking
>producer-looking niggas
>until one of'em stops befriending every woman with an internet
>connection..
>
>i mean damn..
>
>nigga u aint barney
>
>
>

  

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33. "LOL."
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UP!

_

shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

_

www.davidevanmcdowell.com

  

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34. "u're so cool when"
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you show your e-veins....

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http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

To stimulate wildly weak
and untrained minds is to
play with mighty fires. ©w.e.b. dubois

no shit in 06.

  

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10. "Baltimore 4x4"
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Second in the nation as a dangerous city?
Shame and a pity...
The mayor just told us violent crime was down
We nod and believe; silent mimes are clowns

Silent minds wear crowns
Engraved with self loathing and laziness
Felt robes of hazy mists
And incense of gun smoke, it's The Color Purple

Royal bodies afraid to stutter Urkel
Genius is beaten back with low expectations
And the glorious distinction of 'not knowing'
Rushing to be content with mediocre

Not even reaching average
How in the world do our kids manage?...
Because; they see the sun as rising
And hope the rest of us look to the East as they do

*Hope lives*

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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11. "fam."
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pimp. strut.

nigga. i'm gangsta.

pop a collar, light a dollar, blow smoke & silent thanks ta
tha gods.
you know the approach, 60 degree lean. film grain accentuates the aura/ cherry cigar scent on the lapel of the blazer, player's card membership'd star gazer, &

haters can get the 8 point 3 inch'd magnificent cyndrilical-

"...arrogant sumbtch ackin' brandnew..." -- eau, contraire...this is actually quite typical, see

game's what i spit at you
broke down into infinitesimal particles pitched to bridge the gap between the This's and the That's...

peer closer, you can see the gat, fully loaded & tucked, kept under wraps, between the bible and some black
n' milds,
grounded/wild asz cat...

"...this nigga raps???"

chea...consider your molds broken, fam, im raps' significant other, younger brother to jazz, did the standards cover to cover, Invisible Man discovered...

what. is. good.

lol

_

shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

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12. "LOL...I dunno why I laughed...good script man"
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"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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19. "ole tracee ellis ross ass nigga..."
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stop being greedy

nah.

ay:

>you know the approach, 60 degree lean. film grain accentuates
>the aura/ cherry cigar scent on the lapel of the blazer,
>player's card membership'd star gazer, &
>
>haters can get the 8 point 3 inch'd magnificent cyndrilical-
>
>"...arrogant sumbtch ackin' brandnew..." -- eau,
>contraire...this is actually quite typical, see
>
>game's what i spit at you
>broke down into infinitesimal particles pitched to bridge the
>gap between the This's and the That's...
>
>peer closer, you can see the gat, fully loaded & tucked, kept
>under wraps, between the bible and some black
>n' milds,
>grounded/wild asz cat...


^^^^^^^^typeshit that makes you scrunch your face all up.

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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13. "whole lotta shwaaaggg goin'on in here...*daps*"
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<--buns with dinner--

  

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14. "you will be a great addition to the Topic Tourney for sure"
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15. "RE: Random Ass Spit"
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i wake from dreams of monsterman bringing me flowers and saying, 'let's try this again'.

my heart beats
intensly

i wake his children for school
and remember all those years
were worth more than gold
fuck it
platinum

pornographic imgages
invade my head
and i get
antsy for a distraction

there go the ants
again


@asiaradiant

  

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20. "Not Bougie Nigga Safe(NBNS)"
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i'm a little bit of a 'spit hypocritical shit' gentleman
who gets into intricate socio-political sentiments
about the origin and sickness of the word nigger Then

calls every subject in the discussion My Nigga! and

you call it ignorance
i call it ignoring your opinion friend

cuz until they
substantiate reincarnation

this is the Only life i'm living and

i solemnly promised my breaths they'd be a lesson to my kin and them

so...

*breath*

my nigga, my niggas, to them niggers, we all niggas, and all nigger is...
isn't just a group of scarred letters with an 'n' beginnning and a ha'r'd ending

get it?

but cmon niggas, get off your high horse nigga. you ain't empowering niggas by deflowering 'nigger'.
growling about how it stands for Negroes Intelligently Growing & Gaining & Economically Repowering niggas

if you don't use it then dont use it but don't abuse.....blah.


and to you white niggas who want to be like niggas, it's aiight niggas
just let me take you, enslave you, break you, depreciate you, rape you...
then your great, great and greater children will be able to publicly say: My Nigger!

heyyyyy!

aiight niggas?
i'm just kiddin.
right? niggers????

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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21. "RE: Not Bougie Nigga Safe(NBNS)"
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>and to you white niggas who want to be like niggas, it's
>aiight niggas
>just let me take you, enslave you, break you, depreciate you,
>rape you...
>then your great, great and greater children will be able to
>publicly say: My Nigger!

i want to sig this right here ^

@asiaradiant

  

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23. "g'head"
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The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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26. "u did that"
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bout time nigga

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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22. "5 o' clock Free Crack Giveaway"
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(I see yall viewin. G'head and put your arrow on the print button...
practice these in the mirror...get'cha 8 mile on)

in this game i'm probably Shaq
and your girl's mugsy bogues
so no matter where i go
whenever she's in my 'zone'
her nose is in the crotch of my sack


shit.

i don't even need no rhymes
when it comes to streets, you aint allowed to block(s)
like a free throw line

industry's racist and you yellow<~~(scared ass)
so "we don't need yo kind"
you speak lethal
but when i squeeze
all i hear is squeaking
like that Eeeeyor guy

lord have jeevus!
me oh my!

your crew's a bunch of unemployed bakers
yall dont see no pies

and those aint cars with pipes
that's you in the hall with dice
with them 3, 4, 5's
but when you see my team
best believe you see 3...45's
and a revolver
with how many bullets?
add up 3, 4, 5
ask your woman where she was at
at 3: 4 5
she was with this young Jordan
scoring like 3...45's
and she let T hit
and 3 more guys
and i'ma beast
so i went back
3 more times
i know you kiss her
so if I
look close at your lips....
shit....
I can see muh child!

Hi son!
it's beean awhile.
you alright son?
you aint had protein in awhile
what type of person walks around with a human being on his mouth ?
want some better rap genes?
breathe in...
and never breathe out.

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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tydal wave
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29. "RE: 5 o' clock Free Crack Giveaway"
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thats sum shit right there...that was ill

"All the bull stops here im tha matador
here to introduce a new rap categor'"
~Gift of Gab~

  

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blaksilence
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24. "Eh. i ain't done"
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bottom line, i'm THAT bottle of crack
and you just the bottom lining, lying
at the bottom of cracks<~~~(ass)
bottle your lips, swallow them shits, and drop 'em in crapt
pussy got tongues, i'm chinese son
i swallowed that cat
and your mom likes the bottom of sacks
but you dunno THAT
or what she likes to do with her bottom
and a bottle of schnapps...snap!

stop. got damn.

ya fam's about to call cops
and drop'em the facts

read me rights and ban me from milk for life
cuz i ain't supposed to do no Body like that!

with no guns
you're just a native hunter
the only way to get something
is to follow my tracks

you candle niggas had solid records
but i'm flame. so as soon as i came
you dropped to the bottom of wax/wack

-

aiight...i'm going to class.

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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ToeJam
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25. "Those last two"
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the hottest ones on here
I like the crazy w/ the rhyme but also with a flow of subject developement.

Peace.

  

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28. "RE: Random Ass Spit"
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winter...

i think the sky has a sheet of ice
blocking my clear view of that star
the one i named for her
its blurry
fuzzy, now
there seemed to be tiny
ice needles in the wind
they pierced my fingertips
when i waved to the nosey
neighbor lady
the one who peeks thru the drapes
taking a mental census of
how many and how often
i wonder if she's dissapointed
that there are only two
and they belong to me
and an occassional third
that wants me to belong to him
i never held his hand
out there
and in here
he never slid inside
of me
cause
i aint his
and i wont be his
night time
pulses
heat seeking
inner under heart beating
parting lips
dollup of wet stuff
dammed by refusing
to part thighs
his
whatever
but its cold
and t'nite
may have been the night
i unzipped my layers
and let him play or
lay
inside me

@asiaradiant

  

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31. "i saw a woman have a heart attack right in front of me today"
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she was like 24 yrs old. she was a little over weight but i'm saying..

i stuck around until she got in the ambulance and they pulled off

then i walked away.

the whole situation made me want to call moms, peoples, look at the sky, cry, laugh or someshit

and write so..

if i fall
pry a tulip from the fingers of the earth
and dream

hold it tenderly
with loving tips
and whisper my name across it

tiptoe
to the edge of that green blanket
covering that barren cliff
overlooking those rushing diamonds

and
toss

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The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

  

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