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hdub
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"hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
Fri Mar-17-06 09:07 PM by hdub

          

Happy St. Paddy's day to all of ya! I'm coming through with a little rap-pettizer to get you all started off on a night of appropriately drunken debauchery and revelry. For the grand finale of the first round of this first annual competition we've got what's sure to be an amazing matchup. Round one has had it's ups and downs, but we are most certainly ending it on a good note with this one. We're about to see the return of Miracleric , this former King Of The Ring has been a bit MIA lately but tonight he's coming back full force with hi-fi stereophonic sound. On the other side we've got the guy currently rocking the crown, the one and only Prolif. That's enough out of me, I'm going to let the battle speak for itself:

Prolif:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3654456&q=hi


verse 1:
I’m like that Cochise dude of the south/
get ya pens, get ya pads, proceeds - lets dual it out/
or we can take it to Book and build/
yall don’t see that Prolif’s about more than just some hooks and frills/
yall don’t see the struggle cuz I conceal it/
and dawg, I’m from a single parent home – I got some stuff that I deal wit/
yall don’t see the baggage that I be brangin’/
when I spit that double A flow, but now it’s like my battery’s draining/
cuz i been weary since the minimal age/
but I can’t afford to fail cuz my brother’s making minimum wage/
and my moms been working since she was 20/
yo that’s 35 years and still aint got no expenditure money/
all we got is just some scrapes and bruises/
and a few scars, so we trust God and keep it faithfully moving/
what ya’ll see is what ya’ll get – I aint faking a movie/
give ya’ll a closer look and then I take my place in this movement/

hook:
What ya’ll see when ya’ll look at Prolif?/
Is it the Giver ya’ll, or is it the gift?/
“that cocky dude that makes the rooks wanna quit”/
That’s what ya’ll see when ya’ll look at Prolif?/

What ya’ll see when ya’ll look at Prolif?/
Is is the Giver ya’ll, or is it the gift?/
“Aiyo that dude don’t rep the hood when he spit”/
That’s what ya’ll see when ya’ll look at Prolif?/

verse 2:
look I been through it, at times I cry and I laugh/
I had a girl cheat, she thought she was a dime and a half/
and yeah I know a little pain, so this is not a façade/
and had some bills accumulate when I was out of a job/
ya’ll don’t see the many tears that be falling/
and it’s so hard to walk right, when all you knew for years was crawling/
can ya’ll relate to this musical cuz I hate the usual/
fam dying - I’m sick of going to wakes and funerals/
trying to bench press this weight off my chest/
but I need a spotter, or a dollar or a few of’em to pay off my debts/
all ya’ll see is the gear and the swag/
I’m more than just an emcee, or them dudes ya’ll see in the mag/
that’s why I try to put my life in the song/
ya’ll don’t see that I’m even breaking down as I’m writing this song/
but it wont be long til yall hooked and believing/
just look deeper than my surface ya’ll, cuz looks are deceiving/

hook x 2:

Miracleric:

http://www.geocities.com/miraclerick/prettybrowneyes.mp3

the kind that plays the hand that i see,
i spit for pretty brown eyes
i spit for city's who downsize...the street pharmacists
to those who beat common sense,
i speak for ya mommas sense..of purpose
i spit in the pursuit of perfect
the turf is....smoother than writing that's cursive
i spit it for nurses and caregivers
i spit it for double dare niggas
and pyt's that cause trouble with their figures
and cats who take care of their litters
i spit for drunks and whinos who wear liquor
more then they drink it...
to those who cant afford a pink slip
i let the ink drip...onto the skin of many men
i spit for those who dont have many friends...
but lots of clients..its not rocket science
but cats quick to blast off,
and never take they mask off...
its like they 2nd clothes
im reppin those countin fingers, checkin toes...of newborns
i keep dreams alive cause life is ill...in its true form

...(the end)...

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
forgot the link i think dub
Mar 17th 2006
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RE: forgot the link i think dub
Mar 17th 2006
2
hot damn,fam...
Mar 17th 2006
3
Oh My Damn!!
Mar 17th 2006
4
RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric
Mar 18th 2006
5
*grabs fire extinguisher*
Mar 18th 2006
6
prolif
Mar 18th 2006
7
ok...
Mar 19th 2006
8
RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric
Mar 20th 2006
9
RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric
Mar 20th 2006
10
Prolif -- Smokin' Like A Spliff~
Mar 20th 2006
11
RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric
Mar 21st 2006
12
prolif...
Mar 22nd 2006
13
RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric
Mar 22nd 2006
14
schedules...
Mar 23rd 2006
15

MiracleRic
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1. "forgot the link i think dub"
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nice track lif

Let me sport my Air Hyperbole 2010s in peace. (c) ansomble

Building repetoires (c) spm since 1983

  

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hdub
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Fri Mar-17-06 09:08 PM

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2. "RE: forgot the link i think dub"
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sorry forgot they were in different inboxes

welcome back by the way

...(the end)...

  

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blak_yukon
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Fri Mar-17-06 09:19 PM

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3. "hot damn,fam..."
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Lif: sounded real nice,man...sounded confortable to the track...i know folks look at technical aspects...to me, this here was a total package. beats, rhymes and life,bruh...thurly enjoyed this...

Ric: man...this is the best I heard you thus far. really coming into your own vocally. wish this could've been longer but hey..you sounded dope. maybe turn up ya'mic a little too...

good showing by both but i'm gonna go w/prolif.

now back to this pint of guinness...

<--s'right--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
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Nile
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Fri Mar-17-06 10:17 PM

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4. "Oh My Damn!!"
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Every now and again you hear something that makes you stand up and take notice.
Miracleric: You made it happen. The only thing I could say is I don't care for the gaps in the flow where you seem as if you're trying to stay with the beat, but thats just me being nitpicky. You just had a bad draw. NO SONG IN THE 1ST ROUND COULD MATCH WHAT PROLIF DID( Save for maybe the one Nile did, LOL). Nothing more for me to say.

Vote = Prolif.


OMD!!

  

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Zin
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Sat Mar-18-06 12:48 PM

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5. "RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
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lif did drop a bomb ...i think it would have been better if ric would have sent the whole song this was a hot battle butlif did drop a bomb

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Whateva
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Sat Mar-18-06 02:41 PM

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6. "*grabs fire extinguisher*"
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MiracleRic: Like Nile said, the cadence could use a little work. I thought it was too short too. It was still pretty good though.

Prolif: Not really much to say. You on professional status with that. That's the best complete track I think I've heard on here. Good luck with thee album.

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"Science" and Religion are the two most dangerous weapons of ideology. See holocaust.

Why do "scientists" constantly produce statistics based on "race", a social construct?

  

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Rajeniro757
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7. "prolif"
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a mile in my shoes is like a million man march you just hope shit dont happen

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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willi_dudat
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8. "ok..."
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you dudes brought that heat in...

luv'd it...

ric: track selection was ill... went well with your topic/delivery... you did a lil stutter steppin thru it, but hell it was still dope...

imma give it a 6 of 10 cause it had me noddin but it was short and needed that extra polishing... still very nice my man...

lif: track was dope... flow was dope... i read it (as well as ric's) over a few times before i listened and i must say you guys are quite crafty... i guess i need to step my delivery up cause i gotta be monotonous (sp) as hell... anyway, only thing that bothered me was the pannin on the hook... aside from that i got nothin else to say...

imma give it an 8 of 10, def up there in overall quality... those lyrics are gripping... only an 8 cause i can't just give tens out in the first round... also wanna leave some cap space... sum'n tells me you comin even better next round...

peace
du

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

  

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sikstyle
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9. "RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
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vote: lif

cosigned with everyone else, no need to repeat anything. good show by both

"I walk around with sick styles, sippin on cristal, my whole cliques wild, I'm rich pal no more sticks I'm making hits now... when I recite you takin hours to write, so if you fight just tell ya man what kinda flowers you like"
-Big L

  

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southernboy_423
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10. "RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
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lif that shit was hot duke....damn



...this is southern face it/ if we too simple, then yall dont get the basics/ - Lil Wayne The Carter 2

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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11. "Prolif -- Smokin' Like A Spliff~"
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Lif -- Very polished & professional soundin' ish -- *No Doubt* -- Lyrics & Audio -- Both on ^point^.

Ric -- I wish your ish woulda been a lil' longer -- You didn't allow enuff time to showcase your steeze -- But what I heard sounded nyce~nice~NICE -- -- Lyrics were tight 2!


Gotta go with Prolif tho -- *Yuuup*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Biohazard
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12. "RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
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Prolif

  

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BarTek
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Wed Mar-22-06 10:18 AM

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13. "prolif..."
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Good job man.. as far as your weaknesses... i would say work on your voice and cadence.. you sound a bit heavy on the track.. like you are stomping with your feet.. i would try a bit more expression and tone down the UMPF in your voice cause it's a plenty.. besides that.. just keep on doing it... you have a lot of skill dude..

peace

@}-,-`-

He looks determined without being ruthless
Something heroic in this man, there's a courage about him
Doesn't look like a killer
Comes across so calm, acts like he has a dream
Full of passion

beats...
http://www.soundclick.com/afreestylemotif

  

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TRibeACE
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14. "RE: hdub Invitational Week Six: Prolif vs. Miracleric"
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Miracleric, your joint was tight....but your equipment sounded like it was getting in the way.....and only because Prolif's joint sounded like studio quality, with time put in to polish it. That being said Prolif had you on the delivery also, eventhough it was a lyrically even match prolif gets this one.




I see through your design like blind fury - nas

I've got fires in my eyes and the flames need fanning - Blackstar

  

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hdub
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15. "schedules..."
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...damn this week went by quick i almost forgot to post these

********ROUND TWO********

WEEK SEVEN Friday 3/24

Zin vs. Shakeet Lohk Em

WEEK EIGHT Friday 3/31

willi_dudat vs. blak_yukon

WEEK NINE Friday 4/7

hdub vs. ((the winner of Miracleric vs. Prolif))

im looking forward to tomorrow's joint

...(the end)...

  

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