i don't think that i'll have the time to get online for a long while after today.
so i'm just trying to put out as much as i can. you don't have to respond/ pay attention/ none-a thatshit

........................

C'mere

Let’s run up the side of a mountain and jump off

Let’s get a face full of sky and a little bit of cloud on the back of our tongues


Let’s cry just for the sake of creating salt then put it on our pancakes and eat them in central park
smiling at passer Byers who don’t understand the irony


Let’s create signs that protest ironing, then wear life fresh out of the dryer, clinging to sidewalks, whispering at business people to not let the heat of society press them straight as a board


Let’s count to four, in Arabic, in the middle of Israel, naked, in the rain, holding penciled signs that read “5 seconds to peace” or change or us or...



Let’s both just be, in this millisecond, in this now. Let’s stretch it and wrap it around our noses until we almost choke but don’t but get so close to death that we remember what it is to live


Let’s freestyle dance with the pigeons on a sidewalk surrounded by the limbless just to strip ourselves of the pretentious fallacy of success when in reality each step is its own miraculous invention


Let’s grab a stranger’s eyes and rewrite our lives with daydreams and butterflies
Let’s write our true loves in chapter three, our weddings in chapter five, our children in chapter seven, happily ever after on the last page, close the book, flip it, re-open the book and start reading at the words “The first day…”
everyday for the rest of our lives

Let’s hide, in covers, warm and funky, soft breath and sweat sliding across chests. Let’s name it the ‘Country of Sex’ and cut off the first thing that defects. Until one of us says,
“Damn I miss my toes!”

Let's go.

Let’s grab life by the face….

And kiss…

I’m anti- anti- establishment
I don’t want to be closely or remotely associ-
ated with any focused major, open layered, Oprah aided, government
or privately fund appropriated…group


I’m pro-individual
I’m so pro-individual
That if you’re agreeing with even a minimal portion of what I’m speaking then I’m anti-you

I’m kidding.

But it's sad that we're living and semi-trembling in something resembling anti-truth


Because if the common woman and man can understand Afghanistan when it comes to Iraq, they’re like “Damn! Why? Who…?”

But eh, I couldn’t do Bush's job

Because I’m anti-establishment

I don’t conform


I’m abnormal amidst a storm of midwestern norms where you get blessed, get in a church sect, or get scorned. Get semi-conservative values or the world will get torn into a well -worn swarm of drugs and porn.

Put your yarmulke on or get scorned.


I would say put your Muslim garb on or get scorned but ever since 9/11 there’s been an underlying hidden vitriolic scorn towards anyone with Muslim garb on as if they’re all horrid monsters who’ll take backpack bombs to your children’s carpools and dorms

I see you smiling at that covered Muslim woman and child but inside, lying at the bottom of your eyes, there’s scorn


But if you’re going to cast aside a whole religion for the actions of some of its radicals....

gotdamn right...


<--days of my youth--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

i said...


if you’re going to cast aside a whole religion for the actions of some of its radicals...

then by that same factual deduction you shouldn't be among the masses gathered around the pope
Because of what those catholic priests did to those lasses...asses


You shouldn't be among the Jews because of what a few of them did to Jesus Christ


You shouldn't follow any form or faction of Christianity because of how they took the bible to Africa and came back with slaves


And they lynched with the bible
They murdered with the bible
They sold infants with the bible
They raped with the bible

They burned human beings on a stake because of race while reading from the bible


But didn’t throw away the bible…
did you?
You just neatly discarded the ones that did the harm and pressed on. So why throw away the Quran? Or Islam?


But I don’t care either way

Because I’m anti-establishment


I’m a pro-individual, non-liberal, literal forward thinker whose thinking is so forward that I realize that by being this forward you’ll probably think I’m backwards

But I’m such a forward thinker that I see that your backwards way of thinking that I’m backwards is actually right… because I am backwards

as we all are

But I’m anti-establishment so…

I’m confused now.

let's fall close

so close that our eyes drown in colors

and love becomes easy

and we dance in a home painted with the warmth of grandmothers
and sundays

i'm just trying
to scrape my significance into the walls of time
desperately
grabbing at silver shards of something
turned beautifully beyond now

i ain't perfect my nig

i'm just trying to snatch a whisper of God through the lips of mute Mondays

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

i'm just trying
to scrape my significance into the walls of time
desperately
grabbing at silver shards of something
turned beautifully beyond now


powerful shit! keep it flowin! shiiiiiiiiiiiiiet i wanna add
- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

saddled the load
straddled the road
and i walked it
battled you toads
tatted the code
never talked it


i'm quite legitimate
my fight's ridiculous
all night the shit was just
fuss, fight, and rip shit up
you type conspicuous
all light and bitchded up
if
you lived my life for jist a touch
you'd slice ya wristes up

nga wha?
i'm tryna lift my ngas up
but my ngas stuck
cuz my figures ain't big enough
and i jab wit a limited vocab, lad
i'm limpin on this nga crutch

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK

Let’s count to four, in Arabic, in the middle of Israel, naked, in the rain, holding penciled signs that read “5 seconds to peace” or change or us or...



Let’s both just be, in this millisecond, in this now. Let’s stretch it and wrap it around our noses until we almost choke but don’t but get so close to death that we remember what it is to live


Let’s freestyle dance with the pigeons on a sidewalk surrounded by the limbless just to strip ourselves of the pretentious fallacy of success when in reality each step is its own miraculous invention

damn to the above lines.....

Peace~

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

I am a fools valedictorian. ©peace beyond passion

no shit in '06

blood and grains fornicate
loved ones burst in screaming

asleep

laughter falls from a cherry red tongue
that's
delighted by his cinnamon wind
stealing her breath

she closes her eyes

and wakes up in a dark room beside a snore

with a soured tongue

very very good writing like seeing some things with fresh eyes and a pregnant head...

Great job man.

>i don't think that i'll have the time to get online for a
>long while after today.
>so i'm just trying to put out as much as i can. you don't have
>to respond/ pay attention/ none-a thatshit
>
>........................
>
>C'mere
>
>Let’s run up the side of a mountain and jump off
>
>Let’s get a face full of sky and a little bit of cloud on the
>back of our tongues
>
>
>Let’s cry just for the sake of creating salt then put it on
>our pancakes and eat them in central park
>smiling at passer Byers who don’t understand the irony
>
>
>Let’s create signs that protest ironing, then wear life fresh
>out of the dryer, clinging to sidewalks, whispering at
>business people to not let the heat of society press them
>straight as a board
>
>
>Let’s count to four, in Arabic, in the middle of Israel,
>naked, in the rain, holding penciled signs that read “5
>seconds to peace” or change or us or...
>
>
>
>Let’s both just be, in this millisecond, in this now. Let’s
>stretch it and wrap it around our noses until we almost choke
>but don’t but get so close to death that we remember what it
>is to live
>
>
>Let’s freestyle dance with the pigeons on a sidewalk
>surrounded by the limbless just to strip ourselves of the
>pretentious fallacy of success when in reality each step is
>its own miraculous invention
>
>
>Let’s grab a stranger’s eyes and rewrite our lives with
>daydreams and butterflies
>Let’s write our true loves in chapter three, our weddings in
>chapter five, our children in chapter seven, happily ever
>after on the last page, close the book, flip it, re-open the
>book and start reading at the words “The first day…”
>everyday for the rest of our lives
>
>Let’s hide, in covers, warm and funky, soft breath and sweat
>sliding across chests. Let’s name it the ‘Country of Sex’ and
>cut off the first thing that defects. Until one of us says,
>“Damn I miss my toes!”
>
>Let's go.
>
>Let’s grab life by the face….
>
>And kiss…
>

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

Wow...really, really, really good work. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

Impressive work... all of it. The anti-establishment pieces left my head swimming!


"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

My crappy blog: http://www.livejournal.com/users/eyes_of_mine/

Blind Eye Turning: My book
http://www.lulu.com/content/187759

i appreciate the responses. yall dont really have to do that.

...........

ever swim the medicine of reticence?
revelling
in reflections that pit the perfection of the evident
road that you shoulda took

and how you jettisoned to get it in
and known that you shoulda looked
twice

now ur right
in the decadence of deader ends
zoned in the 'shoulda's'..shook.
like

i think we'd be better...friends
good?

ite.

i like to watch the shivers crawl from the tip of my tongue
through your warmth

until i'm buried under the pile of your legs

and 'don't die but hold your rhythm'
is the only thought standing

but i hate where it comes from

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

she stayed where babes keep razorblades in they facials
a razor glazed through her facial
we was in the 8th grade and they aint like the way she swayed
with her racials

half black-half white
they snapped like let's smack 'uptight' with the ackrite,
but i don't know if the ackrite acted right
because lil half white aint acted right
ever since

ran into her last night, we chatted, laughed
and the whole time her half black hand
never stopped covering the jagged scratch in her chin

somebody kill me

with a forehead kiss

and
a love letter

written in sweat

on six day old sheets

>somebody kill me
>
>with a forehead kiss
>
>and
>a love letter
>
>written in sweat
>
>on six day old sheets
>
>

if stunned is a word shot from a gun I would have a whole in my head.
and
if creation was a thing to take lightly-I would have to drink it with tea...

this whole piece....well pieces should be at the top of the forum for each new reader to check....

bless...and I'll see ya on the mountain peaks for heinekens and fish

rev

**"don't ya blame yourself for ya failure..cus ya can't hold onto what's no longer" Lutan Fyah**



umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

<--days of my youth--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

I was waiting for this...

Damn!!! after I pushed the post button...I knew I was wrong! AHHH!! I knew I was gonna get caught in stupidity one day....

Still down for a date on the mountainside even though I got the Silence and Yukon mixed up..? !

shoulda made apologies sooner...points to a terrible editor...

No disrespect though

Rev


**"don't ya blame yourself for ya failure..cus ya can't hold onto what's no longer" Lutan Fyah**



umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

but not character actors...

<--days of my youth--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

depends on the screenplay...

which movie you writtin that describes your life?



**"don't ya blame yourself for ya failure..cus ya can't hold onto what's no longer" Lutan Fyah**



umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

to me, that is:

written in sweat

on six day old sheets

*nods*

Peace~

------------------------
Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

I am a fools valedictorian. ©peace beyond passion

no shit in '06

i adored this! it was a idealistic revolution and everyone should read this to get thier inspiration on!
your thoughts are awesome- and shiieet i havent even been on here in a while- so im glad i ran into this
too much to quote, this is a classic and should be archived in my opinion! (nod)



- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

haven't even finished reading all of these yet, but i can already see from the first that i'm going to want to have this accessible for a long time to come

i'll comment more when i have a little more time to spend with this

hope to see oyu back soon blak

...(the end)...

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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

http://msmind.blogspot.com

I am a fools valedictorian. ©peace beyond passion

no shit in '06

somewhere.
but I feel that if I did that this time, it would take away from the fact that all of your shit....all of it....is amazing.

i really enjoyed these. that first one was tough to get over though; probably my favorite.

amazing.

oh, nevermind my sig/avi. they contain base, crude humor.

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dominus vobiscum

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speechless when reading your works.
always keep writing
somewhere that we can always see
even tho none of this is for me i want to be self-centered for a minute and say...
thank you

dam.

thank you

... PERIOD ...


*Nuff Said*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

*enjoying the read*

soul.

i appreciate all of the responses.

_____________________________________

The cry I bring down from the hills
__________belongs to a girl still burning
__________inside my head. At daybreak

____________________she burns like a piece of paper. - YK